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Although the work you did on reworking the copy of The Magician's Nephew is modest in essence, I was impressed at how you diligently and systematically worked through the article and brought logic, flow and eloquence to the prose and treated it as a whole rather than something to pick at. It is a nice clean piece of editing work in any medium. And you managed to do this without destroying the relationship between the prose and the sources, which took me days of hard work to research and construct into the reworked article, according to my understanding of Wikipedia policies. A little thing, a modest thing, but it gave me, as a relatively new user, a sense of community and trust that there are some editors around who will take you hard work and help to make it shine, which in turn inspires me to keep my own momentum as an editor, so I think you deserve this barnstar... even though it is only a modest one Mesmacat (talk) 11:14, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Another good Narnia Edit

Thanks for untangling the Spaghetti of the Narnia and Religion section (mostly written by me). I think you improved it quite a lot. Possibly shouldn't have worked on it and my Master's Thesis at the same time. --WickerGuy (talk) 18:51, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

I just saw this is the 2nd time I've thanked you for re-editing it, though this is a separate late re-edit--WickerGuy (talk) 18:52, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
That's OK -- I don't mind. You can keep talking if you like :-) Elphion (talk) 19:39, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

WP Middle-earth says thank you.

The Tolkien Barnstar
May this star shine upon your past and future edits to articles about Middle-earth. De728631 (talk) 17:55, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for your illuminative explanations. Ankh.Morpork 18:49, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
"Illuminative" is good -- thanks! -- Elphion (talk) 18:56, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Advise please - I found the Lord of the Rings a tad turgid and dreary. Are there any Middle Earth novels that are more "Hobbitsy" in style and lighter in tone? Ankh.Morpork 21:17, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
None of the rest of the Middle-earth material is as light as The Hobbit. The Silmarillion is dark, although the essay there on the Rings of Power is interesting. There are snippets in Unfinished Tales that are quite rewarding (it contains some of Tolkien's best writing, in my opinion). But if you enjoyed The Hobbit, I can heartily recommend Farmer Giles of Ham and Smith of Wooton Major (and they should be read in that order) -- both very hobbitish, but not dealing explicitly with Middle-earth. -- Elphion (talk) 22:41, 22 December 2012 (UTC)

From the Newbie, in re: Balrog

Hey. Sorry. Not sure if I'm doing this correctly or according to etiquette or what not. Anyway -- I visited the page on In-universe description. I see now what I did wrong. Thanks for informing me. --Cevkiv (talk) 14:19, 29 April 2010 (UTC)

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The Barnstar of Diligence
Awarding for unfailing support in the Middle-earth wiki project Carl Sixsmith (talk) 08:06, 26 February 2010 (UTC)

Bhutan

Hi you probably saw the Flag of Bhutan article was being reviewed for GA. Zscout asked me to change the citation templates but I don't know how too. Do you know how to? It would be appreciated. Spongie555 (talk) 22:57, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

Most of the refs are already using versions of template:cite, so it's not clear what Zscout is after. I did cast the remaining references into template:cite, and made a few other adjustments. -- Elphion (talk) 00:21, 22 December 2010 (UTC)
According to the GA review it says change the inline web links to web citation templates. i think he ment that. Spongie555 (talk) 05:57, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
Yes, that's template:cite web. The web citations are now all template:cite web, even where it's not entirely convenient or appropriate (e.g., in the notes to the exhibition photo). -- Elphion (talk) 08:00, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
The Bhutan Barnstar of National Merit
Thank you for helping the Flag of Bhutan article get to GA status, hope to see you help with more Bhutanese articles in the future Spongie555 (talk) 23:26, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
this WikiAward was given to Elphion by Spongie555 (talk) on 23:26, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
Happy to help out -- and thanks for the feedback! -- Elphion (talk) 12:07, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
Maybe you would interested in getting the National Anthem and the Emblem of Bhutan to GA so we can have a Good Topic of the national symbols of Bhutan. Spongie555 (talk) 23:06, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
Article National symbols of Bhutan could use some help before it could be nominated to GA. It's in good shape just needs some help. Spongie555 (talk) 05:27, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

List of Characters in The Chronicles of Narnia

Nice cleanup on the List of Characters in The Chronicles of Narnia. And happy New Year. LloydSommerer (talk) 02:46, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! And to you too! -- Elphion (talk) 03:37, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

Ushuaia

Hi Elphion, Where did you get this:

The first reference represents false reporting by Clarín to try to derail the real negotiations that had taken place (attempting to set up new arrangements for the peaceful administration of the border between Argentina and Chile, among other things by arranging for peaceful military transport of Chilean forces across Tierra del Fuego).
  • Do you mean Clarin tries to derail the CH-AR peace treaty? Do you have sources for?
  • Do you mean Chilean troops want to march through Argentine territories? Do you have sources for?

--Best regards, Keysanger (what?) 16:38, 18 February 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your note. Response at talk:Ushuaia. -- Elphion (talk) 19:32, 18 February 2012 (UTC)

Minotaur and the sacrificial victims

Hello Elphion. In your recent edit of the article Minotaur, you removed the section on the Athenian youths and maidens that were to be given up to Minotaur, stating in your edit summary that there was "far more detail that appropriate". I'm the one who added this section, and now that you saw something wrong with it I would like to know:

  • Did I violate any explicit rule by adding it, i. e. is there any objective criteria of how much info on one page is "far more than appropriate"? (I realize that I may be missing something about rules concerning the arrangement of content).
  • Where and in what form should I have added this info if I wanted to do it right?

