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The authors of this article deem it appropriate to track our decisions in a more formal manner. We've gathered and inserted Ohlone book reviews and additional information to this date (5 October 2006 (UTC)). Other authors/editors are encouraged to continue making notes and archiving them as needed. However, for clarity and efficiency to further editors, authors and readers please preserve the following archives:

Lastly, please use the blank headers below, as needed.

Currently Open Side bar conversations :

(archived prior to April)

Karkin

Karkin page is the most stubby of the subgroups. If anyone feels like expanding. Goldenrowley 23:29, 2 April 2007 (UTC)

Nomination

Ok I did a final tidy this week, then nominated it as a good article. Goldenrowley 20:51, 5 April 2007 (UTC)

GA Review

This article looks like a GA to me, the references are quite well done, no image problems that I see, it's by and large well written and orderly, and there's only one thing that seems a bit off, "This Spanish encroachment into the region disrupted and undermined the Ohlone social structures and way of life.", unless i'm reading the article wrong, it doesn't seem to demonstrate whhy the Ohlone social structures were undermined, while I surmise the large amounts of death caused by the missions couldn't of helped their culture, the article doesn't seem to demonstrate the cultural decline here much. Also, think about expanding the lead if possible, I don't see any major problems with its scope, but with the number of different sections, it might be possible to expand it a bit better (without going overboard), and it may come up in a PR or FAC, either of which I recommend this article have next. Homestarmy 19:16, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Thank you Homestarmy. I speak for several hard workers in thanking you for your review and helpful comments and good article approval! Your comments are very helpful Goldenrowley 20:48, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Decimation

Does the use of this word in the opening paragraph refer to reduction by one tenth (as it properly should), or reduction to one tenth, as it often mistakenly does? Since the answer is seldom immediately obvious without tedious and irrelevant explanations, I suggest that this word be avoided.

Paul Magnussen (talk) 19:48, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

The word is used in accordance with the meaning decimate 4(b) in the Oxford English Dictionary: "To destroy or remove a large proportion of; to subject to severe loss, slaughter, or mortality." Though, I agree heartily that this word is ambiguous and often misunderstood. Do you have a suggestion for a better word? SaltyBoatr (talk) 20:36, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

GA Sweeps Review: On Hold

As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. I'm specifically going over all of the "Culture and Society" articles. I believe the article currently meets the majority of the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. However, in reviewing the article, I have found there are some issues that need to be addressed. I have made minor corrections and have included several points below that need to be addressed for the article to remain a GA. Please address them within seven days and the article will maintain its GA status. If progress is being made and issues are addressed, the article will remain listed as a Good article. Otherwise, it may be delisted. If improved after it has been delisted, it may be nominated at WP:GAN. To keep tabs on your progress so far, either strike through the completed tasks or put checks next to them.

Needs inline citations:

  1. Sources should be added for the claims in the first paragraph of "Population".
  2. "The population after 1900 finally stabilized. There are at least 1,400 on tribal membership rolls by year 2005."

Other issues:

  1. To better summarize the article, the lead needs to be expanded to three or four paragraphs. See WP:LEAD for guidelines.
  2. ""Language group designations are spelled as commonly found in English language publications... however many tribal, village and personal names which are not commonly found in literature present a problem. They were written by Spanish settlers who were trying to capture the sounds of languages foreign to them." Who said this quote? Also, a brief introduction would be beneficial.

This article covers the topic well and if the above issues are addressed, I believe the article can remain a GA. I will leave the article on hold for seven days, but if progress is being made and an extension is needed, one may be given. I will leave messages on the talk pages of the main contributors to the article along with the related WikiProjects so that the workload can be shared. If you have any questions, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 05:31, 25 June 2008 (UTC)

