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Copy-edit Champ
I just wanted to quickly say thank you for your copy-editing of Don Valley Parkway, and other articles.
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Gun Politics in Australia
You can get the source article that formed the basis of that news report on Andrew Leigh's ANU website:
http://people.anu.edu.au/andrew.leigh/titles.htm
Do Gun Buybacks Save Lives? Evidence from Panel Data (with http://people.anu.edu.au/andrew.leigh/pdf/GunBuyback_Panel.pdf
Data and Stata code (zipped) http://people.anu.edu.au/andrew.leigh/pdf/GunBuybackPanel.zip
Note that it appears Andrew Leigh, just elected for the ALP, may be using the journalist to attack the independents who hold the balance of the hung parliament right now. 200 alleged suicides per year saved cannot be saved by trading semi-autos for legal bolt actions. This journalist is plainly acting in a partisan fashion, becasue he has not asked any hard questions.
ChrisPer (talk) 10:02, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the links, Chris. I based my edit on the report that was published in "The Age" (and also the SMH). Are there any issues with the edit as it stands? Michael Glass (talk) 12:10, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
- What you wrote represents the news article fairly. I will wait and see if anyone can get a reply published, or write a better one :-)
ChrisPer (talk) 13:29, 31 August 2010 (UTC) 07:09, 31 August 2010 (UTC)
Metrication in Australia
Hi, the Metrication in Australia article is getting a bit messy in regards to the exceptions to the use of metric. In particular the use of feet and inches for people's height. It only really needs one or two references to the occasional use of imperial in this area. I don't believe we need to reference where metric is used (not quite sure why the AFL etc was used to describe this). I propose to simplify it and put back the idea of an occasional use. Since you've done some editing in this area what are your thoughts? PS I may not be able to reply for a short while as I'm away for a week. Ozdaren (talk) 23:01, 27 September 2010 (UTC)
- Actually I feel that the problem in this section is with undocumented information.Michael Glass (talk) 11:43, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
Hello!
I was looking for some good copy-editors to take a look at some articles I wrote and I felt a little suspect about submitting them to the LOCE because what you get there in terms of editors is kind of a mixed bag imho. Plus it takes forever. I noticed you're pretty good. So would you mind taking a look at a small little article I wrote? Here a DYK style hook to get you interested: Did you know...
- ...that convicted American felon Matthew Cox was so bold in committing over $15 million of mortgage fraud that he allegedly even took out a mortgage under the name of The Simpsons character "C. Montgomery Burns"?
Thanks in advance if you decide to help out. Quadzilla99 (talk) 03:50, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- I hope you like what I have done. Michael Glass (talk) 12:31, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
- Belated thanks. I see some info I have to add maybe you ca look over my new additions when I make them if you don't mind. Quadzilla99 (talk) 13:52, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
No problems. Let me know when you have made the changes.Michael Glass (talk) 05:15, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Copy-edit at Petitcodiac River
Hello, I'd like to thank you for your interest in copy-editing the Petitcodiac River article, but I would like to inform you that your changes modified the meaning of a lot of the sentences. Most of the time it was somewhat minor, but nonetheless, I felt obligated to do something. In addition, most of what you changed seemed to simply dumb down the prose (which is not exactly a bad thing in some cases, as prose can get complicated and hard to follow, but nevertheless, I don't think that was the case here). I reverted most of your edits (I'd guess perhaps 50%, and I can justify them all if you feel that it was an unnecessary or insulting move), but left the rest intact, as you did correct a few legitimate issues. Please keep in mind that this is because the article is currently at FAC (its second, thus making it a very sensitive collaborative work) and it already went through a copy-edit by the WP:GOCE around five days ago, so external eyes have already taken a proper look at it. I felt the need to contact you about this, because it seems to have been a work of at least an hour. Regards. EricLeb01 (Page | Talk) 02:33, 1 November 2010 (UTC)
- If the copy editing was so good, how come I found a "sunk" for "sank"?Michael Glass (talk) 00:42, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
- "Though the Petitcodiac River's watershed is geographically distinct..." -> If you insist so much on changing this, at least make it "Although", as "Though" is informal and not recommended.
