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Added sub-section, link and excerpt to climate change in Australia
I have just added a link to climate change in Australia by using the excerpt function. User:Moxy, you are saying this is not recommended for FA articles? I didn't know that, is that documented somewhere. I have only started using the excerpt function recently, on advice by User:Sadads. Haven't seen anything about FA articles in that respect. I don't understand why it's currently including the image from the lead of the sub-article though. It shouldn't do that. Is that because it's larger than a normal thumbnail? - we have done a similar structure for other articles and plan to do it for more. So far (for example): South Africa, Senegal, Kenya, Bangladesh. EMsmile (talk) 14:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Who is we?? Wikipedia:WikiProject Countries does not recommended this nor was there a talk. FA article like this one are highly watched over to maintain there level of quality. The vast majority DO NOT have the the sub article on there watch list to make sure all is ok . As for the image ....did not match the size of the rest here and was going into the next section because of placement. Also best not to use |indicator=yes as it gives undue weight to the section because of different style. Would be best to actually write the section so the flow is proper and we dont regurgitate information or links or have one sentence paragraphs. Overall content editors think this is a lazy way to add to an article that is at this level of quality. To be honest not sure we should spam every country article with a climate change section.....perhaps a paragraph in the current climate section. Think you should rethink this approach. --Moxy 🍁 14:34, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- "We" in my comment above is a group of people from WikiProject Climate Change, e.g. User:Phoebe. See here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Climate_change/Style_guide . On the page it also recommends the use of excperts: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Climate_change/Style_guide#Using_excerpts . I have also started a discussion on the WikiProject Countries page, see here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Countries/Templates#In_which_section_is_climate_or_climate_change_meant_to_be_included? (a continuation of the discussion there would be welcomed). I like to use indicator=yes to show which parts of the text are excerpted, but I understand the disadvantage of drawing too much attention to it. Point taken. But this is not about "regurgitating" information, this is about being efficient, so that when updates have to be made they only need to be made in one spot, not two. You said "Overall content editors think this is a lazy way to add to an article that is at this level of quality." I wasn't aware of that, having just found out about the excerpt tool recently. Could you take me to a recent discussion where I can read up on this or is it more your own personal opinion? In my opinion, it's an efficient way, not a lazy way. - As to that image, I have removed it now, as it's in the sub-article and probably doesn't need to be in the main article as well (am happy to put it back in if people prefer). EMsmile (talk) 14:49, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)Moxy, my understanding is there is a current initiative in a climate change task force to try and put climate change information on every country article. A very short discussion was had at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Countries/Templates, but I'm not aware of any other discussion. On this article, I agree that it can not have text transposed from another article. Even if this was not a FA, the transposed text was from a lead, which often doesn't include sources, which obviously is a bad idea to transclude on any article. CMD (talk) 14:53, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Perhaps best we go to that project and explain that many see this as undue and perhaps a form of Wikipedia:Advocacy.--Moxy 🍁 14:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- @Moxy:, of course you are welcome to argue this, but I do not see "many" people saying so. I think making the case why this doesn't make sense would be better than claiming that this is undue (I think it's very 'due', as noted below). -- phoebe / (talk to me) 15:09, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Perhaps best we go to that project and explain that many see this as undue and perhaps a form of Wikipedia:Advocacy.--Moxy 🍁 14:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Who is we?? Wikipedia:WikiProject Countries does not recommended this nor was there a talk. FA article like this one are highly watched over to maintain there level of quality. The vast majority DO NOT have the the sub article on there watch list to make sure all is ok . As for the image ....did not match the size of the rest here and was going into the next section because of placement. Also best not to use |indicator=yes as it gives undue weight to the section because of different style. Would be best to actually write the section so the flow is proper and we dont regurgitate information or links or have one sentence paragraphs. Overall content editors think this is a lazy way to add to an article that is at this level of quality. To be honest not sure we should spam every country article with a climate change section.....perhaps a paragraph in the current climate section. Think you should rethink this approach. --Moxy 🍁 14:34, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Hi all, there's no particular consensus or style guide about this one way or the other. The country articles should absolutely have a mention of climate change and its effect; it's a globally important issue that affects every aspect of a country, from agriculture to migration to weather, so having a section is not amiss. The excerpt