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problematic edits

@Albertatiran: If you want to shorten this article, you shouldn't delete the well sourced long standing information of this article, and replace them with contents from other articles, like what you did here. Instead you should summarize the existing information.

Ghazaalch, the version you pointed to also contained the following claim that doesn't exist in the source (which I removed). There is really no doubt that my edits improved this verbose section, which was, almost to the word, copy-pasted from Vaglieri. "The rebels maintained that Uthman had been justly killed, for not governing according to the Quran and Sunnah; hence, no vengeance was to be invoked." Albertatiran (talk) 18:36, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I am not sure what your question is, but I explained it below. Ghazaalch (talk) 14:13, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Ghazaalch, thanks for the responses below. Instead of clarifying myself, it might be more productive for me to jump to the main point below and answer that. Albertatiran (talk) 15:10, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Also I noticed that you deleted some attributions (according to ...), which are needed for controversial contents. You should fix them yourself.

Ghazaalch, the above can be easily addressed without reverting the article. Albertatiran (talk) 09:31, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I didn't revert them. You should fix them yourself. Ghazaalch (talk) 14:13, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Also when you want to rearrange or clarify a paragraph, you cannot attribute the information of one source to another like what you might have done here.

Ghazaalch, your claim is false. "According to Poonawala, before the assassination of Uthman, the Basri rebels were in favor of Talha, and the Kufi rebels were in favor of Zubayr, but with the assassination of Uthman, both groups converted to Ali. With the assassination of Uthman, the Umayyads fled Medina, and the Egyptians, prominent Muhajirun, and Ansar gained control. They invited Ali to the caliphate and he accepted the position after a few days," is all sourced from Iranica. Albertatiran (talk) 16:57, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Again I don't know what you are saying, but I didn't revert them either. You should fix them yourself. Ghazaalch (talk) 14:13, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

If you need more information ask the editors who are more experienced like Mhhossein. Ghazaalch (talk) 15:36, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

@Ghazaalch: If you are going to edit the infobox, please could you at least check that your edits are compatible with the templates used.-- Toddy1 (talk) 16:46, 30 November 2021 (UTC)


@El C, Al Ameer son, Mhhossein, HistoryofIran, Toddy1, ParthikS8, Sa.vakilian, Ahendra, M.Nadian, and Apaugasma: I would ask you to please look into the edit war started by Ghazaalch. Without any exceptions, I've improved the flow and writing of the article (e.g., ), added new sources (e.g., ), removed udue weight or shortened verbose content (e.g., ), filled in the gaps within the narrative (e.g., ), corrected misrperesentations of the source (e.g., ), removed repeated or rearranged misplaced content (e.g., ), removed content that didn't exist in the source (like or ). Ghazaalch has now reverted the article, even though I had posted my proposed edits on the talk page long ago and waited for feedback before editing the article. Thank you for your help. Albertatiran (talk) 16:57, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

  • @Albertatiran: None of the links (diffs) you provided above were reverted except for the number 4, and I already explained why; However, I would explain again. You are saying that the summaries that you copied from the First Fitna and pasted in this article are better than previous ones; but the question is that are they good enough for this article too? Is it okay if we summarize the article, Battle of Nahrawan, for example, and pour it in the relevant section in this article? I am saying no. Because this article is about the life of Ali, and we should concentrate on the information that explain his life not any information about this battle or that battle. That is why I am saying that if you want to shorten this article, you'd better use the existing information which are concentrating on Ali's position about the events of his life, not just the event of his life, and of course you could clarify the existing information or add new information from other sources too. The second point is that we are arranging the events of Ali's life in chronological order, so it is better to write about the Advent of Kharijites before we write about Arbitration; and write about Arbitration before we write about the Battle of Nahrawan. So this point should be taken into account while merging sections.Ghazaalch (talk) 14:13, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
Ghazaalch, thanks for the response. Would the following be agreeable to you? I will attempt to address all of your concerns over the next couple of weeks, starting from this version , e.g., by highlighting the role of Ali in those events and separating the Kharijites' genesis story from the Battle of Nahrawan. (I'll also integrate the recent edits by Toddy1 and Thegreatrebellion.) Albertatiran (talk) 15:10, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
i'll take a look first to learn the case chronology Ahendra (talk) 21:52, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