I'm not at all offended by you deleting my work, I do realize that I may have made some mistake, and I'm hoping for a constructive answer from you.

Thanks in advance, Phlyaristis (talk) 11:41, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your note. The answer in a nutshell is WP:IINFO: WP is not an indiscriminate collection of information. There's room for discussion, so I've started a thread at talk:Minotaur. -- Elphion (talk) 20:15, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Congo Free State

Hello,

Further to our exchange on the King Leopold's Ghost talk page, I just wondered whether you might be interested in helping me with the article for The King Incorporated? If you could, I'd much appreciate it & at the moment it is very much WIP.

All best,

--Brigade Piron (talk) 20:40, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

In principle, yes; but I'm away from my books until September, so may not be able to contribute a lot. I have read Ascherson, but it was a long time ago, and memory fades over time, alas. -- Elphion (talk) 20:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Fair enough. If you could at some point give it a look over, it'd be much apreciated! --Brigade Piron (talk) 10:22, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
I'll keep an eye on it. -- Elphion (talk) 18:18, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

Hobbit Article Grammar

Collective or group nouns only take a plural verb agreement if the noun is being used to refer to the constituent parts of the group. For example: "The Cabinet fought amongst themselves." In this case the "Cabinet" refers to the constituent members of the group and not the group as a whole, and in terms of the verb agreement, answers to the pronoun "they" (... fought amongst themselves.) However, when the group noun is used to refer to the group as an single entity, for example "The Cabinet makes a key decision" - then the noun takes a singular agreement since it answers to the pronoun "it" (... makes a key decision). There's no distinction or difference made between UK and US, or international variants of English on this point. There are numerous grammar guides on the internet which explain this, and the paradigm of 'English' Grammar, Fowler's states the same. isfutile:P (talk) 03:46, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

I've copied your comment to talk:The Hobbit, since this clearly warrants discussion. See my response there. -- Elphion (talk) 07:58, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

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Leap Year Apologies

It was indeed a foolish mistake on my part, t'was late and I transposed the years in my head in how they were affected by the rule (which is odd as I see looking at calculations I've made previously I darn well knew that too), would you mind if I deleted the section on the talk page where you responded, as it seems fairly moot now. Especially as the fact has been referenced (which it was not previously).Number36 (talk) 03:50, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

(Response on your talk page) -- Elphion (talk) 04:43, 30 October 2012 (UTC)
Thank you for your response, I wasn't too worried about it, not trying to hide the mistake (I'm not sure who would be interested) merely thought the section is a bit irrelevant now it's been resolved and I was the only one who had incorrectly raised the issue, seemed a bit silly to leave a section with an incorrect assertion as the title that I no longer asserted. Also apologise if my tone seemed unfriendly, I certainly didn't intend that.Number36 (talk) 06:26, 30 October 2012 (UTC)

The Chronicles of Narnia

Hi, I see that you have revised The Chronicles of Narnia many times and extensively --and, I conclude at a glance, the seven books articles much less so. Last hour I asked several questions in new section Talk:The Chronicles of Narnia#Publication history. All of them have been generated by my experience revising the seven book articles this weekend, by reference to bibliographic sources and no reference to the series article, which I haven't read except as necessary to Talk. Frankly, I have Talked at the series article because the WikiProject appears to be inactive. I expect to edit the book articles again --at least read all of their lead sections together and improve some in the light of others-- before I work on the series article, if at all.

For what it's worth, I arrived via the illustrator Pauline Baynes and the book award Carnegie Medal. --P64 (talk) 23:20, 9 December 2012 (UTC)

Gollum

Would you care to join the discussion about which version of English to use at Talk:Gollum. Cheers GimliDotNet (Speak to me,Stuff I've done) 19:31, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

See my note at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Middle-earth/Standards. -- Elphion (talk) 19:59, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

The Space Barnstar

The Space Barnstar
For your contributions to articles about space, especially nebula. Fotaun (talk) 16:29, 12 January 2013 (UTC)

Thank you very much! I am amazed at how much astronomical material is already in WP; appalled at how much is left to do. -- Elphion (talk) 22:07, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
I agree! Glad I could stop by, and of course, have a great 2013. Fotaun (talk) 21:38, 13 January 2013 (UTC)

The Lord of the Rings - Flood

Hello, I have reverted the edit on The Lord of the Rings due to what I believe was an error. In The Fellowship of the Ring, it is written "'Elrond commanded it,' answered Gandalf.", followed by "If I may say so, I added a few touches of my own: you may not have noticed, but some of the waves took the form of great white horses with shining white riders; and there were many rolling and grinding boulders. For a moment I was afraid that we had let loose too fierce a wrath, and the flood would get out of hand and wash you all away." (emphasis mine). Also, there are texts published specifically saying the flood was created from the combined power of Narya and Vilya, which I can dig up if need be. --Wirbelwind(ヴィルヴェルヴィント) 08:32, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

The book gives the strong impression that the main power behind the flood was Elrond. Anything further should be referenced. (And let's remember that this is a synopsis, not a blow by blow account.) -- Elphion (talk) 18:59, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

Jive talk

Can't believe I wrote that. It's way past my bedtime. I blame Mrs. Cleaver for that. She's the one who taught me Jive. []. Glad you like my user name. Thanks, and good luck! Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 01:01, 7 April 2013 (UTC)

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