Talk:Electromagnetic hypersensitivity/Archive 9
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Daily mail
Consensus is that the use of the daily mail as a source is not appropriate. Thus I have removed this Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 18:59, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
- Agree. See WP:DAILYMAIL. --Guy Macon (talk) 19:21, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
- I agree and this also initially raised suspicion when I noticed it. I then tried to find a better source, but only fell on other similar or worse tabloids (and one school news site). But I also read then noticed that the same was linked from there, so I then left it in. —PaleoNeonate - 23:45, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
- Sciencebasedmedicine.org, like so many other publications (and so many other Wikipedia editors) was fooled by a bogus story that looks exactly like a real story.
- As detailed in the RfC, The Daily Mail often lifts an article from another publication, makes a few changes and adds a few fabrications to make the story more lurid and clickbaity, then publishes it without attribution and a new author, pretending that it is an original work.
- This appears to be another such case. The original story was published in The Mirror at 16:10, 19 November 2015 UTC. The Daily Mail published a slightly modified version at 13:04 EDT, 19 November 2015, which converts to 17:04 UTC, 19 November 2015. So, once again, we have clear case of plagiarism and copyright violation. This happens a lot with The Daily Mail, which is one reason why we no longer allow it as a source other than in certain limited circumstances.
- If you can find another source that is better than The Daily Mail, use that better source. If you can't find another source that is better than The Daily Mail, assume that it is at best a violation of WP:COPYVIO and at worst a complete fabrication. --Guy Macon (talk) 03:17, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
- The Mirror was indeed among the tabloids I found, but I didn't make the link, that's interesting to note. I actually tried to see if they all based their news on a common agency but didn't see an agency attribution. At least three articles were very similar. In any case, it should be noted that all cases mentioned the mother or family's EMS beliefs, but also noted that this was not supported by medical staff. It seems that other than sciencebasedmedicine, we have only contentious tabloids about this story. What should we do then, drop the story, refer to all tabloids, select the mirror, stick to the sciencebasedmedicine source and not go further? Or does this mean that even sciencebasedmedicine claims should be dropped? Should we open an RSN thread about this sciencebasedmedicine article with these details? Thanks, —PaleoNeonate - 03:30, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Guy Macon I don't know what is in your craw about SBM, but they don't appear to be fooled by anything. They make it clear that most publications passed on the wi-fi allergy thing and nobody pointed out the parents' likely neglect in not getting what is apparently depression taken care of - which is what happens way too often when people fall prey to altmed/pseudoscience notions about health. They run around doing useless things and not doing the needful thing. And it is extra tragic with parents and their kids. This Slate piece brings that out clearly. SBM is a fine source for this - this is exactly the kind of thing where SBM is useful - we have no MEDRS (secondary) sources on this b/c it is too fringey for them to address. SBM does, and clearly. It is great secondary source here, that digests the news pieces and provides a sound scientific/medical perspective. Jytdog (talk) 03:52, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
- I agree that the sciencebasedmedicine article did point to the possibility of parental negligence in relation to erroneous self-diagnosis (and is not a fringe view). Apparently the girl had access to a school counsellor, but not to treatment by qualified psychologists or psychiatrists. —PaleoNeonate - 04:36, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
- If you can find another source that is better than The Daily Mail, use that better source. If you can't find another source that is better than The Daily Mail, assume that it is at best a violation of WP:COPYVIO and at worst a complete fabrication. --Guy Macon (talk) 03:17, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
- Perhaps I did not make myself clear. The sciencebasedmedicine article is clearly relevant, from a reliable source, and adds to the article. However, one particular passage in the sciencebasedmedicine article shows that they were fooled about one specific thing. (the area where they were fooled is peripheral to the topic sciencebasedmedicine article article is about, and in no way invalidates anything the sciencebasedmedicine article says).
- The one place where they made an error because they were fooled is in the words "Interestingly, this Daily Mail report of the inquest...". Clearly they thought (as any reasonable person who doesn't know about The Daily Mail's long history of plagiarism would) that there exists a report about the inquest written by a Daily Mail author named Mark Duell. No such report exists. What actually exists is a report written by Mirror author Annabel Howard and plagiarized by The Daily Mail 56 minutes later. The only other plausible explanation is that sciencebasedmedicine purposely cited something that they knew to be plagiarized, which I don't believe for a minute. No, they were clearly fooled.
