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Birth and Death of Moses section

Hello all,

I recently made an addition to the article on Moses. This was reverted by one of the editors. After an exchange, he suggested the issue be posted here for any comments. So here it is, presented through the exchange we had of "talk" postings (slightly edited here).


ORIGINAL POST:

Subject: your reversion of addition to article on "Moses"

I am writing to ask about your reversion of my addition (by ozzie42, 3 Jan 2014) to the Wikipedia article "Moses". The text of the addition was:

"The biblical Battle of Jericho occurred shortly after the death of Moses, and archeology of Jericho suggests this may have occurred around 1560 BCE; a date of 1399 BCE has been suggested from a possible astronomical reference in Midrash Rabbinic literature.[1]"

The addition was placed after the following line about when Moses lived: Rabbinical Judaism calculated a lifespan of Moses corresponding to 1391–1271 BCE;[6] Jerome gives 1592, and Ussher 1619 as birthyear.[7]

Your reversion note says: (removing this, the archaeology actually suggests this didn't take place although a Creationist archaeologist disputes this)

Your comment briefly mentions the archeology part of the addition, but does not say anything about the part that refers to a possible astronomical date for the death of Moses. This work was published (full disclosure: by me and a colleague, since deceased) in a respected, and refereed, astronomical journal (see reference in the addition; article can be read on-line at http://articles.adsabs.harvard.edu/full/2011Obs...131..248M). I would argue that the date of Moses death derived there is at least as reliable as the sources you allow: Sedar Olam, Jerome, and the Ussher chronology. The birth and death dates of Moses are of much interest, but in dispute. I feel having the various pieces of evidence in the article (including the controversial archeology) makes this section of the Moses article more complete.

Note: I have not used this talk feature of Wikipedia before, but looking forward to your response,


RESPONSE

"You want to use T. J. Manetsch, W. Osborn: Can the Date of Moses’ Death be Determined Astronomically? The Observatory as a source. Let's see if it meets WP:RS and WP:VERIFY. First, it's not published in a peer reviewed journal.[1]. Not an impassible barrier, so who are the authors? This is Osborne [2] - he may be considered an expert on observational astronomy but not having read the paper I don't know what expertise is basically used in it. Who is the main author, "T. J. Manetsch"? Then there is WP:WEIGHT - does anyone actually mention this in a book or journal that meets our criteria? I can't find anything for that. What you can do of course is ask at Talk:Moses what others think, or WP:RSN. Oh - don't leave contact information lying around. Dougweller (talk) 16:07, 29 January 2014 (UTC)"


MY FOLLOW-UP

I don't want to quibble, but we should be correct in our facts. "The Observatory" IS a peer reviewed journal. That is what (in my field) "refereed" means when I commented on the journal in my first post. This can be easily checked. The suitability of referencing the Observatory article in the Wikipedia Moses piece can best be judged by reading the paper. A link was provided. Following your suggestion, I'll post this to the talk:Moses site to see what comes up.

Ozzie42 (talk) 03:46, 31 January 2014 (UTC)

Midrash wasn't written until a millenium later, at the earliest. Not sure of the value of commentary "for astronomical purposes" at that late date. Student7 (talk) 18:56, 4 February 2014 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 18 February 2014

Hi! (Not sure of appropriate netiquette... Are greetings acceptable here?) I would like to recommend changing "... attributed to Moses imply the existence of an historical..." to "... attributed to Moses imply the existence of a historical...". Cheers! (Appropriate?) anonymous (talk) 02:12, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Agreed and Done, thanks! --ElHef (Meep?) 02:31, 18 February 2014 (UTC)

Source missing.

