This article has been proposed to run as today's featured article in March. (Click here for more details.) However, I have some concerns that this article might not meet featured article criteria. Some of my concerns include:
- Missing citations, which I have marked with "citation needed" tags. Some of these missing citations are for whole paragraphs.
- MOS:SANDWICHING as noted by Sandy in November
- Done. Attic Salt (talk) 02:31, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- Citations that do not give specific page numbers (mostly journal articles)
- I did what I could. Ap J seems to only give first page (maybe due to transition to online articles). Attic Salt (talk) 02:31, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- Some paragraphs that are very long (paragraph 4 in "Observational history") and some that are only one sentence (and very short)
- am trying to rectify this - regarding that long para....@Z1720: where would you split it? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:32, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- I would split it after "Queen of the Heaven" Z1720 (talk) 03:41, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- This paragraph is on one topic, Polynesian observations. The other paragraphs are on other, also self-contained communities. So I think we should leave the paragraph as is. Just my opinion. Attic Salt (talk) 03:52, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- I think the thing to do is reduce all of those many, many, names that the Polynesians used. They are just a long list that adds little understanding. Doing this would make the paragraph shorter. Attic Salt (talk) 04:36, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- I'm hesitant to remove names. How do we pick which Polynesian cultures get their name of the star listed? I prefer a separate paragraph describing what different Polynesian cultures called the star. Z1720 (talk) 16:13, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- I am not generally in favour of lists of foreign language names, especially somewhat esoteric names, unless they contribute to the broader content of the article. Attic Salt (talk) 16:50, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- Would sandwiching in a small thumbnail make the slabs of text a little less daunting? I'm thinking specifically of the heiroglyph which should be less wide than the first word of the section title so hardly likely to be a layout problem. Lithopsian (talk) 16:05, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- The "Other modern references" section is in list form. Would it be better served as prose?
- I would prefer it in prose too. See the promoted version in 2008. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:28, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- The description of Sirius in fiction is too short and could bring information from Sirius in fiction
- I added a short paragraph giving a few of the more prominent (IMO) uses in science-fiction. There is already a good list of cultural uses and some random references not strictly referring to the star as a location in a story. Lithopsian (talk) 16:08, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
Would anyone be interested in working on this article to get it ready for TFA? I'm pinging Casliber although any help would be appreciated. Z1720 (talk) 01:16, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- I am on it - @Lithopsian: has a better understanding of the hard science than me so would be good to help out too :) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:10, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
How's it looking so far? I know there are still a couple of citation needed tags. One is related to ancient understanding of the Sothic cycle which I'm probably not going to be much help with, although the whole claim looks slightly dubious. The other is about the position of Sirius in 14,000 years. I have checked the calculation and it appears correct, with proper motion included, but can't find any source to explicitly make the same claim. Lithopsian (talk) 20:32, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
- I've scheduled it TFA for March 21. I hope the remaining can be addressed by then? Suggest removing what can't be sourced by then, or modifying to fit what sources you can find. Thanks for your help in the matter.--Wehwalt (talk) 19:17, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
- I think its all done, fingers crossed. Lithopsian (talk) 20:18, 16 February 2021 (UTC)