- Where's your evidence for this extraordinary claim about usage? Michael Glass (talk) 00:42, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
- User:Ealdgyth/GA review cheatsheet: 'Avoid informal words, such as "carry out", "pub", "though", "tremendous" and "bigger"'
- The word goes unremarked in my copy of the Concise Oxford Dictionary and both are accepted in Fowler's Modern English Usage. I would rather go by them than an anonymous Wikipedian, however well-meaning. Michael Glass (talk) 13:35, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
- User:Ealdgyth/GA review cheatsheet: 'Avoid informal words, such as "carry out", "pub", "though", "tremendous" and "bigger"'
- Where's your evidence for this extraordinary claim about usage? Michael Glass (talk) 00:42, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for fixing "English" to "British"; it was something I had noticed while writing but completely forgot about.
- Not my edit. Michael Glass (talk) 00:42, 2 November 2010 (UTC)
- I don't usually mind copy-editing, but I would highly appreciate if it would stop, as one of the criterion for FAC is 1. "(e) stable: it is not subject to ongoing edit wars and its content does not change significantly from day to day, except in response to the featured article process." I REALLY don't want to go through another month-long process over something as trivial as stability. EricLeb01 (Page | Talk) 02:06, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
- OK. I'll stop, but I'll let you know if I see anything more that may need polishing. Michael Glass (talk) 08:50, 3 November 2010 (UTC).
- PS Your most recent edit, which reverted to square metres, is inconsistent with the source, which said "about 3 hectares". Worse, the source says nothing about a danger to housing from flooding, only to structures like gazebos that were built on low ground. See Michael Glass (talk) 14:10, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
- Not a problem, I appreciate the help. Also, I am referring to this quote regarding housing: "People who live along what is now the headpond have also received a warning, he said". I agree about the sqkm thing; I've changed it back (I thought I had entered "disp=flip" for the convert template, which is what I normally do when the source gives an imperial value... this wasn't the case, apparently). EricLeb01 (Page | Talk) 19:41, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
- Glad to be of help. In the case of the warning that was sent to householders, this is what it said:
- People who live along what is now the headpond have also received a warning, he said.
- "The communique that came out from the province to our mayor indicated that anyone living along the headpond now that has barbeques, gazebos, baby barns that's on low ground right now, get them out of the way cause potential is there you're gonna lose those," said Clibe.
- Note that the warning was about the danger to structures built on low ground, like barbecues and gazebos. There is no suggestion here that houses were in danger of flooding from extremely high tides, only structures built on low ground. I therefore suggest that you consider amending the text to this:
- Flood warnings were issued by the provincial Department of Supply and Services for the town of Riverview, warning that high river tides could lead to the flooding of over 3 hectares (7.4 acres) of sport fields or built on low ground;
- This puts the emphasis back on the sports fields, as in the source, but does not ignore the potential danger to other structures built on flood-prone land. Michael Glass (talk) 22:15, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
Wouldn't saying that the residential areas are simply flood-prone (because I think it would be safe to assume that, if items on low ground properties are at risk of flood damage, then the property itself must be equally at risk) be sufficient? "[...] warning that high river tides could place residential properties and over 3 hectares (7.4 acres) of sport fields at risk of flood damage."
Also, for the comment on my talk page, I like it better that way as well. I've set up a sandbox page over at User:Ericleb01/sandbox if you want to fiddle around with other stuff. EricLeb01 (Page | Talk) 23:50, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
- Note: We could probably centre our discussion over at the dedicated talk page for the sandbox. EricLeb01 (Page | Talk) 23:54, 3 November 2010 (UTC)
- I'm happy to do that. Cheers.Michael Glass (talk) 13:28, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
1910 London to Manchester air race
Hi,
Since there's been confusion about which version of 'mile' is in the aviation article, would you be able to specify 'statute mile' where appropriate in 1910 London to Manchester air race? Note that the convert template uses '|smi|' rather than '|mi|' for this purpose. Regards Lightmouse (talk) 14:46, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
- You've got a point. Please see my comment on the article's talk page. Michael Glass (talk) 00:03, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
Forth Bridge
Hi. Just to say that I've (belatedly) responded to a question you posed about the measurements of the Forth Bridge here. Cordless Larry (talk) 23:12, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
Carlo Cudicini
Hello. Presume that wasn't what you were trying to do here, but you added a link to Younes Kaboul's Premier League profile and part-overwrote the existing link to Cudicini's Chelsea profile. I've fixed it. Incidentally, I understand your reasoning for using the units given in the cited source, which in the case of the Premier League are in metric, and have no problem with that for non-UK players. But you are presumably aware that their measurements are already conversions from imperial? It's particularly clear from the weights. If weighing an adult in countries that use metric measurement, it's rare to use greater precision than .5 of a kilo, yet John Terry's weight is given as 90.34 kg, which is the conversion to an overly precise 2 decimal places of his plain imperial weight of 14 st 3 lb. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 07:43, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for picking up this mistake. I agree with you about the weights of the players though electronic metric scales give measurements to the tenth of a kilo. This is so precise that your weight goes up or down every time you eat a meal or go to the toilet! This is one reason why I have steered clear of weights and stuck to heights.