Sentence in the opening paragraph: "Other historians maintain that the biographical details and Egyptian background attributed to Moses imply the existence of a historical political and religious leader who was involved in the consolidation of the Hebrew tribes in Canaan towards the end of the Bronze Age." Who are "Other historians..."? This is too open-ended and wage. 81.191.97.147 (talk) 21:25, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

The first section is what Wikipedia calls the WP:LEAD section. It is supposed to be a brief summary of the information included in the article and thus does not require sources, as the sources will be included in the text of the article. So look in the article. Editor2020 (talk) 02:11, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

God sent Moses

This doesn't sound right IMO. "Moses heard the voice of God telling him to.." or whatever. I am a believer myself, but this is hardly npov/encyclopedic wording. Student7 (talk) 23:53, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

Translation in german Wikipedia is slave not servant inside 10 commandments and what is right can be prooved by comparision with egypt slave house inside 10 commandments original text

See inside http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/10_Gebote#Wortlaut

Actually the ten commandments must have been written in egypt script because at the time the jews (semitic nomad tribe) have gone out of egypt for later attacking Kanaan with king city Hebron like described in the holy book the hebraic script did not exist like much of the later written metal plates of of mormon see book of mormon refering also to egypt culture and language at beginning. Maybe runic script did exist before latin and hebraic script but not much written on durable materials. The runes should come directly from creater of the world and first humans Askre and Embla together with his brothers god Odin who created at the time of his self sacrifice 9 days and 9 nights wounded from his own spear inside the life (sephirot) and world tree yggdrasil. The apocalypse in german tribes mythology was ragnarök with a world after R. and reborn Odin as Fimbultyr like described inside older poetic and newer Edda.


Eating the apples from godess [[Idun] was not a sin like positive healing witchwork or incarnations also directly from Odin as Wodan. The 3 rivers of fate inside the paradise are coming from 3 norns. The first ten commandments have been only for the pharons before.

Also the christmas tree is still called the Jule(Odin) tree as yggdrasil tree with still straw goat cars inside in north europe countries refering to god Thor etc. with christmas day at change from winter to summer with jesus christ birthday unknown.

The first monotheism was from Echnaton and Nofretete calling out only Aton as real god in egypt mythology world or maybe from enlighted Zarathustra 1800 b. Chr. teaching also a monotheism and an inmaterial world before the material world like in the egypt mythology. A Symbol for Aton is a circle and old sybol for Odin is also the suncross circle with a + cross inside see also under [[Sól (sun)].

10 commandments for the new socialistic human beeing

are also 10 historical commandments from DDR system

http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/10_Gebote_f%C3%BCr_den_neuen_sozialistischen_Menschen

Out of german 10 gebote article but strange not like normally working picture link

[Datei:Rahlwes 10 Gebote.jpg|miniatur|Rahlwes 10 Gebote (auf Deutsch)]]

[File:Rahlwes 10 Gebote.jpg|thumb|Rahlwes 10 Gebote (auf Deutsch)ADDABLE A TRANSLATION]]

"Actually the ten commandments must have been written in egypt script because..." No, actually at this project we require a reliable source before making any such assertion or even mentioning that some scholar out there thinks this, and German wikipedia fails as a reliable source because it is WP:OPENSOURCE. Til Eulenspiegel /talk/ 15:58, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

Right is that german wikipedia is not a reliable source like english wikipedia and the proof who is right can be done by comparision in original text what word was used for egypt "slave" house and later in text by everybody also without knowledge of hebraic script. Of course nobody can proove what sript eas used for the ten commandments plates because nobody does have that stone plates but prooved is that the hebraic sript did not exist already at that time and using egypt sript was normally that time like much later reported for the mormon metal plates.

"and the proof who is right can be done by..." No, I sense that you still don't understand. We simply cannot say anything or "prove" anything that a reliable source has not said. This is explained in our cornerstone wikipedia policies such as WP:NOR. Til Eulenspiegel /talk/ 14:49, 3 April 2014 (UTC)

Slavery

I added the template 'Slavery' and the categories List of slaves and List of opponents of slavery. These additions were removed for being inappropriate. Have I got the wrong Moses? Randy Kryn 21:14 3-5-14

I looked at your other additions and the adds seemed appropriate, but "slavery" is not what Moses is best known for. I agree that he is supposed to have led the Hebrews "out of slavery" but, more importantly, forged them into a nation with Judaism as it's basis. The "slavery" part seems a bit much for this particular article. Student7 (talk) 21:28, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. I agree (which is why I removed it). He's known for the biblical story where he liberated his people from captivity, not for any general opposition to slavery. And of course non-Hebrew slaves were allowed. Dougweller (talk) 10:09, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

IPA Pronunciation.

