Talk:Deepak Chopra/Archive 2

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Reception section

I have created a reception section. Wiki prefers criticism to be distributed throughout the article so feel free to move things if there is a relevant place for them in another section.--KbobTalk 02:50, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Reception - worldwide view missing

The Reception section only shows Western reception, and does NOT represents the world view of the author and his work! --Ekabhishektalk 15:09, 29 January 2010 (UTC).

I put in what I could find including the lawsuit with the London newspaper, if you have additional reliably sourced text, please add it.--KbobTalk 21:09, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
If you have specific suggestions, or better yet, if you can suggest some sources, we are happy to include the worldwide view. However, in the absence of more specific suggestions or direction, I have removed the WW view tag as it could be applied to thousands of articles and sections on Wiki in this same general way.--KbobTalk 13:52, 2 February 2010 (UTC)

Einstein Award

The article claims Chopra has won a so-called "Einstein Award" from Albert Einstein College of Medicine, an institution affiliated with Yeshiva University in New York. Strangely enough, that institute's website contains absolutely no information about any such award. The only source for the statement is reference #8, the fawning Cinequest piece, which is itself an anouncement that they're planning to give Chopra an award of their own. Numerous websites echo this claim verbatim, but there are zero results for this supposed award other than those mentioning Chopra, and interestingly, Chopra's own website doesn't feature it. I removed the sentence, because I consider this information highly dubious. Röstigraben (talk) 14:58, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks per WP:BLP, we need reliable sources.(olive (talk) 15:23, 14 April 2010 (UTC))
Good work, Röstigraben. --BwB (talk) 07:31, 15 May 2010 (UTC)

The 2002 Einstein Humanitarian Award is referenced in the Gallop Organization biography. So I stuck this back in. Also, I contacted the Chopra Center in Carlsbad, and they said they have a letter from Byram Karasu M.D.Silverman Professor and the University Chairman of the Department of Psychiatry and Behavioral Sciences at the Albert Einstein College of Medicine. This may be one of those events that does not have an original source website reference.Vivekachudamani (talk) 02:52, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

I've taken it out again, because there is still no information about whether this award exists at all. As I said, Einstein College's website doesn't have any information about it. Multiple Google searches have yielded nothing about this except the exact same sentence that appears in several of Choprak's biographies. Karasu might be a buddy of Choprak's as well as the editor of the American Journal of Psychotherapy, but he's not authorized to give out awards on behalf of his whole college. Röstigraben (talk) 09:59, 28 September 2010 (UTC)

Earthquake?

How come there is nothing here about the alleged earthquake incident? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.137.30.78 (talk) 11:19, 6 May 2010 (UTC)

I don't think his Twitter comment about the earthquake is notable but the source may be useful for other info. Thanks for providing it.--KbobTalk 15:25, 15 May 2010 (UTC)

The earthquake twitter comment is frivolous. Actually the entire AOL article is contentless. Chopra was not remotely responsible for TM's popularity. Chopra was with the TMM from about 1986-1992. TM became popular in the 70's. A Google search shows Chopra has never been linked to the word "McMeditation", she also puts "multimillionaire-profits" in quotes as if she is referencing something, but there is no source for those quotes. She references his twitter account and a big think video where he talks about generic meditation with no mention of TM, even though she identifies the link as TM. The entire AOL contributor article is a mess of inaccuracies and silliness. It should be taken out altogether. Vivekachudamani (talk) 02:26, 15 July 2010 (UTC) vivek

The issue was covered in a number of sources. If you don't like the AOL source there are plenty of others to choose from.   Will Beback  talk  03:13, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