- I think it would be good to have uniformity of weights and measures in the profiles but this is impossible. Several clubs give no height or weight details, a few clubs give these details only in Imperial; others give both measures, and the Premier League and several other clubs just give the details just in metric. In the circumstances, the best we can do is to follow the sources, and as you know, I have made Premier League my source. Best wishes, Michael Glass (talk) 03:06, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
Another matter arising: Just noticed that if I click the link to a random player's Premier League profile page, as used to verify his height, I reach his page, but with his height blank, in fact without any personal content at all apart from his name. If I then go via the Players tab and A-Z list, his page is displayed with apparently the same URL, and with all its content complete, as if it's only created when accessed via the correct hierarchy. Does this also happen for you? and if so, perhaps we should be looking for an alternative source that actually contains the data on the URL as linked to? cheers, Struway2 (talk) 10:26, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the message. What you described hasn't happened to me. I have, however, noticed that some of the Premier League profiles are incomplete, and when that has happened I have not used that particular web page as a link. I have used the Premier League as my source because it would seem to be more authoritative than Soccernet or Soccerbase, and more complete than using the profiles of individual clubs. Very occasionally I have noticed that the height that was given varied quite a lot for an individual player. When that happened in one case (sorry, I can't remember which one now) I removed all information about the player's height because it varied too much between sources such as Premier League, FIFA and the individual team.
- If you notice that what you have described happens with a specific reference, please let me know and I will do my best to remedy the situation, or if that proves impossible, I will look for a different reference. Michael Glass (talk) 11:07, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
- I've had a better look at it, and the problem appears to stem from how I access the page. If I click the superscript reference number of any of the Premier League player heights, e.g. Carlo Cudicini ref #2, thus taking me to the References section of the article, and then click the url in the References section, it works fine. However, if I hover over that superscript reference number with Navigation popups enabled, a popup window appears containing the details of that reference, and if I then click the url in the popup, it takes me to the incomplete Premier League player page. No idea why that would be, presumably a conflict between Navigation popups and something in the PL page and/or something in my system, but it's clearly not your problem. Sorry to have bothered you, cheers, Struway2 (talk) 12:15, 22 April 2011 (UTC)
Soccerbase
I see your comment on the Peter Crouch talk page - I consider that this should be discussed at a wider forum. Can you add your comments to the thread at Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Football#Soccerbase?. Cheers. -- Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 12:05, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the tip. I'll follow this up. Best wishes, Michael Glass (talk) 14:07, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
Re: centiliters
Again with the height/weight?
Your edit to Gareth Thomas has been undone (see this). Looks like you've left plenty more mess for other editors to clean up too. You think you're being cute or what?--Jeff79 (talk) 09:14, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- Please see my comments on your talk page. If I have made a mistake I am happy to fix it, but I respond better to politeness, thank you. Michael Glass (talk) 09:49, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
Sydney meetup
You are listed here as interested in Sydney meetups, so I thought I'd let you know about one on this Saturday at 5pm at the Alexandria Hotel. Details here: Wikipedia:Meetup/Sydney/November_2011. It would be great to see you. --99of9 (talk) 00:58, 14 November 2011 (UTC)
Sydney meetup
Hello, you expressed interest in future meetups, a meetup will be held on Saturday May 5th at the Alexandria Hotel, further information can be found on the meetup page. We look forward to seeing you there!
Delivered by MessageDeliveryBot on behalf of M.O.X (talk) at 08:59, 27 April 2012 (UTC).
Great to see you dropped by Gun politics in Australia!
Its quiet over there... too quiet. ;-)
The article has changed the defense/defence spelling a couple of times. I prefer your defence, but as far as I can figure out its not certain if either is wrong. ChrisPer (talk) 01:47, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
- Defence is the spelling in the Macquarie Dictionary whereas defense is the US spelling. Neither is wrong but I think we should prefer the Australian spelling in an Australian article. Michael Glass (talk) 03:21, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
