Talk:Jessica Chastain/Archive 1

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Chastain's dog

Do we really need to mention that she has a three legged dog named chaplin? I don't see how it's noteworthy, what it tells us about her, or how it's anything other than the kind of trivia that would only really interest an über-fan. All it does is move the tone of the article away from that of an encyclopedia article towards that of a celebrity profile in a glossy magazine. 89.100.207.51 (talk) 16:10, 16 May 2012 (UTC)

I tend to agree, although WP:Trivia is more about actual lists, not trivia items. I do tend to support removing it as it's an unencyclopedic detail, of which there are no doubt hundreds which have been revealed in RS. -- Brangifer (talk) 01:43, 17 May 2012 (UTC)
I wasn't trying to say that the detail's in breach of WP:Trivia, more that it's trivia as in it's trivial. I just don't see the utility of such an unimportant detail, regardless of the fact that it comes from an RS. It seems only to drag down the tone of the article. 89.100.207.51 (talk) 02:13, 17 May 2012 (UTC)
We totally agree. -- Brangifer (talk) 04:33, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

High school

Jessica graduated from El Camino High School in 1995. Their yearbook says she was a senior there in 1995. Sure, there is the remote possibility she was a last minute high school drop out, but there is another corroborating source with the Sacramento City Express: "Jessica Chastain came to City College after graduating from El Camino high school..." --Shivertimbers433 (talk) 19:15, 25 May 2012 (UTC)

Just got off the phone with the records dept at El Camino High School in Sacramento, CA and they do not have her listed as a graduate in 1995. I know this is not published proof, but hopefully this information will open your mind to the possibility that some published articles being used here may be incorrect. Cannesfan (talk) 23:48, 25 May 2012 (UTC)

Private phone conversations definitely do not qualify as verifiable or as a reliable source, nor can editors cite themselves as a source. Reliable, published sources say she graduated in that year which is what will be included in the article. --Shivertimbers433 (talk) 04:54, 26 May 2012 (UTC)
The first source can be used to document that she attended and was a senior at El Camino high school.
The second one (Sacramento City Express), can be used as a ref for her graduation from El Camino high school: "Jessica Chastain came to City College after graduating from El Camino high school..." -- Brangifer (talk) 05:35, 26 May 2012 (UTC)


Non-notable awards

A lot of these listed awards seem to be from local or otherwise non-notable societies, or only nominated not won. I have updated The Tree of Life 2011 to retain just the most notable entries and reformat for accessibility (which will be in any case necessary one way or another). If this is generally OK we can update the other entries to match... Comments welcome. --Mirokado (talk) 21:48, 25 May 2012 (UTC)

No objections, so I will do that. --Mirokado (talk) 21:26, 29 May 2012 (UTC)

Now updated the film section. It should be feasible to check all these entries, we need an inline reference for any for which the linked article does not itself mention Jessica. I have removed:

  • awards from special-interest organisations.
  • awards from local (Denver, Dublin etc) organisations with the exception of the Jolene award (notable as first mentioned) and Hollywood or Los Angeles.
  • (updated) nominations except for obvious prominent ones or where the results have not yet been announced.
  • pending, not even clear what that means without a good inline reference.
  • (update) also, whole cast awards which "belong to" the film itself

--Mirokado (talk) 22:04, 29 May 2012 (UTC)

I see someone has restored some of the above without providing either an edit summary or inline references and without contributing to this section. Since it was not a blanket reversion I will give the other editor (or anybody else) time to justify the added entries before removing them in accordance with the above list.