The name of Moses needs to be IPAed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.172.149.10 (talk) 09:28, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Request for Semi-Protected Edit

I believe the final sentence of the "Death" section should be edited to remove the reference to Zechariah 3. Zechariah 3 describes the argument between satan and an angel over Joshua, not Moses. Moses isn't mentioned anywhere in the chapter. I believe the final sentence of the "Death" section should be changed from "See also Jude 1:9 and Zechariah 3." to "See also Jude 1:9" Zechariah 3 describes the argument between satan and an angel over Joshua, not Moses. Moses isn't mentioned anywhere in the chapter.71.191.6.125 (talk) 17:17, 22 May 2014 (UTC)

Done Seems like a straight-forward request to which no one has objected. Thanks, Older and ... well older (talk) 15:26, 25 May 2014 (UTC)

Mormonism section

Two references in this section need to be replaced. The first one is now a dead link, but it wasn't particularly helpful to begin with, so....

{{cite web|url=http://www.aboutmormons.com/bom.php |title=About Mormons |publisher=About Mormons |accessdate=2010-03-02}}

...should be replaced with:

{{citation |last= Skinner |first= Andrew C. |authorlink= Andrew C. Skinner |contribution= Moses |contribution-url= http://contentdm.lib.byu.edu/cdm/ref/collection/EoM/id/3959 |pages= 958-959 |editor1-last= Ludlow |editor1-first= Daniel H |editor1-link= Daniel H. Ludlow |title= [[Encyclopedia of Mormonism]] |location= New York |publisher= [[Macmillan Publishing]] |year= 1992 |isbn= 0-02-879602-0 |oclc= 24502140}}

...which is an authoritative source.

The second one is linked to a copyvio online reprint of an authoritative source, but the original is available online, so...

{{cite web|url=http://www.lightplanet.com/mormons/basic/scripture/moses.html |title=The Book of Moses |publisher=Lightplanet.com |accessdate=2010-03-02}}

...should be replaced with:

{{citation |last= Taylor |first= Bruce T. |contribution= Book of Moses |contribution-url= http://contentdm.lib.byu.edu/cdm/ref/collection/EoM/id/5555 |pages= 216-217 |editor1-last= Ludlow |editor1-first= Daniel H |editor1-link= Daniel H. Ludlow |title= [[Encyclopedia of Mormonism]] |location= New York |publisher= [[Macmillan Publishing]] |year= 1992 |isbn= 0-02-879602-0 |oclc= 24502140}}

...which is the legitimate location for the online reprint of this copyrighted text. -- 208.81.184.4 (talk) 20:38, 9 June 2014 (UTC)


Done Thanks, Older and ... well older (talk) 17:58, 10 June 2014 (UTC)

The Qur'an has no place in the opening sentence describing Moses

Moses was a Hebrew prophet in his lifetime not an Islamic one, he was retroactively labeled an Islamic prophet in the 7th century AD, nearly 2000 years after he is thought to have lived. The book he wrote, the Torah, is a Hebrew prophetic text, not an Islamic one. Moses is also a prophet in the New Testament and the Christian Bible but they are not mentioned in the first paragraph. What if on the section for Muhammad the opening sentence said "Muhammad according to Islam and the Bahai faith and the Unitarian religion was an Arabic law giver and prophet" or how about "Muhammad was an Islamic and Bahai prophet and law giver" how fantastically stupid and ridiculous would that be? This is exactly what is written here. Moses was no more an Islamic prophet than Muhammad was a Bahai prophet. The Islamic religion was invented 2000 years after Moses, just as the Bahai religion was invented 1200 years after Muhammad. They have no relation to each other. Islam retroactively labeled him a Muslim, so what, that makes him a Muslim? It is irrelevant that he is mentioned in the Qur'an. He is mentioned in the Book of Mormon and the New Testament, and the Druze sacred books, and Bahai scripture, and every other Abrahamic spin off religion ever invented. Does that mean all of those texts should be mentioned in the opening paragraph? Moses did not write the Qur'an or the New Testament or Bahai scripture or whatever, he wrote the Torah. He was a Hebrew prophet, and not any other kind of prophet. If I invent a new religion called Newmanism and I say Muhammad and Joseph Smith and Moses and Buddah and John Lennon were all Newmanian prophets, can I write on John Lennon's and Muhammad's page that they were Newmanian prophets? Someone please remove the fallacious statement about the Quran in the opening sentence describing Moses. The Qur'an should be mentioned in a separate section titled "Non-Israelite traditions that regard Moses as a prophet" or simply in its on section on Islam.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Newmancbn (talkcontribs) 15:12, 8 August 2014 (UTC)

