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June 2020 edit - Ngo and Proud Boys

@Dkspartan1835, Jlevi, and Horse Eye Jack: I'm starting a discussion related to the recent edits here [][][]. Dkspartan1835 correctly noted that the source for the claim, Willamette Week, doesn't state Ngo has been in contact with the Proud Boys, "Ngo happened because he ignored Proud Boys' offer of protection". Jlevi added and HEJ restored the following claim, "the assault on Ngo happened because he did not on this occasion take up Proud Boys' offer of protection". The source does not say on any occasion Ngo "accepted" any offers of protection. As such this edit was rightly removed. Additionally, the claims that Ngo has been in contact with the Proud Boys need to be properly sourced. Thus far we have an unnamed under cover activist who makes this claim. We also have a reporter for an alternative news outlet that clearly has a bone to pick suggesting it might be true (the Willamette article in question here). This is a BLP and such controversial claims should not be in the article if they can't be robustly sourced to RSs. Dkspartan's edit addressed these issues by acknowledging the comments attributed to the PBs but not implying that Ngo was involved or working with the PBs. We simply don't have sourcing to make that sort of claim in a BLP article. Springee (talk) 18:06, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

I support removal of Jlevi's edit "did not on this occasion take up" because it implies that there were other such occasions, which the cited source does not claim. NedFausa (talk) 18:46, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
I like the wording “did not take up the” better than "did not on this occasion take up” or “ignored.” Does that work for everyone? Horse Eye Jack (talk) 19:19, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
The source actually says "ignored". It seems clear the PB offered some sort of protection but it isn't clear how Ngo responded to that offer. For example, one possibility is Ngo engaged in dialog then for what ever reason decided not to accept an offer of protection. Another possibility is Ngo received an message via his Twitter account from someone claiming to be with the PB (with Ngo having no idea if this was true or not) so Ngo completely ignores the message, perhaps even considers that it might be an Antifa trap. I invented both of the above cases but either could be true based on the information presented by WWeekly. Since we don't know we should not use phrasing that would imply a more extensive relationship than has been explicitly shown in RSs. This is especially true if we are using a source that is clearly openly hostile to the BLP subject and has a very limited record in terms of demonstrated reliability. I do think "did not take up the" reads better vs "ignored" but "did not take up" suggests a level of interaction that may not actually have happened. Springee (talk) 20:10, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
I think that we’re sufficiently covered by "Later that year, a recording of an alleged member of Proud Boys emerged, published by Willamette Week, where the person claimed that” to say "did not take up the” but if “ignored the” is what gets us to consensus I’d be happy with that. The original "because he ignored Proud Boys’ offer” is just so clunky. Horse Eye Jack (talk) 20:18, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
Again this is problematic when we consider the sourcing used to make damning claims about a BLP subject. We have an "undercover antifa" member making effectively anonymous claims that make a critic of antifa look bad. Sure, the article is including them as attributed claims (even the paper that publish the stuff won't take ownership of the claims). This again is a BLP where we should not imply things that are not explicitly stated by reliable sources. That said, I agree with you regarding the clunky language. What about "Later that year, a recording of an alleged member of the Proud Boys emerged, published by Willamette Week, where the person claimed that the assault on Ngo happened because he ignored the group's offer of protection."? Springee (talk) 20:34, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
That there looks like the best of all options given so far, barring any dissent from other editors I say lets go with it. Horse Eye Jack (talk) 20:52, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
Copy edit:
"Later that year, Willamette Week published a recording of an alleged member of the Proud Boys who claimed that the assault happened because Ngo ignored the group's offer of protection."
NedFausa (talk) 21:01, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
Why is this even in the article? It's a contentious claim by an unknown person with absolutely no evidence backing it up. Using "alleged" and "claimed" is just covering our asses, including this material in the article violates WP:BLPGOSSIP. I am removing it. Red Rock Canyon (talk) 22:42, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
I support Red Rock Canyon's removal of claims by an unknown person per WP:BLPGOSSIP, which cautions against relying on sources that "attribute material to anonymous sources." NedFausa (talk) 17:34, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
We have consensus to include that passage, I strongly disagree that it violates WP:BLPGOSSIP. Horse Eye Jack (talk) 16:29, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
To be honest I think it's better with that passage removed. I'm not strongly leaning in that direction because I think our consensus text is acceptable. Still I think Red Rock Canyon's removal is sound per BLPGOSSIP. Springee (talk) 17:17, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
I dispute Horse Eye Jack's assertion that "we have consensus to include that passage." In light of Red Rock Canyon's removal of claims by an unknown person per WP:BLPGOSSIP, editors should be accorded time to reconsider their previous endorsements, if any. NedFausa (talk) 17:39, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
We had consensus when I made that comment, if you’ve reconsidered your position thats fine (consensus changes, thats how it works) but it doesnt make my statement any less accurate at the time it was made. Horse Eye Jack (talk) 17:56, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Proposed June edits

Rather than be bold I thought I would ask people's opinions on a few sections.

