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Alpha this and alpha that

There is no such thing as an "alpha level design". That is to say, "alpha level" is a buzz phrase employed by Musk and his cronies to make his idea sound trendier. This is not a common phrase in use by ordinary people or even designers. Words such as "concept" are far more appropriate. Moreover, there is a difference between a concept and a design. A concept is more like an idea on paper, perhaps with a few a sketches and nothing really thought through or worked out in any detail. A "design" is something more than a mere concept, employing dimensions, calculations and various forms of specification, even at the "alpha level". An "alpha-level concept" (now sporting a hyphen) is even more of a misnomer as there are no 'levels' of concepts; there is simply the initial idea - the concept - and then subsequent designs. A "proposal" is something that comes at the end of the design process, so "the alpha proposal" is also meaningless. And then we talk about the "alpha route"!

Can you see the problem here? This shouldn't be difficult to understand, it's simple English. I think some editors have been swept so far off their feet by Elon Musk that they've forgot how to write prose. I'm not going to revert again because I can't be arsed any more. I'm just going to take the page off my Watchlist and leave it to you crazy kids to edit. You can even put little cartoons in the margins and stuff. Have fun! nagualdesign 00:42, 13 November 2015 (UTC)

Chill man. The cycle is supposed to be WP:BRD (be bold, revert, discuss). Not be bold, revert, be bold, revert, ..., be bold, revert, spit dummy on talk page and leave.
In my experience in various engineering disciplines, an alpha release is a release that is half baked, has pieces missing or poorly implemented but at least works in some small way. It's meant to give a feel to the customer so that the customer can know that work is progress and if that work is in the right direction. The customer has the chance to say "great, please continue, or this bit needs to be done in a different way". Similarly, a beta release is closer to the final version - not quite there yet but lets the customer give feedback.
So, when Musk says it is an alpha level design he's merely saying that here's some ideas that aren't fully fleshed out yet but allows others to make recommendations on the basic design. However, I get your point that the average reader may not know what this means, so something closer to mainstream English would be more appropriate.  Stepho  talk  03:48, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
Actually I have attempted to discuss this in the past. Evidently it fell on deaf ears. In my experience as a designer I have never come across the phrase "alpha level design", nor does Google lead to any examples of the phrase in use. The only similar phrase in use (correct me if I'm mistaken) is the term "alpha version" or "alpha release", which refers to incomplete software releases. And the original concept and quite a bit of coding must take place before anything can be released. Of course I can surmise what it means as most of us have heard of "beta versions" of software (and we all use computers, right?) However, Musk's use of the phrase is similar to the use of "2.0" (invariably pronounced "two point oh") to describe anything new that you want the media to lap up, or describing something as being like something similar on steroids. It's all just hype. A drawing of a monkey does not constitute an "alpha level zoo" no matter how you spin it. In fact the only thing new and unique about this whole concept is the name Hyperloop and the phrase "alpha level design". Anyway, like I said, I'm outta here. I'm only leaving this message to embolden the next editor to come along who realizes that this article is full of guff. nagualdesign
As far as I can tell, per the section heading on this section of the Talk page (" Alpha this and alpha that "), this discussion is about the appropriateness of the term "alpha" or "alpha-level" with respect to describing the particular instance of the hyperloop concept as it was articulated by Musk and a set of other engineers in August 2013. So I'll leave comment on your other assertions for elsewhere, should you decide to discuss other aspects of the article more generally, or should you try to support your vague allegations of this article being "full of guff."
Re "alpha-level" terminology. It is not the job of Wikipedia to assess whether any particular designer (you, User:Nagualdesign) or any general practice as to designs typically seen are familiar with the concept of "alpha level". It is sufficient for this article, about this particular technology, to have reliably sourced citations that support the statements made. In this case, Musk et al did, in fact, refer to their white paper as an alpha-level design. As I read that, they were merely saying it was more than a lightweight white paper—they had, after all, run some design numbers and some prelim work on the economics of the conceptual project if built from LA to SF—but it was certainly not any sort of a complete, ready-to-build design.
Moreover, as time has gone on, the Wikipedia Hyperloop article has emerged to be about much more than merely the original concept that Musk et al wrote about, when they released it to the broader world and engineering community. Given that, Wikipedia needs some way to discuss "Hyperloop" more broadly, as various ideas and variations move away from the original concept as articulated in the alpha-level design document. If Wikipedia does not use the descriptor "alpha-level" to describe that original, lightly fleshed-out, design concept, what specific idea for an appropriate descriptive adjective do you have that would clarify for our readers that there is, today, clearly more than a single "Hyperloop" concept floating around? Cheers. N2e (talk) 23:32, 16 November 2015 (UTC)
And now, two plus months later after the discussion User:Nagualdesign, User:Stepho-wrs, and I had here in November 2015, it is even more clear that this article is about much more than just the narrow/specific early design doc that Musk/SpaceX/Tesla engineers put out in summer 2013. I've started an entirely new section to discuss that (article scope), below. Should you feel differently, this is a great opportunity to suggest your own take on the matter. Cheers. N2e (talk) 02:53, 1 February 2016 (UTC)

