Talk:Charlie Chaplin/Archive 6

The section has some very questionable conclusions as to Chaplin's "basis" for making the film, so I sandboxed and revised the first paragraph. Article section is here and revised material is in the new sandbox, which includes the first paragraph for easy comparison.

In general, the main problem I saw was that the article states:

Parallels between himself and Adolf Hitler had been widely noted: the pair were born four days apart, both had risen from poverty to world prominence, and the German dictator wore the same toothbrush moustache as the Tramp. It was this physical resemblance that formed the basis of Chaplin's next film . . . "

All the sources mention that kind of trivia, while interesting and notable, was a coincidence only, having nothing to do with Chaplin's actual inspiration, as the text implies. Since some of the sandbox material includes details further in the original section, I suggest a rewrite of the entire section as this was one of his most notable films. --Light show (talk) 00:26, 9 November 2013 (UTC)

"All the sources mention": that's a strong basis for its inclusion here. To think otherwise is editorialising. "trivia": only in your opinion, and information that gives a form of background to one of Chaplin's best known films is hardly to be described as "trivia", despite any editors personal opinion. - SchroCat (talk) 07:09, 9 November 2013 (UTC)

Right, now that the GA review is out of the way I will respond to this, but just a quick response to make sure other editors don't think this is a reasonable objection. When the article writes "formed the basis for Chaplin's next film", that is not referring to the inspiration. The inspiration (his desire to draw attention to fascism and make a joke out of Hitler) is clearly stated in the preceding and succeeding text. The basis of the film, meaning what drives the story and brings it all together, is the physical resemblance between Hitler and the Tramp. This is supported by the source. The other similarities are mentioned because, like you said, these are virtually always mentioned when talking about The Great Dictator. I've read that Chaplin was pretty freaked out by the parallels and felt compelled to impersonate Hitler because of this. Perhaps I'll add this in a footnote at some point. --Loeba (talk) 18:38, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

The sources mention their physical resemblance as merely a useful coincidental fact, but not the "basis" that "drives the story." The word lacks even enough support to call using it a synthesis, so devoting nearly half of the first paragraph of that section to it and other coincidental trivia appears seriously overweight.--Light show (talk) 04:49, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

"A useful coincidental fact"? The whole point of the film is that the Jewish Barber gets mixed up with Hynkel because they look so similar! And Chaplin wouldn't be able to make his political speech at the end if this mix-up didn't happen. It's the basis of the film, as stated. The other parallels are worth mentioning because they're interesting (I will try and find the fact that these parallels also influenced his decision to make this film, is that would make you feel better) and readers will want to know about them. And they literally take up one sentence. Could you stop criticising the article now? --Loeba (talk) 07:49, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

Being able to use his "tramp" character's mustache as a barber, obviously "influenced" the storyline, but the basis, inspiration and purpose of him making the film were entirely different, and should be emphasized over the mustache. All the other trivia about birth dates and poverty really don't belong anywhere in the short section. --Light show (talk) 08:49, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

He won't, he will continue to criticise and snip just like he does everywhere else. WW, why don't you go and do something useful for the project rather than troll around criticising the work of others? --Cassianto^Talk 08:52, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

I have tweaked the wording to "It was this physical resemblance that formed the story for Chaplin's next film", which is all I was trying to communicate with that sentence anyway... His purpose in making the film was to attack fascism and make fun of Hitler, and this was already clearly stated. Now I will not be responding to any further complaints about this, they are unfounded (at least until more people call the similarity facts trivial) and I refuse to drag it out any longer. --Loeba (talk) 17:17, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

I doubt if anyone knows or cares who added particular text during the history of the article. This is a general talk page, not a private discussion, as you seem to be implying. No one expects you personally to be replying any more than anyone assumes you own the article: No one, no matter how skilled, or of how high standing in the community, has the right to act as though he or she is the owner of a particular article. (emphasis in guidelines) --Light show (talk) 18:22, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

Considering you are keen to censor other people's comments and baselessly threaten ANI to others, I would have thought that you would have avoided making personal attacks, such as the unfounded "ownership" allegation. It seems to me that you tend to throw this around a little too freely - largely when people who have worked hard on an article disagree with you. Disagreeing with you does not mean anyone is claiming "ownership", regardless of how many times you trumpet the uncivil allegation. - SchroCat (talk) 09:50, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

Get a grip - try adding something constructive to the article instead of just stopping by a talk page with no concern for rules? --Light show (talk) 18:07, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