Just after the section discussed above we have this sentence, the Portland based newspaper stated that "it is increasingly clear he is coordinating his movements and his message with right-wing groups". BuzzFeed News reported that Ngo "has been building to a dramatic confrontation with the Portland far left for months, his star rising along with the severity of the encounters...The man’s literal brand is that anti-fascists are violent and loathe him" and "He is willing to make himself the story and to stream himself doing it. He proceeds from a worldview and seeks to confirm it, without asking to what degree his coverage becomes a self-fulfilling prophecy", pointing out that Ngo even proposed going to "a far-left hangout" during the writing of the profile piece.. As an opinion about Ngo it's probably due. However, it seems like it shouldn't be placed just after a sentence talking about Ngo being violently attacked. I think it would make more sense if we had an intro paragraph for the confrontation with antifa section. We could then try to sort the rest of the material out into some sort of order. The sentence in question would make for a good, "people think this about Ngo" type paragraph/section. While it was discussed in an article about the antifa assault on Ngo, it isn't actually about the assault so much as the general antagonism between the group and Ngo. So at this point I'm open to suggestions as to where to put this sentence. Absent suggestions I might try a BOLD move (not removal).
Second edit relates to this sentence, "One of the victims of the attack was knocked unconscious with a baton and suffered a broken vertebrae – Ngo later posted a video of her being attacked and shared her personal information online.". The sentence is factually correct but misleading. It implies Ngo identified the victim and then decided to share her identity online, perhaps out of spite? This sentence incorrectly cites two sources (Vox and VICE). Only VICE actually contains the supporting material. Here is what VICE said about the identification. Ngo was criticized for broadcasting the identity of the woman he said “got knocked out cold.” In a tweet, he also noted that she’d attempted to disrupt a panel featuring a disgraced former Google employee who’d circulated a sexist internal memo. It's not clear if he identified her at the same time or at a different time. It's clear he identified her in connection with her attempt to disrupt a panel discussion. So basically she was behaving badly and he replied. It was not a case of he wanted to add insult to (literal) injury. Also, the way VICE is handling the Google memo description suggests they are VERY biased. The degree to which the engineer was disgraced or the memo was sexist is certainly debatable. To state in no uncertain terms that it was suggests that maybe she was right to disrupt the panel. That the article author handled the Google Memo case with such strong bias even thought it wasn't related to the primary focus of the article suggests they aren't worried about presenting a neutral view of events. They are writing to persuade the reader, not to inform. That puts this source into the unfortunately large bucket of oped-fact reporting hybrid articles. Anyway, I would suggest editing the sentence to make it clear the person's identity was revealed in conjunction with her attempt to disrupt an event. If we decide that is too much information then her doxxing should be removed from the article as it currently creates a misleading implication. Springee (talk) 17:17, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for starting a discussion about these. In terms of the first fragment, I think it belongs there; the reason being is, that this text directly references the confrontation, and how he was "building up" to this moment. That's why I think it's okay to keep it there (however I have no strong opinions about the matter, would be good to hear from other editors). In terms of the doxxing, he retweeted her being attacked and shared her details - I'll try to find a reliable source that talks about this, as obviously the Twitter screenshot is not a RS. It's also possible that he first doxxed her because of something else, and then did it again after the infamous attack on her - nonetheless, I think this is what the sources are referring to. BeŻet (talk) 19:59, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
Without meaning to circumvent your discussion to achieve consensus, I made three small edits to the article space, including removal of the reference that Springee noted failed to support the sentence to which it was attached. I trust this does not interfere with your thread. NedFausa (talk) 20:49, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Ngo's reporting on Capitol Hill Autonomous Zone

I've removed this material on several grounds. First this is a case where RECENT applies. The Capitol Hill Autonomous Zone is a new, evolving thing. We should wait to see how things turn out before we add Ngo's reporting on the subject to his biography. Second, the material as added is UNDUE. It presented only a single source saying Ngo was making claims. Perhaps other sources are available talking about Ngo's reporting on the subject but at this point in time it doesn't seem like enough RSs are talking about this to be DUE. Third, the material was presented in a non-neutral way and implied something the original source did not state. It implied that Ngo was falsely claiming a crime was occurring and used the police's "no knowledge of" response to imply Ngo was lying/inventing the story. Effectively the police said they couldn't confirm. They did not say Ngo lied. The difference is big since we are dealing with a BLP. Springee (talk) 21:22, 12 June 2020 (UTC)

If there is no evidence of something being true, it's safe to assume that it isn't true. Since Ngo has made numerous false claims in the past, it is very likely that this is another false claim he made. The reason why I believe it is due is because this rumour has been circulated a bit, and the source of the rumour is Andy and a fellow The Post Millennial writer. BeŻet (talk) 21:52, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
OK, there are a number of things wrong with the material you are suggesting. First, the police are not saying it didn't happen. They are saying they can not affirm it. You are SYNTH a leap from the SPD says they have no reports to Ngo, who per the article was repeating what another source reported, was lying. The source you provided does not say Ngo was lying, rather it says Ngo repeated the claim. Your text suggests that Ngo is the origin of the claim and that the SPD say the claim is false. Neither is supported by your source. Again, per RECENT we shouldn't be making statements that may later turn out to be false (what if evidence is found once police are able to go into the area and take statements) and per SYNTH the source doesn't support what you added to the article. Finally, per DUE this would need some real coverage, sources claiming Ngo was falsely spreading this claim, in order to be DUE in this article. Springee (talk) 01:46, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
Those are some mental gymnastics. Police are saying that they received no reports of any extortion happening, therefore there is no evidence that this is happening, therefore there is no reason to believe that a guy from a different city and state somehow magically knows of some reports that are not known to local police officers and city officials. Since Ngo has a history of making false and misleading statements, he literally has no ground to stand on here, and those claims can be dismissed. However, if those claims don't go further than Fox News and minor right-wing outlets, perhaps you are right that it is not due. It's just a shame that Andy keeps fooling people into believing he has any credibility whatsoever. BeŻet (talk) 14:27, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
My logic is sound. Your last sentence suggests you are here to right great wrongs. Springee (talk) 16:36, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
Should be excluded. The claims are false, and seems to have been covered only by Fox. --K.e.coffman (talk) 02:33, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

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