tool can be good particularly for smaller articles where it is used to create a section; for an article that is well-maintained, like Australia, I agree integrating the info is probably a better bet. -- phoebe / (talk to me) 14:57, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- I agree that most country articles should have at least a sentence about climate change, and countries like Australia that are feeling those impacts as a large-scale, one or two full paragraphs seem appropriate. My experience with excerpts of ledes is not that positive: quite often it doesn't quite fit in the article, is either too much or too little, and can lead to serious WP:SANDWICHING. Femke Nijsse (talk) 15:01, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- I agree with User:Phoebe and User:Femkemilene. Let's try to unpack this, CMD: So you have a problem with the excerpt tool. OK, that's one thing. Secondly, you don't agree that this article could have a sub-heading on climate change below the heading on geography? Why not? Yes, the discussion at the WikiProjects Countries is still small but I started it a while ago and it's been slow to collect anyone's inputs there. I don't think it's a particularly controversial thing. If country articles have a sub-heading on climate then they can also have one on climate change. If you don't like the excerpt tool then we copy some sentences and references across. It doesn't need to be much as it's a high level article. Just a paragraph and pointing people to the sub-article. Before I worked on this article today, the article didn't even mention climate change once and didn't even link to climate change in Australia. I felt strongly that this ought to be rectified. EMsmile (talk) 15:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- This article, and all country articles, should in most cases avoid single-paragraph subsections because MOS:OVERSECTION is part of core Wikipedia layout guidelines. Climate change is a vital issue and I agree it's remiss that it is not mentioned on this page, but as I said on the country project talk page forcing an identical framework for a single issue onto every country article is not appropriate. CMD (talk) 15:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- I agree with User:Phoebe and User:Femkemilene. Let's try to unpack this, CMD: So you have a problem with the excerpt tool. OK, that's one thing. Secondly, you don't agree that this article could have a sub-heading on climate change below the heading on geography? Why not? Yes, the discussion at the WikiProjects Countries is still small but I started it a while ago and it's been slow to collect anyone's inputs there. I don't think it's a particularly controversial thing. If country articles have a sub-heading on climate then they can also have one on climate change. If you don't like the excerpt tool then we copy some sentences and references across. It doesn't need to be much as it's a high level article. Just a paragraph and pointing people to the sub-article. Before I worked on this article today, the article didn't even mention climate change once and didn't even link to climate change in Australia. I felt strongly that this ought to be rectified. EMsmile (talk) 15:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- I agree that most country articles should have at least a sentence about climate change, and countries like Australia that are feeling those impacts as a large-scale, one or two full paragraphs seem appropriate. My experience with excerpts of ledes is not that positive: quite often it doesn't quite fit in the article, is either too much or too little, and can lead to serious WP:SANDWICHING. Femke Nijsse (talk) 15:01, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Think the project members of climate change have great intentions...we just need to give them some advice on how to move foreword on country articles. -1) best not to use excerpts. - 2) give proper weight as in a sentence or two. - 3) do not make a sub section for the topic, they should be included in climate or Geo section with a link to main article in prose. - 4) we should not mention future goals but instead focus on current data. --Moxy 🍁 15:16, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- why should it not be allowed to have a sub-section? I don't think that putting it under "climate" does it justice. In future, readers will expect to see a dedicated sub-heading on climate change in the table of content, in my opinion. It could be a sub-heading under climate if you like (I would prefer a sub-heading under geography). I'd just like to point out that there are already 3 sentences in the section on "climate" that actually talk about climate change without mentioning the word! At the moment, they appear out of nowhere and have no logical flow - having a sub-heading would explain how the three sentences are linked together or why they are there: "Australia's carbon dioxide emissions per capita are among the highest in the world, lower than those of only a few other industrialised nations. January 2019 was the hottest month ever in Australia with average temperatures exceeding 30 °C (86 °F). The 2019–20 Australian bushfire season was Australia's worst bushfire season on record." EMsmile (talk) 15:21, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- We are talking about a subject that is a sub topic of a sub topic (Geography -> Climate -> Climate change). To put it simply it should not be given more weight then our coverage of the world wars or constitutions.