GA Sweeps Review: Failed

Unfortunately, since the issues I raised were not addressed, I have regrettably delisted the article according to the requirements of the GA criteria. If the issues are fixed, consider renominating the article at WP:GAN. With a little work, it should have no problems getting back up to GA status. If you disagree with this review, you can seek an alternate opinion at Good article reassessment. If you have any questions let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have updated the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 05:53, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Hi Nehrams I did see and want to address your GA concerns I have just been very distracted lately with personal matters. The only issue that may need some thought and writing is expanding the introduction (if the editors agree that's important. I do not really see long introductions as serving much purpose so have difaculty adding to the intro if that's my belief). Thank you. Goldenrowley (talk) 01:23, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
I have decided to enter the page for a RE-assessment. I do not think a longer introduction is in the interest of the article, its a long enough article as it stands. The only other item was minor considering all the citations already here one sentence is ^two sentences are^ not cited. ^Everything was cited to cut down on footnotes everywhere, we put most footnotes at the end of each paragraph about the entire paragraphs.^ Goldenrowley (talk) 04:33, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Introduction Rewrite

Notes on rewrite of introduction, and if it should occur. meatclerk (talk) 19:34, 15 July 2008 (UTC)

  • It might be noted early on how the source came about. For instance, we do not note that many early records come from travel journals and personal diaries. We do mention archǣlogy directly, but that seems to be the case. Do quote some sources directly, but in many places its not clear to the casual reader who the person is. For example:
    • (Culture, para 4)In fact, there were so many sea lions that to Crespi it "looked like a pavement" to the incoming Spanish

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  • The opening section is missing historical references past 1833. The material exists below.
  • (Culture, para 1) some internecine conflict. Where does this come from?
  • (Culture, para 2) grass seeds and berries, while other vegetation, hunted and trapped This part makes no sense to me.
  • Missing in (Culture, para 6) is that men would cover themselves in mud on cold days.
  • Technical Error Junípero Serra died in 1784, so he could not help build all the mission. In fact, Father Lassen helped build the bulk of all the missions. At present, I cannot find a refernce for him, but will later.

-- meatclerk (talk) 17:34, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

  • The transisition of administration is discussed perpherially. That is the societal rule, from native rule, to Spanish rule, to Mexican, to Bear Flag, to USA, should be outlined better.
  • Somehow, it was cutout the answer to the question as to: why something are ambiguous. IN DEED, this is why we should discusss (if shortly) the sources.

-- meatclerk (talk) 22:37, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

These are great observations thanks for taking time to look for elements to improve. Goldenrowley (talk) 16:17, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

Marin County Ohlones

What about the thousand-some "Californian Indian" residents living in the Point Reyes area, Marin County, California north of San Francisco? For many decades, the self-claimed Marin County Ohlones fought for state and federal recognition of themselves are descendants of the Ohlones (Karkins) and other North Coast Indians survived the Spanish colonial period of the 18th-early 19th centuries. I found no mention of the Marin County Ohlone in the article, but Marin County was thought to been visited by Ohlones from their historic range in present day San Mateo and Contra Costa-Alameda counties. +71.102.2.206 (talk) 05:12, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Are you sure you're not thinking of the Coast Miwok?I've never heard of Ohlones in Marin but I beleive the Miwok are related linguistically. Goldenrowley (talk) 05:33, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
On second thought It's entirely possible a tribe of Karkin went to Marin and were at the Mission. If you have sources please provide sources. Goldenrowley (talk) 05:36, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Can I Remove Frank Stanger as Source for Pre-Hispanic Times?

Dear Editors of Ohlone article: I tried to improve the History section on the fly last night and tonight, then gummed it up, including accidentally trampling inside the quotation marks on a Frank Stanger quote. (Don't know what got into me.) But I just undid all those changes I made. It is back to pre-Middle Fork. But I think the section is a mess. Frank Stanger, as a historian, is an inappropriate person to cite on SF Bay prehistory; besides that he got part of it wrong, even for 1968, if he said shell mounds date to 4000 BC (I don't have his article).

