Talk:Augmented triangular prism/GA1
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
GA review
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Nominator: Dedhert.Jr (talk · contribs) 09:11, 9 March 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: OzmoOzmo (talk · contribs) 23:11, 20 April 2026 (UTC)
Quick fail check
Not a long way from meeting any one of the good article criteria.
No copyright violations: assessment returned 0% similarity.
No cleanup banners.
No edit warring; the page seems stable.
No previous GA reviews.
Review
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- The entire section on properties is not understandable to a broad audience. For example, what is two-fold pyramidal symmetry? This is not understandable to me, because the contextual link provided there is not understandable. The main equation (largest-appearing one) in that section is also not understandable to a broad audience (although I can understand it), but I am not sure how it can be made more understandable per WP:NOR. The bulleted list in the properties section was also missing periods, which I have WP:BOLDly fixed.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
- a (reference section):
b (inline citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- I do not have access to the non-open access sources used in citing sources, and the only open access source returns 400 Bad Request and 502 Bad Gateway, so I cannot verify there is no synthesization.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Thank you for the comments. Give me some time to complete the tasks. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 03:12, 23 April 2026 (UTC)
- @OzmoOzmo. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 10:52, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- Yes? ozmoozmo@enwiki$t.c 10:55, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- @OzmoOzmo. I have done some tasks you receive. Are there more? Dedhert.Jr (talk) 10:56, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
Alright, let me reread...- The section is now understandable to me.
Anyway,I will now proceed with reviewing the one open-access source, which no longer returns 400 and 502. ozmoozmo@enwiki$t.c 10:57, 26 April 2026 (UTC)- The open-access source does not actually mention rigid transformations. I used Ctrl+F with various terms: "rigid", which returned no results, "four" and "do" which returned irrelevant results only, "do-nothing" and "do nothing" which returned nothing. 180 returned only the 180th page. ozmoozmo@enwiki$t.c 11:09, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- You can see the group , denoting the symmetry group , in Table 3, line 49. The "mention rigid transformations" is actually explain such a symmetry group is under WP:MTAU; see Cyclic symmetry in three dimensions for the article, or if you want to understand specifically about the symmetry ( is identity or itself or do-nothing, means you rotate 0 and 180 degrees around an axis, and are two perpendicular vertical planes act as mirrors), thereby there are four ways to do. Since Table 1: Finite Groups on Isometries in only list , you can substitute . Dedhert.Jr (talk) 11:19, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- CONVEX POLYHEDRA WITH PARQUET FACES does not actually mention augmented triangular prisms or augmentation. ozmoozmo@enwiki$t.c 02:15, 27 April 2026 (UTC)
- The open-access source does not actually mention rigid transformations. I used Ctrl+F with various terms: "rigid", which returned no results, "four" and "do" which returned irrelevant results only, "do-nothing" and "do nothing" which returned nothing. 180 returned only the 180th page. ozmoozmo@enwiki$t.c 11:09, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- Yes? ozmoozmo@enwiki$t.c 10:55, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- @OzmoOzmo. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 10:52, 26 April 2026 (UTC)
- Replying properties section. I have added some wikilinks regarding surface area and volume alongwith some explanation. Breaking down the step-by-step to obtain a formula. The symmetry group is based on source , usually difficult for me to apply the interpretation to the solid, probably need someone to gloss it in an expert way. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 04:11, 23 April 2026 (UTC)
- @LucasBrown has copyedited it. I appreciate it. Dedhert.Jr (talk) 14:30, 23 April 2026 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: