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Archiving to /dev/null ?!

I recently added the auto-archiving to Talk:Human. However, this recent archive seems to be a problem:

Obviously, we want the archive somewhere other than /dev/null. Looking through the actual archive pages, the latest seem not to contain recent threads. Actually, looking a bit earlier:

This seems to be same problem. How do we fix this? If we can automatically move the erased material to actual archive pages, so much the better. But if manual action to get things going right in the future is needed, let's do that. LotLE×talk 07:26, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Gratuitous Religion

There are 25 references to religion and 13 to spirituality This article has been vandalised by some zealot. It needs a good cleaning up! 88.111.43.90 (talk) 17:18, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

If we talk about a creature who is plagued by a disease that comes to define that creature, than that disease should be mentioned. For the creature of man, religion is that disease. It has, is, and will be a large force in humanities development. And as a consequence cannot be over looked or swept away. It certainly should not be approved (if this is what the article does) by it has to be acknowledged.

-G —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.246.112.186 (talk) 15:35, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

How dare you call religion a disease. This article is obviously biased towards a THEORY. Furthermore, religion is also called a myth in this article.

Looks like the zealot really does exist. Ok, I have two points I'd like to make to you. One, that in an objective article, not referencing religion in every paragraph is not being biased towards evolution, it is called being empirical, which is exactly what wikipedia calls for. Two, until you can explain the difference between religion and myth, it will be considered as such in an empirical setting. If you want something changed, make a reasonable argument for it; don't just vandalize the page to fit your beliefs. Furthermore, add your signature to your posts instead of remaining anonymous. It's part of the talk page guidelines. Just type four tildes. JSpoons (talk) 23:10, 16 December 2008 (UTC)

I was going to have a normal debate with you, but since you insist on calling me a "zealot". No. (By the way, I wasn't the one editing the article, so please, get a clue.)

Culture

Under the culture subsection there is a table listing human society statistics. Under the column for language the seventh ranked language is Arabic/Urdu. The problem being that the two languages are nothing alike and certainly don't have the same number of speaker thus neither can't share the same spot on the list. I'm not familiar with the actually numbers so I can't really edit it myself. There needs to be a check on the actual numbers and a citation put in. --Zafina (talk) 23:33, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Deletion of sentence from end of Culture subtopic

I have deleted the following sentence which appeared right at the end of the subtopic Culture, because the language is very convoluted and I have no idea what the writer was trying to say. "The mainstream anthropological view of culture implies that most experience a strong resistance when reminded that there is an animal as well as a spiritual aspect to human nature.[1]" --AlotToLearn (talk) 06:47, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

I agree with the sentiment and think that something along these lines should be added, but in a more encyclopedic manner and with references. Martin Hogbin (talk) 09:26, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
For the record, there was a reference but the link in question doesn't seem to provide the text of the abstract it mentions. So for general users, it's a worthless reference. Rivertorch (talk) 19:25, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Cut from Philosophy

I've cut this chunk of text from the Philosophy section, because it's (a) disproportionate to have a whole paragraph on just one of several branches of philosophy (particularly where there isn't one on each of the others!), (b) poor. Metaphysics is not particularly about religion, and what's this stuff about cosmology?!

Metaphysics is the branch of philosophy concerned with the study of first principles, being and existence (ontology). In between the doctrines of religion and science, stands the philosophical perspective of metaphysical cosmology. This ancient field of study seeks to draw logical conclusions about the nature of the universe, humanity, god, and/or their connections based on the extension of some set of presumed facts borrowed from religion and/or observation.

Ben Finn (talk) 23:29, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

World population

6,742,108,340? seriously? Where is that from (and when)? 341, 342, 343, 344, 343... Harbinger of Truth (talk) 02:38, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

I'd guess it's from the US Census Bureau, and it's a bit outdated, as they're listing the population as 6,748,913,283, as of 05:00 GMT. Unless someone is going to update it constantly (every day at least), it should probably just say 6.7 billion, then it can be updated after another 52 million. Cadwaladr (talk) 05:06, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

It would be nice to have the "increase rate" of the world population, though i haven't been able to find it anywhere. HuGo_87 (talk) 12:44, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

Languages spoken

The infobox summary of humans includes a ranking and numbers of speakers of a few of the most spoken languages. However, those numbers are not cited, and are fairly starkly in contrast with the numbers given in the respective language articles. I know that estimates of speakers vary widely, but we need some indication that there is something more than a guess to those various numbers. If The Reliable Source Times publishes a particular estimate, I'm more than happy to use it even if other sources differ... but let's get some source here! LotLE×talk 19:07, 23 December 2008 (UTC)


part of this article was written by humans —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.87.127.176 (talk) 22:18, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

Conservation status

Shouldn't it be under "domesticated"? [My squiggle key is broken.] —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.118.170.35 (talk) 23:53, 15 December 2008 (UTC)

No, because humans are, currently, quite far from being extinct or even endangered. Therefore we are placed at the other end of the spectrum from extinct: Least Concern (LC). There is no "Domesticated" category in the IUCN Red List. JSpoons (talk) 23:15, 16 December 2008 (UTC)
Funnily, this is arguable; are there actualy humans living in wildlife? I belive not. This should be clarified elsewhere. HuGo_87 (talk) 12:40, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
If we are officially designated as least concern, why shouldnt we list humans as such?

Wouldn't be calling humans animals be an opinion based on a theory, though? Oh that's right, we are "reformed" animals.

No we are animals, great apes are animals correct? We are no more special than our primate ancestors and relatives, no theory, scientific fact. Religion is theory/faith Sincerely and truly yours, C6541 (T↔C) at 05:37, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

It isn't scientific fact, it's based on evolution, which isn't 100%. Like it or not, it is still a theory, and has many holes in it. My concern is with this article not being 100% correct. Science gives us these things as the best evidence we have, yet they aren't anywhere near fact yet. I'm not suggesting we fill this article with religious stuff, but I am concerned that this article is using something that isn't proven yet as fact. Evolution at best is a theory that has holes that have yet to be filled. Don't tell me it hasn't, I've been researching it for the past year. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.51.41.46 (talk • contribs)

We are animals. You're not going to get far trying to argue otherwise. OhNoitsJamie Talk 20:10, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Scientific taxonomy, a method for catagorizing life, defines us as "animalia" because our cells, unlike those of a plant, lack cell walls. Since humans are just like animals at the cellular level, that is how biology defines them, separating humans from plants and bacteria. But that distinction is only the second broadest. As more characteristics are considered, humans become their own species, at which point they stand alone. Unless you consider cellular structure the core of your individuality, then science is not dealing anyone any insult, because taxonomy recognizes the many differences between humans and other forms of life. --Yano (talk) 21:10, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Did I ever say we weren't? Actually, nevermind. I've raised this question in the past and there doesn't seem to be an answer other than to leave the article as is. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.51.41.46 (talk • contribs)

If you indented your responses and signed your comments, it would be much easier to tell just what you are saying. But I think you did question whether humans can be considered animals when you (presumably) wrote: "Wouldn't be calling humans animals be an opinion based on a theory, though? Oh that's right, we are "reformed" animals."
Also, the scientific community, like Wikipedia, relies on consensus. A theory embraced by scientists across the board, of many different faiths and backgrounds, is no longer just a theory. --Yano (talk) 00:18, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

It's also denied by many scientists across the board. Scientists are not 100% on the issue, they are more around 50%. Also the reason I don't have a signature is because I haven't registered.

Just because a lot of scientists agree on something doesn't mean it's necessarily true. It does help, but there is still a lot of doubt in the community. And no, not just by religious folk. Kind of like Global Warming. It's a mixed agree disagree issue that I've observed at least.

I was actually joking in that sentence, I suppose it wasn't clear enough.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.51.41.46 (talk • contribs)

Please register if at all possible and indent your sentences! In any event, I tire of having to explain this over and over again, but here it goes. A scientific theory does not mean the same thing as hypothesis - which is how it is used in everyday parlance. The Theory of Evolution through Natural Selection is just a "theory" in the same way that the Atomic Theory of matter is "just a theory" or the Theory of Gravity is "just a theory." There is virtually no debate in the scientific community over the existence of evolution - only on its exact molecular mechanism. Please cite a peer-reviewed journal article to the contrary. shultzc (talk) 08:45, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

I'd like to see your evidence that there aren't a larger number of people in the scientific community who don't agree with the theory past just one part of it.

How about . This is geographically limited, but I would suggest the burden would be on you to demonstrate that a poll of Ohioan scientists is not a representative sample. The first paragraph in the section entitled "Views of Ohio Science Professors" is particularly relevant to the discussion at hand. shultzc (talk) 09:28, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

Please don't relate Evolution to Gravity. I've already seen that page.

I didn't even know that such a page on Wikipedia existed until right now - that was my own explanation. Regardless, why should I not relate Evolution to Gravity, Relativity, or Cell Theory? The word meaning is the same in every case! shultzc (talk) 09:28, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

I just find it disturbing that on an Encyclopedia like Wikipedia which prides itself in fact (mostly) that there would not be a section on this article that perhaps shows the scientific disagreement and skepticism as well as holes of the theory of evolution. Or a redirect to such a page if it exists. And perhaps more than just the Scientific explanation. If Wikipedia only uses the Scientific explanation then that doesn't really make much sense. My point is, there are many different theories on how we came to be and how we have changed, including non scientific views. But on this article, those seem to be compressed to "Culture" only. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.51.41.46 (talk • contribs)

You're 100% correct in your objection. This page is one of MANY that reveal (quite obviously, I might add) Wikipedia's laughable bias. And then the one below me cites a Wikipedia article to try and implicitly prove its apparent lack of bias. Pathetic.
You seem to be labouring under a misconception. Try reading evolution as theory and fact. -- Avenue (talk) 07:38, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

I also read that page, that really isn't what I'm saying. I'm saying I don't understand why only the theory of evolution is presented as fact on this page. If it wasn't presented as fact, the first sentence wouldn't read "humans are bipedal primates" and continue to use the theory to explain how we have came to be and changed.

I would repeat Rivertorch's question from below. shultzc (talk) 09:28, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

I think more than one theory or explanation should be added to explain this. Surely there is no bias here so that only the scientific explanation deserves recognition?

I don't understand this comment. Are you suggesting that non-scientific explanations should be included here? If so, do you suggest that every article that makes mention of evolution be retrofitted to include non-science? shultzc (talk) 09:28, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

I really wish my concerns would stop being treated as if I am just stupid and am not reading the fine print.

No one is calling you "stupid," but at least I am very concerned about your apparent desire to import non-scientific ideas into what is an inherently scientific topic. shultzc (talk) 09:28, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

68.51.41.46 (talk) 23:38, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

Can you all please refrain from having discussions that is not about improving this article about humans. bear in mind that talk pages exist for the purpose of discussing how to improve articles; they are not mere general discussion pages about the subject of the article Wikipedia is not a forum thank you. Pro66 (talk) 01:10, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
The discussion is about including and excluding specific information from this article. More than appropriate. --Yano (talk) 01:42, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
I think it is important to get this straight - it's very hard to discuss crafting an article on humans if we can't get consensus that humans evolved, or even that they are animals. shultzc (talk) 09:28, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

That isn't what I am suggesting. I didn't say "remove the evolutionary explanation" I said "add other explanations".

Are you suggesting that we're not bipedal primates? Rivertorch (talk) 06:09, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
Yano you lot are moving away from discussing about improving the article to the point of whether something is or is not i.e like rivertorch's comment above, if you guys wanna make such comment about your theories or thoughts about evolution and scientists or what not then go to each others user talk pages (its what it is for). Shultzc it seems that it is accepted across wikipedia that humans evolved and we are animals so its least likely to have ceonsensus. if you have any questions about evolution or if we are animals then go to wikipedia reference desk and then discuss it there thank you. Now going back to the point of this section, the orignal person has said "Shouldn't it be under domesticated?", no it is listed as least concern. End of topic. Pro66 (talk) 10:37, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
Well, maybe not quite. My comment was by way of a good-faith attempt to discover whether I totally misconstrued something valid and meaningful that the anonymous editor was trying to say. If I misconstrued it, then it potentially could prove important to improving the article. If not, then I second your motion to close the discussion. Rivertorch (talk) 11:13, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
I will be giving my reply to you on your talk page as this discussion page is for improving the article not about a general discussion about our feelings or what not about the topic of the article. Pro66 (talk) 11:38, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

I went ahead and deleted my responses because this isn't the right place for this kind of talk.