--Moxy 🍁 15:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- That is your interpretation. I don't think that Climate change should be below Climate because it is far more wide reaching than "climate" alone when you look at all the impacts. I would put it at the same level as climate. But can we think of a way to get a broader discussion going, i.e. not just you and me, and not just here in the Australia article? Shall we discuss it further here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Countries/Templates#In_which_section_is_climate_or_climate_change_meant_to_be_included? Although that seems to have low number of people watching, given the lack of responses there. Is there a better place to discuss it somewhere else? - Meanwhile, what about my criticism that we have 3 sentences about climate change in the Australia article that appear out of nowhere and have no logical flow and don't even mention the word "climate change" once. I repeat them again: "Australia's carbon dioxide emissions per capita are among the highest in the world, lower than those of only a few other industrialised nations. January 2019 was the hottest month ever in Australia with average temperatures exceeding 30 °C (86 °F). The 2019–20 Australian bushfire season was Australia's worst bushfire season on record." So what to do about that? And can we at least have one mention of the sub-article Climate change in Australia? I am too scared to make any changes myself now, in case they get reverted again. EMsmile (talk) 16:01, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- There is an existing paragraph written from 2012-2015 that could be replaced and updated. The Bureau of Meteorology's 2020 report says temperature increase is 1C since 1960, and this could replace the first sentence. Using that source, I'd suggest "Average temperatures have increased by more than 1°C since 1960, with this trend expected to continue due to climate change." Then I'd replace the 2014 sentence with the existing 2019 sentence, append the bushfire sentence to that one, and then add the emissions sentence at the end. CMD (talk) 16:23, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- That may be a bit WP:EGGGY, as I'm expecting to be linked to our normal CC article by that. Maybe something like: Climate change has driven temperatures up in Australia by more than 1°C since 1960, with this trend expected to continue in the future.? (also not superhappy with this prose)
- Like EMsmile is saying, climate change has impacts far outside of climate. There are two solutions to not surprise our readers. The first one is having a subsection on climate change, which then includes information about bushfires, coral, temperature, drought and emissions. Or, include temperature, drought & emissions in a paragraph in climate, and address coral and bushfire in their respective sections.
- I prefer the latter, as it will give due weight to multiple environmental factors. The coral sentence could then talk about the combined impact of pollution, climate change and acidification, instead of only highlighting the rising temperatures. Femke Nijsse (talk) 20:22, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- Just need to get the additions right. I remember the water and sanitation additions a few years ago on all the country pages....most were removed leaving no info. Best get a good balance or it will be deleted and we are left with nothing.--Moxy 🍁 00:31, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- If linking just "Climate change" is eggy than the pipe can be expanded to "continue due to climate change", although I agree with the input at Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Linking#MOS:EGG and linking to specific pages that the context makes it not eggy. Asserting climate change is responsible for all of the change is stronger language than that used by the BOM in the source I linked, so I prefer to follow their lead in just highlighting the past change and then noting climate change as the primary driver of the trend. CMD (talk) 03:30, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- There is an existing paragraph written from 2012-2015 that could be replaced and updated. The Bureau of Meteorology's 2020 report says temperature increase is 1C since 1960, and this could replace the first sentence. Using that source, I'd suggest "Average temperatures have increased by more than 1°C since 1960, with this trend expected to continue due to climate change." Then I'd replace the 2014 sentence with the existing 2019 sentence, append the bushfire sentence to that one, and then add the emissions sentence at the end. CMD (talk) 16:23, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- That is your interpretation. I don't think that Climate change should be below Climate because it is far more wide reaching than "climate" alone when you look at all the impacts. I would put it at the same level as climate. But can we think of a way to get a broader discussion going, i.e. not just you and me, and not just here in the Australia article? Shall we discuss it further here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Countries/Templates#In_which_section_is_climate_or_climate_change_meant_to_be_included? Although that seems to have low number of people watching, given the lack of responses there. Is there a better place to discuss it somewhere else? - Meanwhile, what about my criticism that we have 3 sentences about climate change in the Australia article that appear out of nowhere and have no logical flow and don't even mention the word "climate change" once. I repeat them again: "Australia's carbon dioxide emissions per capita are among the highest in the world, lower than those of only a few other industrialised nations. January 2019 was the hottest month ever in Australia with average temperatures exceeding 30 °C (86 °F). The 2019–20 Australian bushfire season was Australia's worst bushfire season on record." So what to do about that? And can we at least have one mention of the sub-article Climate change in Australia? I am too scared to make any changes myself now, in case they get reverted again. EMsmile (talk) 16:01, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- We are talking about a subject that is a sub topic of a sub topic (Geography -> Climate -> Climate change). To put it simply it should not be given more weight then our coverage of the world wars or constitutions.--Moxy 🍁 15:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