Thank you Light show, but I do "have a grip". I think the article is in excellent shape without any adding that I could do for the moment. When it proceeds to peer review or FAC I will go through it in much more detail to nitpick over the smallest points, but presently I don't think the it needs my help. Just by way of clarity, I am not treating this as a "battleground", despite what you may think. My initial comments in this thread were simply to point out that if there is something that "all the sources mention", then it behoves us to consider inclusion in the article, not just reject it out of hand. When the information provides background to one of Chaplin's best-known works, I struggle to see how this can be classified as trivia. Apparently this was sufficient (by way of an edit summary) for you to threaten taking me to ANI. Could you explain on what grounds that would be, please? - SchroCat (talk) 18:19, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

Suggest heading back to dock, the fish aren't biting today.--Light show (talk) 18:59, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

How odd. Perhaps you could either try and stay on topic in future, or stop threatening to take people to ANI when you have absolutely nothing to complain about. - SchroCat (talk) 19:02, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

I agree. Light show's comments seem to be getting further and further from the article's content as this thread goes on, which should really be avoided. Mark Arsten (talk) 02:57, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

I was reading Motion Picture Studio Directory 1918, and it indicated that Chaplin's birthplace was Paris in 1889. The link is here: https://archive.org/stream/motrestu00moti#page/82/mode/2up I don't know if this is accurate or reliable, but wanted to put it out there, since it is period. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 23.16.8.23 (talk) 19:21, 27 November 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment! At the beginning of his career, Chaplin lied to reporters that he was born in/near Paris during his parents' tour, possibly to add 'a romantic aura' to his public image, or perhaps to avoid discussing his painful childhood (he also said that both his parents were dead to avoid discussing his mother's mental illness). Although his birth place has never been 100% confirmed, Chaplin always thought he was born in London, and most evidence seems to support this. Some early biographers even combed through Paris & Fontainebleau birth registers and confirmed that he definitely wasn't born there. His parents also never went on tour together, and actually I doubt either of them ever visited France.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 20:11, 27 November 2013 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

At the current peer review for this article, Indopug suggested that the information from "Commemoration" to "Filmography" be cut and moved to their own article. It would be good if we could try and gain consensus over whether or not this idea is supported. For what it's worth, I don't have a strong opinion either way and would be happy to either keep or split the material --Loeba (talk) 15:26, 23 November 2013 (UTC)

• Keep --Light show (talk) 18:23, 24 November 2013 (UTC)
• Keep At first I thought it sounded like a good idea, but now that I've had more time to think of it, I'm not sure anymore. I don't think those small sections make the article look too 'cluttered' because they are located at the very end, and therefore don't 'mess up' the actual biography / style & themes section. Also, I'm not sure if they would make an extensive enough 'sub-article'. Chaplin did not win that many awards during his career, and there haven't been that many important memorials dedicated to him either.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 20:19, 27 November 2013 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

An editor has now twice added a section about Chaplin's religious views, particularly about his claimed agnosticism. While I have deleted those edits both times as Chaplin's religious views were not a central part of his career and public image and hence do not warrant a whole section, and also because the sources the editor used were completely unreliable, I wonder whether we should add a footnote about this somewhere? I guess a lot of readers are interested in learning about the religious views of the person they are reading about, as that information is often mentioned in the 'early life' sections of biography articles. I don't think there's any place in the 'early life' section of this article to which a footnote like this would fit, given that religion was not a major part of Chaplin's childhood and upbringing, but perhaps one could be added to the section about his death, after the sentence which states that he was buried in an Anglican ceremony according to his own wish? That sentence might confuse readers if they have heard previously that he was atheist/agnostic.

If I recall correctly, Chaplin was probably baptized an Anglican in his childhood like his older brother (although there is no source to verify this), but became an atheist after his mother became a Baptist (?) and dragged him with her to hear their sermons. This atheism was later reflected in, for example, The Pilgrim, and in the fact that he did not let any of his children to be baptized (although Charlie Jr. and Sydney became Catholic after the divorce as the McMurrays were devout Catholics). It was only towards the end of his life that Chaplin became an agnostic – hence the Anglican funeral. None of this is very important of course, but I can see why people might be confused as to whether he was Anglican/atheist/agnostic. What do you think? TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 14:16, 6 January 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

I think putting some brief information in a footnote in the death section is a good idea. I'm sure Chaplin discusses his views a bit in the autobiography... --Loeba (talk) 20:50, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