I don't have a talk page to continue this discussion so I guess I'll register, assuming you still have one even if you don't register.

There is a lot of people outside Wikipedia who do not believe in evolution only, or don't believe in it period. And I have heard of Scientists who also aren't in agreement on this issue. But if we can't add other explanations perhaps of a Philosophical and Religious standpoint, due to the fact that I believe this to be more than just a scientific issue, that is fine.

Just seemed kind of bias to me.

I want to make something clear, I was never suggesting we remove the scientific explanation, however, I do feel that this issue is more than scientific in nature and as such deserves more than one explanation from more than one particular source. 68.51.41.46 (talk) 03:21, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Sorry it may sound a bit off the subject but evolution is a scientific fact. According to current understanding, we don't need to get to 100% certainty to express something as scientific fact. Same applies to all other things that critics of science refer to as "fact". We are living in the age after Popper and Heisenberg and in this general lack of certainty, evolution is fact enough to be relied on. The article is a scientific article made easy for people of non-scientific background. Our respect of critics of science and its current philosophy shouldn't make us let non-scientific ideas like separating humans from rest of the biosphere leak into a scientific article. Bornbyforce (talk) 09:56, 13 January 2009 (UTC) And I may also add that because of the things others have already discussed, there can be other ideas added with an explanation that humans are considered by some non-scientific classes of thought to be of different origin or not animal or... I think this can be considered a possible solution. Bornbyforce (talk) 10:03, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

That doesn't make any sense, but whatever floats your boat.

That is all I was wondering about, so if non scientific origins can be added that would seem best. Especially considering there is a large number of people who consider human origin more than just a scientific issue. 68.51.41.46 (talk) 12:36, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

Beliefs and religion are discussed in Human#Spirituality_and_religion. We obviously can't treat any one of these beliefs with more favor than any other, so noting that many such Creation myths exist and discussing them as an important and interesting part of our culture is the best approach. Tim Vickers (talk) 19:04, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

Image

Because the Pioneer image was censored, it should be un-censored for accuracy. The line for the vulva should be re-added. 128.146.46.2 (talk) 18:36, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

Whilst I agree with 128.146.46.2 that the censorship of the Pioneer image makes it unsuitable for use here, I do not thing that we should edit it; we must use a different image. I am also against the use any of merged or averaged images. Martin Hogbin (talk) 09:02, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
Much more importantly, I fear it gives a misleading impression that of the two photographs (as opposed to unclear line drawings or paintings) of individual humans in this article, one depicts the species off their home planet with the subject totally obscured by a rarely worn full-body suit, and the other depicts a microscopic embryo still within its mother. The other reasonably close-up photograph depicts two juveniles who are obscured by being intertwined and the lower half of their bodies being outside of the frame.
I'm sure a wide range of separate, full length, good quality, free-content images of adult individuals of the species in their natural habitat are readily available, and, indeed, I seem to remember their used to be a number of these on the article in the past (including a collage thereof).
It suspected the lack of relevant images results from a series of edit wars, particularly in 2006, over which images to use (based on such irrelevant, arbitrary criteria as the individual depicted, where they live, their ethnicity, their job and their clothing or lack thereof). I don't particularly care if the images change as long as there are some that give a reasonable depiction of the species. However, if stability is necessary lots could be drawn on some of the disputed factors by editors of this article. Or, maybe, someone has produced some kind of pseudo-photograph depicting an average human by merging a number of other images.
Joe Llywelyn Griffith Blakesley talk contrib 01:15, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
I count four photographs of (groups of) non-fetal humans in natural, terrestrial environments. I think joeblakesley has some unstated (and strange) critera in mind that rules out all those photographs from "counting" in his enumeration. I think I take the prior comment as mostly facetious, or certainly at least spurious.
However, I think one indirect point in the comment is noteworthy. There seem to be too many images that portray artistic representations of humans, rather than simply photographs of humans directly (sculpture, paintings, etc; I guess also the lead image etching counts here too). None of them are bad in themselves, but the number seems skewed to me. LotLE×talk 06:44, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
Regardless of whether I sound facetious to you, my point was about the lack of a close-up photograph of a single individual (also emphasised in my post above) as would be expected on the article of any other animal species. I think I was quite direct in making my point (probably too so for your liking). I wholeheartedly agree that there a noticeable bias towards artistic depictions on this article. —Joe Llywelyn Griffith Blakesley talk contrib 13:36, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
I have removed several artistic images that seemed duplicative. So I'm not really concerned about that imbalance anymore. I wouldn't mind the "single individual" photo that joblakesley mentions, if a suitable one can be found. Humans are fairly social animals, so seeing them in groups doesn't seem unreasonable, but an isolated individual would be fine. Actually, the picture of an ancestor hominoid (individual, full body) seems slightly gratuitous to me in the article; replacing that with an an otherwise similar image of a fully modern human would feel like an improvement to me. LotLE×talk 21:35, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

I agree that the Pioneer image is unsuitable as a representation of the entire species, but not so much for the lack of genital detail as because it is racist (given its intended function). It assumes that white people are the prototype of homo sapiens. It also conveys gender stereotypes. The male is the one who greets, the one to address. It could perhaps serve as an example of self-representation of humans, but not in that prominent place in the infobox.--87.162.35.117 (talk) 13:03, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