- why should it not be allowed to have a sub-section? I don't think that putting it under "climate" does it justice. In future, readers will expect to see a dedicated sub-heading on climate change in the table of content, in my opinion. It could be a sub-heading under climate if you like (I would prefer a sub-heading under geography). I'd just like to point out that there are already 3 sentences in the section on "climate" that actually talk about climate change without mentioning the word! At the moment, they appear out of nowhere and have no logical flow - having a sub-heading would explain how the three sentences are linked together or why they are there: "Australia's carbon dioxide emissions per capita are among the highest in the world, lower than those of only a few other industrialised nations. January 2019 was the hottest month ever in Australia with average temperatures exceeding 30 °C (86 °F). The 2019–20 Australian bushfire season was Australia's worst bushfire season on record." EMsmile (talk) 15:21, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
Agree with Moxy’s 4 points above, particularly pertaining to this article. Cavalryman (talk) 01:57, 29 November 2020 (UTC).
- I second that. 109.93.0.197 (talk) 04:25, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Many may have problems that the climate project has big plans for articles not within their scope and that affect 100,s of country deicated projects and an overview county project.....but we should help facilitate some data just need to make sure its a balance of curent information presented in a fair manner.--Moxy 🍁 05:16, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- I've editing the CC manual of style to not recommend excerpts broadly and detail their disadvantages. There is no 'official plan' to target these articles, but it may be a good idea to make this plan, so that we can give editors good advice on how to determine whether their additions are due. Point 3 is way too general; for a handful of articles it may even be due to dedicate an entire section to CC, f.i. Tuvalu. Let's now go back to discussing the article at hand.
- Proposed paragraph in climate. Coral reef needs inclusion elsewhere.
- In response to a global warming climate, Australia's temperatures have risen by 1°C.(BOM) 2019 was the warmest year on record (http://www.bom.gov.au/climate/current/annual/aus/). Droughts have increased in the southwest and southeast, with the entire continent experiencing more extreme rainfall.(BOM) Dangerous fire weather has become more frequent, and the 2019-2020 was the worst bushfire season on record (BOM + BBC). Australia's carbon dioxide emissions per person are among the highest in the world (new source needed). Femke Nijsse (talk) 08:23, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- In response to Femke Nijsse: yees to some of your points but please not those wikilinks that don't correspond with the words because the way you have proposed it, if someone searches for "climate change" in the article , they still wouldn't find these sentences! Can we please have the word "climate change" appear at least once in the article if someone searches with Ctrl+F? And probably more than once. Like you rightly point out, climate change ought to be mentioned several times in the article about Australia as it's interlinked to other issues as well, like the reduced biodiversity of the coral reefs and coral bleaching, ocean temperatures warming, droughts, bushfires etc. Personally, I would say for a country article like Australia it would NOT be an overkill to have a section that does appear in the table of content and says "climate change" PLUS having it mentioned and linked where needed. But I am already a little bit happier if it appears at least once in the article. As to those sentences and references, couldn't we just reuse 2-3 sentences from the article climate change in Australia rather than trying to come up with new sentences and references? From first glance the article climate change in Australia is not bad. Why it hadn't been linked yet from the Australia article is beyond me. - Apart from this Australia article, I propose a wider, more structured discussion - where? - to achieve consensus if and how the topic of climate change is "allowed" to be mentioned in the country articles. I tried to kick-start such a discussion on the page of WikiProject Countries (see link above) but it has way fewer watchers than this page, so the discussion never really took off. Where is a better place to discuss it (for all country articles), so that we don't have to restart the discussion each time? I think 5 years from now, the discussion will be obsolete and every country article will have at least a sentence if not more about climate change as it will affect every country and we have good references for that. This is not advocacy type work (although I do understand that some people might feel like that). I'd like to make it just the facts and with neutral language, it's just how it is, we are not trying to "advocate" anything. Do you think that perhaps on Village Pump would be a good place to discuss it? I feel that the country articles in Wikipedia are important to get right, as they tend to have high view rates. I totally get that people would say "not too much detail about all the sub-topics, please". So if there is already an article on "Climate change in country XX" it might be as simple as linking to it with a couple of sentences, just like we would link to "Climate in Country XX" or "Geography in Country X". So it wouldn't have to take up much space but it should be in there. EMsmile (talk) 13:13, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- I think the proposal above uses summary style better than the sentences in climate change in Australia. The sources are also outdated there. Feel free to propose something else, I'm absolutely not married to my proposal above.