The point of the reverts was that the long-standing information should be the base of your work not the copy-pasted ones. So I'd prefer to start with the current version. But you can use some of the reverted information which are not problematic. Also you can merge the Advent of Kharijites with one of its adjacent sections, Battle of Siffin or Arbitration.Ghazaalch (talk) 15:46, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

In the future, it'd arguably be more productive to voice your concerns here instead of reverting the article point blank. I'd personally be much more responsive and wellcoming to constructive feedback received on the talk page. Albertatiran (talk) 15:57, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Salam everyone, I don't have the time to go through all the changes done by Albertatiran, but I have mentioned some of them:
In this one, "insurgents" is changed to "rebels" and ", and the Egyptians," is removed from the text. Also, I would like to know what loaded sentence was fixed in this edit and why sentences like "lacked the criteria set by the first two caliphs" was removed. Although Albertatiran certainly meant to help here, important pages like this should not be mass changed unilaterally. My suggestion is keep up the GA nomination job commenced by Ghazaalch. I can also dedicate a limited time to this if that helps. --Mhhossein talk 04:32, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Salam, Mhhossein, and thanks for the feedback. Here are my thoughts:

  1. I might have changed "insurgests" for the sake of consistency with "rebels" used earlier in the text. That said, the two words have close meanings.
  2. To me, the following are examples of a "loaded sentence" (a) Source: What is certain is that ʿAlī allowed himself to be nominated also by the rebels who had ʿUt̲h̲mān’s blood on their hands. This was an error, in that it exposed him to accusations of complicity in their crime, although some traditions represent him as vainly endeavouring to rid himself of the most factious of his partisans. Old Wiki: According to Vaglieri, Ali, allowing himself to be nominated by rebels, was an error which "exposed him to accusations of complicity" in rebels' crime, in spit of his vain effort to detach himself from them. (Might imply that the election of Ali was an error.) New Wiki: According to Vaglieri, the nomination of Ali by the rebels exposed him to the accusations of complicity, despite his efforts to distance himself from Uthman's murder. (b) Source: The election of ʿAlī was unquestionably due not so much to the prestige afforded him by his family connections and his alliance with the Prophet, but more to the support of the Anṣār who had regained influence in their city while the Umayyad party was in disarray. Old Wiki: Della Vida believes that the choice of Ali as caliph was not because he and his family held a high position or because he was loyal to Muhammad, but rather because the Ansar who had regained their influence in their city, Medina, supported him, and on the other hand, the Umayyads were troubled and disturbed. (Might be interpreted by the reader as Ali not holding the said credentials.) New Wiki: It has also been stated that, in addition to the prestige of Ali's family ties and his alliance with Muhammad, the support of the Ansar and the disarray of the Umayyad clan were both instrumental to the election of Ali. (c) Source: According to this author, it demonstrates that no previous agreement existed between the leading Companions which could probably be thought to have anticipated these events. Old Wiki: Caetani believes that this choice was made without the prior consent of the famous companions of Muhammad. (Might suggest that Ali was not a campanion and that the companions of Muhammad did not have a say in the election of Ali.) New Wiki: According to Caetani, this chain of events also indicates that the leading companions of Muhammad did not have an a priori agreement about the succession of Uthman.
  3. In the source and here, "lacked the criteria set by the first two caliphs" is explained by its next sentence (no council / not enough Quraysh support). So, I think, it was safe and truthfull to remove this sentence in the interest of brevity.
  4. I replaced "Egyptians" with "rebels" for the following reason. The old Wiki reads, "With the assassination of Uthman, the Umayyads fled Medina, and the Egyptians, prominent Muhajirun, and Ansar gained control." I think this statement incorrectly excludes the Iraqi rebels. Indeed, the source says, "Following ʿOṯmān’s murder most of the Omayyads fled Medina, thus leaving the provincial opposition in control of the situation. The strongest groups were the Egyptians, the Anṣār, and the prominent Mohāǰerūn." Albertatiran (talk) 08:37, 2 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I think it is better to summarize these sections less and use more resources, the small number of sources makes some things not be said at all. To be sure, all the views should be given in the main article of each topic, and then the sum of different opinions should be summarized in this article. M.Nadian (talk) 08:19, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
@Albertatiran: You're welcome, firstly, could I ask you use quotation marks when you copy materials from the sources verbatim? How about numbering the items in question so that we can navigate them easier and refer to them just by numbers? Anyway, as for the first one, I think both old and new versions are fair enough. Regarding the second you're right in that those credentials may be ignored. But your version is giving the same weight to both Ali's family position and Ansar's influence (while the author says the latter is more important). I agree with you regarding the third. As for "rebel" being used by you, how can it be used for "Egyptians, the Anṣār, and the prominent Mohāǰerūn" in this context? Best. --Mhhossein talk 18:58, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
@Mhhossein: I added some numbering although this might have made things even less readable since I don't know how to create a numbered list starting at an arbitrary number :) In any case, I just have a comment regarding item 4 above which might have been misunderstood. In my edit here, I had replaced "Egyptians" in the sentence "With the assassination of Uthman, the Umayyads fled Medina, and the Egyptians, prominent Muhajirun, and Ansar gained control" with "rebels" in the new sentence "The Umayyads had fled Medina, and the rebels, prominent Muhajirun, and Ansar had gained control of the city." I think both are correct statements. That said, item 4 above explains why I think the new sentence is closer to the source. However, if you disagree, it's ok with me to undo that. I'm also open to suggestions about (b) in item 2 above though I think the new one is already an improvement. Thanks again for your input. Albertatiran (talk) 12:25, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Dear Albertatiran: As for the b in the second item, I suggest replacing "rather" with 'more importantly'– this conveys the impression meant by the author. I am not still happy with the "rebel" item. I suggest undoing that if you don't have complementary explanations. --Mhhossein talk 13:10, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