For better or worse, the Pioneer image is the only concrete representation of humanity (i.e., other than TV broadcast signals) to be sent out of our solar system. While the image is problematic in its original usage, that usage is highly notable. Therefore, it seems perfectly reasonable to use it here. Because WP is supposed to be an encyclopedia and not an original reference work, it's not up to us to determine how to depict humanity; our role is to show a sampling of the various notable ways it has been depicted to date. If someone were to suggest an equally notable but less problematic image to take its place, I'd support moving the Pioneer image further down on the page, but I'm doubtful that such an alternative exists. (For the record, I find the image problematic because it is highly stylized rather than anatomically accurate and because of the Eurocentric thing. Certain comments in the archives of this talk page, in which various editors rail against the figures' nudity, are more entertaining than Onion articles, but I can't say I agree with them.) Rivertorch (talk) 15:41, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
Sending a poor quality and deliberately inaccurate image out of the solar system does not turn it into a good one. Martin Hogbin (talk) 16:02, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
Agree 100%. For our purposes here, though, isn't "good image" sort of analogous to "obviously true statement" rather than "verifiable, citable fact"? In other words, I suspect that this article and its illustrations should reflect humanity's poor choices as well as its excellent ones (and everything in between). Rivertorch (talk) 21:33, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
That is an interesting point but I do not think that it is good enough reason to use the Pioneer plaque as the lead image, cetainly without comment. Martin Hogbin (talk) 11:53, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
Assuming the Pioneer image is ever found, it may become the most widely known and recognized representation of humanity. When aliens subsequently google us to learn more, we should use the same image to confirm that they are on the right page. --Yano (talk) 21:50, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
Of course ;-) Martin Hogbin (talk) 12:01, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
The image we have, though we have a black/white version of the original, isn't censored AFAIKS when comparing what we have with the original in the Pioneer plaque article. For the quality of the original, it is engraved on good all-round Aluminium stock and it's gold plated. We're not here to criticise what it is but its relevance i.e. we're not art critics, and the technology implicit in that image says more about modern humans than say how accurately depicted the vulva is in, for example, the Venus of Willendorf. In the end the intent of the pioneer plaque is to represent humans: whereas any photo we choose is us trying to identify a photo that represents humans; reliable sources always trump personal Wikipedian views. I choose the pioneer plaque because it matches the criteria of representing humans without any WP:OR. Ttiotsw (talk) 04:51, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
The image has not been censored by editors here but it was censored when it was first produced, as is made clear the article that you referred to. Martin Hogbin (talk) 23:39, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
I am replying to the original claim that the image we have is censored. It is not censored by anyone as the image we have is (colour and size aside) an accurate representation of what is currently floating around in space. Your claim that it is censored when it was first produced is not only dubious (Sagan - who's idea it was anyway says why it was designed as it was) it is also irrelevant. What we have is what is right now on the space craft and it is designed to represent "Humans". Show us another image that is that widely recognisable and is designated (by a reliable source) for the purposes of representing humanity. Ttiotsw (talk) 21:08, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
Have you read the article, it is quite clear? It says, 'The decision to omit a very short line in this diagram was made...'? That makes quite clear that a decision was made to censor the drawing. All that is not clear is whether that decision was made by Sagan or a NASA official. Martin Hogbin (talk) 23:12, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
In the end we are not art critics; Artists, sculptures and painters have many reasons as to why they have created what they have created. Wikipedia (we) have not censored the image and just display that without criticising the work. That is neutral. Ttiotsw (talk) 18:41, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
It is not a matter of art but of respect for the human body. You cannot just delete parts and pretend that they do not exist. If showing certain parts is a problem then cover them up. Martin Hogbin (talk) 22:02, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

I see this argument is still ongoing. What is the better alternative? It's one thing to criticise the image but another thing to find a substitute that will not generate even more flak. David D. (Talk) 05:33, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

I think almost any image of a human would be better than the one we have. Martin Hogbin (talk) 22:41, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Agglomeration

What is the basis for the list of cities in the Human society statistics table? Wouldn't it make much more sense to list them according to this?~ thinking-ape ~ (talk) 00:20, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

No, if you maintain the look the article have had on the subject (very objective, like humans didn't write it) you'll agree that it doesn't matter what the city center boundries are. Any area where the population remains dense is more acceptable. The list is on the cities with highest populations in "greater" area rather than city center. I don't agree with the list anyway (there are several cities whose boundries are not distinguishable from nearby cities and you can consider them all part of the same population colony (called agglomeration here).Bornbyforce (talk) 09:43, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Human impacts on nature

This article never shows the impact humans made on the environment, how much pollution they released into the air, the countless species' extinction caused by humans,how other animals are tortured and negelected by humans. etc. this article is very biased.--Guppy22 (talk) 00:37, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

It's there:

Humans have had a dramatic effect on the environment. It has been hypothesized that human predation has contributed to the extinction of numerous species. As humans are rarely preyed upon, they have been described as superpredators.[30] Currently, through land development and pollution, humans are thought to be the main contributor to global climate change.[31] This is believed to be a major contributor to the ongoing Holocene extinction event, a mass extinction which, if it continues at its current rate, is predicted to wipe out half of all species over the next century.[32][33]

Might deserve its own section, though. --Yano (talk) 01:02, 6 January 2009 (UTC)

I think you should show the scientific evidence against some of these, as well. If you go to far with one side you are being biased in my book. 68.51.41.46 (talk) 12:40, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

Your book is wrong, on all subjects (evidence). --71.241.206.81 (talk) 22:41, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

We're all biased one way or another with Humans. I can't fathom why.--70.71.240.170 (talk) 23:41, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

Population density

The global population density figures given in the table with the green header don't match those given in the article it links to. I haven't checked which are correct. --71.241.206.81 (talk) 22:38, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

Homo Sapiens

What's the difference between homo sapiens and homo s. sapiens? 75.118.170.35 (talk) 17:51, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Unless I'm mistaken here, homo sapiens refers to the entire species, while homo s. sapiens refers to the subspecies of which modern humans are a part. Mkemper331 (talk) 19:16, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Dates mentioned in different articles on early human history do not agree with each other. Examples:

The article "Neolithic" starts with: "The Neolithic period was a period in the development of human technology, beginning about 9500 BCE in the Middle East[1] that is traditionally considered the last part of the Stone Age."

The article "Neolithic Revolution" says "The Neolithic Revolution was the first agricultural revolution—the transition from hunting and gathering communities and bands, to agriculture and settlement (settlement is currently being questioned). Archaeological data indicate that various forms of domestication of plants and animals arose independently in at least 7-8 separate locales worldwide, with the earliest known developments taking place in the Middle East around 10,000 BC (BCE) or earlier.[1]"

The article "Human" says "Until c. 10,000 years ago, most humans lived as hunter-gatherers. They generally lived in small nomadic groups known as band societies. The advent of agriculture prompted the Neolithic Revolution, when access to food surplus led to the formation of permanent human settlements, the domestication of animals and the use of metal tools. Agriculture encouraged trade and cooperation, and led to complex society. Because of the significance of this date for human society, it is the epoch of the Holocene calendar or Human Era."