Although 1899 is the first year explicitly given for performances, the article suggests earlier performances, making it unclear what would be considered "years active". Does anyone have any reliable sources pertaining to this question? Nikkimaria (talk) 02:30, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

The only pre-1899 performance Chaplin gave (as mentioned in the article) was a one-off amateur performance at 5 years old. Surely "years active" only refers to the years of professional work? If necessary, I know that Robinson calls CC's work with the Eight Lancashire Lads his first professional work (he was paid for it) so I can provide a reference if required. Regarding some of the other changes you made last night - removing the various occupations from the infobox and limitting the TOC - I think the previous versions were more useful to readers. For the lead we may as well summarise Chaplin as a "filmmaker", especially since it later goes on to say "Chaplin wrote, directed, produced, edited, starred in, and composed the music for most of his films" - but for the infobox I think we should list all of his different roles to make clear that he did all of these things (which is very rare). As for the contents, having all the subheadings available means that readers can click straight to whatever film/marriage/incident they are interested in. It also provides a quick summary of the key factors in Chaplin's life, just by reading over the contents, which I think it very useful. I'm going to revert back, hope that's okay. --Loeba (talk) 12:52, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Also, this is only a minor thing but it's kind of bothering me that his "death" location is wikilinked in the infobox but not his birth one. I know you did this because "London" is more well know, but the inconsistency doesn't look good IMO. It should be both or neither - in which case, both is definitely preferable. And why don't you like the "Nationality" row? --Loeba (talk) 12:59, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Per the template documentation, nationality should not be included when it is inferred from birthplace (born in UK = British). The documentation also specifies that occupation should be "as given in the lead", which is why that briefer description should be used instead. "London" wasn't linked before (I only unlinked UK and Switzerland), so if you want to link it that's up to you. As to years active: if he began touring in 1899, he had to have joined the professional group at some point prior to the tour, and the current wording suggests this was at age 9 (which is possibly 1898). Nikkimaria (talk) 16:06, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

I will check what exactly Robinson wrote about this later this week, but I think Chaplin both joined and began touring with the Lads in 1899. He only had a six-week training period before joining the tour, and he did not perform with the group before that. I also don't think he had to audition or anything, and therefore the whole process of joining the group was rather fast. I don't see why it would be more likely that he joined the group in 1898 – but as I said, I will check this again and clarify it in the text. As Loeba said, he certainly did not perform professionally before he joined the Lads. I also second what Loeba said about having all the occupations in the infobox. If it is impossible for the infobox list to differ from what's stated in the lead, then we should change the lead. However, I think the lead sentence will look 'cluttered' if we do this. It would be better for the article, I think, if an exception could be made in this case due to Chaplin's exceptional status as a completely independent filmmaker.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 16:49, 30 December 2013 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

Yep, I think with the occupations this is an instance where we should ignore all rules. I checked my books, and Chaplin's first professional performance came on 20 March 1899 at the Empire in Portsmouth (so he was nine). Nikkimaria you were right about the London thing - sorry my mistake! --Loeba (talk) 18:16, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

If the source concurs with a first professional performance of 1899, that's fine. However, I disagree with the IAR suggestion for occupations. Not only does the template documentation advise against it, but the MOS for infoboxes urges concision, simplicity, and summary - "comic actor, filmmaker, composer" meets these criteria, but the longer, more complex list does not. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:47, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

I fear that for the average Joe with little knowledge of filmmaking, filmmaker simply means film director. Therefore, Chaplin would simply be thought of as belonging to the same group as other actor-directors, which is wrong. What both the lead text and the infobox need to convey very clearly is that Chaplin was unique in film history due to his unprecedented independence. It is one of the central facts that readers must understand that he was not simply an actor-director, but also a producer and a studio head, who also edited and wrote his films himself. I understand that infoboxes should be as simple and clear as possible, but I think that by using such a broad term as 'filmmaker' we're actually being less clear as it gives the wrong impression. I understand that you want to adhere to the rules and the reasons why those rules are in place, but in Chaplin's case I still think we should make an exception and ignore all rules, if we want to make it easy for the reader to understand Chaplin's importance and exceptionality in film history. TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 09:51, 31 December 2013 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

Note that the wording Nikki cites from the infobox documentation, regarding nationality, is disputed on its talk page and I've asked her more than once to desist from removing data from that parameter, until the matter is resolved. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 00:32, 1 January 2014 (UTC)

