Talk:Basil II/GA1

Criteria

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations N

  @20DKB03: The article is missing citations in many places. The missing citations will need to be fixed before the review can continue. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:47, 20 July 2018 (UTC)

@Iazyges: I have now added all the citations that were needed. 20DKB03 (talk) 07:41, 21 July 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• having been associated on the throne since 960. suggest:

  having been associated with'the throne since 960. or having been elevated to co-emperor since 960.

• but not without the help of 12,000 Georgians of Tornikios and David III Kuropalates of Tao. suggest:

  with the help of 12,000 Georgians of Tornikios and David III Kuropalates of Tao.

• which his predecessor, Romanos I, had endeavored to check suggest:

  which his predecessor, Romanos I, had endeavored to check late into his reign.

• Samuel and his son Gabriel were lucky to escape capture. suggest:

  Samuel and his son Gabriel were barely able to escape capture.

• he was said to have captured 15,000 prisoners and blinded 99 of every 100 men suggest:

  he was said to have captured 15,000 prisoners and fully blinded 99 of every 100 men

• Assessment suggest:

  Physical assessment or Physical description

• @20DKB03: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 06:36, 22 July 2018 (UTC)