Can I get support for changing the sources for Early-Middle-Late Horizons to Beardsley 1948, Elsasser 1978, and Moratto 1984? Alternatively, I will leave Stanger in as "one alternative view" but I have no idea where he got that date, unless it was from Gifford's 1916 "shell mound volume" article that is useful only for the history of archaeological inquiry.Middle Fork (talk) 05:41, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't know them but am not a historian. I would support adding alternative, expert views on dating. We once went over what books we thought were reputable, you can check the archives of this talk page to see if we discussed Stanger... I think we did. I suggest (as you are new) you use your sandbox to for paragraph drafts first, to avoid "accidental trampling" as you call it ("Middle fork/sandbox") Goldenrowley (talk) 07:26, 16 May 2009 (UTC)

Starting to Expand and Restructure Introduction

To Dedicated Ohlone Page Editors. I have today made some important changes in the introduction to the article. I believe they are factually correct, but I have not inserted citations yet. I have so many citations that I do not know where to start, especially given that I will later add them in places below the introduction. One of my important changes is imbedded in the new text, that "Costanoan" is still considered the preferred alternative to "Ohlone" by most linguists. The other, the removal of "Muwekma" as an alternative to Costanoan or Ohlone, is not explained in its absence. Please be assured that the Muwekma Ohlone themselves would never contend that "Muwekma" is applied to any larger group than the combined "Ramaytush, Tamyen, Chochenyo" of the San Francisco Bay Area. None of the Rumsen or Mutsun descendents are, or consider themselves to be, Muwekma. And also, some Mutsun and Rumsen descendents currently bitterly dislike the cover-term Ohlone, instead proudly call themselves Costanoan Indians. In coming weeks, I will be adding citations and text in all other areas of this article, and hope that other editors will look up the citations before you revert me. By the end of the year, I think you will agree that my additions will strengthen the article and help achieve the certification from Wikipedia for which Goldenrowley has applied.Middle Fork (talk) 16:40, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Hi Middle fork. I appreciate help with the intro and (by the way) I think it qualifies as "good article" already, for a long time, and hope that status is given back to the article now that I've fixed most of the things that delisted it. Several comments to you: Muwekma is used by the Muwekma tribe website and it's a gained popular usage (as opposed to Linguist's usage), so can you reinsert them in the intro, in that respect? Perhaps it just needs to clarify they're the modern name for the North Bay subgroup. Onto the next matter, you wondered where to put new citations. Look at this page's citation style -- the editors decided to put the footnotes for each paragraph mostly at the end of each paragraph (on anything in the paragraph) although for "good article" status I embedded a few citations last night to backup some numbers, and I do beleive it's a good idea to embed them when it's a "hot button" like population.Goldenrowley (talk) 22:03, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Hey, Goldenrowley. I am glad you accepted most of my changes. Note that copy-editor Maleus (sp?) really went through it and made some text much more straightforward. I also have read some of your earlier discussion, and know that you guys have really struggled with the term Muwekma. But I really do not believe it is appropriate in an introductory discussion on the overall language group name. If you start talking about Muwekma as a language name in the introduction, something Jack Forbes proposed, then you are almost obliged to discuss its different use as a modern cultural/political group name right there in the introduction, and that brings up the word Amah, which is in the same tradition. I have added a new footnote in the Language section which discusses the introduction of the word Muwekma in the Forbes classification, and its subsequent rejection. Do what you want, including revert. I will live with it. Gotta go focus elsewhere for awhile.Middle Fork (talk) 15:38, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

I like how you expanded the intro. I like how you mentioned Muwekma a little lower down in the intro with a good desctiption. I also like the stylistic edits by Malleus Fatuorum, who caught some grammatical and typographical things. Thanks to both. Goldenrowley (talk) 22:07, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Here is a problem statement about how Ohlone group names are spelled

Sophisticated Non-Food Uses of Plants

Population notes

Population

Removed dubious claims about Chechenyo and Emeryville Shellmound

Assessment comment

Population, culture, and Spanish missions

Popularity is Subjective

Sogorea Te and Santa Cruz sites

Ramaytush Ohlone didn't live in San Francisco

Muwekma Ohlone genetics

Citation Needed for "massacres against the Ohlone people"

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