Seeing as the discussion you cite from two months ago resulted in no change to the long-standing wording of the documentation, the matter as far as it is relevant to this conversation is resolved. Nikkimaria (talk) 00:43, 1 January 2014 (UTC)

The discussion was last updated on 25 December. You last posted there on that day. The issue remains unresolved. Furthermore. I'd love to know how readers are supposed to infer nationality from a birthplace that is labelled "unverified". Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 10:23, 1 January 2014 (UTC)

I don't want this to become an edit war, but Nikkimaria could you please not delete the line about nationality from the infobox? As Andy said, Chaplin's birthplace is unverified, but he was definitely British. Hence in this case we need to make an exception in the interests of clarity, otherwise it looks like Chaplin's nationality is also unverified.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 10:13, 12 January 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

IMO there is no such thing as "British". You can only be born in one place, England, Wales, Scotland or Ireland. If the location is not known then "British" would be correct. If he was born in London, "English" would be correct. Cassianto^Talk 17:23, 12 January 2014 (UTC)

The Home Nations are subterritories though, on the same level as US states. The United Kingdom is the ultimate sovereign state and it's citizens are British. Ultimately it's a complex issue but either or is correct, not one over the other. Also basing it solely on birthplace is dubious- While in this case yes Chaplin is actually English, in other instances you have people like Christian Bale who born in Wales but is English.--Allthestrongbowintheworld (talk) 17:36, 12 January 2014 (UTC)

Hmm that's a bit strange, "British" is clearly an official nationality. It's what we're dubbed on our passports, it's how we're grouped at the Olympics...it does get a bit tricky with the four separate countries within the nation, but...there's no right or wrong. I believe on WP we try and defer to what an individual likes to call himself/herself (I know I would prefer to be called "British" over "English", for instance, so it wouldn't be right to say we can't use "British" at all). I have no idea if Chaplin had a preference, but when the whole citizenship question came up in the 1940s he would say "I am a citizen of the world". This suggests to me that he did not like nationalism, and so would probably prefer the more inclusive "British" to the more selective "English". Just my take, but certainly there's nothing wrong with using either. --Loeba (talk) 17:58, 12 January 2014 (UTC)

I think Chaplin used "British" and "English" pretty interchangeably, I don't think there is any controversy about this. As Loeba says, "British" is an official nationality, even if people might identify themselves as English, Scottish or Welsh. In Chaplin's case, there is no evidence that he strongly identified as English as opposed to Scottish etc.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 19:29, 12 January 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

66.87.121.97 posted this comment on 27 September 2013 (view all feedback).

Dr. Timothy J Lyons wrote more books on Charles Chaplin than any other person but gets no credits here.

Any thoughts?

To be simple about it, the page is about Charlie Chaplin, not Dr. Lyons. If there is anything in Dr. Lyons' work that can augment the page, a citation accordingly would not be untoward. --Dennis The Tiger (Rawr and stuff) 01:03, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

While Dr. Lyons was certainly an expert on Chaplin, I am not sure whether he is necessarily seen as one of the central Chaplin scholars anymore. I have not read any of his books or articles myself, but it seems to me that most of his work on the subject dates from the 1970s and early 1980s, so it might also be slightly outdated. I might be completely wrong though; what I do know is that his works seem to be quite difficult to find these days.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 01:22, 2 February 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

About the section Controversies and fading popularity (1939–1952).

I don't think this is a good section. The section title throws together some aspects of his life in that period, but leaves other out. Of course, since it opens with his huge success film, the "fading" is not to the point at all. Then three titles deserved a subsection, how is that "faded"? Also, the "faded" is an outside judgement, which is not applied in other section titles (rightly so for a biography). This "outside" may be critics, or WP:synthesis.

Then the section title says "controversies", which again is allowing judgements in. And a poor one at that. Why give the causers of a controversy the entrance point at all? A lot of real life stories are tied up with his professional work, without actual connection. How is his marriage to Oona a "controversy"? (under the subtitle, really: "Legal troubles and Oona O'Neill", so it must be something). Now wait. It sdais, this marriage itself is a "controversy"? By WP:Gossipia, one of the Gods of Wikipedia, how did this pass GA, unsourced? I hope there exists a Reliable Redtop source.