If Islam is correct, he was an Islamic prophet. Not that I think it was or that he actually wrote the Torah (and our article I hope doesn't claim he did). When were the Jewish and Christian religions invented? You sure you want to use that word? Dougweller (talk) 16:30, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
Yes I'm sure I want to use that word. Invented by humans or by God, Islam did not exist in 1400 BC any more than Mormonism existed in 700 AD or Judaism existed in 10,000 BC. And we Doug, do not exist in a politically correct imbecilic 3rd grade 1980s multicultural awareness class. We are a ruthlessly objective encyclopedia. Christianity does have a definite historical date when it began, in the 1st century AD when the Galilean rabbi Jesus of Nazareth was supposedly executed and his students wrote the New Testament and started Christianity. Judaism also has a date of origin, it claims to have began in the 14th century BC when Jehovah gave the Torah to Moses at mount Sinai, and according to archeology the first Israelite settlements pop up in 1200 BC in the form of 140 hill top camps in the mountains of Judea and Samaria. Islam began in the 7th century AD when Muhammad claimed to have had a revelation from the angel Gabriel who commanded him to 'iqra' or recite and he started to recite the Qur'an. Mormanism began in the 19th century when Joseph Smith claimed to have found gold plates buried in upstate New York and transcribed them into the Book of Mormon. These are all historically verifiable events that herald the beginning, or from an academic standpoint the invention, of these religious traditions. It is a historical fact that Moses, in his lifetime, was not a Muslim prophet because the religion of Islam did not exist at that time. Should it be included in the opening sentence that he was a Christian prophet in the New Testament? Why does it not say that Moses is a prophet in the New Testament and the Book of Mormon and Druze scripture and in Bahai scripture? Why just the Qur'an? There are more Christians in the world than Muslims so why not include the New Testament as well? He was not a Muslim prophet during his lifetime anymore than he was a Christian one. If you really want to be egalitarian why are you just including the Qur'an in the opening sentence? Why are you not including every single religious text Moses is ever mentioned as a prophet in including the Book of Mormon? The Qur'an has no more of an authentic claim over the historical personhood of Moses than the Book of Mormon does, I'm sorry. In addition to this the article is about the Hebrew prophet Moses, an article about the Muslim prophet Musa already exists under the title "Moses in Islam". So I reiterate my request to have the statement about the Qur'an removed from the opening sentence.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Newmancbn (talkcontribs) 20:28, 8 August 2014 (UTC)
Agree - and I took it out. PiCo (talk) 10:00, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Thank you I really appreciate it, the article looks so much better and far less stupid now.

Revisions

This is a sensitive article, so I'll explain what I'm doing.

I've divided the Biblical Narrative section in two, one part on Moses' role as deliverer of Israel the other on his role as lawgiver. This is simply because it makes it easier to talk about them this way - in the narrative, deliverance and law are mixed together, and for an analytic article it works better to treat them apart, otherwise you keep switching back and forth.

I've drastically cut back the summary of the narrative. This is because we can't mention every little detail, and need to give the broad outline. There's room in the See Also section for links to things like the manna etc.

I want to emphasise that I'm not hostile to religion or to Judaism or the bible, I just want to write an article that explains clearly to people just why Moses is significant in Judaism. He isn't terribly significant in Christianity and Islam, though he's there.