- Wow, copied right down to the link to the Samaritans. Amazing. Thanks for pointing out WP:DAILYMAIL. --tronvillain (talk) 12:54, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
Resolved: While we want to keep the reliable Science Based Medicine source , which mentions , it was agreed that the latter source is less reliable and should not be included (also per WP:DAILYMAIL). Moreover, it appears to have been plagiarized from the Mirror. —PaleoNeonate - 07:53, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
Better Call Saul
There have been various good-faith attempts to insert material about the character Charles McGill on the AMC series Better Call Saul, most of them unsourced and written by new users. I recently watched the entire series, and indeed that character has such symptoms (he ripped out the wiring oot in his house and has great difficulty going outside, he sewed a space blanket inside his business suit, he passed out and was hospitalized when he was in a place with fluorescent lights, at the hospital he insisted that they unplug his motorized bed and turn off the lights). When in the hospital bed he claimed that the electric fields from it were causing him great pain, but when the doctor turned it back on without telling him he showed no discomfort.
This is a highly watched show and he is a major character. Can we find some sources and manage to include this in the article? --Guy Macon (talk) 16:28, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
- That would almost certainly have to be sourced to the show itself. I don't see any problem with that, however. It's primary, but since it's just going to be one or two sentences, and it's readily verifiable fictional plot information, there's no need for a secondary source. I'd still put an in-line cite to the show, just to CYA. I've never watched it (I was never much of a Breaking Bad fan), so I can't really help with writing it. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 18:37, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
- If you didn't like Breaking Bad you won't like Better Call Saul.
- As for sources, how about these?
- https://www.theguardian.com/science/shortcuts/2015/feb/15/better-call-saul-electromagnetic-hypersensitivity-real-health-risk
- http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/envelope/emmys/la-et-st-michael-mckean-better-call-saul-emmys-chat-20150510-story.html
- https://blogs.chapman.edu/dodge/2017/04/04/upcoming-documentary-explores-electromagnetic-hypersensitivity/
- http://www.tvguide.com/news/mega-buzz-better-call-saul-chuck-illness/
- And of course our own article on Better Call Saul says "...Charles L. "Chuck" McGill, Jr., Jimmy's elder brother and a named partner at HHM who is confined to his home by electromagnetic hypersensitivity (season 1–3)." --Guy Macon (talk) 18:58, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
- --Guy Macon (talk) 18:58, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
- Well, as I said, I'm fine with a primary source. But since you've got secondary sources, I'm certainly not going to look a gift horse in the mouth. :D ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 19:30, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, none of those sources document the nocebo effect you described. I wonder if there is a site that carries summaries of episodes which is an RS... But if we want to point out that Chuck doesn't experience symptoms when he doesn't know he's exposed to EM fields, we would need either a source that says that, or we rely on the episode. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 19:35, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
- I couldn't find a secondary source for that (for those searching, it is in episode 5, (Episode name "Alpine Shepherd Boy"), timestamp 26:00). I found a couple of pseudoscience sites ( https://norad4u.blogspot.com/2015/04/how-come-chuck-mcgill-could-not-scense.html https://www.facebook.com/SafeCellPhones/posts/832658816784102 ) attempting to explain it away, which makes no sense at all. Why not just say "this is a work of fiction"? Also, our Alpine Shepherd Boy article says "Kim takes a call from Hamlin saying that Chuck is in the hospital. There, Jimmy and Kim explain Chuck's condition to a skeptical doctor who proves that Chuck's electromagnetic hypersensitivity may not be genuine by flipping a switch under the hospital bed. She recommends Chuck be committed to a mental institution, but Jimmy initially decides to take him home", but that's not a reliable source either. --Guy Macon (talk) 03:07, 27 July 2017 (UTC)
- No, our article isn't a reliable source, but I'm still minded that we're discussing events in a fictional universe. There is, quite literally, no more definitive source for that than a primary source. A primary source can't possibly be wrong, or give unwarranted weight to certain aspects, or put a spin on it or be biased in any way, even in theory. I think copying the text from our article (with, perhaps a linked mention of the episode name) and altering it to stand alone would be fine. I'd still cite the show, though, because this isn't the plot section of an article about it. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 04:40, 27 July 2017 (UTC)
