Talk:One Direction/GA2

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1. Well-written:
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(a) (prose)	"On 12 August 2012, One Direction performed "What Makes You Beautiful" at the 2012 Summer Olympics closing ceremony in London, representing the handover to Rio de Janeiro as the host of the 2016 Summer Olympics.[57]" One Direction did not represent the handover of the host city of the Summer Olympics.  Done You seem to use the word 'after' a bit too much in the section 'Formation and record deal (2010–11)' (To see this, press 'F3' and type in the word 'after')  Done "He's really good friend with BBC's Host Nick Grimshaw and fellow singer Rita Ora." needs to be reworked.  Done "Before The X Factor, he had a numbers of jobs, including at a Vue cinema and at Doncaster Rovers football stadium as a waiter in their hospitality suites." needs to be reworked.  Done	Pass
(b) (MoS)	As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.  Done	Pass
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2. Verifiable with no original research:
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(a) (references)	"In 2010, Niall Horan, Zayn Malik, Liam Payne, Harry Styles and Louis Tomlinson auditioned as solo candidates for the seventh series of British television music competition The X Factor." has no reference.  Done "The group got together for week-long sessions in a bungalow at the bottom of Styles' stepfather's garden to get to know each other and to practise." has no reference.  Done "In the live shows, One Direction covered songs by musical acts; The Beatles, Coldplay, Kelly Clarkson, Elton John, Snow Patrol, Kim Wilde, Pink and Rihanna, among others." has no reference.  Done "After the elimination of F.Y.D., Diva Fever and Belle Amie within four weeks, they were Simon Cowell's last act in the competition." has no reference.  Done "One Direction finished in third place behind runner-up Rebecca Ferguson and winner Matt Cardle." has no reference.  Done "After the tour concluded in April 2011, the group continued working on their debut album." has no reference.  Done "with the DVD subsequently topping the charts in twenty-five countries." has no reference.  Done "As of April 2012, One Direction are being sued for trademark infringement by a low-profile U.S. band from California, who go by the same name." has no reference.  Done "According to the lawsuit, the U.S. band has been using the name since 2009, recorded two albums and filed an application to register the trademark name in the U.S. in February 2011." has no reference.  Done "The U.S. band say they are entitled to three times the profits made by the UK band, as well as compensatory damages in excess of $1million." has no reference.  Done "In June 2012, Nick Gatfield, chairman and chief executive officer of Sony Music Entertainment UK, stated how he expects One Direction to represent a $100 million business empire over 2013." has no reference.  Done "In April 2012, British newspaper The Independent ran an article entitled, "One Direction – but where next? Writers join battle to create boy band's next hits",(ref here) according to the article, Simon Cowell has challenged music's "most successful" songwriters to compete for space on One Direction's second album, after the global success of their debut album." has no reference.  Done "Each member is known for their feature;" has no reference.  Done "Horan is "the cute one"," has no reference.  Done "Malik is "the quiet and mysterious one"," has no reference.  Done "Payne is "the sensible one"," has no reference.  Done "Styles is "the charming one"" has no reference; the four above this one may be in the same sentence, but they are all a claim.  Done "Leah Collins writing for the National Post remarked that One Direction had succeeded on the latter front." has no reference.  Done "published by HarperCollins," has no reference.  Done "In 2011, One Direction released their first calendar for 2012, the One Direction 2012 Calendar." has no reference.  Done "One Direction became the brand ambassadors for Pokémon Black and White since April 2011." has no reference.  Done "In April 2012, Hasbro announced an agreement with One Direction to produce a new line of toys and games based on the group."  Done "In 2010, when One Direction were contestants on The X Factor, they and their fellow series seven contestants released a cover of David Bowie's "Heroes" in aid of Help for Heroes." has no reference.  Done "In 2012, One Direction contributed to the fundraiser cookbook Dish for a Wish." has no reference.  Done "In April 2012, One Direction teamed up with Charitybuzz to help raise money in aid for the Great Ormond Street Hospital Children's Charity." has no reference.  Done "In July 2012, One Direction teamed up with British Airways in a 'text-to-win' competition, which was launched on social networking websites, giving eight fans the chance to fly with the band on a one hour flight organized by British Airways." has no reference.  