Talk:Judith Butler/Archive 4

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There's a throw-away line inserted in a recent revision: Butler had relatives who died during the Holocaust. This is in the early-life biography, right after mentioning she's Jewish, with relatives from Hungary and Russia. This statement sort of trivially follows from the general ethnicity one, but seems to be inserted to try to insinuate some additional philosophical or political point. Sort of like saying in a breathless voice that Butler is featherless and walks on two legs. Readers know the basic details of the (horrible) history of the 20th C, and this digression into them feels awkward. LotLE×talk 08:04, 2 March 2010 (UTC)

Maintaining Wikipedia:Assume good faith, the information added to her background was a summary of statements made by Butler herself in an interview. All Wikipedia articles need biographical background information and inclusion of information about parents and family is common if not expected as this is a biography, not just a list of a scholar's important works. As for the line about the Holocaust, I am not particularly attached to it and added it as part of a general summary of Butler's own statements about her childhood simply because she mentioned it herself. However, that point is not as important as information about her parents or how she became interested in philosophy so I will remove it. The other material, however, is helpful to improving the biographical nature of the article and reflects the kind of information that usually appears in biographies here.
I appreciated your edits, they are good ones. I'd like to see this article improve, which includes a clean up of the unsourced information in the book summaries. The article could potentially be raised to at least a "GA" level. Thanks for your feedback, -Classicfilms (talk) 16:12, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
Your recent additions have been very good, and I thank you. I'm just concerned to avoid a too informal tone in biographical information. I still think there's a bit of that in the comments about how Butler felt about her Hebrew school studies. Sure, it's based on an interview, but a newspaper "human interest" piece is a bit less formal than an encyclopedia. However, I've left that bit, and don't feel that strongly. The Holocaust sentence is also supported by the interview, although there Butler's comment was much more specific and the newspaper added the more generic parenthetical. I considered narrowing it to "Butler's maternal great-uncles and great-aunts", but that felt weirdly over-specific for this article. The generic "relatives in the Holocaust" is also true of every Jew who had ancestors migrate to the USA in the 20th C (and many non-Jews also, etc), but like I wrote, adding the almost-tautology insinuates some further meaning that is not supported (maybe better than my featherless biped thing would be the fact that Butler also had relatives who died of cancer or of heart disease... it could conceivably be relevant if she was a medical research into those thing or otherwise wrote about them, but is not automatically relevant because true). LotLE×talk 19:31, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
Sure, I appreciate your point about tone but I think that what appears now is fine. I've worked on a number of biographies on the WP including the Al Gore article which I was involved in elevating to a "Good Article," so I have a pretty good sense of what is expected in a WP biography. To be sure, the important part of this article lies in an overview of Butler's work. However, as I've noted above and with tags, these sections contain too many unsourced statements. I also agree with your point above about a paragraph which falls under WP:SYNTH. Butler is not just a BLP but a very important scholar and thus her WP page should be raised, as you suggest, to the highest standards. I cleaned up the awards and reading list sections as well as the EL. The readings I've left alone for a few weeks to give other editors time to find sources before I begin to clean them up. However, the omission of a background section in a biography is problematic, particularly if you want to run an article through GAC. Thus, the information about her experiences in Hebrew school are critically important to the structure of the article. The introduction ends with the comment that "Her most recent work focuses on Jewish philosophy, exploring "pre- and post-Zionist criticisms of state violence" and yet in the article's previous version, there wasn't much to develop this statement. I am fine with changing "Jewish American" scholar to "American" scholar - it was added for clarification but is not critical. However, it is important for readers who don't know much about Butler to understand the connection with her early training in Hebrew school. I'm not sure how this is informal - most WP biographies discuss childhood experiences particularly if they relate to current writings or research. I would agree that if Butler's current work were not in this area, it might not be as critical but since it is, the article is strengthened by its inclusion. I would really like more biographical information if sources could be found. But the real priority, as I said above, is to clean up the summaries of her books. Thanks for your response, -Classicfilms (talk) 20:23, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
I agree that the book summaries need to be better--both better written and better cited. And the addition of the background section is definitely helpful. I guess the informality thing I was getting at is the difference between stating that Butler was "not angry, but thrilled" to study Buber/Hegel/etc in Hebrew school versus just stating that she did study them there. This childhood exposure to those sources is definitely a useful framing for her professional work. It's hard to know how accurate her characterization of her childhood emotions is; it's not that important, but what if we dug up her rabbi saying she actually was angry about having to take the courses, for example? I know we see similar "human interest" angles in many biographies, but I tend to prefer the drier factual statements. LotLE×talk 20:42, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
Re: book sections - yes I agree on both counts. Also, I know that if a section is a summary of a main article but doesn't really act like a summary (ie is too long or detailed), it will not get past GAC. So some of the book sections that have main article links should probably be shortened or more reflective of the article as a whole in the form of summary. As for Butler's recollection of her childhood, I do think this is important to include but we can tweak it. We could say that Butler stated in an interview she was thrilled etc. I think this statement gives a great deal of insight into Butler as a 14 year old kid who saw philosophy not as a punishment but as something to read with delight. If you want to rephrase, it is fine but biographies, WP or not typically do include childhood experiences if they shed light towards the current work of an important individual. To just say that she studied these texts rather than that she at 14 did not see this as punishment would deprive the article of insight to her character. If you can think of a better way to phrase it, by all means go ahead but I think her reflections are important to include. Interviews are useful for this reason and are fair game in biographies. -Classicfilms (talk) 20:56, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
I'm fine with the current phrasing. I get your point about her mood at 14 yo being relevant, not only the dry fact of studying. As to the book summaries, what length do you think is appropriate, especially for those that have independent articles. I think it would be reasonable to devote 2 paragraphs to each book, possibly stretching that to 3 paras if there is no child article (but longer than that, there should be a child article). Is that consistent with your thinking? LotLE×talk 21:03, 2 March 2010 (UTC)
Good question - it really depends as I've seen different editors respond in different ways. Review Wikipedia:Summary style to give you a sense of WP guidelines. Experience has shown me that if the summary paragraph covers all of the essential points of the main article, you are covered. If the summary is long and acts as an article in its own right, it is usually rejected. So I'd use common sense. What I usually do is a) tidy up the main article first and then b) take critical points from the main and turn it into a summary. It is ok to recycle some of the same language. Hope that helps, -Classicfilms (talk) 21:15, 2 March 2010 (UTC)