In this setup, Barry should have made the section title too (maybe even the lead). Obsessive, stalking, accusing fan/friend: there must be some reason to give them more attention in a bio of their target. Also worthy of a section title: Hoovers political attacks on him. Or is that too little judgement, and too much fact? -DePiep (talk) 10:33, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

Let's go through the different elements within the section one by one:

• The Great Dictator: the speech at the end was very controversial, and we have a quote saying it triggered his decline in popularity. This is sourced.
• Legal troubles: Chaplin was painted as amoral and the whole affair made him very unpopular. This is sourced.
• Marriage to Oona: was controversial because of their 36 year age gap. This is sourced.

How do you know? The reference says: "Louvish, p. 135.". No facts, nothing. And again, this "controversy" is put into one pile with other "controversies".

• Monsieur Verdoux: had controversial political elements, a commercial failure due to his fading popularity. This is sourced.
• Communist accusations: really the nail in the coffin - turned almost all of America against him. This is sourced.
• Limelight: faced a large boycott, thus is evidence of his fading popularity. This is sourced.
• Banning from US: the culmination of the above controversies and his fading popularity.

No "gossip" or synthesis at all. The sections needs to be presented this way for chronological purpose and ease of access (by mentioning all of them in section headings, people can jump straight to what they're interested in or be prepared for exactly what is coming in the section). --Loeba (talk) 11:21, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

The Great Dictator: a critic for the New York Times calling it "the most eagerly awaited picture of the year", and it was one of the biggest money-makers of the era. That's not a sign of being unpopular. The ending was unpopular Well, the end of a movie is not the same as Chaplin himself. Together, this does not lead to the conclusion of simple "fading popularity".

Barry you did not mention. The troubles stemmed from his affair with an aspirant actress. No they did not. They stemmed from her behaviour. All the Barry writing here leaves Chaplin as part of the cause.

The subtitle is: "Legal troubles an Oona O'Neill". What is the connection, why the suggestion of any ? And, why are missing in the title: the smear campaigns, all the "controversies", the parenthood/stalking aspects apart from lawfare?

The period says "1904–1952", so after 1952 all was over? The communism issue lasted till 1972 at least, his marriage lasted till 1977 (when Oona was still 56 younger than he was), the Barry trial was over halfway that period.

And note how this ended up in the lede as loose ends (though not on todays main page). So Hollywood lifted his FBI ban on entering the USA?

The section title, and the subtitle mentioned, do not cover their content. -DePiep (talk) 13:55, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

To answer above:

1.) A film can be a huge moneymaker and at the same time controversial; it was not just the NYT's opinion. We are not suggesting that The Great Dictator was the cause of Chaplin's downfall, but it is generally seen as one of the starting points in the development of him becoming more controversial as it was his first openly political film (remember, before it Chaplin had always denied that his films were political, even Modern Times), which also then led to him eventually losing his audience in the US. This is not in any way a controversial statement, it's pretty much agreed on by all Chaplin scholars.

2.) Sure, the 'Legal troubles and Oona O'Neill' could also be named 'Joan Barry and Oona O'Neill', but I don't think it would then reflect the fact that he spent a couple of years fighting legal cases. Remember also that if we try to fit all the different legal cases into the subsection title, it would be excessively long, as there were altogether four different indictments + the paternity claim. There definitely is a connection between the legal cases and O'Neill, as they took place in the same time and part of the reason why the marriage was such a scandal was because it took place hurriedly two weeks after Barry filed the paternity claim. The troubles stemmed from his affair with an aspirant actress I really don't see how this is accusing either party as the fact is that they had an affair, without it there would not have been any legal cases. Barry did not just randomly pick a star to harass. If we change it to something like "The troubles stemmed from Joan Barry, an unstable woman accusing Chaplin of XYZ", we're not explaining that they actually had an affair which was the starting point of all of this, and also we're being overly accusative towards Barry. Remember, this was a very complex case, and it is not at all certain that Chaplin was 100% honest and innocent, and that Barry was just lying about everything. If we tweak the section to being overly accusative towards Barry, we're not being faithful to our sources and also not very neutral. 'Smear campaign' is not a very neutral term, we've already discussed it on this page, neither would be adding something like 'stalking', if by that you mean the times that Barry entered Chaplin's property uninvited.

3.) "And note how this ended up in the lede as loose ends (though not on todays main page). So Hollywood lifted his FBI ban on entering the USA?" Could you please clarify what you mean here?