References

Typo in first paragraph

Excuse me if I am incorrect, but "religius" should be changed to religious in the third sentence.  Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:569:fb23:6300:e1aa:87ad:cb6:d8d5 (talk) 17:27, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

 Done by User:Albertatiran. DMacks (talk) 18:12, 8 December 2021 (UTC)

Good article nomination

Hello. I am going to work on this article to improve it to a good article. Any suggestion? Ghazaalch (talk) 18:09, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

@Sa.vakilian, Mhhossein, Alivardi, and Vice regent: Hello. I have been working on this article for a while and am going to nominate it for a good article. Is there anything I could do before nomination? Ghazaalch (talk) 03:25, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

@Ghazaalch: That seems good. But have you noticed the previous attempts? --Mhhossein talk 14:35, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

@Mhhossein: Every thing has been changed since 2015. I omitted or replaced all unreliable information and could say that it is a new article now. So I do not think it has the previous issues now.Ghazaalch (talk) 09:25, 25 June 2021 (UTC)

By the way, I changed the contents in the infobox a little bit, but the new information are hidden.(can't be seen by readers) Do you know what is the problem?Ghazaalch (talk) 09:26, 25 June 2021 (UTC)

@Ghazaalch: Are the info you added hidden now? Can you tell me which content you are referring to? --Mhhossein talk 12:25, 29 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you Mhhossein. The following is hidden now:

|Titles: Amir al-Mu'minin, Abu Turab, Haydar, Asadullah, Al-Murtadha, Abu al-Hasan.

Ghazaalch (talk) 02:09, 30 June 2021 (UTC)

@Ghazaalch: Check my edit.--Mhhossein talk 11:52, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Thank you Mhhossein. Well done:) Ghazaalch (talk) 01:34, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

You're welcome. --Mhhossein talk 19:16, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hello AhmadLX. You did a great job reviewing Hasan ibn Ali, which was kind of writing the article from the beginning. I am wondering if you have the time to review this article too? If it is too much, I can start preparing Husayn ibn Ali for review first.Ghazaalch (talk) 08:39, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I don't have time at the moment for another review. However, you should fix these things before a GAN: (i) primary/poor-secondary/polemic/self-published sources (e.g. Bukhari, Muslim, Kulayni, Razwy Sayed Ali Asgher, Shahin Badr, www.spiritualfoundation.net etc.) should be removed. (ii) the article should be made MoS compliant (iii) Fix ToC (it would qualify as a start class article if written out as text;)) (iv) Reduce verbosity and excessive detail (e.g. Battle of Nahrawan section is almost half the size of the battle article itself; same with Siffin. See Mu'awiya I#Battle of Siffin and arbitration for comparison.). You should also think about GAN requirements, especially 3b, and WP:Summary style. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 14:23, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Ghazaalch: You should add Martin Hinds' Kufan Political Allignments and The Siffin Arbitration Agreement in sections on analysis of Ali's Kufan coalition and arbitration. On Kharijites, you should include more recent works such as Jeffrey Kenney's Kharijites and the Politics of Extremism. But Wellhausen's classic The Religio-political Opposition Parties would also be a good addition. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 17:45, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