Anyway, if anyone wants to correct or even revert what I've done, go ahead, but please come here and discuss why. PiCo (talk) 04:35, 12 August 2014 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 30 October 2014

please delete Gjerman, Corey. Moses: The Father I Never Knew. Portland: Biblical Fantasticals, 2007. ISBN 978-1-4241-7113-2. because it is hoax link 209.152.44.30 (talk) 21:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)

Done Can't find this book anywhere, by ISBN, by title, publisher, or author. Thanks for catching that Cannolis (talk) 23:29, 30 October 2014 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 28 November 2014

xternal evidence has been claimed to exist, confirming Moses� historicity and the essentials of his religious outlook.7 Egyptian sources give a lot of information on a character whose career is contemporary with and entirely similar to that of Moses: the Egyptian dignitary Beya. The name already points to the Semitic Yahwist tradition: Be-Yah means �on/by/in Yah�, as in �by Yah (I swear)� or �in Yah (I trust)�. He also had a long Egyptian name of which �moses� (child of) was a part, as was very common in Egyptian names. So, it is possible that Moshe/Moses was a Hebraized abbreviation of the Egyptian name of this Beya.

This dignitary Beya was a very powerful man at the Egyptian court, and several depictions of him have been preserved. It is striking that he apparently refused to be depicted as bowing before any of the Egyptian gods. He disappears from the Egyptian sources after the unsuccessful palace revolution of the regent princess Tausret against the legitimate young king Siptah. Probably he was part of the conspiracy, and had to flee after its failure. As he is called �the Syrian� in one source, he may have joined hands with the numerous Semitic immigrant community (which may have been held guilty, rightly or wrongly, for the political trouble, just like the Hyksos earlier), and led it into exodus. See Johannes C. De Moor: The Rise of Yahwism, ch.4.6.  Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.162.114.33 (talk) 23:58, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

96.229.105.21 (talk) 21:07, 28 November 2014 (UTC) Moses was born in Egypt

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. That's what the article says, yes. :) — {{U|Technical 13}} (etc) 21:20, 28 November 2014 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 11 March 2015

Please change "an ark" to "a basket" because Moses was placed in a basket made of papyrus reeds; he was not placed in an "ark" like unto Noah (Genesis). Exodus 2:3 NLT

Mattryantroiano (talk) 15:53, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. — {{U|Technical 13}} (etc) 21:46, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Queen Bithia

I changed the identification from Pharaoh's sister to his daughter and clarified that this identification came from the Midrash, not the Book of Exodus iteself.

If this is in any way incorrect, please feel free to change it. But if you do, I would ask you to please try to separate out facts attributable to the Torah, since this is Scriptural for Christians, and facts attributable to sources outside the Torah. Apollo (talk) 17:25, 23 March 2015 (UTC)

Re: Moses Identified as Crown Prince Tuthmosis

Authors Graham Phillips [1] and Riaan Booysen [2] have proposed, however, that Moses and Crown Prince Tuthmosis, the heir-to-the-throne of Amenhotep III, must have been the same person. Phillips concludes that the only set of circumstances in Egyptian history that uniquely matches that of Moses is the mysterious disappearance of Crown Prince Tuthmosis. Booysen argues that not only does Manetho link Amenhotep III to the Exodus (Moses as the priest Osarseph had served under Amenhotep who had a sacred scribe called Amenhotep, the son of Papis / Hapu) [3], but that Artapanus’ account of Moses being involved in the first burial of the Apis bull [4],

“and Chenephres (the pharaoh of the Exodus) having given the name Apis to a bull, commanded the troops to found a temple for him, and bade them bring and bury there the animals which had been consecrated by Moses,”

unambiguously confirms Moses’ identity as Tuthmosis. Crown Prince Tuthmosis, officiating as the High Priest of Ptah in Memphis, had assisted his father during the first burial of the Apis bull in the Serapeum at Saqqara [5]. Booysen notes that while Manetho furthermore asserts that Moses had sent messengers to the rulers of Jerusalem, summoning them to join him in his war against Egypt, the El Arish Shrine text states that it was the king’s son who had sent these messengers [6] and The Story of Joseph and Asenath records that it was the king’s eldest son, i.e. his heir-to-the-throne, who had sent the messengers to the Israelites [7]. All three accounts record that the Israelites had complied and invaded Egypt, and Moses is therefore linked to Crown Prince Tuthmosis by three independent accounts of the same event.

