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National Unity Government formed

NYTimes reports that a national unity government was formed: https://www.nytimes.com/2023/10/11/world/middleeast/israel-hamas-gaza-unity-government.html?smid=url-share CherrySoda (talk) 04:44, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see that a paragraph was added about that lower in the page already. But I think that instead of "and some opposition parties have called for the formation of a national unity government" write that the national unity government has been formed. CherrySoda (talk) 04:47, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Agree that the lead should be updated. It's already noted in the body. Riposte97 (talk) 00:07, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Disinformation

"They rape girls; they parade women’s bodies; they deliberately target events where many of the injured and dead will be female... Yet every atrocity has its apologists, who claim the terrorists are really freedom fighters... Witnessing this species of rape apology over the last few days has made me sick to my stomach." Joan Smith, elected chair of Labour 'Humanists'

But this shamefully one-sided opinion should make any fair-minded person sick to their stomach. For unless there is good supporting evidence, should not the comment of this IDF apologist be moved to the Disinformation section?  Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.69.169.34 (talk) 08:22, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

It seems this IDF apologist is not a person but the Israel Defense Forces themselves, who "told" a journalist that they "have no evidence" of rape 2A02:14F:178:32D2:0:0:B48B:5BF2 (talk) 08:48, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Should probably be removed, not because it's "disinformation" but because it simply doesn't pass the notability bar. Joan Smith's main claim of relevance seems to be "being an unelected but active member of the UK Labour Party"; the only collection of topics where she'd be notable is if she's discussing UK Labour Party grassroots politics. Commentary on the Israel-Hamas conflict by Brits would probably only be notable if that person is on par with a cabinet member or highly-published professor, and she's nowhere near that level. Ceconhistorian (talk) 13:33, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Agree with @Ceconhistorian. Riposte97 (talk) 00:13, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Redundant references

There is a continuous effort of adding unnecessary and sometimes completely unacceptable references into the article. What benefit does adding a reference of Algerian statement to the lede, when there is already a reference mentioning most Arab countries? What benefit does adding a twitter link as reference? What benefit when the same piece of information is referenced in five or more references stating the same information? What benefit do we have from adding Arabic and Hebrew references when we have overwhelming English coverage? Please refrain from adding such sources and remove them as soon as they appear. Makeandtoss (talk) 11:07, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

I would hazard a guess a lot of this is done by mistake when editors don't look through the sources or named citation list. entropyandvodka | talk 01:59, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Captured?

There weren't any 'captures', the civilans have been kidnapped. Since when do we use euphemism in Wikipedia? דוב (talk) 14:00, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

tens of israeli soldiers and high ranked officers were captured as war prisoners, it is not just civilians Stephan rostie (talk) 14:19, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Okay, so you support reffering civilan hostages as kidnapping and soldiers as captives? Currently the estimation is that vast majority of the "captives" are civilians. דוב (talk) 15:03, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Clearly, the soldiers are not kidnapped, but indeed are prisoners of war. Talalnablus (talk) 04:15, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
Civilans are not "prisoners of war", they are hostages who have been kidnapped. That's the proper terminology. dov (talk) 19:24, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

The "Effect on global opinion" section

2023 Israel–Hamas war#Effect on global opinion

The LGBTQ+'s relevance has already been questioned and all agree mentions of LGBT right should be removed.

And there's also that (prior to the war) "41% of women in Gaza had experienced domestic violence".

How are these relevant to the war? FunLater (talk) 17:32, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Because the war has led to intense divisions within Western left-wing political parties. KlayCax (talk) 18:09, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Unless we propose to delve into the treatment of LGBT+ Palestinians by Israeli authorities (which, much like the edits identified above, are completely besides the point of this article), let's get rid of this nonsense. A tour-de-force of pinkwashing and coatracking. WillowCity (talk) 18:54, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
I have removed the quote in response to above section. No one suggested that it should be retained. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 00:32, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Status

In the status part of the infobox there is the following: "US holds of $6 billion ransom to Iranians". Iranians should be changed to Iranian regime. Iranians mean people of Iran, and most of Iranian people are pro-Israel. Aminabzz (talk) 20:43, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Not sure why that reaction by the U.S. government in particular is featured prominently and therefore more important than the other actions taken by the U.S. government or any other uninvolved party for that matter. The whole sentence should be removed as it fails MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE and isn't well written. Yue🌙 20:48, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
I agree Parham wiki (talk) 20:55, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Red Cross in Contact with Hamas and Israel over Hostages

I mentioned something like this somewhere else here which is probably why someone linked the Red Cross articles to my comment, but, the Red Cross is in contact with Hamas and Israel over the hostages. Here's the article: https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20231012-red-cross-says-in-contact-with-hamas-israel-over-hostages.

I wouldn't say something to this effect in the actual article, but let's hope that everyone stays safe and that all goes well. Daydreamdays2 (talk) 20:47, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Remove violation of SYNTH in Timeline, 10 October

Source for misinformation section

Egypt's Refusal to Take in Gaza Refugees

disinformation $6bn fund

Non English Sources in the English Wikipedia

Israel used white phosphorus in attacks in Gaza and Lebanon, says HRW

Unarchived: Proposed article split for the initial attack?

Trump's remarks praising Hezbollah condemned by WH & Israel

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 October 2023

Misleading histograms of Israelis/Palestinians killed before the war

Nir Oz massacre

Iranian and American support

"Opinion in Western world"

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 October 2023 (2)

Water Crisis in Gaza

Current event tag

Failed verification

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 October 2023 (3)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 October 2023 (4)

Concerning: balanced reporting

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 October 2023 (5)

Palestinian combatants

Total number of Israeli troops

Hamas asking gazans to ignore israel's warning and not leave gaza

Renaming this to 2023 Israel-Gaza war

The title is unsatisfactory

Double has in article

Lede

"Opinion in Western world" subsection is unsalvageable

Visits to Israel

‏‏Category:Damage in Gaza Strip during the October 2023 Gaza–Israel conflict‏‏

X or Twitter?

Remove settlements near Gaza fully retaken by 9th

Add IDF statement to Reaction Section

Infobox map color and legend

from the Israeli Prime Ministers Office

RfC on including the attack in the list of major terrorist incidents

Jewish schools in Amsterdam closed over Hamas calls for violence

An Israeli embassy employee was attacked in China

Lebanese casualties

European Union's envoy's involvement in the paragliding instructions to gazans

Is this notable enough for the "reactions" section?

IDF confirms Islamic State flag found on terrorist killed during attack on kibbutz

10/7 truthers?

No mention of Palestinian citizens who were killed while fleeing to Southern Gaza, as per Israel's "warning"

I'm not allowed to edit but can someone do this?

"The Israel Defense Forces have "told" a journalist that they "have no evidence" of rape"

Article length and timeline format

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