4.) It is certainly true that after Chaplin moved to Europe, the controversies did continue throughout the 1950s, until the beginning of the 1960s when the political atmosphere changed. We could certainly extent the 'Controversies' section to around that time, but it could be confusing as 1952 was such a watershed year for Chaplin in so many ways: he left the US where he had lived and worked for decades; he exited the American film industry. We certainly do discuss the controversies that happened later, although they are not explicitly mentioned in the headings.

5.) "The section title, and the subtitle mentioned, do not cover their content." Yes they do, as explained above. These were extremely controversial years for Chaplin which changed his public image completely and led to a huge changes in his career and private life. Out of interest, how would you title these sections? Naming sections is always tricky, and sometimes you just have to settle for the best possible when 'perfect' is just not realistic.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 14:36, 2 February 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

EDIT: Did you leave this comment as well? "How do you know? The reference says: "Louvish, p. 135.". No facts, nothing. And again, this "controversy" is put into one pile with other "controversies"." We know because we've read primary and secondary sources which clearly indicate that the marriage was controversial and made huge headlines – note also that Chaplin knew it would be controversial, as he gave the rights to the story to Louella Parsons because he wanted to try and get someone to write a positive article. What extra should the footnote have? It clearly points the reader to a reliable source on Chaplin, Louvish's book, in which he discusses the Chaplin-O'Neill marriage and the scandal it caused. TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 14:44, 2 February 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

I agree with much of what User:DePiep observes, with the section headings alone making the bio seem more like a "Rise and Fall of Charlie Chaplin" arrangement. One way to balance the issue could be to add another sub-section to "Controversies and fading popularity" related directly and unambiguously to the well-sourced "smear capaign."

As it is now, the "smear campaign" is mentioned once, briefly. And it's only implied later, in the "Oona O'Neill" section:

Media coverage of the paternity suit was influenced by the FBI, as information was fed to the prominent gossip columnist Hedda Hopper, and Chaplin was portrayed in an overwhelmingly critical light.

There seems to be much more to the story, which might have enough facts and sources in my sandboxed material to warrant a separate sub-section. --Light show (talk) 19:08, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

Did we not discuss this issue to death last time? You have done a lot less research on this article than I or Loeba, this was made clear in the last discussion we had with you. It is very difficult to take your criticism seriously when you have showed that you cannot really back it up with as much research. Yes, there definitely was 'a smear campaign' against Chaplin, but that's not the whole story and it is not a neutral enough term to be used in a heading. We definitely do very clearly explain it in the article that there was a smear campaign against him and that his troubles were largely due to the Communist witch hunt that took place in the US in the 1940s. What more can we say about it, and I now mean what additional information is necessary in your mind (and I do not mean endless quotes here!)? Chaplin's career definitely can be described in terms of 'rise and fall', this is NOT controversial, it is something scholars from Robinson to Maland to Louvish to Weissmann to Lynn to... ( I could go on and on!) agree on. You would know this had you done your research, which you showed last time that you have not, you rely on one book that's not even a Chaplin bio but a more general monograph on the era, and on Amazon reviews. TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 19:33, 2 February 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

One source and Amazon reviews? If you read the rough sandbox material, you'll discover that there are many sources and no Amazon reviews. --Light show (talk) 06:06, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

@Light show and DePiep, have either of you ever authored an FA? A tremendous amount of work went into this and Loeba and Susie got little thanks given the amount of time and effort they spent on it. You're entitled to your opinion but you do realize that there's little more irritating on wikipedia than to have somebody turn up and tell you the article's shit and and say snarky things like "By WP:Gossipia, one of the Gods of Wikipedia, how did this pass GA, unsourced?" given how much time went into the peer review and FAC. If this hadn't been TFA you'd not have turned up and moaned about it. Have either of you actually read books on Chaplin? I've sure if you did you'd realize that the article paints a fair and accurate picture of that period.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:58, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

More bad faith silliness from LightShow? What a surprise! He's always in a state of shock if someone doesn't cast a celebrity in a glowing light and gloss over everything in a private life! - SchroCat (talk) 22:40, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

Fair light, not "glowing light." Which is quite the opposite of you, who within a few days of starting to edit an article like Peter Sellers, aims to turn out the lights, ie:

I've got a few other books knocking around, including a largely unread copy of the Lewis book (how much bile and hatred in one book can there be?!) so I hope we can get something fairly special out of it. Cheers.