1. Phillips, Graham (1998). Act of God, Pan Books, ISBN 0 330 35206 7. 2. Booysen, Riaan (2013). Thera and the Exodus, O-Books, ISBN 978 1 78099 449 9. 3. Josephus, Against Apion 1.26 (238-242, 250). 4. E.H. Gifford (1903), Eusebius of Caesarea - Praeparatio Evangelica, 9.27. 5. O’Connor, David and Cline, Eric H. (eds), Amenhotep III – Perspectives On His Reign, ISBN 0-472-08833-5, p. 8. 6. Francis Llewellyn Griffith and Édouard Naville, The Mound of the Jew and the City of Onias, London: Kegan Paul, Trentch, Trubner & Co., 1887, pp. 71-73. 7. Cook, David and H. F. D. Sparks (ed.), “Joseph and Aseneth (XXIII-XXIV)”, The Apocryphal Old Testament, Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1984, pp. 473-503.


QUESTION: Would it be allowable to include this passage under Moses, Historicity?Saddeleur (talk) 13:09, 24 March 2015 (UTC)

See WP:FRINGE. Editor2020, Talk 04:02, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Era

After I added a BC tag to indicate that the "7th-century" descriptor of the Kingdom of Judah mentioned in the Historicity section of the article was in BC/BCE not AD/CE, Dougweller left a message on my talk page which brought to my attention the inconsistency of the style that was used in the article, which had used both AD/BC and CE/BCE styles at the same time. According to Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Dates and numbers#Era style, an article should consistently use only one of these, not both, except in quotations. Editor2020 cited the aforementioned guideline in enforcing this consistency by changing instances of the AD/BC notation to CE/BCE. However, the same guideline also states (as Dougweller mentioned on my talk page) that the established era style should not be changed without good reason and consensus. The first revision of the article used the AD/BC style consistently; a search of the talk page archives reveal no discussion suggesting changing this to the CE/BCE style, and a quick check of revisions of the article through each of the years since its creation point to no definite changeover from AD/BC to CE/BCE (though the latter was introduced into the article at some point). So by this "established era style" clause, the article should use the AD/BC style "unless there are reasons specific to its content" to use the CE/BCE style. I hope that the editors involved in this matter will have been pinged and will participate in this discussion. --Joshua Issac (talk) 19:55, 25 May 2015 (UTC)

The article was completely changed to BCE, with BC entering again (not a change, an addition) in April 2010. Since that time it has remained mainly BCE with a couple of additions of new text with the BC usage. December 2008, 3 uses of BC, 12 of BCE. And they were added sometime between August 2008 and December 2008, as in August there were no mentions of BC, just the 12 BCE edits. August 2007, a year earlier, still just BCE. July 2007 - it was all BCE but changed to BCE but with the edit summary "restoring neutral BCE/CE notation (was switched to Christ-centric BC/AD a few months ago". BCE in October 2006, July The change seems to have taken place March 30th 2006, and it's been more or less stable as predominantly BCE since, with one change back to BC but that only lasted a few months. There have also been a few BC additions (as opposed to changes in nomenclature. So no, the established style has not been BC but BCE. We don't go by the first edit. Doug Weller (talk) 11:47, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

Mainstream and not mainstream

The article starts by saying that : "Apart from a few scattered references elsewhere in the Jewish scriptures, all that is known about Moses comes from the books of Exodus, Leviticus, Numbers and Deuteronomy.[19] The majority of scholars date these four books to the Persian period, 538-332 BCE.[20]"

Where the source is someone - Jean-Louis Ska - saying that this is the majority opinion, but without any proof.

And then:

"The tradition of Moses as a lawgiver and culture hero of the Israelites can be traced to the Deuteronomist source, corresponding to the 7th-century BCE Kingdom of Judah. Moses is a central figure in the Deuteronomist account of the origins of the Israelites, cast in a literary style of elegant flashbacks told by Moses. The mainstream view is that the Deuteronomist relies on earlier material that may date to the United Monarchy, so that the biblical narrative would be based on traditions that can be traced roughly to the 10th century BCE, or about four centuries after the supposed lifetime of Moses."