New references from IEEE Spectrum


Hi, Just read a hyperloop article in IEEE Spectrum, This publication is by engineers for engineers, so less hype than usual.

Possibly some new info in these, or at least 3 references to add.
Newest feb 2016: http://spectrum.ieee.org/tech-talk/transportation/alternative-transportation/mit-team-tops-hyperloop-competition
new dec 2015: http://spectrum.ieee.org/transportation/mass-transit/elon-musks-hyperloop-proposal-gains-momentum
older 2013  : http://spectrum.ieee.org/tech-talk/transportation/mass-transit/elon-musks-tubular-vision

Salbayeng (talk) 03:28, 21 February 2016 (UTC)

Category High Speed Rail?

Imho this project is only related to hsr insofar as one alleged purpose is to create fear uncertainty and doubt with regards to the California High Speed Rail proposal... Hobbitschuster (talk) 13:23, 22 February 2016 (UTC)

under pod competition

A Design Weekend was held at Texas A&M University January 29–30, 2016, for all invited entrants.[54] Engineers from the Massachusetts Institute of Technology were named the winners of the competition. Finishing second was Delft University of Technology from the Netherlands, followed by the University of Wisconsin–Madison, Virginia Tech, and the University of California, Irvine.[8][55] While the MIT team took best overall, Delft University won the Pod Innovation Award.[56]  Preceding unsigned comment added by 13eccole (talkcontribs) 15:29, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

 Done There's already a full article on that, as indicated in the one section of this article. That article is Hyperloop pod competition. Details on awards, etc., logically fit there, not here. Cheers. N2e (talk) 18:37, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

Additions for Theory and Operations

As crazy as it sounds, if the hyperloop concept were not to work on Earth, Elon Musk believes that Mars should be a backup location. In order to do this, he suggests to use thermonuclear bombs to transform the planet. This will create an atmosphere and terrain more suitable for human life. For the hyperloop concept to work on Earth, low-pressure tubes are required to decrease air resistance. If this were to be built on Mars, no tubes would be necessary because Mars has one percent of the air pressure here on Earth.

Bconsolino (talk) 15:51, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

This is interesting, but in the scheme of the article, does it really fit? Also, where are you getting this information? You need to cite where you found this. Also the first part, "As crazy as it sounds," may not be the most fitting for the article. Try leaving this part off. Nancekelton (talk) 16:11, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
To the others using this page, Bconsolino and I are in a class assignment, so any pointers for either of us would be greatly appreciated! Nancekelton (talk) 16:11, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
This is the end of what is now the intro to Theory and Operations, "The Hyperloop resembles a vactrain system but operates at approximately one millibar (100 Pa) of pressure.[24] According to Musk, Hyperloop would be useful on Mars; no tubes would be needed because Mars' atmosphere has about 1% the density of the Earth's atmosphere.[10][25][26]"
My additions would continue this sentence.
Bconsolino (talk) 16:17, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
No, I don't think human meta-engineering of the atmosphere etc. of Mars fits in this article. Moreover, that is highly speculative and is based on talk show banter, not a "suggestion" by Musk. N2e (talk) 18:42, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

