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Neutrality

If this article continues to get worse on the neutrality front i may have to add a second POV template just for the sake of it because this is now becoming a joke. We have these new tables at the top of the article reproducing data in a table already on the article, with the deaths on one table almost completely empty (if we dont know the estimates of how many died in the 13th century how do we know there was only one famine?). Now i see someone (i wonder who) has chosen to "hide" the pre British Rule and post British rule, but kept the British Era displayed. Presentationally the show/hide feature for tables there (if they are needed right at the top of the article) makes sense, but you do not get more blatant POV crap than applying it to two of the tables and leaving the other one. Also we have the scenario that sees "Theories on famine" basically focusing on one guys POV today about what causes famine above the details of the actual famine. If "Theories" belong anywhere on this article they belong at the bottom.

This article is a disgrace thanks to changes that have taken place over the past few weeks. I continue to oppose the removal of POV tag. Nothing has been solved, infact things have got worse. BritishWatcher (talk) 12:29, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

Stay in the top three sections of this pyramid.
  • All of the tables are now expanded - this should address POV concern about the show/hide feature.
  • The problem with the lack of data or older famines has been discussed in Famine tables section of this talk page. If you have alternative solutions on how we can present this data, please put them forward.
  • I moved the theories section to the top because it actually addresses the POV problem by providing a definition (forthcoming) of famines and presenting two relevant theories applied to this geography. Given that Sen's theory came in 1981, an understanding of the theories helps the reader understand and judge for himself or herself why famine relief was provided in the manner it was for historical famines before that date. Having the definition and theories at the top is also good for the flow of the article.
  • I've provided Graham's hierarchy of disagreements on the right. Sticking to the top will help all.
  • I will move these concerns to the POV section and mark the table compressibility concern as solved.

Zuggernaut (talk) 15:55, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

Ill let you know when i consider the neutrality issues dealt with. That is certainly not the case yet. BritishWatcher (talk) 16:41, 26 October 2010 (UTC)
I think you need to be a bit more specific BW. A lot of changes have been made Would you provide a list of concerns please - or confirmation that the statement above is the limit of your concerns. --Snowded TALK 01:21, 27 October 2010 (UTC)
BritishWatcher, I'm tracking the POV issue in the appropriate section (General POV RfC), please take a look there and provide clarification on the two pending items. Zuggernaut (talk) 22:12, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

Challenged content

I've challenged the following content:

  1. Lord Curzon tried to alleviate the famine, he spent ₹ 68,000,000 (about £10,000,000) to try and reduce the effects of the famine[35][dubious – discuss] and, at its peak, 4.5 million people were on famine relief.}}
  2. At about the same time the British engaged themselves in a series of canal building and irrigation improvements.[citation needed]
  3. In 1907 and in 1874[citation needed] the response from the British was better: in both cases rice was imported abroad and famine was averted.
  4. During the 1022–1033, great famines made all the provinces in India depopulated.[citation needed]

I could not verify these claim in the cited sources or there was no citation (fact tag has been added). Perhaps I did not look thoroughly, can anyone else help verify? Zuggernaut (talk) 02:26, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

Causes/Theories

New infobox template for famines

This is getting nonsensical

Copyediting

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Famine in India/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: SBC-YPR (talk) 17:05, 9 December 2010 (UTC)

Preliminary comments

While I go through the article and assess it against the good article criteria, here are some preliminary issues that need to be addressed:

  • The references section should be split into references (sources which are used in the article) and further reading (those which are not used in the article, but are recommended for a more detailed understanding of the topic). The two serve different purposes. Also, some of the references are repeated (e.g. Bose 1918, Davis 2001, Koomar 2009 etc.) and the duplication needs to be removed.
  • Please clarify the scope of use of the term India since this is a historical article. The first sentence seems to suggest that it would generally cover South Asia, but this is not clearly brought out.