Done "Niall James Horan, born 13 September 1993 (age 18), is from Mullingar, County Westmeath, Ireland." has no reference.  Done "Their parents divorced when he was five." has no reference.  Done "He and his brother lived between each of their homes for a few years before eventually deciding to live with their father in Mullingar." has no reference.  Done "Horan has also stated that he is a "big swing" fan, citing favourite artists Frank Sinatra, Dean Martin and Michael Bublé." has no reference.  Done "He grew up in East Bowling." has no reference.  Done "Malik did not fit in at his first two schools due to his mixed heritage, revealing that when he and his older sister moved schools he felt he fitted in better." has no reference.  Done "On auditioning for The X Factor, Malik said "I was looking for an experience"." has no reference.  Done "He cites urban music as his main musical influence, drawing inspiration from Michael Jackson, Usher and Ne-Yo." has no reference.  Done "For his X Factor audition, he performed the Mario R&B song "Let Me Love You"." has no reference.  Done "born 29 August 1993 (age 18), is from Wolverhampton, West Midlands, England." has no reference.  Done "Until the age of four, Payne had regular tests done in hospital as doctors noticed one of his kidneys was scarred and dysfunctional." has no reference.  Done "Payne first auditioned in 2008 to The X Factor's fifth series when he was fourteen." has no reference.  Done "Payne cites Justin Timberlake as one of his biggest influences." has no reference.  Done "He is currently in a relationship with dancer Danielle Peazer," has no reference.  Done "who has performed with acts such as the The Saturdays and Jessie J." has no reference.  Done "They met on The X Factor in 2010 and have been in a relationship ever since." has no reference.  Done "is from the village of Holmes Chapel, Cheshire, England." has no reference.  Done "Following the divorce, Styles, his older sister and his mother moved further out into the Cheshire countryside." has no reference.  Done "As a child, Styles loved singing, noting Elvis Presley as one of his influences." has no reference.  Done "Styles also cites current musical acts, Foster the People, Coldplay and Kings of Leon among his influences." has no reference.  Done "He's really good friend with BBC's Host Nick Grimshaw and fellow singer Rita Ora." has no reference.  Done "is from Doncaster, South Yorkshire, England." has no reference.  Done "Born to mother Johannah Poulston and father Troy Austin," has no reference.  Done "After Fat Friends, he attended an acting school in Barnsley." has no reference.  Done "He was a sixth form student at Hall Cross School, a state comprehensive school, and a former pupil of the Hayfield School." has no reference.  Done "He revealed that he failed his first year of A levels at the Hayfield School." has no reference.  Done "Tomlinson cites Robbie Williams as his biggest influence and idol." has no reference.  Done The members section, before all, has to have a reference at the date of birth and place of birth.  Done Section: Filmography: "The X Factor" has no reference.  Done "One Direction have been recipients of a BRIT Award—winning their first with "What Makes You Beautiful" for Best British Single at the 2012 BRIT Awards," has no reference.  Done "a NME Award," has no reference.  Done "two Kids' Choice Awards," has no reference.  Done	Pass
(b) (citations to reliable sources)	No comments.	Pass
(c) (original research)	When all those refs are done, I can pass this.  Done	Pass
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3. Broad in its coverage:
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(a) (major aspects)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass
(b) (focused)	Section 'Up All Night and international breakthrough (2011–12)' needs only include the most important aspects of their breakthrough, validating every major viewpoint and writing it in the most condensed way possible. Y Resolved Section 'Image' should be reduced. Y Resolved	Pass
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
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"It is among the best-selling singles of all time, selling over 5 million copies." A reference is needed for that...  Done	Pass
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
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Question in discussion. Y Resolved	Pass
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6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
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(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)	The photo of Niall Horan has no tag. Done The photo of Liam Payne has no tag. Done	Pass
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)	The reviewer has no notes here.	Pass
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Pass	1 week from now, ends 3/9/2012. – Plarem (User talk) 15:01, 27 August 2012 (UTC) Everything is done, the article is Kept! – Plarem (User talk) 12:43, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

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