--Light show (talk) 23:05, 2 February 2014 (UTC)

"turn out the lights"? You're making even less sense than normal WW, and I'm really not sure what your long-standing grudge against the improvement to the Sellers article has to do with the point in hand here... Do at least try and keep up. - SchroCat (talk) 08:59, 3 February 2014 (UTC)

As sure as god made little apples, Light show appears as and when a negative remark is made about someone else's hard work. Go do something constructive Wikiwatcher, like actually improve an article rather than criticise the efforts of others. Cassianto^Talk 00:40, 3 February 2014 (UTC)

Under the photo in the upper right corner of the Wikipedia article on Charlie Chaplin, there is a list of his spouses. Beside the name of his first wife, Mildred Harris, it says "divided". Shouldn't that be "divorced"? Or is there really some kind of ex-marital state known as "divided"?

Thanks.

Fixed, thanks for noticing. --Light show (talk) 23:26, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

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27.107.189.1 (talk) 18:26, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

He is an Atheist

According to what source(s)? XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:35, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

There are a number of formatting problems with the book you are trying to add:

• The chapter should not be in italics
• The book name should be in italics, but is missing.
• No author name
• No publisher
• It should not be "pages". It should be "p. 58"
• The whole book, using the template, should be added to the sources and then formatted in the preferred Harvard style with a link.

Also, please be aware of WP:BRD, which you are now in breach of. You should have come here after my revert to discuss the matter. Cassianto^talk 09:41, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

There are two reasons why I think 'birth place' is much better than 'home town' when it comes to the infobox. Firstly, an infobox tends to list the person's birth place – therefore I am concerned that readers would think that we are using 'birth place' and 'hometown' interchangeably, especially if they come to the article for just a quick look (as people often do). Secondly, Chaplin's birthdate is also unverified, so unless we delete all information about his birth from the infobox, we will unfortunately have to have unverified information there. I understand that it would be preferable to have only verified information in the infobox but I just don't think it would work in this case! TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 21:24, 22 August 2014 (UTC)

From what The Magnet said in May 1889, Chaplin was born April 15 of that year. While location is unverified, all sources indicate that he was born April 1889. If using all verified statements, we could perhaps just say "April 1889". It would also help to know what led him to believe his birthday was April 16th. Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:32, 22 August 2014 (UTC)

I don't think Chaplin ever had any reason to believe that his birthdate wasn't 16 April, and I don't recall reading that there was any debate about this during his lifetime. It was only after his death, when thorough research into the circumstances of his birth was conducted by Robinson, that all of this confusion began. I think it was him who first found the The Magnet ad. However, although it is certainly clear that there are many unanswered questions surrounding Chaplin's birth, the majority of scholars stick to 16 April as the 'official though unverified' birthday as Chaplin believed this himself and because there simply are no sources that would definitely prove that he was wrong. Therefore I think it is clearest and safest to list Chaplin's birthdate as 16 April, 1889 (unverified), otherwise it can unfortunately look like original research.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 22:19, 22 August 2014 (UTC)

Understandable, I was simply saying that using simply "April 1889" would definitely be accurate even if less specific given the apparent confusion/possible dispute of dates. Snuggums (talk / edits) 02:46, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Re: "According to film historian Jeffrey Vance, 'although he relied upon associates to arrange varied and complex instrumentation, the musical imperative is his, and not a note in a Chaplin musical score was placed there without his assent.'"

That makes Chaplin a musical director or editor; it does not make him a composer. At best Chaplin was a co-composer, but more likely (and this is based on what people who worked with him have said when they were playing up his work) his contribution in terms of actually composing was tiny. All good film directors work closely with composers. The article is currently deliberately exaggerating the extent to which Chaplin really composed. TheScotch (talk) 11:02, 20 September 2014 (UTC)

I plead ignorance I'm afraid. If you can provide a reliable source I would say crack on and alter it unless someone more musically minded disagrees of course. Cassianto^talk 14:37, 20 September 2014 (UTC)

I agree with you that Chaplin was not the composer of the music in his films, but finding a source that would state this is difficult.TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 18:01, 20 September 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

I'm proposing that the article not take a position either way. The passage that currently reads, "He thereafter composed the scores for all of his films....", for example, could be altered to read, "All of his films thereafter credited him with composing their music....". (Actually, that's a little awkward, but I'm sure I could phrase it better.) I have a book about movie scoring on my shelf that includes an interview with David Raksin in which Raksin talks about Chaplin's role in creating music to the films. I haven't looked at it in many years, but if its as I vaguely remember, I might like to quote it and then withhold comment, let the Wikipedia reader characterize what Chaplin did as he will. TheScotch (talk) 07:14, 27 September 2014 (UTC)

I think part of the issue is defining what a composer does, which according to WP is very broad, besides having changed over time. He was not, IMO, the traditional Hollywood composer like Max Steiner or Dmitri Tiomkin, who worked under directors and producers, since he also did those functions, plus writing the scripts. Unlike those composers, he never studied music formally, so couldn't write it, but then neither could Irving Berlin. If we compare Chaplin to well-schooled golden age Hollywood composers, he might not fit the definition. But by early 20th century standards, he, like Berlin, would.