Problems with the tone and NPOV of the article

The article does not clearly say that closely related transportation systems have been proposed before, and it does not say, what is the novelty of Hyperloop. High-speed transportation in a low-pressure tube has been proposed before, and there was a system proposed in Switzerland long time ago that used maglev. So is the only novelty in the Hyperloop concept that the pods float on an air-cushion? Is there some new innovation here? Now the article reads as if Elon Musk has made an invention, although it does clearly state what that invention is.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Rainaldus (talkcontribs) 08:46, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Unfinished sentence in intro

"In addition, a subscale pod design competition on a very short, 1 mile (1.6 km), test track in Nevada."

Does anyone know how this sentence was meant to be finished? Myoglobin (talk) 22:40, 13 May 2016 (UTC)

I changed it to "In addition, a subscale pod design competition on a very short, 1 mile (1.6 km), test track was built in Nevada – the first tests of the scale model occurred in May 2016."  Stepho  talk  23:16, 13 May 2016 (UTC)

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The two first reference links (http://tmsearch.uspto.gov/bin/showfield?f=doc&state=4808:um44dh.2.5 and http://tmsearch.uspto.gov/bin/showfield?f=doc&state=4808:um44dh.2.6) are not permalinks.

They lead to a page saying "This search session has expired. Please start a search session again by clicking on the TRADEMARK icon, if you wish to continue."

Not sure where to get a permalink from that terrible website.

Maybe we should replace them by this? https://trademarks.justia.com/860/27/hyperloop-86027442.html

Hector J (talk) 11:28, 20 September 2016 (UTC)

Agreed.  Stepho  talk  12:55, 20 September 2016 (UTC)

Babylon 5 portrayed some sort of tube-transportation-system on Mars... http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-mURSOdIbpVQ/VMOqQO6-6kI/AAAAAAAAAtc/THk5k2XMsWM/s1600/Mars%2Bin%2BBabylon%2B5_4.jpg  Preceding unsigned comment added by 78.50.182.6 (talk) 00:22, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

Reference errors

I thought I would bring to someone's attention that the last three items of the reference list has an error. It needs to be fixed. 165.230.224.204 (talk) 15:12, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Fixed. They were references that were no longer being used.  Stepho  talk  02:08, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Lede

The lede is six paragraphs. Shouldn't some of that be moved to History? Rhadow (talk) 22:33, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Diameter

I have been told that the diameter is 3m6. which is the correct diameter?

http://www.lemonde.fr/economie/article/2015/10/23/hyperloop-le-futur-tube-des-transports_4795531_3234.html  Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.193.104.227 (talk) 19:34, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

There is no standard diameter for a Hyperloop tube. While today most railroads have a standard gauge, there are exceptions, even in the US. To wit: BART. SpaceX has defined the de facto test tube size, but there is no indication what size a production tube might be. Rhadow (talk) 12:44, 24 August 2017 (UTC)

Risks section

Hyperloop companies

Maintaining the status as a concept

Section 2.4: Mars

The Hyperloop as electric car long distance carrier

How can the top speed be lower than the average speed?

Why is it called hyperloop?

Missouri Hyperloop

Capitalization

Expired references

Mars

History

Changed and moved corporation section

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

Edit war re historical concepts

California high speed rail conspiracy theory

Remove maintenance template?

Multiple article-level improvement tags

Why is this "Part of a Series About Elon Musk"?

The idea was around since 1910 so how did Elon Musk propose the idea?

Merge with the Vactrain article

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