Talk:One Direction/Archive 2

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Members Page Pictures

I think that their individual pictures in the 'members' section should be changed to clearer, more headshot like, pictures. In Harry's picture the mic blocks his face, Liam and Zayn's are only half of a face, Louis' is a bit far away, and Niall's should be changed to match the change of the other boys' pictures. Trenton Davis 23:32, 12 July 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Trentond (talkcontribs)

These are the images Wikipedia maintains of One Direction select and suggest a few which you think is better. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:11, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Edit request 14 July 2012

OH MY GOD!!!!!! You spelled Zayn's middle name wrong!!! It's not Javadd!!!!!!!!! It's Jawaad!!! You should check before you publish this and giving people the wrong information and making even more directionators!!!!! Seriously!!!! I'm disappointed in this site!!!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.188.58.95 (talk) 08:38, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia has a source from UK archive not social media websites (which is the only thing you have right?, probably a tumblr message) sick and tired of this constant outcry when they present no source. Wasting my time have a nice day AdabowtheSecond (talk) 15:38, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
I feel the need to point out that when you Google "Zayn Javaad Malik", "Javaad" is underlined with a red line and it says "Did you mean Zayn Jawaad Malik?" Unreal7 (talk) 20:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
I just did I the same thing no such result and google just presents what most people are looking for that doesn't mean its true and without a source it still has no reason to be replaced, and according to UK archive it "Javadd" not "Javaad".AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:40, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
Could we find the tweet Zayn made saying officially what his middle name was and use it as a source somewhere in the article. It's argued about so much we should put it to rest. Trenton Davis (talk) 03:44, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
I don't even think that would considered as a source however I think its best to remove the middle names until we have better source, although I think the source is enough it states his mothers maiden name and that he was born yorkshire and since he is from Bradford which is in Yorkshire it makes sense AdabowtheSecond (talk) 12:57, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
However Davis do you still have that tweet do you know when he tweeted it maybe you can trace it?? AdabowtheSecond (talk) 15:27, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
Google seems to come up with more articles for Zayn Jawaad Malik, than Zayn Javaad. However, various websites through Bing come up with both middle names. Wiki Answers comes up with Jawaad.--Mjs1991 (talk) 02:55, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
All search tools replicate what most people are looking for doesn't mean that its true AdabowtheSecond (talk) 20:34, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
A primary source is generally accepted for things like age and name; the tweet should be fine, providing it's verified that the person in question does in fact own the account. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 143.92.1.32 (talk) 01:05, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
Per WP:ABOUTSELF, the primary source is completely appropriate. -- MSTR (Chat Me!) 01:09, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Styling of dates

Number of article views

I thought it was worth noting that over the past few months this article has been consistently getting 60,000+ views per day. By my reckoning that puts it well inside the top 20 most viewed articles in the whole of Wikipedia. By comparison Google gets around 35,000 views per day and is in the top 25.Rangoon11 (talk) 00:58, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

I am aware of the insane number of hits the article has received over the last 5 months and am very proud and happy that I basically/solely wrote the most of it. I already posted a message of this a month ago on this talk an editor removed it due it according to him/her violated WP:NOTAFORUM the feeling that millions of people have been reading what I wrote is kind of nice. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 14:12, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
where can you view top 25 articles? I only know this one http://toolserver.org/~johang/wikitrends/english-most-visited-this-month.html but it only list the top 10.--Krystaleen 02:20, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
You can see individual article stats at or project stats using . Keith D (talk) 11:17, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

Edit request on 26 July 2012

please change harry edward styles to harold edward milward styles Igoesrawr2 (talk) 02:30, 26 July 2012 (UTC) Thank you Lots of love and respect MEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

Keith D (talk) 07:50, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

Why the odd picture size?

I've noticed it since a while back, the picture size would often be at weird 127px or 166px, why is this? If you're trying to get the pics to properly line up with the text and such, it's only going to look good on your own monitor, because different monitor resolution=different layout. Just wondering because it seems weird to me.--Krystaleen 04:06, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

Everything looks fine and fits on my computer although due to everyone having a different size screen it may differ. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:29, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
Exactly. That was my point. It might even look odd on other monitors.--Krystaleen 03:32, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

Edit request on 6 August 2012

Please can I edit this page as i know exclusive information about the band's future tours!!! CrazyCheese14 (talk) 10:44, 6 August 2012 (UTC)

Just put the info here and if it's verifiable, it will be added to the page for you.--Krystaleen 11:21, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
Closing request because if requesting user knows 'exclusive information' it can't be verified. You can change the template from yes to no once sources are supplied. FloBo A boat that can float! (watch me float!) 12:30, 6 August 2012 (UTC)