Source/clean up tags

This is a Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons and of a particularly important scholar. It contains far too many unsourced statements and is in need of a complete clean up. I'll wait a week or two. After that point, I will begin to remove any statement which is unsourced, as stated by Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons. -Classicfilms (talk) 23:24, 26 February 2010 (UTC)

I have cleaned up the article so that it comforms to WP:BLP. Please only restore deleted material if you can provide a source re: WP:Verifiability. -Classicfilms (talk) 02:43, 6 March 2010 (UTC)

Wholesale blanking

The mass deletion of all the existing book summaries because of some insufficiencies that may exist in some of them is hugely destructive. While I entirely endorse the intention of cleaning up and trimming those summaries, the way to do it isn't by hiding the exiting work from editors who may contribute to the cleanup. The Wikipedia way is to cleanup as one finds time and citations, in place, on the article. Simply to mass delete in the hope that someone may someday write something better about the same material is... well, I know the intention is not vandalism, but the edits themselves come close. LotLE×talk 17:47, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Again, maintaining Wikipedia:Assume good faith, moving to the talk page is not the same as deletion. It is a standard proceedure in the Wikipedia to move problematic sections to talk in order to fix and upgrade. There are some some serious WP:BLP issues with the content as well as WP:UNDUE for a biography. Placing on the talk page with suggestions for improvement including a way to create a viable subarticle are constructive ways to improve the article, not hide or damage information. I won't revert the edit, but I do feel that the section is in need of enormous clean up and should either be better integrated into the structure of the article (ie not a list) or turned into its own subarticle. -Classicfilms (talk) 19:10, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
Moving to the talk page is little better than saying "well, it's in the history". I do not believe there are any BLP issues in the existing text, but if there actually are, mention them or address those issues narrowly. Deleting 3/4 of the whole article because one sentence may be a BLP violation is... not good. (I have no idea what sentence may be so, but I'll stipulate there could be one). The WP:UNDUE concern is more plausible, but that is addressed by targeted trimming and rewriting of the over-long parts. LotLE×talk 19:31, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
WP:BLP "We must get the article right" meaning everything must be WP:Verifiable. Moving to the talk page is a way of taking material with potential and asking editors to upgrade and is a standard approach. The book summaries have a great deal of potential but more sources to the original works are needed and that is why it seemed like a good idea to work that out on talk and then move back which happens in many articles here. Anyway, as I said, I won't revert the edit but I do think more sources are needed and trimming will happen when that happens. I've added sources for the rest of the article and corrected two mistakes so the rest of the article now conforms to WP:BLP. If these summaries can be better sourced and trimmed it is fine. BLPs should be up to the highest standard for sources. -Classicfilms (talk) 19:42, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
I know we are talking about Butler and the idea of summary seems in some respects contradictory, but this is an encyclopedia and we need to think carefully about what we mean by verifiability. Some of the paragraphs have no sources at all. Others are linked to a source which directs the reader to a large chunk of pages from a particular text. I can understand the need for that on the one hand but it does also open up articles such as this to subjective interpretations of very dense and complex material which then gets us to WP:OR. Two ways of approaching a rewrite would either be to cite what scholars say about sections of her text or break down the summary to include quotes and page numbers from the text which would move us a step beyond subjective interpretation. The point is that even summaries need to be from some kind of secondary source and that is what I see as the issue at hand here. -Classicfilms (talk) 20:05, 7 March 2010 (UTC)
Here is another suggestion at least for the moment until more sources are found. Butler's biography for the European Graduate School offers both a selection of what they consider to be her major works to the time of writing the bio as well as some excellent summaries. This is a good RS to use and perhaps can be used throughout the summaries to clean up what is there - meaning to re-write existing info using this page as the source. In this way, the works are maintained, RS is resolved, and it is possible to at least for now to clean up what exists:

JB Bio, European Graduate School

-Classicfilms (talk) 20:17, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Editorial essay on writing style

I am concerned about this recently added paragraph:

The issue of writing style is not trivial. Postmodern theorists argue that (modernist) claims that language ought to have "clarity" are linked to naive understandings of language in which it can simply convey or relay an already existing truth. Since the Linguistic turn in Western philosophy, this has been an important and controversial issue. The arguments around Butler's writing style are related to this issue: for modernists who believe in an objective reality Butler's writing is likely to seem "bad", whereas for postmodernists the idea of a text that seriously challenges traditional ideas while remaining "clear and lucid" to those who embrace them is almost self-contradictory.[citation needed] Not surprisingly, the epistemological controversy around language is mirrored by similar controversies around the writing styles of theorists like Butler. Butler's writing about gender is illustrative of this: the taken-for-granted assumption of "natural" biological sex (as a basis for "cultural" gender) makes her arguments all but impossible to articulate in the "clear" language of everyday conversation, because such language is saturated with the very assumptions she is challenging.[citation needed] It becomes necessary to write very carefully in terms that avoid everyday understandings of sex and gender; and such writing appears as "obscurantism" to those who either do not understand her arguments, or disagree with her (and other postmodern theorists') basic assumptions about language.[citation needed]

It seems well-written, and I generally agree with the analysis. It also seems to represent the original thought or WP:SYNTHesis of User:Ψμον rather than being clearly attributed to anyone else in particular. If we can find that Butler herself makes this specific series of claims, great! Let's cite them to particular books and chapters. Or if some well-known postmodern thinker other than Butler provides this summary (with at least some specific mention of Butler, not an original synthesis that such comments must relate to Butler), also fine. But whatever it's quality, Wikipedia is not the place to publish original essays about postmodern thought or writing. LotLE×talk 23:35, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

I removed this paragraph of unsourced commentary only slightly related to the subject of the article as it is a direct violation of Wikipedia:No original research and WP:SYNTHESIS. I do agree that it raises some interesting points but will also say that it is more applicable to a personal blog than a Wikipedia article. -Classicfilms (talk) 14:25, 5 March 2010 (UTC)
I agree with the above two comments, and I have one observation. If no one challenged and removed that, it would presumably stay there forever. This is a neat illustration that Wikipedia is what Wikipedians make it. --TheSoundAndTheFury (talk) 02:31, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
Exactly. -Classicfilms (talk) 02:51, 9 March 2010 (UTC)

Book summaries

Some rearranging

WP:UNDUE Zionism section

Edit request from Stephan Cotton, 7 April 2010

Spinoza

Continental?

"Commentary on style" section -- are political categorizations necessary?

Reasons for my removal of one line

An article to include

Do The Book Summary Portions Really Need Citations?

Education - summary of dissertation and Subjects of Desire

Butler's B.A.

Small mistakes in title of piece and origin ("Subjects of Sex/Gender/Desire")

Edit request on 6 May 2013

Reason for protection

post-structuralist?

"She is also well known for her difficult prose"

New book, maybe interesting for the "reception" section

Feminist or queer theorist?

Gender Trouble [citation needed]

Giving an Account of Oneself

Giving an Account of Oneself (2005)

European Graduate School

Maxine Elliot Professor what does it mean?

Threats of edit war

"their work has detractors including Martha Nussbaum"

Fictitious book?

"They live" or "They lives"

Pronoun usage

The Guardian interview

Original research

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

Non-binary lesbian?

Not neutral

Singular They

Pope Benedict XVI?

Big quotes in the Comments on Hamas, Hezbollah and the Israel–Hamas war section

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They/Them

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