So, did the beginning of the Human Era, where agriculture first made its appearance and the first fixed communities were forming, start "about 11,500 years ago" as stated in the Neolithic article; did it start "12,000 years ago or earlier" as stated in the "Neolithic Revolution" article, or did it start only "10,000 years ago," as stated in the "Human" article?

As an added complication, I have read opinions (e.g., "10,000 BC" on the History Channel) that the Younger Dryas period induced humans to turn to agriculture and permanent communities. It isn't clear to me if that happened at the beginning (12,800 years ago) or its end (11,500 years ago).

I am writing a novel involving the beginning of the Human Era and am facing an uncertainty about its date that stretches between only 10,000 years ago up to 12,800 years ago. I think clarification and making these and other articles agree with each other would be helpful to the site. Ed (talk) 05:03, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

A recent simulation of the most recent human common ancestor

There was a study done at MIT and published in Nature that simulated that modern humans have been around for 3000-5000 years... this seems to conflict with this article.

and 64.180.167.130 (talk) 02:13, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

The article says that we all may have a common ancestor from that era but it does not say that modern humans date from then. Martin Hogbin (talk) 19:18, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Too anthropocentrist?

The article is too anthropocentrist. 200.160.69.14 (talk) 05:14, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Should an article that is about humans be anthropocentric?--66.162.55.2 (talk) 18:45, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
It's an article about humans but written in a way that basically sounds like "We are great". 200.160.69.53 (talk) 22:03, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Odd paragraph

There's a painfully poorly written (and in my personal opinion, totally unnecessary...Religion is already discussed elsewhere in the article...) paragraph about God and religion at the end of the 'Origin' section that doesn't show up in the 'source' for the page, and thus can't be edited. It either needs to be cut or to be rewritten, because right now it's a crime against written language. Example: "Catholics is similar to Christianity except for the fact that Christianity vary in their beliefs, but..." ...Seriously, what's up with that? I'd fix it or remove it, but it's UN-EDITABLE. -- 24.8.142.231 (talk) 00:32, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

It has already been removed, which is why you can't find it in the article! Tim Vickers (talk) 01:47, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

Human = Homo sapiens?

This article gives the impression that "human" is synonymous with Homo sapiens. But aren't all members of the genus Homo rightfully humans, in the same way that all members of the genus Pan are chimpanzees? --Lazar Taxon (talk) 20:05, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

I would think technically since Homo means "human being", "man", or "person". Homo Sapiens are simply called "Modern Humans" so I would think others would be humans too in the broadest sense. -C6541 (T↔C) at 20:39, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
Hence the hatnote, which reads This article is about modern humans. For other human species, see Homo (genus). For other uses, see Human (disambiguation). KillerChihuahua?!? 21:07, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
I think there is absolutely no 'technical' or 'scientific' agreement on how to use the word human!!! That's why, in science, we use the words "Homo sapiens" instead (or more usually, fully modern Homo sapiens). Many, many (most) anthropologists today use the word "human" to mean all members of the genus homo (source: personal observation of lots of anthropologists for more than 30 years). The use of "man" as a synonym for Homo sapiens went out of fashion about 30 years ago. "Person" means something very different than "homo sapiens" or "human" and is very much in the province of philosophy, not paleontology or anthropology. Anthropos is a word that should be used and defined in this article (let's see if that can happen). Homo sapiens are not "simply" called "Modern Humans." First of all, many many people want a division between FMHS and archaic Homo sapiens. But it is true that "the others" (from the Paleolithic onward) are usually called "human" by many/most anthropologists, especially in presentations. In an article, people would use "homo sapiens" and then define how they meant to use "human" if it were to refer to anyone besides HS.Levalley (talk) 02:15, 26 March 2009 (UTC)LeValley

If an undergrad presented this as an essay in an anthropology class...

...I would give it a C, maybe. There are lots of problems. Who is the general editor of this article? Is there one?Levalley (talk) 02:11, 26 March 2009 (UTC)LeValley

For example, why does the lead sentence skip genus and move to family, skipping over all the intermediate categories as if they are not important? Why not start with saying that homo sapiens is a mammal, then? Or an animal, rather than a plant? There are lots and lots of non-homo sapiens hominids, none of them members of our genus. Why not start with explaining the usual binomial nomenclature??Levalley (talk) 02:18, 26 March 2009 (UTC)LeValley
Another example: Chimps, canines and elephants are also thought to be capable of abstract thinking, so no big deal there (and NO distinguishing characteristics - we need to go much deeper into WHAT KIND of abstract thinking - and good luck proving the entire species possesses those capabilities; I don't know what the Wiki article on "language" says but in zoology, primatology and anthropology, it is not only humans that have language - we have a special KIND of language (arbitrarily based on phonemes), it is very misleading to use "language" as a distinguishing feature, as if the word itself explains anything. Dozens of human ancestors were capable of upright locomotion and tool manipulation (as are other primates, although none are as bipedal as we are - certainly all the members of the genus are). In the second paragraph the word "social" has no meaning in this context (and apparently no wiki article to expand it). Humans universally recognize kinship - that's much more specific and easier to define. "Social" - meh. Means nothing here. Let's remember, for example, that the species is more than 200,000 years old - but there's not a SHRED of evidence for "philosophy" until around 2500 years ago. Does it make sense to characterize 200,000 years by a brief period about which we think we know more? Education, as opposed to "transmission of culture" has a specific meaning - and wasn't invented until around 6-8000BP (if then, still controversial, certainly by 4000BP - but still a tiny fraction of the total time of being human). Many, many societies STILL have no system of education. Acculturation is the correct term. I'll let the clothing part to go for now, but bower birds using items to decorate their nests (instead of themselves) comes very close to the clothing customs of, say, the Yanomamo. It is also not clear that the earliest Homo sapiens wore clothing - at all.Levalley (talk) 02:29, 26 March 2009 (UTC)LeValley
I believe "descended from homo erectus" is highly controversial. Wouldn't most say homo ergaster? Or homo heidelburgensis? This is really outdated, anyway, and takes no stock of current nomenclatureLevalley (talk) 03:19, 26 March 2009 (UTC)LeValley
If you see a problem.. why not fix it? If there is a nominated person watching over this they can just as easily remove any changes they disagree with. That's the whole aim for Wikipedia, it's community edited. You're obviously in a position to know more about this subject than your average reader, thus perfectly positioned to help us all make Wikipedia the best resource we can. 72.253.129.84 (talk) 00:30, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Gender bias