- I couldn't find a secondary source for that (for those searching, it is in episode 5, (Episode name "Alpine Shepherd Boy"), timestamp 26:00). I found a couple of pseudoscience sites ( https://norad4u.blogspot.com/2015/04/how-come-chuck-mcgill-could-not-scense.html https://www.facebook.com/SafeCellPhones/posts/832658816784102 ) attempting to explain it away, which makes no sense at all. Why not just say "this is a work of fiction"? Also, our Alpine Shepherd Boy article says "Kim takes a call from Hamlin saying that Chuck is in the hospital. There, Jimmy and Kim explain Chuck's condition to a skeptical doctor who proves that Chuck's electromagnetic hypersensitivity may not be genuine by flipping a switch under the hospital bed. She recommends Chuck be committed to a mental institution, but Jimmy initially decides to take him home", but that's not a reliable source either. --Guy Macon (talk) 03:07, 27 July 2017 (UTC)
Sources
@Atkinsok: concerning your post here, please note that although expertise (WP:EXPERT) can be useful to Wikipedia, articles must simply summarize reliable sources about the topic. We should avoid primary sources, synthesis and original research (further reading: WP:RS, WP:OR). This talk page is where article improvements should be discussed, but it is also not a WP:FORUM to discuss the topic itself. I recommend reading WP:FIXBIAS which may help to address perceived bias. Thanks, —PaleoNeonate – 21:56, 18 July 2018 (UTC)
Modification to intro paragraph
The intro paragraph currently asserts that EHS has "no scientific basis" This seems too prejudicial, so a change to "controversial in the scientific community" seems warranted. Even among the listed articles there's a fair bit of disagreement, but quite a few studies supporting seem to have been deleted recently. I intended to add this medical study earlier: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/26372109 but I believe I may have done it incorrectly, as someone removed it. I personally don't think EHS is more than placebo, but it seems too dogmatic to deny that there is at least some support for it in the scientific community. It seems as though this page has been rather heavily edited as of late to promote the idea that EHS is entirely fraudulent. Perhaps this is correct, but it seems better to let sources speak to that than editors. Jamesbilten (talk) 02:43, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
- See WP:FRINGE and WP:UNDUE. There can be a temptation to try to provide "balance" to an article by presenting both sides, but often that does more harm than good. Bradv 03:24, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
- Firstly the method section of this paper:
"We have surveyed the literature on different aspects of EHS and potential adverse health effects of RF-EMF."
basically means that they read some existing literature and drew some conclusions - while this:"This is exemplified by case reports from two students and one teacher who developed symptoms of EHS in schools using Wi-Fi."
Means they did no research beyond noting two or three people in their vicinity. Besides this the purpose of the publication seems to be to lobby for more research into effects of exposure to various types of emissions in schools. At a push the quoted source might support a piece of text which acknowledges the existence of continued lobbying for more research into the effects, however it's conclusion does nothing to support a change to the intro paragraph of Wikipedia's article on the subject, nor does it contribute any scientific weight to the claims of those who allegedly suffer from EHS. It should be noted that people catalogue all sorts of things on pubmed. It's being there isn't a seal of quality, nor does it infer strong peer review. Edaham (talk) 05:24, 30 August 2018 (UTC) - Adding: that placebo has any effect at all is also questionable. Perhaps you mean anxiety? It's only in properly controlled research that placebo has relevance. Thanks, —PaleoNeonate – 09:28, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
- I promise you this: somewhere out there is a geologist who is a member of a Flat Earth society and a true believer in a flat earth.
- That one or two people with the credentials to get something published (to be clear: only two of the three authors have any credentials, and those two are practicing physicians, not researchers) that makes wild claims unsupported by the mainstream scientific consensus or empirical evidence is really not all that surprising.
- The purpose of this paper is rhetorical: it is explicitly designed to convince people outside of the scientific establishment to take action. It was not designed to (and would not be adept at) convince scientists to focus more research on this area or change their minds. It does not present any novel evidence. It does not even describe it's own methodology in choosing existing literature to review, so we have absolutely no idea what criteria they used to select sources.
- In short, this paper is a token paper. It exists only to survive peer-review while making claims that can be quoted by lobbyists and activists. It was not written to contribute to the field of medicine.
- Note: you can read the full text of the paper here. I don't know if you need a researchgate account or not, but if so and anyone is lacking one, I can do some verification and pull quotes for you. ᛗᛁᛟᛚᚾᛁᚱPants Tell me all about it. 12:50, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
- The article hasn't been edited to "rather heavily edited as of late to promote the idea that EHS is entirely fraudulent." I don't believe there's anything in the entire article that suggests fraud. Clearly, people have symptoms and attribute them to electromagnetic fields, but the credible evidence is that EMF isn't doing anything - that's not fraud, that's just being incorrect. --tronvillain (talk) 13:07, 30 August 2018 (UTC)