- I think we might want to engage with a few other country articles that are now featured and don't mention climate change yet. For a country as Bulgaria, I think one sentence is probably okay. Tropical countries, low-lying countries, polar countries will warrant between one paragraph and four. These discussions are difficult to have in the abstract, and when we engage with featured articles, we can compare paragraphs that are written in proper summary style with new paragraphs that we would propose. From the things we learn there, we can give advice on the WikiProject climate change. India would be a good option once we have agreed text here. Parts risk becoming uninhabitable, but CC is not even mentioned. Femke Nijsse (talk) 14:09, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Regarding the suggested paragraph, I don't see where in the linked source much of the information comes from. Australia's average temperatures have risen well beyond 1C, but at the same time the BoM seems hesitant to attribute it all to climate change. Drought has extended far beyond the southern corners, and some of the continent is receiving less rainfall than before. Also, what is the reason for using a 2019 report rather than a 2020 one? CMD (talk) 17:23, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Let list sources so we can see what we have to work with before guess work wording....that said length of proposed addition seems ok.--Moxy 🍁 17:28, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Regarding the suggested paragraph, I don't see where in the linked source much of the information comes from. Australia's average temperatures have risen well beyond 1C, but at the same time the BoM seems hesitant to attribute it all to climate change. Drought has extended far beyond the southern corners, and some of the continent is receiving less rainfall than before. Also, what is the reason for using a 2019 report rather than a 2020 one? CMD (talk) 17:23, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Many may have problems that the climate project has big plans for articles not within their scope and that affect 100,s of country deicated projects and an overview county project.....but we should help facilitate some data just need to make sure its a balance of curent information presented in a fair manner.--Moxy 🍁 05:16, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- I second that. 109.93.0.197 (talk) 04:25, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
(edit conflict) CMD, The report with 2019 in the title was issued January 2020. Many climate reports do this, which is always buggering me. I'm paraphrasing relatively closely to the source, I cannot thikn of another interpretation of (BOM: "Australia’s weather and climate are changing in response to a warming global climate. Australia has warmed on average by 1.44 ± 0.24 °C since national records began in 1910"). The word driving doesn't imply a hundred percent attribution, and is very common for these kind of statements in the climate literature. I forgot since 1960 in my proposed text.
@ Moxy: I'm editing with accessibility software, hence me abbreviating sources instead of properly citing them here and talk. Sorry for inconvenience. Femke Nijsse (talk) 17:45, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- The BoM source I cited above is from the State of the Climate 2020 report (full pdf), which was published earlier this month. Using that, adjusting the above, my proposal is to replace the current second paragraph (which is half a decade out of date) and replace/integrate the three current stray sentences at the end with
"Driven by climate change, average temperatures have risen more than 1°C since 1960. Associated changes in rainfall patterns and climate extremes exacerbate existing issues such as drought and fire weather. 2019 was Australia's warmest recorded year,BoM2020 and the 2019–20 bushfire season was the country's worst on record.Existing source Australia's carbon dioxide emissions per capita are among the highest in the world.Existing or new source
Sounds good. I love proposals that replace rather than add. I'll try to propose a small addition in the text about coral reef next weekend. Femke Nijsse (talk) 18:36, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- The approach i took was to incorporate info into the geo section at the end of relevant paragraphs. Thus being the last points on the topics without overwhelming the article with advocacy sections. Simply stated some basic facts while providing inks and sources to more info (linked Air pollution in Canada- Environmental issues in Canada- Climate change in Canada)....see Canada#Geography, biodiversity, climate, and environment.--Moxy 🍁 08:22, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
