Talk:One Direction/Archive 2
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Members Page Pictures
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I think that their individual pictures in the 'members' section should be changed to clearer, more headshot like, pictures. In Harry's picture the mic blocks his face, Liam and Zayn's are only half of a face, Louis' is a bit far away, and Niall's should be changed to match the change of the other boys' pictures. Trenton Davis 23:32, 12 July 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Trentond (talk • contribs)
These are the images Wikipedia maintains of One Direction select and suggest a few which you think is better. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:11, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
Edit request 14 July 2012
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OH MY GOD!!!!!! You spelled Zayn's middle name wrong!!! It's not Javadd!!!!!!!!! It's Jawaad!!! You should check before you publish this and giving people the wrong information and making even more directionators!!!!! Seriously!!!! I'm disappointed in this site!!!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.188.58.95 (talk) 08:38, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
- Wikipedia has a source from UK archive not social media websites (which is the only thing you have right?, probably a tumblr message) sick and tired of this constant outcry when they present no source. Wasting my time have a nice day AdabowtheSecond (talk) 15:38, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
- I feel the need to point out that when you Google "Zayn Javaad Malik", "Javaad" is underlined with a red line and it says "Did you mean Zayn Jawaad Malik?" Unreal7 (talk) 20:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
- I just did I the same thing no such result and google just presents what most people are looking for that doesn't mean its true and without a source it still has no reason to be replaced, and according to UK archive it "Javadd" not "Javaad".AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:40, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- Could we find the tweet Zayn made saying officially what his middle name was and use it as a source somewhere in the article. It's argued about so much we should put it to rest. Trenton Davis (talk) 03:44, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- I don't even think that would considered as a source however I think its best to remove the middle names until we have better source, although I think the source is enough it states his mothers maiden name and that he was born yorkshire and since he is from Bradford which is in Yorkshire it makes sense AdabowtheSecond (talk) 12:57, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- However Davis do you still have that tweet do you know when he tweeted it maybe you can trace it?? AdabowtheSecond (talk) 15:27, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- I don't even think that would considered as a source however I think its best to remove the middle names until we have better source, although I think the source is enough it states his mothers maiden name and that he was born yorkshire and since he is from Bradford which is in Yorkshire it makes sense AdabowtheSecond (talk) 12:57, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- Could we find the tweet Zayn made saying officially what his middle name was and use it as a source somewhere in the article. It's argued about so much we should put it to rest. Trenton Davis (talk) 03:44, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- I just did I the same thing no such result and google just presents what most people are looking for that doesn't mean its true and without a source it still has no reason to be replaced, and according to UK archive it "Javadd" not "Javaad".AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:40, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- I feel the need to point out that when you Google "Zayn Javaad Malik", "Javaad" is underlined with a red line and it says "Did you mean Zayn Jawaad Malik?" Unreal7 (talk) 20:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
- Google seems to come up with more articles for Zayn Jawaad Malik, than Zayn Javaad. However, various websites through Bing come up with both middle names. Wiki Answers comes up with Jawaad.--Mjs1991 (talk) 02:55, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
- All search tools replicate what most people are looking for doesn't mean that its true AdabowtheSecond (talk) 20:34, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
- A primary source is generally accepted for things like age and name; the tweet should be fine, providing it's verified that the person in question does in fact own the account. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 143.92.1.32 (talk) 01:05, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
- Per WP:ABOUTSELF, the primary source is completely appropriate. -- MST☆R (Chat Me!) 01:09, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
- A primary source is generally accepted for things like age and name; the tweet should be fine, providing it's verified that the person in question does in fact own the account. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 143.92.1.32 (talk) 01:05, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
- All search tools replicate what most people are looking for doesn't mean that its true AdabowtheSecond (talk) 20:34, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
- Google seems to come up with more articles for Zayn Jawaad Malik, than Zayn Javaad. However, various websites through Bing come up with both middle names. Wiki Answers comes up with Jawaad.--Mjs1991 (talk) 02:55, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
Styling of dates
Number of article views
I thought it was worth noting that over the past few months this article has been consistently getting 60,000+ views per day. By my reckoning that puts it well inside the top 20 most viewed articles in the whole of Wikipedia. By comparison Google gets around 35,000 views per day and is in the top 25.Rangoon11 (talk) 00:58, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
- I am aware of the insane number of hits the article has received over the last 5 months and am very proud and happy that I basically/solely wrote the most of it. I already posted a message of this a month ago on this talk an editor removed it due it according to him/her violated WP:NOTAFORUM the feeling that millions of people have been reading what I wrote is kind of nice. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 14:12, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
- where can you view top 25 articles? I only know this one http://toolserver.org/~johang/wikitrends/english-most-visited-this-month.html but it only list the top 10.--Krystaleen 02:20, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
Edit request on 26 July 2012
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please change harry edward styles to harold edward milward styles Igoesrawr2 (talk) 02:30, 26 July 2012 (UTC) Thank you Lots of love and respect MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
Why the odd picture size?