Thank you AhmadLX. I used the sources you mentioned above, including your translation of Wellhausen's book. I couldn't find THE SIFFIN ARBITRATION AGREEMENT as I mentioned before. Ghazaalch (talk) 07:20, 3 October 2021 (UTC)

See if you can access from this link. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 10:07, 4 October 2021 (UTC)

Thank you AhmadLX I cannot reach the Site. Ghazaalch (talk) 07:31, 13 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello AhmadLX. Can you take another look at the article and see if we can nominate it now? Ghazaalch (talk) 14:47, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

@Ghazaalch: If I were to review a nomination in the current state of the article, I would quick fail it: Bukhari, Ibn Taimiyya, Sahih Muslim, Nahj al-Balagha, Ibn Athir, a master thesis, abundant references to primary sources (see this, see that etc), 50+ footnotes, historiography low standard (the crux of it being that Madelung's deviation from the academic consensus on the unreliability of hadith literature is correct and justified), 3 to 4 See Alsos at the start of every section, more than half dozen titles, still thoroughly verbose, undue weight (ghulat,in Quran & Hadith etc). However, the decision to nominate/not nominate is yours. I just gave my opinion. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 17:31, 23 October 2021 (UTC)

@Albertatiran: Thanks to Apaugasma I saw your proposals below in the Caliphat section. The article might have the problems you mentioned but since I am not the reviewer, I'd prefer to listen to those who are more experienced than me and you in this field, like AhmadLX and Sa.vakilian. AhmadLx has already made some suggestions that I tried to address them, except for the Historiography section which still has the problem he mentioned. So as Mhhossein said bellow, the best thing to do right now is to improve this article to a good article. You have already been of good help summarizing this article and you could continue with it as long as you don't change or remove the essential content of it. (I have already summarized it so be careful not to trim it much). You can also work on Historiography section under Ahmad's revision, if you want to help. Ghazaalch (talk) 07:55, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Ghazaalch, I have (hopefully) helped so far towards raising this to the good article status and would like to continue doing so. At the same, the concerns raised in Talk:Ali#Caliphate are important in my view and I'd like to address them. Albertatiran (talk) 08:43, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

Thank you Albertatiran. Do you have the time to improve the Historiography section too, using some other sources and viewpoints? Then we can ask @AhmadLX to review the article and let us know what else should be done. Ghazaalch (talk) 09:16, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Hi, Ghazaalch! What do you have in mind for Historiography? I can see that it's mentioned in the exchanges above but that's also somewhat vague to me. Thanks! Albertatiran (talk) 16:03, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Hi Albertatiran. I think AhmadLX want to say that Madelung's deviation from the academic consensus on the unreliability of hadith literature has been justified in the third paragraph of the Historiography where it reads: Wilferd Madelung has rejected the stance of indiscriminately dismissing everything not included in "early sources" and in this approach tendentiousness alone is no evidence for late origin. According to him, Caetani's approach is inconsistent. Madelung and some later historians do not reject the narrations which have been compiled in later periods and try to judge them in the context of history and on the basis of their compatibility with the events and figures.[195]. I think AhmadLX want to say that Madelung's view has been given too much weight and it should be balanced using some other sources and viewpoints. AhmadLX himself might want to clarify a little or introduce some other sources for this purpose. Ghazaalch (talk) 17:39, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

@Ghazaalch: Give me a couple days. Running short on time these days. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 17:10, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

By the way, AhmadLx has been of great help reviewing Hasan ibn Ali, until I could nominate it. Battle of Karbala is another article that has been improved to a Good article by AhmadLX and could be good example for our work here. Ghazaalch (talk) 17:52, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Proposed changes to Death and Burial

@Apaugasma, Mhhossein, Al Ameer son, HistoryofIran, Ghazaalch, Toddy1, AhmadLX, Vice regent, ParthikS8, Sa.vakilian, Ahendra, and M.Nadian: Hi! I'd like to gauge your views about the following minor changes to Death and Burial. If unopposed, I'd hope to implement them by next Friday. Thank you in advance! Albertatiran (talk) 08:51, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

After consulting the given source (Veccia Vaglieri's Ibn Muldjam article), a couple of sentences in this section can be improved in my view.