Niall Horan : Olympics 2012

Please write in Niall Horan's bio that at the London 2012 Summer Olympics Closing Ceremony, he was the only non-Biritish performer. Gurrrrrl12345 (talk) 23:05, 12 August 2012 (UTC) Julissa

Actually Great Britain includes England, Scotland, Wales, and IRELAND. So Niall is from Britain. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.186.194.87 (talk) 23:43, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

??? I just can't Niall is from the Republic of Ireland not Northern Ireland -- big difference AdabowtheSecond (talk) 23:50, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
Actually Great Britain does not include Ireland, its includes Scotland, England and Wales..so just get it right from now on, we aint British Handsopened (talk) 15:33, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
Handsopened and AdabowtheSecond are the most correct, politically. Following the Acts of Union 1800, in 1801 Ireland oficially became a part of the United Kingdom. In 1919, a War of Independence broke out, which resulted in partition. Currently, the United Kindgdom is England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland. The people of those countries hold a British passport and are British. Plarem (User talk) 14:39, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Highest sales for a number two album and the DVD setting a U.S. chart record

I don't think these are necessary to be included in this article. DVD setting a US chart record for beating an album isn't something that is usually noted, because it's two different things. Who really keep track of which DVD beat an album sales record? Besides, it's already in the DVD article. And I don't know who keeps track of "highest sales for a number two album" either. I mean wow, really? Highest sales for a number two album? Who actually compare sales of all number-two albums? And even if you want to mention it, it's best in the album article. The section is already too long as it is, and it's just not necessary. Mentioning that the album tops the chart in x countries and peaked in number 1 or 2 in US/UK chart is enough and it's really what matters the most anyway.--Krystaleen 15:52, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

  • DVD; keeping track? its the first time in history I can add more refs about if you think its not notable enough.
  • Album; I agree with you on that, thanks AdabowtheSecond (talk) 19:55, 17 August 2012 (UTC)

Edit request by consultingcriminalcaroline, 20 of August 2012

Could someone please remove this line-They are often compared to south-korean boy band big bang, though big bang are far more talented, better looking and are far more sexier-from the first paragraph. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Consultingcriminalcaroline (talkcontribs) 02:12, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

 Done Reverted by User:Fraggle81. Unclear if they saw the request. Dru of Id (talk) 04:26, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

GA Reassessment

This discussion is transcluded from Talk:One Direction/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.

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  4. (a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
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    (c) it contains no original research.
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. (a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;[3] and
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  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  9. [4]
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Review

