- @Softlavender, Dr.K., SilentResident, El C, and FkpCascais:
I think that the current section "Ottoman era" with the introductory sentence:
- "The Byzantine Empire was conquered in the 15th century and the Ottoman Empire took its place."
is better than without it (see the above edit request). But I would like to see some discussion on why this introductory sentence is better than the one proposed by FkpCascais:
- "The Byzantine and Serbian empires were conquered in the 15th century and the Ottoman Empire took their place."
especially as it immediately follows a long section on "Serbian era and influences". Paul August ☎ 11:00, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Paul August: First, the Serbian section was added recently and it is badly sourced with many sections unsourced. Second, the current sentence is supported by a reliable source and that source mentions only the Byzantine Empire and not the Serbian Empire. Third, the Serbian Empire, according to its own article and even the recently added section in this article, lasted until 1372, about 80 years shorter than the Byzantine Empire. The Ottoman Empire was thus the successor of the Byzantine Empire, and not the Serbian Empire which had eclipsed 80 years earlier; see also The empire created by Stefan Dushan did not long survive his death (1355): Athos was lost by 1371; and by 1389 the Serbs had become vassals of the Ottomans.. Fourth, the Byzantine Empire lasted for hundreds of years at Athos, so it would be UNDUE to add it in the same sentence with the short-lived Serbian empire. Last, but not least, there is no text that I know of that makes the connection between the Byzantine Empire and the Serbian Empire in the same sentence as the one edit-warred on by the now blocked editor. It is just pro-Serbian POV/SYNTH. Dr. K. 11:33, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks, you make a persuasive case. Paul August ☎ 11:38, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you Paul. Dr. K. 11:42, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
I also see no reason to group Byzantine and Serbian empires together in the same sentence, even if it were true that both empires were conquered in the same century. I would like to change the first sentence to "The Byzantine Empire was conquered in the 15th century by Ottoman Empire.". The "took it place" phrase is too clumsy. 141.136.223.3 (talk) 21:35, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you, I agree. I also agree that the phrase you mentioned sounds clumsy. Dr. K. 22:31, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- I support the change 141.136.223.3 suggests. --❤ SILENTRESIDENT ❤ 12:16, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- The Serbian era section should be written from scratch, not to mention that most info there is Ottoman-era.Alexikoua (talk) 15:09, 20 January 2018 (UTC)