Talk:Attulus nenilini/GA1

Passed. Kimikel (talk) 23:53, 12 October 2025 (UTC)

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 22:27, 25 September 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Kimikel (talk · contribs) 01:19, 6 October 2025 (UTC)

Hello, I will be reviewing this article as part of the October GAN backlog drive. I will be leaving my comments shortly. Kimikel (talk) 01:19, 6 October 2025 (UTC)

@Simongraham: Please see my initial comments below. Let me know if you have any questions or concerns regarding my suggestions. Thank you. Kimikel (talk) 23:01, 7 October 2025 (UTC)

Well-wrritten

Lead

on the front margin of its jaws, or chelicerae. > on its chelicerae, the front margin of its jaws [just to eliminate ambiguity on whether "chelicerae" refers to the teeth or the jaw]
know as its clypeus > known as its clypeus

Taxonomy

jumping spider, a member of the family Salticidae > correct me if I'm wrong but to my understanding, jumping spiders are the entirety of Salticidae family, not just a member of it, thus making this redundant
- The comment is that Attulus nenilini is a member of the family, basically that Salticidae and jumping spiders are synonymous.
Wanda Wesołowskai > Wanda Wesołowska
- Edited.
Sitticini > wikilink Sitticini
- Added.
Amycoida > wikilink Amycoida
Added.
As this had been circumscribed earlier by Simon, in 1889, and was the senior name > As Attulus had been circumscribed by Simon in 1889 and was the senior name,
- Corrected.
At the same time, > I would just remove this part since it makes it sound like Prószyński suggested that at the same time Simon had.
- Removed.

Description

It body is divided > Its body is divided
- Amended.
There are white hairs on its clypeus like the male too. > Like the male, it has white hairs on its clypeus.
- Replaced.
with a large that runs > missing word?
- Good spot. Clarified.

Distribution

Attulus nenilini lives in Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan.[ > remove bracket
- Removed.
in1989 > space
- Added.

Verifiable

For consistency's sake, Wesołowska, Wanda should be wikilinked in the bibliography
- Linked.

Spot check

7: verified
17: Not verified: the linked source only goes to page 67. Attulus nenilini/Sitticus nenilini does not appear in the linked document
- DOI is wrong. Removed.
10: Verified, though https://www.biotaxa.org/em/article/view/em.2017.10.7/26957 is a more direct link to the article
Amended.
15 > Not verified: almost certainly an error, as there is no page 541 in the source, which goes from 231–292.
Corrected.
6: Verified

Illustrated

Image is properly tagged and beneficial to article; if you want, you could also include https://www.inaturalist.org/photos/248562446 which shows the rest of the spider's body

Broad

Do we know anything about its life cycle or behavior? If these things have not been described, then no worries.
- Unfortunately not.

Neutral and Stable

@Kimikel: Thank you for your excellent review. I believe the items you have noted have been acted on. I feel that the article looks much better now. Please do tell me if there is anything else you see that needs to be done. simongraham (talk) 22:28, 10 October 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for your work on this article. I've taken another look through and I see no reason not to pass this article. I appreciate your quick and quality response. Congratulations! Kimikel (talk) 23:52, 12 October 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.