- Moxy, I don't quite understand your comment? Was that in relationship to the Canada article or also for the Australia article? EMsmile (talk) 05:42, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- Also, I have made a few small tweaks to the way climate change is mentioned and linked now. In this case here, I think it's better if the text is identical to the wikilink, so if the Wikilink goes to Climate change in Australia then I think the wording should also be "climate change in Australia", not "climate change" as I would expect a wikilink behind "climate change" to go to there. I think it's useful for the reader to immediately appreciate that there is a separate article that specifically deals with "climate change in Australia". EMsmile (talk) 05:42, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- I reworded a bit. Not sure why the climate change link is different to the bushfires link, but I've shifted the pipe allowing the general link to go on the first sentence. Prose takes precedence of wikilink names, and repeating "in Australia" is redundant. Sources don't need to be duplicated for consecutive sentences. CMD (talk) 13:23, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- CMD, you are saying here "reworded" a bit, but in actual fact you have pretty much completely undone my edits without explaining in the edit summary why. I do think my edits had merits and made things clearer. But OK, if every single edit has to be discussed here on the talk page first with everyone, then lets do this. What do others think, which version is better? My proposal was: "Due to the impacts of climate change in Australia, average temperatures have risen more than 1°C since 1960. Associated changes in rainfall patterns and climate extremes exacerbate existing issues such as drought and weather that increases the risks of bushfires. 2019 was Australia's warmest recorded year, and the 2019–20 bushfire season was the country's worst on record. With regards to contributing to climate change globally, Australia's greenhouse gas emissions per capita are among the highest in the world." The alternative (current version after my changes were reverted) is: "Driven by climate change, average temperatures have risen more than 1°C since 1960. Associated changes in rainfall patterns and climate extremes exacerbate existing issues such as drought and bushfires. 2019 was Australia's warmest recorded year, and the 2019–20 bushfire season was the country's worst on record. Australia's greenhouse gas emissions per capita are among the highest in the world." - the wording "driven by climate change" is in my opinion unclear, especially for readers who don't have a university degree or don't have English as a first language. Let's keep the language easy to understand. Putting "climate change in Australia" as a wikilink behind the words "more than 1 deg C since 1960" is confusing in my opinion. That's not what I would expect from a wikilink. "Existing issues" is vague. For people who are unfamiliar with climate change, they may not understand why the greenhouse gas emissions sentence appears there (it's in the section on "climate" after all), which is why I had proposed to introduce it with "With regards to contributing to climate change globally". EMsmile (talk) 14:24, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- The edit summary is short, which is why I posted here as well. As I noted, repeating "in Australia" is redundant prose given the article topic. The adding of "weather that increases the risks of bushfires" makes the sentence a unwieldy and potentially ambiguous as to what the "and...that" refers to. (Here I think the wikilinked "bushfires" is better than the former "fire weather".) I disagree that "driven by" is university level language, and it was specifically chosen to replace "due to" to reflect the sources used, which do not attribute complete causation of temperature rise to climate change. I have no strong opinion where the Climate change in Australia pipelink should go, but this was an attempt to shift it due to the opposition to the previous placement. "Existing issues" is in both versions, so I'm not sure what the proposal is for that. For "With regards to contributing to climate change globally", it implies local contributions are different, and the framing of global contributions which looks at the country as a whole doesn't gel well with per capita information. CMD (talk) 14:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- CMD, you are saying here "reworded" a bit, but in actual fact you have pretty much completely undone my edits without explaining in the edit summary why. I do think my edits had merits and made things clearer. But OK, if every single edit has to be discussed here on the talk page first with everyone, then lets do this. What do others think, which version is better? My proposal was: "Due to the impacts of climate change in Australia, average temperatures have risen more than 1°C since 1960. Associated changes in rainfall patterns and climate extremes exacerbate existing issues such as drought and weather that increases the risks of bushfires. 