Talk:Joey (restaurant)
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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Madsngo. Peer reviewers: Gertjjor.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:26, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Editing Article
Pre-move Review
Hello Madsngo, I looked over your article history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!
That being said, you don't seem to have made the changes that we discussed yet. Also, your text currently reads a bit like an advertisement. Phrases like "decorated with world-class decorations, simple, yet modern" are definitely not written from a neutral point of view.
These critiques aside, I suspect that you will be able to clean things up and be ready to upload soon. I've created a page that has a number of suggestions that will improve your article. Additionally, you can find the instructions for how to move the article.
Please review the detailed explanation of Task 6 on our class wiki and let me know if you have any questions! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 05:17, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
Hey Madsngo,
I reviewed you wiki article, and you can see my feedback at this link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madsngo/JOEY/Gertjjor_Peer_Review
This was kind of a fun article to review since it is relavant to both of us.
Gertjjor (talk) 08:24, 6 March 2020 (UTC)