The suggestion that it read, "All of his films thereafter credited him with composing . . ." probably wouldn't help for someone like Chaplin, since as producer, director and writer, it was he who was crediting himself.

On a side note, after reading the Composing section, I think the material focuses mainly on the mechanics of his composing, but has almost nothing about the sources, inspirations, selectivity, or purpose of the music, which relate to his early music hall experiences. Marcel Marceau said that Chaplin "adapted his style of English Music Hall pantomime to cinematography." In Weissman's Chaplin bio, he wrote that the "worldview Chaplin exported with him to America [was] inherent to those earthy music hall ballads." Since the article already has a lot about his music hall days, some of that could be added. --Light show (talk) 19:02, 27 September 2014 (UTC)

Re: "The suggestion that it read, 'All of his films thereafter credited him with composing . . .' probably wouldn't help for someone like Chaplin, since as producer, director and writer, it was he who was crediting himself."

I don't see how this changes anything. That's no doubt how Chaplin got credited, but the fact remains that he was credited. Sure, if someone had been in control, he may not have been credited. So what? Of course, it could read "In all of his films thereafter he credited himself with composing the score", but I don't think that's necessary, and it sounds slightly non-neutral (that is, it suggests he didn't really compose the score--that's probably true, but we're trying to let the reader decide for himself).

Re: "Unlike those composers, he never studied music formally, so couldn't write it, but then neither could Irving Berlin."

Berlin wasn't really a composer either, and not because he hadn't studied formally. He hadn't studied informally either. He scarcely knew anything about music. He was essentially a lyricist who hired composers and failed to credit them. But that's neither here nor there. We're not discussing Berlin; we're discussing Chaplin. TheScotch (talk) 02:00, 29 September 2014 (UTC)

Can't resist throwing in that, when the Beatles were at their height, they couldn't read music either (McCartney learned how later) but that certainly didn't stop them from writing songs. Don't want to have the talk page indicate that some of us don't grasp the distinction; I feel sure that everyone here does. Jump Forward Immediately (talk) 21:39, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

The article doesn't say much about whether he was popular or liked in Britain, where he was born and held his citizenship. From his autobiography, I got the impression he was not liked that much. Any info on this that's relevant to the article? --Light show (talk) 02:01, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

I'm not entirely sure what exactly gave you the impression that he wasn't popular in Britain. Not only were his films box office hits, but when he visited London in 1921 it was front page news, and he had issues reaching his hotel due to the masses of fans who had come to greet him in the harbour (you can watch the newsreel about that on Youtube). He also seemed to be popular with the royal family. It is true that Chaplin had conflicting feelings about Britain, given his childhood experiences, but I've never heard that he wasn't popular, on the contrary, I'd say his popularity was much more 'stable' here than in the US as he seemed to still be popular in the 1940s and 1950s. TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 19:07, 15 November 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3

My mistake. I was only referring to the period after he got expelled from the U.S. --Light show (talk) 21:22, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

Up here in the West Midlands we're all told that he was born in a gypsy caravan in Black Patch park in Smethwick; see the Wikipedia entry at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_Patch_Park, which says, "There has been no evidenced rebuttal of the competing conjecture that Chaplin may have been born on the Black Patch", and the citations there.

Ok, first of all, you are citing a tabloid as your source. Secondly, you can find many previous discussions about this in the archives. It is true that no birth certificate exists for Chaplin, and it is also true that in 2011, Chaplin's estate made public a letter that was sent to him in the 1970s by someone who claimed that he was born in the Black Patch. But while there is nothing to prove that Chaplin was born in London (although it must be noted that Chaplin himself thought of London as his birthplace and that he definitely grew up there), there is also no proof that he was born in Birmingham. The letter is mentioned in a footnote in the article, but so far as there is nothing to support its claims it should not be given more space in the article. TrueHeartSusie3 (talk) 18:37, 25 November 2014 (UTC)TrueHeartSusie3