  1. Well-written:
  2. More information Criteria, Notes ...
    CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (prose)
    1. "On 12 August 2012, One Direction performed "What Makes You Beautiful" at the 2012 Summer Olympics closing ceremony in London, representing the handover to Rio de Janeiro as the host of the 2016 Summer Olympics.[57]" One Direction did not represent the handover of the host city of the Summer Olympics.  Done
    2. You seem to use the word 'after' a bit too much in the section 'Formation and record deal (2010–11)' (To see this, press 'F3' and type in the word 'after')  Done
    3. "He's really good friend with BBC's Host Nick Grimshaw and fellow singer Rita Ora." needs to be reworked.  Done
    4. "Before The X Factor, he had a numbers of jobs, including at a Vue cinema and at Doncaster Rovers football stadium as a waiter in their hospitality suites." needs to be reworked.  Done
    Pass Pass
    (b) (MoS)
    1. As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.  Done
    Pass Pass
    Close
  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. More information Criteria, Notes ...
    CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (references)
    1. "In 2010, Niall Horan, Zayn Malik, Liam Payne, Harry Styles and Louis Tomlinson auditioned as solo candidates for the seventh series of British television music competition The X Factor." has no reference.  Done
    2. "The group got together for week-long sessions in a bungalow at the bottom of Styles' stepfather's garden to get to know each other and to practise." has no reference.  Done
    3. "In the live shows, One Direction covered songs by musical acts; The Beatles, Coldplay, Kelly Clarkson, Elton John, Snow Patrol, Kim Wilde, Pink and Rihanna, among others." has no reference.  Done
    4. "After the elimination of F.Y.D., Diva Fever and Belle Amie within four weeks, they were Simon Cowell's last act in the competition." has no reference.  Done
    5. "One Direction finished in third place behind runner-up Rebecca Ferguson and winner Matt Cardle." has no reference.  Done
    6. "After the tour concluded in April 2011, the group continued working on their debut album." has no reference.  Done
    7. "with the DVD subsequently topping the charts in twenty-five countries." has no reference.  Done
    8. "As of April 2012, One Direction are being sued for trademark infringement by a low-profile U.S. band from California, who go by the same name." has no reference.  Done
    9. "According to the lawsuit, the U.S. band has been using the name since 2009, recorded two albums and filed an application to register the trademark name in the U.S. in February 2011." has no reference.  Done
    10. "The U.S. band say they are entitled to three times the profits made by the UK band, as well as compensatory damages in excess of $1million." has no reference.  Done
    11. "In June 2012, Nick Gatfield, chairman and chief executive officer of Sony Music Entertainment UK, stated how he expects One Direction to represent a $100 million business empire over 2013." has no reference.  Done
    12. "In April 2012, British newspaper The Independent ran an article entitled, "One Direction – but where next? Writers join battle to create boy band's next hits",(ref here) according to the article, Simon Cowell has challenged music's "most successful" songwriters to compete for space on One Direction's second album, after the global success of their debut album." has no reference.  Done
    13. "Each member is known for their feature;" has no reference.  Done
    14. "Horan is "the cute one"," has no reference.  Done
    15. "Malik is "the quiet and mysterious one"," has no reference.  Done
    16. "Payne is "the sensible one"," has no reference.  Done
    17. "Styles is "the charming one"" has no reference; the four above this one may be in the same sentence, but they are all a claim.  Done
    18. "Leah Collins writing for the National Post remarked that One Direction had succeeded on the latter front." has no reference.  Done
    19. "published by HarperCollins," has no reference.  Done
    20. "In 2011, One Direction released their first calendar for 2012, the One Direction 2012 Calendar." has no reference.  Done
    21. "One Direction became the brand ambassadors for Pokémon Black and White since April 2011." has no reference.  Done
    22. "In April 2012, Hasbro announced an agreement with One Direction to produce a new line of toys and games based on the group."  Done
    23. "In 2010, when One Direction were contestants on The X Factor, they and their fellow series seven contestants released a cover of David Bowie's "Heroes" in aid of Help for Heroes." has no reference.  Done
    24. "In 2012, One Direction contributed to the fundraiser cookbook Dish for a Wish." has no reference.  Done
    25. "In April 2012, One Direction teamed up with Charitybuzz to help raise money in aid for the Great Ormond Street Hospital Children's Charity." has no reference.  Done
    26. "In July 2012, One Direction teamed up with British Airways in a 'text-to-win' competition, which was launched on social networking websites, giving eight fans the chance to fly with the band on a one hour flight organized by British Airways." has no reference.  Done
    27. "Niall James Horan, born 13 September 1993 (age 18), is from Mullingar, County Westmeath, Ireland." has no reference.  Done
    28. "Their parents divorced when he was five." has no reference.  Done
    29. "He and his brother lived between each of their homes for a few years before eventually deciding to live with their father in Mullingar." has no reference.  Done
    30. "Horan has also stated that he is a "big swing" fan, citing favourite artists Frank Sinatra, Dean Martin and Michael Bublé." has no reference.  Done
    31. "He grew up in East Bowling." has no reference.  Done
    32. "Malik did not fit in at his first two schools due to his mixed heritage, revealing that when he and his older sister moved schools he felt he fitted in better." has no reference.  Done
    33. "On auditioning for The X Factor, Malik said "I was looking for an experience"." has no reference.  Done
    34. "He cites urban music as his main musical influence, drawing inspiration from Michael Jackson, Usher and Ne-Yo." has no reference.  Done
    35. "For his X Factor audition, he performed the Mario R&B song "Let Me Love You"." has no reference.  Done
    36. "born 29 August 1993 (age 18), is from Wolverhampton, West Midlands, England." has no reference.  Done
    37. "Until the age of four, Payne had regular tests done in hospital as doctors noticed one of his kidneys was scarred and dysfunctional." has no reference.  Done
    38. "Payne first auditioned in 2008 to The X Factor's fifth series when he was fourteen." has no reference.  Done
    39. "Payne cites Justin Timberlake as one of his biggest influences." has no reference.  Done
    40. "He is currently in a relationship with dancer Danielle Peazer," has no reference.  Done
    41. "who has performed with acts such as the The Saturdays and Jessie J." has no reference.  Done
    42. "They met on The X Factor in 2010 and have been in a relationship ever since." has no reference.  Done
    43. "is from the village of Holmes Chapel, Cheshire, England." has no reference.  Done
    44. "Following the divorce, Styles, his older sister and his mother moved further out into the Cheshire countryside." has no reference.  Done
    45. "As a child, Styles loved singing, noting Elvis Presley as one of his influences." has no reference.  Done
    46. "Styles also cites current musical acts, Foster the People, Coldplay and Kings of Leon among his influences." has no reference.  Done
    47. "He's really good friend with BBC's Host Nick Grimshaw and fellow singer Rita Ora." has no reference.  Done
    48. "is from Doncaster, South Yorkshire, England." has no reference.  Done
    49. "Born to mother Johannah Poulston and father Troy Austin," has no reference.  Done
    50. "After Fat Friends, he attended an acting school in Barnsley." has no reference.  Done
    51. "He was a sixth form student at Hall Cross School, a state comprehensive school, and a former pupil of the Hayfield School." has no reference.  Done
    52. "He revealed that he failed his first year of A levels at the Hayfield School." has no reference.  Done
    53. "Tomlinson cites Robbie Williams as his biggest influence and idol." has no reference.  Done
    54. The members section, before all, has to have a reference at the date of birth and place of birth.  Done
    55. Section: Filmography: "The X Factor" has no reference.  Done
    56. "One Direction have been recipients of a BRIT Award—winning their first with "What Makes You Beautiful" for Best British Single at the 2012 BRIT Awards," has no reference.  Done
    57. "a NME Award," has no reference.  Done
    58. "two Kids' Choice Awards," has no reference.  Done
    Pass Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources)No comments.Pass Pass
    (c) (original research)When all those refs are done, I can pass this.  DonePass Pass
    Close
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. More information Criteria, Notes ...
    CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (major aspects)The reviewer has no notes here.Pass Pass
    (b) (focused)
    1. Section 'Up All Night and international breakthrough (2011–12)' needs only include the most important aspects of their breakthrough, validating every major viewpoint and writing it in the most condensed way possible. checkY Resolved
    2. Section 'Image' should be reduced. checkY Resolved
    Pass Pass
    Close
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. More information Notes, Result ...
    NotesResult
    1. "It is among the best-selling singles of all time, selling over 5 million copies." A reference is needed for that...  Done
    Pass Pass
    Close
  9. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  10. More information Notes, Result ...
    NotesResult
    Question in discussion. checkY ResolvedPass Pass
    Close
  11. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  12. More information Criteria, Notes ...
    CriteriaNotesResult
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)
    1. The photo of Niall Horan has no tag. Done
    2. The photo of Liam Payne has no tag. Done
    Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)The reviewer has no notes here.Pass Pass
    Close