I looked at all of your sources. They were all on the earthquake twitter comment, not the other opinions expressed in the AOL article. Also, they were all catty, sports radio type comments, not journalism. If a tweet joke about a tremor from a guy who lives in Southern California merits a permanent place in Wikipedia, then I don't understand how these things are weighted. He's written over 50 books, 1000's of articles and blogs and done 100's of interviews. He's never once suggested he is causing earthquakes. An obvious joke is being used to create a caricature that isn't supported by his work or history.Vivekachudamani (talk) 15:49, 15 July 2010 (UTC) I'm removing the earthquake twitter comment because it is trivial.Vivekachudamani (talk) 00:34, 22 July 2010 (UTC) I had to remove the earthquake twitter remark again. Come on people. If you think it such a comment deserves to be included, justify it in terms of his body of work.Vivekachudamani (talk) 21:39, 7 August 2010 (UTC)

Time Magazine "poet-prophet"

In June 1999 Time magazine identified Chopra as one of the top 100 heroes and icons of the century and credited him as "the poet-prophet of alternative medicine".

There are two references provided for this, but both are to other sources making the claim. Is there any source for Time itself? This is the best match I can find for the claimed statement and Chopra is nowhere to be found. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.95.153.4 (talk) 08:06, 14 May 2010 (UTC)

I just searched the Time site and couldn't find anything like this. However I'm not sure if it includes some of the other editions that it used to have, the Asian Time, in particular. It does appear in Chopra's official biographies, which are all over the web. While such biographies are sufficient for simple items like where he went to school, they aren't good enough for self-serving info like awards. I think we should see if we can find a better sources for this.   Will Beback  talk  19:47, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
Neither RS source we have in place now is a biography, and both say in slightly varied wording, "In June 1999 Time magazine identified Chopra as one of the top 100 heroes and icons of the century..." What is the concern with these sources? The quote can go or stay I'm not attached either way , but I may be missing the reasoning for removing it given the sources we have. Or is there a concern with the second half of the quote, "the poet-prophet of alternative medicine" ? I'll remove for now since there seems to be a concern with the sources, and this is a BLP (olive (talk) 20:08, 14 May 2010 (UTC))
All of those biographies and quasi-biographies look like they are simply re-written press releases. Time magazine has a complete archive online and there's no mention of this award. So it's not clear that he actually the award, or that we're describing it correctly. I don't care if we leave it in while we keep looking because it's not negative, but we should find a better source.   Will Beback  talk  20:19, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
I don't think it was an award, was it? ... It sound like it was more of a comment.(olive (talk) 20:26, 14 May 2010 (UTC))
Magazines put out lists of "Top 50 people to watch", "25 most eligible bachelors", "100 influential novelists" and so on. I'm sure that this is one of those lists. The question is why it doesn't appear in the Time archive.   Will Beback  talk  20:37, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
Yes... I've just checked too, and I don't see anything about Chopra at all. Interesting. (olive (talk) 20:46, 14 May 2010 (UTC))
  • FWIW, I see the "poet-propet" quote was used in a Sep 14, 1999 newspaper article about him, but it doesn't give a date for the issue.   Will Beback  talk  20:57, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
  • It appears that they may archive their lists separately, and that archive only goes back to 2007. (If you look towards the bottom of this page, it lists the four archived years.) Here's the associated article from June 14, 1999, minus the actual list. So the mystery may be simply that it's not in their archive. If so the only way to verify it is by going to the library.   Will Beback  talk  21:10, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
  • Oh, wait, this seems to be the bare list. No Chopra.   Will Beback  talk  21:16, 14 May 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the link, and yes, I had seen that list but ...no Chopra.(olive (talk) 21:49, 14 May 2010 (UTC))

Amend the Lead

I revised the lead to better summarize the content in regard to Chopras relationship with the Maharishi. The sentence on Chopra as leader of the TM Movement was not cited nor does it seem to be substantiated by the current content in the career section of the article. If anyone has any comments on this edit we can discuss it here. thanks!--KbobTalk 15:46, 15 May 2010 (UTC)