Why the pix of the female life cycle and not the male? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Levalley (talk • contribs) 03:21, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Why not? Is there a significant difference between the life cycle of female and male humans? We're not exactly a mold species. The females here serve as a illustration of the universal process of aging. --Gimme danger (talk) 00:58, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Questioned source

In the Physiology and Genetics section is cited as the source for typical weights for humans. As Article World appears to be an open wiki, which is not a WP:RS reliable source. -- Donald Albury 11:03, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Semiprotection?

Massive deletions from an IP editor went uncorrected for thirteen hours today. I watch this article but not closely. Is this common enough here that semiprotection would be helpful? I'd prefer not to file a request based on one series of edits on one day. Rivertorch (talk) 00:15, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Objectivity of article extreme to the point of ridiculousness

Is it me, or does this article sound as if it were written by Martians to explain what Earthlings are like? Come on, folks, we're describing the human race here. As in, you, and me, and everyone who will ever read this article. There is no need to avoid being subjective on an article like this. I realize Wikipedia strives to be as objective as possible, but this is just ludicrous! If an exception to the rule (on NPOV) should be made, it's here. 207.172.203.208 (talk) 17:28, 2 April 2009 (UTC)MJR

It isn't necessarily the case that humans are the only ones who will ever read this article. In any case, you haven't made the case that abandoning neutrality would improve things. Can you point to any specific passages whose neutrality poses a problem? Rivertorch (talk) 20:00, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

How many humans on the books?

How many humans have lived overall on Planet Earth since the beginning of times (i.e. 10 million years ago for the first hominid or 200,000 years ago for the first Homo Sapiens)? I've heard 70 billion mentioned, is that an accurate figure for this type of census? 91.82.33.216 (talk) 21:49, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

A few billion more at best can be added on: remember the KNOWN world population at the time of christ was a few million, then we had the plagues: war, at worst we can add on like 500 more million: world population was relatively small until the 1800's.--Ssteiner209 (talk) 12:50, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Weasel word spotted in the article!

> However, compared to many OTHER animals, human gene sequences are remarkably homogeneous.

The presence of word "other" in the above sentence implies that humans are animals, too. This is POV and shall not be in the article, because it is offensive to not just the religious people who believe in man-only immortal soul.

It also offends the leftist readers, who know from marxism science studies that the ablity to work, think and speak irreversibly elevates humans from the animal kingdom and therefore they cannot be considered animals any more - the large quantity of unique humans capabilities have created an entirely new quality, the sentient being.

Therefore the article should simply say "compared to many animals, human gene sequences are remarkably homogeneous" 82.131.210.162 (talk) 17:58, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

Humans are animals. This is not POV, it is biological fact. No credible scientist would dispute this. Cadwaladr (talk) 01:44, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Lead picture

I haven't read all of the previous discussion about the picture, but it seemed to me that the consensus was a sort of an agreement to disagree about the picture and go with the plaque as a sort of grudging compromise on the parts of some editors. I don't know, however, if this particular picture was discussed. I'm not necessarily thrilled with this one, mostly because of the lack of pubic hair, which I think should be included if we were to decide to use a photo. Anyway, since consensus can change, I just wondered if there are any new opinions regarding this photo or one like it which basically replicates the plaque picture, but in photographic form. And I suppose I should state for the record that I am actually fine with the plaque picture, just curious as to what other opinions there are now. Cadwaladr (talk) 03:24, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

Can't blame you for not reading all the previous discussion, since it involves multiple archived threads over several years. You're right about a grudging compromise, but that's what consensus sometimes comes down to. To reiterate yet again my take on it, the image on the plaque is problematic (because it's highly stylized and appears to depict only those of European ancestry) and never should have been sent into space, but that's a personal opinion and not helpful in deciding what's best for this article. Since it was sent into space it is perhaps the most notable image depicting humans that we have to work with, so it's entirely appropriate for the top of the article. Photos similar (but one might hope better, in several ways) than the one in question would be perfectly appropriate for elsewhere in the article, I think. Rivertorch (talk) 18:08, 4 April 2009 (UTC)

Hello. Regarding the picture in the main article Homo Sapiens (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:PPlaquecloseup.svg), I find it unacceptably Eurocentric. Even statistically, people with this skin pigmentation and proportions are a minority. I think the best illustration could be three "schematically" drawn persons - for example, a man with average Asian pigmentation and proportions, a woman with average African pigmentation and proportions and perhaps a female child with average European pigmentation and proportions. Would be fair, because women are also world's majority. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.11.230.74 (talk) 21:31, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Skin pigmentation? Isn't it a brass plaque, i.e. no pigmentation. The point here is not that it is an accurate representation but an iconic one. David D. (Talk) 13:26, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

PS: it would be also relevant to add more human figures: Hispanic, Middle Eastern, Native American, Native Australian, Pigmean etc. So, could be arranged as a nice family picture - femals and male babes, children, teenagers, adults, elderly ;) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.11.230.74 (talk) 21:41, 10 April 2009 (UTC) Uncircumcised and unshaved would be more accurate. Maybe we should just re-add the censored vulval line to the plaque image. 75.118.170.35 (talk) 19:45, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Or we could stick wit the neutral color plaque that doesn't favor one side... You know tje generalized image we sent out just in case some other species picked it (hopefully they see liek we do)--Ssteiner209 (talk) 12:52, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Anything is better than the plaque. Martin Hogbin (talk) 18:03, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

I suspect nothing will create less controversy. David D. (Talk) 21:17, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
How about a montage of faces, of various ages and races? Steve Dufour (talk) 17:47, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
A montage might do it, but you will probably get the ageist, sexist, racist complaints no matter how carefully you put it together. Try it though, you might hit the sweet spot. David D. (Talk) 19:25, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
Why would a montage of faces better represent the concept of "human" better than the current iconic representation? Rivertorch (talk) 20:34, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
Personally, I don't think the montage would be better. David D. (Talk) 00:50, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
Most articles on species of animals only have a picture of one animal of that species, why should this article be different just because it's written by the animal it's about? This, to me, seems rather unfair. In my opinion, there should just be a picture of a random example of the species, I nominate Mike Godwin. 71.212.96.177 (talk) 05:58, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Article quite lacking forward!