CURRENT: According to some narrations Ali knew, or had been informed by Muhammad that his beard would stain with the blood of his forehead. It is mainly emphasized in Shia sources that Ali, despite being aware of his fate, and in spite of knowing that ibn Muljam would be his killer, did not take any action against ibn Muljam becaus he could not kill someone who has not killed him yet.

PROPOSED: According to some narrations, Ali had long known about his fate, either by his own premonition or through Muhammad, who had told Ali that his beard would be stained with the blood of his head. It is emphasized mainly in Shia sources that Ali, despite being aware of his fate at the hands of Ibn Muljam, did not take any action against him because, in Ali's words, "Would you kill one who has not yet killed me?"Albertatiran (talk) 08:51, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Okay, but I don't see much difference between these two paragraphs. M.Nadian (talk) 10:40, 12 December 2021 (UTC)

Nor do I.VR talk 17:44, 12 December 2021 (UTC)
sorry for late respond, as i need to review first before giving my words. i doesnt mind for such improvement either. Ahendra (talk) 09:51, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Conclusion

Thanks! It seems that the proposal (largely correcting the English and copy editing and adding new bits of info from the source) is seen as uncontroversial. I've implemneted the proposed edits and did some more copy editing on this section. Albertatiran (talk) 08:52, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Vandalism

Recently, Ishan87 has begun going over my recent contributions on Wikipedia and reverting them without any explanation, e.g., my recent edits discussed in Talk:Ali#Proposed_changes_to_Death_and_Burial. This can be traced back to a dispute Talk:Muhammad's children (which makes for an interesting read). Albertatiran (talk) 19:41, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

False accusations. As I explained in the other talk page. I did gave explanations and valid reasons to change your edits, and none of them had anything to do with your actions in any other pages. Ishan87 (talk) 19:55, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

The edits that you reverted on this page were discussed and approved by other editors in Talk:Ali#Proposed_changes_to_Death_and_Burial. Albertatiran (talk) 20:20, 21 December 2021 (UTC)

Ishan87, what is your problem with this edit? Are you see the "Proposed changes to Death and Burial" or not? M.Nadian (talk) 06:29, 22 December 2021 (UTC)

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"Ali's appearance is described as being bald, heavy built, short legged, with broad shoulders, a hairy body, a long white beard; and affected by a form of eye inflammation. In manner, it is said that he was rough, brusque, and unsociable."

This line needs changing as its portraying a false image of a man who was described to be handsome, gentle,generous, compassionate,pure, one who emanated wisdom, faith and valor,. A man raised by the Prophet Muhammad (PBUH) , a man who was the spiritual successor of the Prophet Muhammad (PBUH). Ali Ibn Abu Talib is a man who's even spoken by the United nationn.

UN Secretariat, the Committee of Human Rights in New York under the chairmanship of the Secretary General Kofi Annan issued, in 2002 A.D., this historic resolution:

The Caliph Ali Bin Abi Talib is considered the fairest governor who appeared during human history (After the Prophet Muhammed). The United Nations has advised Arab countries to take Imam Ali bin Abi Talib as an example in establishing a regime based on justice and democracy and encouraging knowledge.

^ This was stated by the United Nations, someone clearly wants to bring about a negative image of Caliph Imam Ali Ibn Abu Talib, some people in the muslim world try there level best to undervalue this holy figure. SHG98 (talk) 23:25, 22 January 2022 (UTC)

 Not done: Unclear what changes should be made (format X to Y would be helpful). Also, no reliable sources have been provided. From my understanding, this so-called UN resolution never happened and is just a hoax. – NJD-DE (talk) 23:33, 22 January 2022 (UTC)

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