I will continue assessing the article in the meantime. Regards, SBC-YPR (talk) 17:10, 10 December 2010 (UTC)

Updates

  • I've started splitting references in to "References" and "Further reading" sections and am about half way through. Should be able to complete the task in a 2-3 days. Zuggernaut (talk) 06:57, 17 December 2010 (UTC)  The two sections are now separate Zuggernaut (talk) 05:03, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
  • Will fix the scope ambiguity in the next 2-3 days. Zuggernaut (talk) 06:57, 17 December 2010 (UTC)  Scope is now defined in the lead Zuggernaut (talk) 05:03, 30 December 2010 (UTC)

Final review

There is an ongoing content dispute in the article over the alleged use of certain sources to represent facts in a particular manner. Consequently, it fails criteria 5 (and possibly 4) of the good article criteria and I have to, regretfully, declare this nomination a failure. I have deferred this review in the hope of some consensus being arrived at through the talk page discussions, but that clearly doesn't seem to be happening. The article is otherwise well-written and should not have much difficulty in meeting the other criteria. I suggest that the existing dispute be resolved first, involving community processes if need be, before re-nominating the article at GAN. If you disagree or have any objections regarding this assessment, feel free to request a reassessment. Regards, SBC-YPR (talk) 09:34, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your time reviewing this. I feel failing the article for not meeting criteria 5 (Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute) is unfair because the article history clearly shows there aren't any edit wars whatsoever. Content disputes have been discussed per policies on the talk page in a mature fashion and have not impacted the stability of the article. The article is as stable as numerous other articles that have passed FA and GA criterion.
You can however fail it under criteria 4 since Snowded (talk · contribs) and Jamesinderbyshire (talk · contribs) have expressed concerns about this in the past. If you can point the specific diffs under which you feel the article fails criterion 4, that will help us fix those areas and re-nominate. Also, what community processes are you referring to? Zuggernaut (talk) 13:52, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
The article remains problematic with questions of balance being raised frequently over the last few months. Its not stable, and I suspect the reason we have not seen a repeat of edit warring or mass disputed edits is the desire to achieve GA status. Best to leave it a few months before looking at it again. --Snowded TALK 14:31, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Apologies for this delayed response. While edit-warring per se might not be technically present, there have been several series of back-and-forth reverts (diffs such as this and this) which in my opinion, result in the article failing the criteria of stability. Concerns regarding POV-related issues have already been raised in some detail on the talk page (but not satisfactorily addressed) and it is unnecessary to repeat them here. The community processes I was referring to are those mentioned here — editors could resort to them in case the present deadlock at obtaining consensus on the talkpage continues unresolved. Regards, SBC-YPR (talk) 14:48, 20 January 2011 (UTC)

December 2010 copy edits

Deletion of Maharashtra famine (1973) success story

Bihar famine of 1966-7

Disruptive editing by User:Jamesinderbyshire

Churchill quote

Recent deletions by Snowded

Famine in India was nominated for good article status. It failed to achieve GA status for failing criterion 5 of good article criteria (article stability). A discussion regarding the issue can be found on the good article review page of the article. I am renominating because the article history shows it is stable. Zuggernaut (talk) 13:52, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

A very basic starting point for GA and then FA articles is that editors work collaboratively and attempt to build consensus for changes. As at least one editor here persistently does not do that but constantly re-introduces contested material and operates with an un-consensual spirit, I suggest that any GA approach at this stage would be fraught with difficulty. Simply put, the ball is in your court Zuggernaut - pre-discuss changes you intend to make - obtain consensus and them make them. Otherwise, we will just go round and round in circles. Jamesinderbyshire (talk) 14:45, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
I agree with James in that a GA/FA would materialise only when editors work consensually, however quality shouldn't be sacrificed at the altar of GA/FA, Z has done fantastic work on the need to incorporate the sources which he seeks to. The ball is in the community's court that they accept them. Just as Hitler gassed the Jews, Churchill starved the Bengalis, that is what Z's source says, that too at a similar time, the source is as sound as any as Z has painstakingly demonstrated.Yogesh Khandke (talk) 14:00, 6 February 2011 (UTC)

GA Reassessment

This discussion is transcluded from Talk:Famine in India/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.

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