2019 was Australia's warmest recorded year, and the 2019–20 bushfire season was the country's worst on record. With regards to contributing to climate change globally, Australia's greenhouse gas emissions per capita are among the highest in the world." The alternative (current version after my changes were reverted) is: "Driven by climate change, average temperatures have risen more than 1°C since 1960. Associated changes in rainfall patterns and climate extremes exacerbate existing issues such as drought and bushfires. 2019 was Australia's warmest recorded year, and the 2019–20 bushfire season was the country's worst on record. Australia's greenhouse gas emissions per capita are among the highest in the world." - the wording "driven by climate change" is in my opinion unclear, especially for readers who don't have a university degree or don't have English as a first language. Let's keep the language easy to understand. Putting "climate change in Australia" as a wikilink behind the words "more than 1 deg C since 1960" is confusing in my opinion. That's not what I would expect from a wikilink. "Existing issues" is vague. For people who are unfamiliar with climate change, they may not understand why the greenhouse gas emissions sentence appears there (it's in the section on "climate" after all), which is why I had proposed to introduce it with "With regards to contributing to climate change globally". EMsmile (talk) 14:24, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- I reworded a bit. Not sure why the climate change link is different to the bushfires link, but I've shifted the pipe allowing the general link to go on the first sentence. Prose takes precedence of wikilink names, and repeating "in Australia" is redundant. Sources don't need to be duplicated for consecutive sentences. CMD (talk) 13:23, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- Also, I have made a few small tweaks to the way climate change is mentioned and linked now. In this case here, I think it's better if the text is identical to the wikilink, so if the Wikilink goes to Climate change in Australia then I think the wording should also be "climate change in Australia", not "climate change" as I would expect a wikilink behind "climate change" to go to there. I think it's useful for the reader to immediately appreciate that there is a separate article that specifically deals with "climate change in Australia". EMsmile (talk) 05:42, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
- Moxy, I don't quite understand your comment? Was that in relationship to the Canada article or also for the Australia article? EMsmile (talk) 05:42, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
Australia is mainly non-religious
Trust me, I’m an Aussie. I know the stats. More than 50% are non-religious. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 120.156.55.17 (talk) 20:54, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
- This all depends on how one interprets the Census data. The relevant OPTIONAL question is "What is the person's religion?" Then it has a number of options, and a box to write in one if yours in not listed. There is no attempt to correlate the response with actual church attendance data. Established religions love using the results to prove that Christianity is still strong in Australia, but they don't actually do that. Many people I know tick one of the boxes, even if they never attend church. It's a social convention to say you are a Catholic, or an Anglican, etc, even if you have no real connection to the church. I don't know how the issue can be properly resolved. I simply pay strong attention to the wording of articles, emphasising that all we can know is what boxes people tick, and that that doesn't prove belief. My personal view is that the vast majority of Australians are apatheists. They have very little interest in whether there is or is not a god. HiLo48 (talk) 22:48, 18 December 2020 (UTC)
New national anthem
Can someone write about it? Saidur Mursalin (talk) 06:16, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
- Write what? Only a single word has changed in the lyrics. The Advance Australia Fair article has been updated. Nick-D (talk) 06:33, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
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To add within the right-hand sidebar, under Anthem: Advance Australia Fair, the royal Anthem: God Save the Queen. Along with a sample of the anthem. Australia's royal anthem is played infront of the reigning monarch when in Australia and outlined with the governmental parliamentary publication as seen below.
"Australian National Anthem". Archived from the original on 1 July 2007. "16. Other matters – 16.3 Australian National Anthem". Archived from the original on 23 September 2015. "National Symbols" (PDF). Parliamentary Handbook of the Commonwealth of Australia (PDF) (29th ed.). 2005 [2002]. Archived from the original (PDF) on 11 June 2007. Retrieved 7 June 2007. Brockisrandom (talk) 07:51, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Partly done:. Adding the royal anthem is how it's handled on Canada, Jamaica, The Bahamas, etc., so it makes sense to add it here as well. I think the note we have now is fine though, as I'm pretty sure Australia play the royal anthem in the presence of royal family members too.