There is a contradiction. The mainstream is either that the Deuteronomy was written on the 7th century BCE from sources going back to the 10th century or during the Persian period.

Furthermore, the article takes the "documentary hypothesis" - here the existence of a "Deuteronomist source" - as fact, which is not. In the last decades a throng of evidence as accumulated disproving the idea of different documents as sources of the Pentateuch and the idea that the books were written by a single author or group of authors is gaining credibility.

And something else: "Some scholars, like Kenneth Kitchen and Frank Yurko suggest that there may be a historical core beneath the Exodus and Sinai traditions, even if the biblical narrative dramatizes by portraying as a single event what was more likely a gradual process of migration and conquest."

This is not Kenneth Kitchen position at all ! He supports the reliability of the Biblical text and that the events unfolded more or less as described in the Bible. He does not suggest there may be a historical core beneath the traditions, but that the books were written at the time that they say they were written and reflect actual events. The dramatization is just in style and in the narrative forms of the time, not in the events themselves.

93.172.25.208 (talk) 09:00, 12 June 2015 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit suggestions

A couple minor suggestions related to the Film and Television section: for balance we should name the actor who played Moses in the 2006 version of The Ten Commandments (Dougray Scott) - and is it officially considered a remake of the 1956 film? The other change I'd suggest is keeping in mind that not everyone may be familiar with the name or the film, it should perhaps be noted that Mel Brooks' performance in History of the World Part I is comedic in nature (as opposed to all the others listed who performed the role seriously). 68.146.52.234 (talk) 03:09, 6 September 2015 (UTC)

History of the World Part I noted as comedy. BobKilcoyne (talk) 03:50, 6 September 2015 (UTC)

Correct the spelling of 'avoid' in 'living in scattered hamlets and **avoding** the husbandry of pigs' in the Historicity section.  Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.244.92.71 (talk) 22:46, 26 September 2015 (UTC)

Merger Proposal

I propose merging Criticism of Moses with Moses creating a single NPOV article on the topic. the Criticism of moses is very small and has only 2 sections besides references

  • Section 1- some criticism it's only 347 words, the current criticism is over 100 words so it wouldn't be that much bigger by including this criticism in the criticism section.
  • Section 2- Some mistakes of moses - is a book about moses, this can easily go in the "Moses in modern literature" section of the "moses" article.

The result of this merge will be a better article and an article that is less likely to give undue weight to any subject about moses. any help, suggestions, or feedback is not only welcome but of course appreciated. Bryce Carmony (talk) 02:02, 14 March 2015 (UTC)

Strong Support, agree with everything you said.Gonzales John (talk) 03:28, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Done BobKilcoyne (talk) 05:15, 27 September 2015 (UTC)

edit request on 12 November 2015

the Israelite wander 40 years in the wilderness not desert  Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.122.155.35 (talk) 17:16, 12 November 2015 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 22 December 2015

I wish to change BCE TO BC 2602:304:B168:1F30:707E:71CD:2AD:DC2B (talk) 04:53, 22 December 2015 (UTC)

  • Not done: Once a style has been established there must be good reason to change it. You have not provided that reason. See WP:BCE for more information. --Stabila711 (talk) 05:03, 22 December 2015 (UTC)

Moses was schooled in Egyptian religion and their sacred Mysteries

Moses as Prince of Egypt was well schooled in Egyptian religion and their sacred Mysteries or Egyptian Mysteries. As a youth, he learned mathematics/numerology, their writing of hieroglyphics, astronomy/astrology, and Egyptian history. The Torah is commonly referred to as the Five Books of Moses. Kabbalah teaches that Moses taught the sacred Mysteries to just a few including Aaron and Joshua, and that these mystic Hebrew teachings have been passed on through the centuries to compose the core of the Zohar and Kabbalah. 2601:589:4705:C7C0:1C96:2508:525A:2F69 (talk) 15:49, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

"Folk etymology"