The article has zero word on the future of humans, even though futurology is an actual science strongly based on mathematics. The use of an interstellar satellite plaque in the header of this article implies the wikipedia authors do think mankind has a future, yet the article does not even mention it!

At the very least population explosion, environmental woes, deep space travel, artificial intelligence and human info-biotechnological self-transformation should be mentioned in a new futurology paragraph. 82.131.210.162 (talk) 18:04, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

I would be against "futurology" for the most part. Until it all actually happens, then it is still science fiction. All of those items you listed could possibly have their own articles seeing that many of them are currently being worked on. However, all of them should not be simply tacked on here for Homo Sapiens, it would make the article too unruly and what purpose would there be? Just because humans are working on this stuff, does not mean we should put it here (what next, do we need to tack on the complete history of human technology here too?)ZgokE (talk) 00:38, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Any of the futurology you mentioned would be a fun violation of crystal ball: only with sources. The future is not written nor can we predict it. For example: we say such and such shall happen tomorrow, However, at any moment there could also be a nuclear war that shall stop such and such from taking place. --Ssteiner209 (talk) 13:05, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Who invented Homo sapiens sapiens?

In the Carl Linné article it is stated that Linné divided Homo sapiens into several sub-species/races, neither of which is Homo sapiens sapiens. So who did coin that term? It should be stated in the taxobox. FunkMonk (talk) 01:49, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

I believe that was part of the rearrangement of Homo neandertalis and a few others as subspecies of Homo sapiens. Shoemaker's Holiday (talk) 14:29, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
Then the current info in the article is wrong, no? Linné should be cited for Homo and Homo sapiens, but not Homo sapiens sapiens. FunkMonk (talk) 18:03, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
I believe it is the equivalent of an autonym in botany. mgiganteus1 (talk) 04:29, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

taxobox - least concern and fossils

Is the following sentence appropriate for the opening paragraph?

As of 2008, humans are listed as a species of least concern for extinction by the International Union for Conservation of Nature.[2]

Especially since it is not even discussed in the article itself. David D. (Talk) 21:32, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Does it matter really what we are listed?--Ssteiner209 (talk) 13:25, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
It seems appropriate somewhere in the article but not in the first paragraph. Rivertorch (talk) 04:11, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
That is what i was thinking. David D. (Talk) 04:18, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

So why is the ICUN 'least concern' classification required in the taxo box? I see no good reason for this. I see a good reason for have this information for rare species, but for any species of least concern, not just humans, why is this vital information for the taxobox? David D. (Talk) 19:40, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

I had previously removed the ICUN 'least concern' classification and the fossil record section. For ICUN, my rationale is above. And why the fossil section? Is it relevant for most extant species? What is the goal of such as section, I assume it was designed for usage on extinct species?
Well now they are back again, and apparently the best reason for having them is "like for all other species". Is uniformity really the only reason we have these sections in the taxobox? If so, then I move that we remove them for good. They are not informative, apparently they are only there as eye candy. David D. (Talk) 12:08, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
Uniformity in infoboxes is an advantage because they're intended as a standardised overview (and can allow for quick comparisons too). Most species articles have an ICUN rating. What's the advantage in removing it? --h2g2bob (talk) 21:59, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
Uniformity should not trump usefulness. David D. (Talk) 06:09, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Image:Human_body_features.png

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"BP" Date system

Why is it that in the origin section the "Before Present" dating system is used? If we don't want to say "A.D." because of the religious connotations, fine. But then we should use C.E., as the majority of the world uses said system.

It's being used in an archaeological context. That's the units they use. David D. (Talk) 03:57, 29 April 2009 (UTC)


Evolved from Homo erectus?

I'm having a hard time agreeing with this sentence from the subsection "Paleolithic":

"Homo sapiens appears about 200,000 BP (Before Present), in the Middle Paleolithic, descending from Homo erectus."

Some paleoanthropologists today agree that Homo erectus is a "dead end" in hominin evolution. I would suggest, as an RAO supporter, that "Homo erectus" be changed to Homo heidelbergensis or Homo ergaster, since erectus is found outside of Africa, dated over 1 million years old, and has no transitions from that species to another (except for the case of Homo floresiensis). -Ano-User (talk) 07:23, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