I think it was pretty much a fact that he once was high up in the TMM. Did he not have a title like "dhanvantri" or something and traveled around the world on behalf of the movement? There must be sources for this. --BwB (talk) 17:45, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
Here's a source I found saying that Maharishi Mahesh Yogi gave Chopra the title "Dhanvantri" and keeper of health for the world in 1989. --BwB (talk) 17:53, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
Your link didn't work for me, but if you have content with a reliable source you can add it to the article. At some point WP:UNDUE could become a consideration if we go too deep into what is a lesser portion (time wise) of his career. My main concern is that the lead be a summary of the content of the article and the phrase that I removed ie he was a leader of the TM movement seemed like OR rather than a summary of the article content. Thanks for you help--KbobTalk 19:34, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
Sometimes Google will only show material in a book if you're logged-in.   Will Beback  talk  22:13, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
I went ahead and added the "Dhanvantari" bit.   Will Beback  talk  22:37, 15 May 2010 (UTC)

WP:EL clean up

I have removed these links form the EL section to try to get it more in line with WP:EL standards. Comments and suggestions welcome. I am parking the link here for now.

Please combine multiple small edits

Today this entry was modified many times by one editor. In my mind, it is bad form to make many very small edits, in one day, to a page, when those edits could easily be combined. This is an issue with many editors that I think needs to be addressed in a discussion board, I know. Jack B108 (talk) 16:36, 7 January 2011 (UTC)

Oh please. What a thing to bitch about. Look, sometimes I make huge edits to an article, but then, after getting the big ____ out of the way with an axe, I need to whittle a way a bit here and there, refining it as I read it. Who are you to criticize someone who is improving the article in their own way, as long as the edits are good? What if it's someone with some kind of attention deficit disorder, and they can't focus on combining the edits all at once? That's not me, but it could easily be why someone else does this.
Besides, I have seen times when it is easier to discern an editor's intent when he does a long sequence of little edits rather than a big change. It's also easier to undo one or two poorly chosen small edits than to deal with one or two small mistakes inside of a big huge edit. You know what, yours might be the single stupidest complaint I have ever seen in all the months I have been editing Wikipedia. 98.82.216.176 (talk) 05:19, 8 April 2011 (UT

Move unsourced content

a Fellow of the American College of Physicians[citation needed] and a member of the American Association of Clinical Endocrinologists.[citation needed](olive (talk) 03:03, 27 March 2012 (UTC))

His views?

I came to this page to try to find a neutral discussion of what Deepak Chopra says / espouses. There's no such information on the page! There's a (long) section on criticism of his views/writings, but nowhere are his views actually laid out, even briefly. This is a serious failure to be an encyclopedia, as well as a failure of neutrality. 18.111.78.168 (talk) 18:37, 7 December 2012 (UTC)

Plenty of Chopra's views are provided

I'm not sure what article this commenter read, but it doesn't sound like the Wikipedia article on Deepak Chopra -- which provides plenty of Chopra's views. The anonymous commenter seems to think a biographical article should mostly contain the views of a subject rather than an account of his or her life consisting of biographical information, the subject's principal accomplishments and failures, his or her views, and how others view/viewed him or her.

Biographical articles on controversial people will always have some who will attack it as biased and unfair. What is clearly unfair and demonstrably untrue is the assertion that there's no neutral discussion of any of Chopra's views even briefly described in this article. Askolnick (talk) 19:56, 7 December 2012 (UTC)

Actually, having just done a major article restructure, I'm inclined to have some sympathy with the original complaint - It's hard to see what Chopra is actually selling. Maybe that's because it's not really defined (one source says he promotes every kind of alternative medicine) or even definable. But it would be useful to have his offering clearly stated somewhere. Alexbrn (talk) 11:01, 9 December 2012 (UTC)
I agree. What he's "selling" is largely, in my opinion, a different way of viewing reality and health, borrowing a bit from quantum physics and from India's Vedic tradition. Thanks for your work on this article. TimidGuy (talk) 12:22, 9 December 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia's voice

Content that provides very specific opinion and that is directly quoted from a source cannot be considered to be in Wikipedia's own voice. That content must be quoted to avoid plagiarizing the source and attributed since it is specifically an opinion taken directly from one source. I removed what would be considered plagiarized content.