- Nevermind, see here. Volteer1 (talk) 07:29, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
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Add below the national anthem in the right sidebar, the Royal Anthem 'God Save the Queen' with corresponding sample of the song. In most commonwealth countries like New Zealand, Canada and Jamaica, they have listed the royal anthem in this manner, and so should Australia. God Save the Queen is a legal royal anthem recognised by the Australian Government and can be played in the presence of the monarch, royal family members, governor general, government, etc. on special occasions. It becomes significant to recognise the royal anthem in the infobox as it represents the symbolic and ceremonial identity of Australia. Brockisrandom (talk) 13:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- Not done, see Talk:Australia/Archive_19#Request_for_Comment_on_the_inclusion_of_"God_Save_the_Queen"_as_the_official_Royal_Anthem_of_Australia. There is a consensus against this change. You would have to run another RFC to overturn that. Thanks. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 15:14, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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I don't know if i'm doing this right but i'd like to recommend an addition. On the right side of the Australia page there is a table that summarises Australia's area, population, government etc. one of the sections is about independence from the UK,I was wondering if it would be possible for someone to add when NSW gained self government (6th of June 1856) and next to it, it would say something like first Australian colony to gain self government and something similar with Western Australia the last colony to gain self government (15th of August 1890). Obviously this is not necessary but the self governance of the colonies did contribute to the federation of the colonies and I believe it should be mentioned in this section. PT22 (talk) 09:20, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
- The infobox section is a very quick summary of how Australia gained its current status, not a history section. Those dates are not even mentioned in the current History section. CMD (talk) 06:48, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
- We do have "Between 1855 and 1890, the six colonies individually gained responsible government, managing most of their own affairs while remaining part of the British Empire." I'm unsure whether more detail on self government is useful there, it might be. Pelagic ( messages ) – (10:05 Sat 24, AEDT) 23:05, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
- On the other hand, does the infobox already have too much detail on "Independence from the United Kingdom"? Should we just state establishment / federation 1901 and leave the rest to the main text? Pelagic ( messages ) – (10:13 Sat 24, AEDT) 23:13, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
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Change : Mount Augustus, claimed to be the world's largest monolith,[129] is located in Western Australia. "To" Uluru is the world's biggest known monolith located in the Northern Territory. "End"
FYI- mount Augustus IS NOT a monolith. [129] reference is wrong 1.128.108.79 (talk) 13:52, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 14:00, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
Australia
Artlicle claims Australia is part of Oceania. It isn't, we are part of Australasia (South of Asia), along with Indonesia, New Guinea and New Zealand.120.156.4.123 (talk) 03:10, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
- Please read me.--Moxy 🍁 03:13, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Australasia Please read that. I don't know what kind of fools they employ at National Geographic but we have always been part of Austalasia (from Latin: 'South of Asia'). Australasia has never been part of Oceania. I see this confusion has spread to the Encyclopedia Britannica, whose editors should know better, but that it seems to now be just a wiki too. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 120.156.4.123 (talk) 00:41, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
- Things can be part of more than one thing at once. ҉ Randwicked ҉ 07:41, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
Moxy: "We will require sources to consider your POV"? It's the way every Australian has been educated since the British arrived. You are obviously not Australian so exit stage left.120.156.4.123 (talk) 22:24, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- If that's the way we've 'all been educated since the British arrived' It should be easy to provide a source. My experience of Australian education is obviously nothing like yours. And please don't tell editors not to edit in good faith because they're not the right nationality. It's not on. ҉ Randwicked ҉ 23:42, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
By some definitions, Australasia is a subset of Oceania, so "largest country in Oceania" is a more significant statement than "largest country in Australasia". However, if your preferred circumscription of Oceania excludes Australia, then that makes no sense, obviously. Pelagic ( messages ) – (09:57 Sat 24, AEDT) 22:57, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
- The IUCN here states
The Oceania region is spatially the largest region in CEM, It includes the continental land mass of Australia and covers a vast area of the Pacific including the larger island land masses of Papua New Guinea and New Zealand as well as the 22 countries and territories of the Pacific Islands covering most of Melanesia, Micronesia and Polynesia. The region extends over 100 million square kilometres of the Pacific Ocean, but has only a land surface area of 8.5 million square km. Of that land surface area three countries Australia (7 million km2), Papua New Guinea (463,000 km2) and New Zealand (268,000 km2) make up almost 93% of the total land area.
- Seems like Australia is part of Oceania after all.
- Oh, and Australasia is a smaller region as per Lexica: Australasia is
the region consisting of Australia, New Zealand, New Guinea, and the neighbouring islands of the Pacific
. - Indeed, Australia is in Australasia which in turn is within Oceania. So Australia is in both. - Nick Thorne talk 01:32, 21 May 2021 (UTC)