I have looked a bit at the "pending" item. Jessica has been nominated for the 2012 Saturn Awards which will take place in June. I think we should only retain nominations for really major awards such as the Oscars, but it seems reasonable to add nominations for other awards which would be recorded here as wins, until the result is announced. In these cases it would be particularly important to include an inline reference and I have done so for this one. Also added an explanation for "pending". --Mirokado (talk) 01:29, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

Awards section format

This needs to be changed a bit since the bold text is contrary to MOS:BOLD. I propose grouping the awards by status as is done on some other actor pages, see for example Kristen_Bell#Awards, which will allow a much cleaner listing. The first change(s) will just move entries with no content change, subsequent changes will reformat the new sections. --Mirokado (talk) 12:15, 3 June 2012 (UTC)

The awards are now grouped by status, then year, then society, then award. The grouping means that a lot of the redundant text cluttering each line could be removed. The lists nest which helps screen reader users. We can tidy the entries a bit more preferably merging society and award lines, but I am doubtful whether some of these entries belong here (as a separate issue from the film tables whose job is to list the films, at least the job of these lists is to list awards). The criteria already mentioned in the previous section are relevant here too. Some entries link to a wiki page which does not mention the individual award at all, let alone listing recipients, and some entries have neither wikilink nor inline reference for the award. I will wait for comments here before making any more definite suggestions... --Mirokado (talk) 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)

Ensemble awards (best cast and so on) "belong to" the film concerned. They can be mentioned in the film's article if notable. I will remove them from this article. There are various breakthrough awards which clearly "belong to" Jessica. Since they document her growing recognition I suggest we retain these in the awards section. There is no need to duplicate them for each film in the film table. --Mirokado (talk) 23:36, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Discussion continued....

Date of birth, birth name, and birth place

Get Along

35!

Biological father

Name and family

Infobox pic

Dropped out of high school

Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 09:53, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jessica Chastain/GA3. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.


I will review this but not until middle of next week as the finale of the contest is this weekend.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:53, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing now Krimuk90.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:58, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

"Her parents gave birth to another daughter, named Juliet, who after reconciling with Monasterio, committed suicide in 2003." -not clear if you mean her mother here or not or the daughter. It's strange in this context to say "reconciling" if it's not about a couple but father and daughter.

"The production led her to audition for the Juilliard School in New York City, where she was soon accepted and granted a scholarship funded by the actor Robin Williams.[6" -was it a scholarship fund for a few different actors or just her? ♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:13, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

She said in an interview, "Robin Williams is a very generous Juilliard alumnus, and gives a scholarship every two years to a student, and it pays for everything, and I got it. I still haven't gotten to meet him." So I guess she was the only one who got it that year. Krimuk|90 (talk) 15:14, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
Wow, very lucky, top man he was, miss him.:-(♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:00, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
  • "She went to appear in such roles in a few other television series from 2004–07, including Veronica Mars, Close to Home and Law & Order: Trial By Jury" -years in brackets might benefit here.
  • "Williamstown Theatre Festival" and "Wadsworth Theatre". Mentioning the cities these are in would be useful.
  • "The actresses worked together before filming, creating a consistent voice and mannerisms for their character, and in addition, Chastain took classes in German and krav maga, and studied books about Josef Mengele and Mossad history.[34]" -"creating a consistent voice" I don't like here. Try something like "The actresses worked together before filmto perfect the voice and mannerisms of the character and make them consistent. In addition, Chastain took classes in German and krav maga, and studied books about Josef Mengele and Mossad history".
  • Did you already link Mark Kermode?
  • Lives at Carnegie Hall, are you sure?
Hahaha!! I kept thinking it was Carnegie Hill. Krimuk|90 (talk) 15:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
  • "passionate about creating awareness on depression" -"passionate" and depression cause really not the right word in this context.
  • "From 2012–14 she has featured in AskMen's " -implies continuity despite being 2 years ago

@Dr. Blofeld: All of your comments above have been resolved, Doc.  Ssven2 Speak 2 me 11:42, 6 May 2016 (UTC) I'll still wait for Krimuk though, thanks.♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:01, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Ssven for addressing the comments when I was away. Dr. Blofeld, all seems to be done now. Thanks for the review! :) Krimuk|90 (talk) 15:14, 6 May 2016 (UTC)


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Excellent job.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:00, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

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