While some sources do use the word guru to describe Chopra, this is more of a journalistic phrase rather than a defining characteristic of Chopra himself. I believe the word should be quoted per a source or sources and inline attributed.

I as an editor am contesting these two issues which means they are contentious and should be in-line attributed. I won't argue either of these points further nor edit war over them, but consider them concerns especially in a BLP. (olive (talk) 19:06, 8 December 2012 (UTC))

A single word is not plagiarized content in any sense of the term. Claiming so is simply ridiculuous. The word guru is not a "journalsitic phrase" -- but the bare description used by two high-quality peer-reviewed academic journal articles (backed-up very clearly by the quotations given in the source). In fact, the word "guru" is probably about the best sourced thing in the entire article! Alexbrn (talk) 20:08, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
The other text I think you're referring to (about placebos) was quoted, in the footnote ... I have however added quotation marks around the text in the body too as a "belt and braces" measure. Alexbrn (talk) 21:01, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
I didn't suggest guru had been plagiarized. I suggest it is used in the sources in a distinctly western way and so should be attributed to the sources so that it clearly does not refer to the traditional Guru (Indian).(olive (talk) 21:32, 8 December 2012 (UTC))
Yes sorry - I thought you were referring to the "guru" issue as plagiarism (hence the struck-out text). I see what you mean, but wonder if the fact that the source text is quote in the footnotes gives a clear enough indication that this is a common view among commentators. My concern is that add quotation marks might seem to the reader to be sneer quotes for a single word, just as if they were added around "physician" for example. Is there another way - italicizing the word guru maybe? Alexbrn (talk) 21:43, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
Italicizing would be OK. I've also linked the word.(olive (talk) 22:21, 9 December 2012 (UTC))
Yes, and the Hindu Studies ref lists him as an actual (pukka) Indian guru ... which is intriguing. Alexbrn (talk) 05:35, 10 December 2012 (UTC)

Was Deepak Chopra born in British India or Independent India?

The article on Deepak Chopra begins with the following statement: "Deepak Chopra (pron.: /ˈdiːpɑːk ˈtʃoʊprə/; born October 22, 1947).."

The 'Early life and education' section begins with the following statement: "Chopra was born in New Delhi, British India."

It is an established fact that India received it's independence from Great Britain on August 15th, 1947. How then, could Deepak Chopra be born in British India? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.124.67.250 (talk) 20:51, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

In Academic Journals

Who is Gamel?

This guy. However, the point is that it is not for us Wikipedia editors to try and cherry pick aspects of a person's life/profession and then insert them into the article to try and pass judgement on whether or not the writer is a trusted authority. If their writing has passed a peer-review process and appeared in a respected journal then we defer to the expert judgement embodied by that process, and refrain from trying to nudge the reader into other directions. Alexbrn talk|contribs|COI 12:34, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

What jealous looser wrote the Deepak Chopra article?

Amazingly sad to read. Clearly someone went to great lengths to write what he thought was a hatchet job rather than an objective article that truly informs the reader about Deepak Chopra.

It comes of reading like it was written by yet another whinny, unhappy, atheist desperately seeking validation why he's so unhappy and unpopular while the "foolish world" is making Deepak Chopra rich by reading his "horrible" books.

It's sad that Wikipedia allows this kind of stuff. This is just the type of entry that discredits the site and prevents Wikipedia from being quoted as a reliable source of information. (96.10.232.18 (talk) 02:43, 19 June 2013 (UTC))

Well, 96.10.232.18 [what a nice name U have], you might have noticed that many people often work on one WP article, including this one. Sorry you don't like it, maybe you shouldn't try editing it until you learn to spell 'loser' first. I actually have enormous respect for Mr. Chopra. Jack B108 (talk) 02:04, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

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