User talk:MyaWebb
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The article on working memory was very informative and consistently sited all of the information given which proved the reliability of the information. The only negative pieces about this article is that it sometimes seemed over-informative. Some things, for example the portion on alcohol, could be omitted from the article to increase clarity and conciseness. Overall the article is very helpful for those that have no background information about the working memory. MyaWebb (talk) 00:34, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
If the writer would like to keep the alcohol portion she/he can use this journal article that focused on alcohol consumption and its effect on the working memory. The experiment proves that working memory function is decreased in those that consume more alcohol. [1]