Talk:Alcatraz Federal Penitentiary/GA1
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Reviewer: Thine Antique Pen (talk · contribs) 21:49, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
- I will review this article. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 21:49, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
Lead
No issues.
History
Paragraph 3 needs a ref on the end. Same for paragraph 8.
- Done.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:56, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Escape attempts
End paragraph needs a ref. No issues other than that, and it reads professionally. I'm not sure about "one of the most intricate escapes ever devised" though.
Done. A lot of sources state the intricate thing though, it is true.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:45, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Administration
- Same as above for paragraph 2.
Is based on the map on http://www.flickr.com/photos/thebruce0/6749519095/lightbox/. Can't really source a flickr map, I could source it to the author with is Ocean publishing or something..♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:56, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
- Change "anything from $20-$43 a month" to "anything from $20-43 a month"
- Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:56, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Security
Paragraph 2 and 4 need references on the end
Done, asked NVV for the other.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:09, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Wardens
Excellent!
Prison life and the cells
Paragraph 4, ref needed at end.
- Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:15, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Corridors
Grand.
A-Block
Excellent.
B-Block
Grand.
C-Block
Good.
D-Block
Good, as above.
Dining
Ref needed on paragraph 1
- Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:15, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Recreation
Could you possibly put a caption in for the image?
- Done♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:15, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Notable inmates
Looks good.
Other buildings
Warden's House
Grand.
Building 64
Grand.
Social Hall
Grand.
Power House
Ref on end of paragraph 1?
- Its taken from a photograph with the sign.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:15, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Alcatraz Water Tower
Ref needed on end of paragraph 3.
- Done.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:26, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Model Industries Building
First and fourth paragraph need a ref on the end
- Done. One though is a photograph/map observation♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:26, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
New Industries Building
Ref needed at paragraph 2
- Its also a photograph observation. Thanks for the review.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:26, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
Gallery
Formatted correctly.
Summary
I am putting this 
On Hold until the issues are addressed. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 08:58, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
I shall promote this to GA standard, as another source is going to be added, but it already meets GA criteria. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:17, 15 September 2012 (UTC)