I've noticed it since a while back, the picture size would often be at weird 127px or 166px, why is this? If you're trying to get the pics to properly line up with the text and such, it's only going to look good on your own monitor, because different monitor resolution=different layout. Just wondering because it seems weird to me.--Krystaleen 04:06, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Everything looks fine and fits on my computer although due to everyone having a different size screen it may differ. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:29, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Exactly. That was my point. It might even look odd on other monitors.--Krystaleen 03:32, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
Edit request on 6 August 2012
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Please can I edit this page as i know exclusive information about the band's future tours!!! CrazyCheese14 (talk) 10:44, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
- Just put the info here and if it's verifiable, it will be added to the page for you.--Krystaleen 11:21, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
- Closing request because if requesting user knows 'exclusive information' it can't be verified. You can change the template from yes to no once sources are supplied. FloBo A boat that can float! (watch me float!) 12:30, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
Niall Horan : Olympics 2012
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Please write in Niall Horan's bio that at the London 2012 Summer Olympics Closing Ceremony, he was the only non-Biritish performer. Gurrrrrl12345 (talk) 23:05, 12 August 2012 (UTC) Julissa
- Do you have a source (link) for it AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:40, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Actually Great Britain includes England, Scotland, Wales, and IRELAND. So Niall is from Britain. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.186.194.87 (talk) 23:43, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
- ??? I just can't Niall is from the Republic of Ireland not Northern Ireland -- big difference AdabowtheSecond (talk) 23:50, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
- Actually Great Britain does not include Ireland, its includes Scotland, England and Wales..so just get it right from now on, we aint British Handsopened (talk) 15:33, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
- Handsopened and AdabowtheSecond are the most correct, politically. Following the Acts of Union 1800, in 1801 Ireland oficially became a part of the United Kingdom. In 1919, a War of Independence broke out, which resulted in partition. Currently, the United Kindgdom is England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland. The people of those countries hold a British passport and are British. – Plarem (User talk) 14:39, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- Actually Great Britain does not include Ireland, its includes Scotland, England and Wales..so just get it right from now on, we aint British Handsopened (talk) 15:33, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
- ??? I just can't Niall is from the Republic of Ireland not Northern Ireland -- big difference AdabowtheSecond (talk) 23:50, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
Highest sales for a number two album and the DVD setting a U.S. chart record
I don't think these are necessary to be included in this article. DVD setting a US chart record for beating an album isn't something that is usually noted, because it's two different things. Who really keep track of which DVD beat an album sales record? Besides, it's already in the DVD article. And I don't know who keeps track of "highest sales for a number two album" either. I mean wow, really? Highest sales for a number two album? Who actually compare sales of all number-two albums? And even if you want to mention it, it's best in the album article. The section is already too long as it is, and it's just not necessary. Mentioning that the album tops the chart in x countries and peaked in number 1 or 2 in US/UK chart is enough and it's really what matters the most anyway.--Krystaleen 15:52, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
- DVD; keeping track? its the first time in history I can add more refs about if you think its not notable enough.
- Album; I agree with you on that, thanks AdabowtheSecond (talk) 19:55, 17 August 2012 (UTC)
Edit request by consultingcriminalcaroline, 20 of August 2012
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Could someone please remove this line-They are often compared to south-korean boy band big bang, though big bang are far more talented, better looking and are far more sexier-from the first paragraph. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Consultingcriminalcaroline (talk • contribs) 02:12, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
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"On 12 August 2012, One Direction performed "What Makes You Beautiful" at the 2012 Summer Olympics closing ceremony in London, representing the handover to Rio de Janeiro as the host of the 2016 Summer Olympics.[57]" One Direction did not represent the handover of the host city of the Summer Olympics.
DoneYou seem to use the word 'after' a bit too much in the section 'Formation and record deal (2010–11)' (To see this, press 'F3' and type in the word 'after')
Done"He's really good friend with BBC's Host Nick Grimshaw and fellow singer Rita Ora." needs to be reworked.
Done"Before The X Factor, he had a numbers of jobs, including at a Vue cinema and at Doncaster Rovers football stadium as a waiter in their hospitality suites." needs to be reworked.
DoneAs per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.
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Will finish off in a few days. – Plarem (User talk) 19:15, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
Hellow, thanks for reassessing!, I can fix some things today, however, as I'm a student weekdays I do not edit Wikipedia, well at least I try not to, I will not be able to answer/correct queries till Friday 31 August 2012. Regards AdabowtheSecond (talk) 19:06, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
- Ok, that is fine, the article will be put on hold for a week after 31/8/2012 (DD/MM). Please tick off the things you have done on the list using <s> and the template {{done}} – Plarem (User talk) 13:13, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- I changed Olympics sentence, where are dates presented this way can't find any. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
(from references)Fixed all of them. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
The source says it has sold 5 million and according to the list itself 5 million is needed to be included. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
I meant the claim that they have one of the best selling singles in the world. – Plarem (User talk) 13:19, 27 August 2012 (UTC)Sorry, didn't see the article you wikilinked. – Plarem (User talk) 13:21, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
The images of Niall and Liam do now, it was due to IP vandals. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
Can I have the status on the splitting of the article? – Plarem (User talk) 13:20, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- I do not know about that. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:22, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
- I've closed the RfC now and the content stays in the article as per consensus. TheSpecialUser TSU 01:28, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- However, there is still a discussion going on regarding it. TheSpecialUser TSU 01:41, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
1a) is everything fine now, the only synonyms for after are subsequently, later, afterwards, afterward, later on, they all don't really fit. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 02:20, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
2a) I have filled in everything I guess, AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:22, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
3a) *Section: Up All Night, their breakthrough I figured is written in the most condensed way possible, a lot happened they set multiple world records, got a lawsuit, had a tour and a tremendously commercial successful DVD, performed at the olympics, got called a 50 million business, what do you suggest needs to be cut. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 02:20, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
- Section: 'Image' what do you suggest needs to be cut, image sections of Lady Gaga, Taylor Swift, Beyonce, all GA's are bigger I would say expand. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 02:28, 1 September 2012 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay, I lost internet connection... – Plarem (User talk) 12:31, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
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