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Sorry for what just happened

Just got a little overzealous here. I'll try not to let it happen again. Dyl@n620 02:42, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

No worries. You know if you didn't mention it I wouldn't have noticed it since you reverted your reversion almost immediately. To other editors who are wondering what Dylan620 is referring to, he accidentally reverted me archiving the talk page. - kollision (talk) 14:09, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

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Assassination Storyline

Anent this sentence: "Barnes, however, learns from Stan Goff that Whiting is responsible and, through his powerful political connections, threatens him and his family unless he halts the investigation and releases Barnes' passports."


I don't like "...through his powerful political connections..." as it doesn't seem clear in the film that this is the case. Isn't Barnes politically bankrupt at this point? All he has left is brute force, highlighted by the suspenseful home invasion scene. I would re-write it: "Barnes, however, learns from Stan Goff that Whiting is responsible. Barnes then threatens Whiting and his family unless he halts the investigation and releases Barnes' passports." Unless there is evidence that Barnes does threaten "through powerful political connections" Ovid962 (talk) 16:49, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

Possible OR

"The audience confusion mimics the confusion of the characters, who are enmeshed in the events around them without a clear understanding of what precisely is going on." This seems like OR. I'm not sure what "audience confusion" is referring to and the inference doesn't have a citation. Anyone object to me striking it? 75.100.94.22 (talk) 04:14, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

It's referring directly to the discussion of the confusion cited by critics caused by the multiple story lines in the previous sentences. Do you always read one sentence out of context? You have a strange way of reading articles. The fact that there is an explanation for the confusion is not OR. Viriditas (talk) 04:28, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

Status of Amr Waked's character as a cleric

RfC about the status of Amr Waked's character as a cleric

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