The article gave several speculative theories about the etymology of "Moshe" from various sources, and then, as if as an afterthought, attributed the derivation from the Hebrew verb limshot to a "folk etymology in the Jewish tradition"! That's ridiculous and dishonest; the derivation from limshot is not a folk etymology, it's explicit in the text! Yes, there are other theories, and it's proper to cite them, but only after that one, which should be properly attributed to the text itself, not to some tertiary source. I made this change, and someone reverted it saying that "one writes according to relevant sources". Of course one does, but what source could be more relevant than the Biblical text itself? --GertBySea (talk) 03:53, 25 December 2015 (UTC)

The Bible is not a reliable source for facts. It is a primary text whose narratives can be quoted as such, but when it comes to interpretative matters, we are obliged to refer to what any specific episode or text states in terms of the scholarly secondary literature. You are engaging systematically in a WP:OR challenge to what scholarly works by competent area specialists (Egyptologists, philologists etc.,) state, and therefore, if you persist in doing so in defiance of Wikipedia's editing protocols, your edits will be automatically reverted as disruptive.Nishidani (talk) 10:44, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
You can't claim at the same time that Moses is a fictional character invented by the Bible and then claim that the Bible is not a source for explaining the etymology of the name. I don't really understand where is the problem here. The Bible gives us a meaning for the name. Since Moses is a Bible character known only from the Bible, this should be the first explanation. Then, we can add other explanations from experts. That's just common sense and logic. Benjil (talk) 12:17, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
I don't claim. I write according to what scholarship says. If you don't understand the problem, it's because there is no problem. Both comments above are pointless except to underline an unfamiliarity with the distinction between ancient texts and secondary scholarship. Let me illustrate by using your claim of a contradiction and restating what you claim I said re Moses, as if it dealt with Odysseus, another fictional person.
'Odysseus is a fictional character invented by Homer and Homer's Odyssey is not a source for explaining the etymology of the name.'
No one would blink at that, except . . .
Just as 'Moses/mashah' is a kind of figura etymologica used by the writers to explain a name whose origins they did not know, so too is 'Odysseus/odussamenos'(Ὀδυσεὺς/ὀδυσσάμενος at Od.xix.406ff.). This is very frequent in ancient literature. Just as modern scholarship doesn't accept the Biblical etymology for Moses, so classical scholarship has generally disabused itself of the idea, stated by Autolykos, that Odysseus be named 'child of hate/woe' because his grandfather was in wrathful odds with the world.
γαμβρὸς ἐμὸς θυγάτηρ τε, τίθεσθ᾽ ὄνομ᾽ ὅττι κεν εἴπω:
πολλοῖσιν γὰρ ἐγώ γε τόδ᾽ ἱκάνω,
ἀνδράσιν ἠδὲ γυναιξὶν ἀνὰ χθόνα πουλυβότειραν:
τῷ δ᾽ ὄνομ᾽ ἔστω ἐπώνυμον:
The ancient Jewish readers of the Bible were quite aware, as we can see from Philo of Alexandria and Josephus, who both proposed an Egyptian etymology, that the Torah wordplay wouldn't wash. In doing so, they dismissed the folk etymology given in the Tanakh, realizing that that the derivation from the verb 'to draw from' was an infra-Hebrew folk etymology, a kind of Figura etymologica as ancient rhetoric classified such games, that had no value. How could an Egyptian-speaking princess in 1,500 BC be sufficiently fluent in a language that was only attested in that form several hundred years alter, to give Moses a name that would make sense a millennium later? In medieval times, once direct and living contact with antiquity was lost, all sorts of fantastic speculations developed.Nishidani (talk) 18:12, 25 December 2015 (UTC)

The Bible IS a reliable source for facts especially when there is no other documentation available. However, let's keep in mind the adage of, "It's the victors who write the history." 2601:589:4705:C7C0:1C96:2508:525A:2F69 (talk) 15:54, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Note this IP is the person writing the section below about Moses Prince of Egypt. Doug Weller talk 17:20, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 10 March 2016

In section 1 (Name), paragraph 3, sentence 2, please add the word 'to' after the word 'attempt' in 'an attempt cancel out'. Thank you. Mahde darmo (talk) 01:12, 10 March 2016 (UTC) Mahde darmo (talk) 01:12, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Done EvergreenFir (talk) Please {{re}} 02:57, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Edit request: Y chromosomal dating of Moses

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