Result

More information Result, Notes ...
ResultNotes
Pass Pass1 week from now, ends 3/9/2012. Plarem (User talk) 15:01, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Everything is done, the article is Kept! Plarem (User talk) 12:43, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

Close

Discussion

Will finish off in a few days. Plarem (User talk) 19:15, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Hellow, thanks for reassessing!, I can fix some things today, however, as I'm a student weekdays I do not edit Wikipedia, well at least I try not to, I will not be able to answer/correct queries till Friday 31 August 2012. Regards AdabowtheSecond (talk) 19:06, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Ok, that is fine, the article will be put on hold for a week after 31/8/2012 (DD/MM). Please tick off the things you have done on the list using <s> and the template {{done}} Plarem (User talk) 13:13, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I changed Olympics sentence, where are dates presented this way can't find any. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

(from references)Fixed all of them. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

The source says it has sold 5 million and according to the list itself 5 million is needed to be included. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

I meant the claim that they have one of the best selling singles in the world. Plarem (User talk) 13:19, 27 August 2012 (UTC) Sorry, didn't see the article you wikilinked. Plarem (User talk) 13:21, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

The images of Niall and Liam do now, it was due to IP vandals. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 22:30, 26 August 2012 (UTC)

Can I have the status on the splitting of the article? Plarem (User talk) 13:20, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

1a) is everything fine now, the only synonyms for after are subsequently, later, afterwards, afterward, later on, they all don't really fit. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 02:20, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

2a) I have filled in everything I guess, AdabowtheSecond (talk) 00:22, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

3a) *Section: Up All Night, their breakthrough I figured is written in the most condensed way possible, a lot happened they set multiple world records, got a lawsuit, had a tour and a tremendously commercial successful DVD, performed at the olympics, got called a 50 million business, what do you suggest needs to be cut. AdabowtheSecond (talk) 02:20, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Will finish off checking in the next few days. Plarem (User talk) 19:05, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, I lost internet connection... Plarem (User talk) 12:31, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

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