I was under the impression that RAO still involved erectus. Can you point us to some sources to the contrary? If there's a reasonable amount of scientific doispute, we should say that, but at a basic level like this, the smaller disputes sometimes need to be glossed over a bit (though, provided it isn't held by only a tiny minority, it should appear in more detailed articles). Shoemaker's Holiday (talk) 09:43, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
I'm sorry if I seemed kind of forceful in my demand for a name change from "erectus" to "heidelbergensis" or "ergaster." It's just what I learned in Physical Anthropology that makes me want to correct it (assuming that it is correct). Here is a more accurate description of differences between the "Lumpers" and "Splitters" regarding Homo erectus' place in human evolution from Archaeologyinfo.com: "Those who accept the validity of ergaster (splitters) usually consider erectus an evolutionary dead-end that went from Africa into Asia, and went extinct there. Those who see erectus as a modern human ancestor (Lumpers), either see the Asian specimens as a dead-end side branch, or see all the ergaster, heidelbergensis, and erectus specimens as belonging to Homo sapiens" (From Kreger, Homo erectus)
The RAO hypothesis states that migration (of modern humans) within and out of Africa eventually replaced the earlier dispersed H. erectus. Hopefully this will give you a clearer view of what I'm trying to say. --Ano-User (talk) 22:10, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Ah, right. That makes a bit more sense. I'm afraid it's been a few years since I did human evolution in any great detail - I'm more zoology.
Basically, this being Wikipedia, information needs to be sourced (If you're wondering why: it's an anti-vandalism/stupidity mechanism, in all honesty: It gives people something to check if information seems dubious, so we can catch any problems a little more easily. Also makes people a little less inclined to throw in half-remembered details, but instead to check them and get it right.) I trust you, but, well, I've always rather wanted to see this article reach "featured article" status - recognition as a really good article, pretty much - and that means showing our work, I fear.
Forgive me, I am rather talking as if you're new to this - which probably is completely wrong. I'm afraid it's after midnight here. Anyway, how about something like "...descended from Homo ergaster (sometimes considered a subspecies of Homo erectus)"? Covering both terminologies is probably a little more useful than either one, since it lets people know that sources may vary in terms, but it means basically the same thing. Shoemaker's Holiday (talk) 23:09, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Haha, yeah I understand. It's been a while since I took Zoology, but in a way, it has a lot to do with Evolutionary Biology, especially in considering the fields of population genetics, heredity, variation, Mendelism, and reproduction. I've been on Wikipedia for a while and I'm usually very good at citing my sources when writing research papers or Wikipedia articles (in which I have done only 4), but I thought that making internal links would stand in place of making a reference list.
I like your suggestion of something like "...descended from Homo ergaster (sometimes considered a subspecies of Homo erectus)", but ergaster, according to us "splitters," is the older species. Erectus and heidelbergensis are probably the migratory descendants of ergaster. May be we can say, "...descended from Homo ergaster (sometimes considered the ancestor of H. erectus and H. heidelbergensis, but in other times, considered a sub-species of erectus)." Just a suggestion. --Ano-User (talk) 13:43, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Earliest human fossils

I am moving back the date on the earliest human fossils found. This was published in "Nature", one of the most highly respected scientific journals. If anyone wants to make changes, thats fine, just as long as this new date and a link to the new discoveries is mentioned in the article. Also - the fossil dates mesh with the biological data.

-- Ruy Lopez (talk) 03:11, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Legacy

There should be a legacy section at the end. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.220.50.223 (talk) 10:33, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Sentence removed from Sexuality in its entirety

"As with other human self-descriptions, humans propose that it is high intelligence and complex societies of humans that have produced the most complex sexual behaviors of any animal, including a great many behaviors that are indirectly connected with reproduction."

Would need a fact tag at least but is in any case judgmental and likely false, poorly composed, etc. Also on the Lede edits, didn't see that technology was already mentioned further in that paragraph. Stopped of course when editor accused me of denigrating the role of science in understanding the natural world. Lycurgus (talk) 13:15, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Evolutionary studies section

I've removed this from the article, since it seemed entirely redundant with the section on "origin", which already deals with the relationship between the great apes in some detail. Tim Vickers (talk) 16:07, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Written for Aliens?!?

Don't you guys think it's a bit risky putting this kind of information together in one page? All humans know this stuff, and it's just waiting here for aliens to find out everything about us without doing all the work of research. That could expedite their plans to eat us by hundreds of years or more!

I think the risks of this page far outweigh its benefits. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.185.6.77 (talk) 21:52, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

this is my take on WP: the whole of WP should be so structured as to be a primer for an alien species that wants to learn about who we are and what we have observed of our shared universe. so this article is perfect in its tone. i like that we make as few assumptions as possible when writing articles, putting them in context, giving links to broader articles, and mostly: not assuming the reader knows the difference between "family guy" and reality .66.80.6.163 (talk) 22:54, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Life cycle pictures

Is it just me or shouldn't we find a picture of a woman of reproductive age that doesn't look like straight off the pages of a fashion mag? I mean this article is supposed to be scholarly, so shouldn't we find a more natural/normal example of a woman? Someone that isn't an erotic model (follow the link) and someone who's face isn't covered in fashion facepaint. I mean it's bad enough that painted model pics are being pushed on young girls as the norm, but do they really have to find them in their scholarly readings, too? Obhave (talk) 09:52, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I went ahead and inserted a different picture, see how people like it. Obhave (talk) 11:32, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

My picture got deleted because I'm a noob and failed at the copyright stuff. I'm reverting to the old pic. Obhave (talk) 21:03, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Guess I'll wait until the wikipedia licencing update goes through, that'll increase the options. Obhave (talk) 10:01, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Something is off in the formatting

I don't know if it's my computer only, but the page I'm getting says "Like most higher primates, humans are social by nature. But Homo sapiens had a larger brain divelopment [sic]," example.jpg inserted here, then, "Humans are particularly adept at utilizing systems of communication--" I'd fix it myself, but I can't find it where it should be in the edit page.--173.49.21.81 (talk) 03:34, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Nevermind, it disappeared when I went back. --173.49.21.81 (talk) 03:35, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Input Output

Could we add this somewhere?

Typical human mass throughput in Pounds per day

  • Food 2.5 > 0.3 Solids
  • Water 9.2 > 11 Water
  • O2 1.8 > 2.2 CO2
  • Where is the source for this? Is this an average? Can you provide citation or a range depending on size of person of outputs and inputs? What is the reason for adding this? --RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 08:56, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

    Planet Destruction

    There is a statement at the end of the introductory section that appears to be increadable POV paragraph that uses citation that some would consider questionable, and maybe would best be removed and be placed on an article relating to environmentalism.--RightCowLeftCoast (talk) 08:56, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

    Removed the disputed paragraph:

    Humans are also the only species which pollute the planet.[3] Humans are, by far, the number one contributors for causing mass extinctions of flora and fauna by destroying their habitats[4]: eg, clearing of rain forests, hunting for "recreation", and driving out vast numbers of important species by filling wetlands with hazardous wastes.[5][neutrality is disputed]

    The first sentence not supported by the ref. The other refs are indeed questionable. Discuss. Vsmith (talk) 11:10, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

    Other species cause pollution such as beavers and starlings can cause pollution of areas rendering them uninhabitable and destroying habitats. Other species have also caused the extinction of species by eating them all, resource competition, and disease.

    67.84.178.0 (talk) 03:11, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

    Blantant Pro-Human Bias

    Living in space and the air

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    Pronunciation of Homo sapiens

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