Talk:Christian Science Sentinel

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Unclear request

Hello,

I’m an employee of The First Church of Christ, Scientist. I noticed that the reference to the Christian Science Sentinel - Radio Edition is out of date. The Sentinel no longer produces a radio edition. It was discontinued in 2011. In its place, the Sentinel has produced a podcast known as Sentinel Watch since 2016 on its website, JSH-Online. CDs and audiocassettes are no longer produced in relation to this content either. Would you consider updating this? ~~~~ FirsthandPOV-CCS (talk) 13:19, 1 June 2023 (UTC)

 Not done for now: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. Lightoil (talk) 02:19, 2 June 2023 (UTC)

Lightoil, happy to suggest possible replacement wording, knowing that an editor without a COI will need to make the actual changes. Something along the following lines could replace the first sentence of the second paragraph, providing more up-to-date information:

Sentinel Watch is a weekly podcast, airing since 2016 on the website JSH-Online.^[1]

FirsthandPOV-CCS (talk) 18:20, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Lightoil Hello, I tried to ping you above, unsuccessfully, and so just trying again. Thanks. FirsthandPOV-CCS (talk) 19:45, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

@FirsthandPOV-CCS: Create a new edit request and write the changes you want yourself in a "change X to Y" format with reliable sources if applicable. An editor without COI should not accept your changes if you do not propose changes in an X to Y format as stated in edit request rules. Lightoil (talk) 03:38, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

Hello,

Per Lightoil’s request, I am initiating a new edit request. This sentence is out of date. The Christian Science Publishing Society no longer produces a Sentinel radio edition. In its place, it now produces a podcast called Sentinel Watch. See here. The Publishing Society also no longer produces CDs or audiocassettes for this content. I’d suggest deleting this sentence and replacing it with: Sentinel Watch is a weekly podcast, airing since 2016 on the website JSH-Online.

The following citation could be used:

New audio programs coming to JSH-Onine. The Christian Science Publishing Society. Retrieved 6 June 2023. 

FirsthandPOV-CCS (talk) 19:44, 11 July 2023 (UTC)

 Done - I kept the information about the older radio show but mentioned that it doesn't air anymore, and added the requested update. GoodCrossing (talk) 00:25, 12 July 2023 (UTC)