Talk:One World Trade Center/Archive 3

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1st paragraph is way too wordy

Each sentence is far too wordy in the first paragraph. ObesityTastesGood (talk) 03:25, 5 November 2014 (UTC)

It's not to "Wordy" CookieMonster755 (talk) 03:59, 5 November 2014 (UTC)CookieMonster755
Any reason for putting the word wordy in quotation marks? And any reason for writing to rather than too or was it just a typo? I agree that the intro is a little too wordy. Parts about when construction started and topped-out don't need to be there (especially now that the building is open). The part about the symbolism of 1776 feet seems fairly pointless as it means nothing to the vast majority of those reading the article (i.e. non-Americans) who will only pay attention to the height of the building in metres which has no symbolism at all.--XANIA - ЗAНИAWikipedia talk | Wikibooks talk 20:05, 12 November 2014 (UTC)
Maybe it's a misspelling? Not everyone has perfect English and you can't expect everyone to do so. I have fixed the lede, anyway. Epicgenius (talk) 03:00, 13 November 2014 (UTC)

Images for consideration

A friend took this photo of the Freedom Tower. To the left is my cropped version and the original photo, along with the current photo for comparison. I'd like to discuss whether this photo would be a better choice for the main photo or useful elsewhere in the article.

--S Philbrick(Talk) 12:16, 24 August 2014 (UTC)

@Sphilbrick: Yep, that should belong in this article, and did you embedded or uploaded these images? --Allen talk 22:49, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
I'm not quite catching the point of your question. Both the left and the middle image have been uploaded to Commons. I did a crop, but recognize my limited image skills, so wanted to show the uncropped in case someone felt that a different cropping (or none at all) would be a better image. What do you mean by "embedded"?--S Philbrick(Talk) 22:57, 9 September 2014 (UTC)
Embedded image means to embed an image from an external site where you can view an image from another site. I see that your images that you uploaded was a similar job to this article. --Allen talk 23:35, 9 September 2014 (UTC)

I do agree we need an updated image for the article. What about this photo for consideration?CookieMonster755 (talk) 02:04, 6 November 2014 (UTC)CookieMonster755

Yes, we need an updated image. Sphilbrick, your images have a little too much reflection and camouflage; do you have other photos? – Epicgenius (talk) 19:44, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
A friend of my daughter took the photo, and I saw it when she visited, so this is a one-off photo. I actually thought the reflection made it a more striking photo, but obviously, opinions vary. --S Philbrick(Talk) 16:36, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
I personally think it's fine. Stylistically, however, the tower blends in too much with the sky. Epicgenius (talk) 16:36, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
What is wrong with the current image? --Jleon (talk) 18:21, 20 November 2014 (UTC)

September 11 attacks Section

This section of the article suddenly includes the sentence fragment, "... 55 military personnel were among those killed at the Pentagon.". This information comes out of nowhere because the Pentagon attack is not mentioned anywhere in the article previously or subsequently to this fragment. It also casts doubt on whether the casualty figures quoted include or exclude the Pentagon attack (cursory research suggests includes, though the obvious implication is the numbers exclude the Pentagon attack purely by the article's context). I would have removed the fragment or clarrified, but as this is the featured article today, I decided to raise the matter here and allow someone more knowledgeable as to the casualty figures deal with it. DieSwartzPunkt (talk) 10:30, 14 November 2014 (UTC)

The section seems to be a summary of 9/11 in general and not just what happened in Manhattan. Noticeably missing is any mention of the plane that crashed in Pennsylvania. Perhaps that should be mentioned too. Or perhaps the section should just be about what happened in Manhattan and ignore the rest of the attacks in DC and PA. That is the real question before any discussion on the statistics can take place. Of course the prose should be improved regardless. PointsofNoReturn (talk) 02:25, 19 November 2014 (UTC)
@PointsofNoReturn: — I think the 9/11 section on the One World Trade Center page should be only about the Manhattan attacks, but that's my opinion. CookieMonster755 (talk) 01:07, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
@DieSwartzPunkt, PointsofNoReturn, and CookieMonster755: I have removed the offending sentence. Nearly all the victims who died in WTC on 9/11 were civilian, so I kept that. – Epicgenius (talk) 16:39, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
You are probably right that the attacks should only include civilian deaths. I am okay with removing the reference to the military deaths. Should the overall 9/11 deathtoll be listed in the section in addition to the toll in Manhattan? That to me seems like a good idea. PointsofNoReturn (talk) 19:02, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
Yeah, sure. This should be pretty short, for example "Overall, 3,000 people died in the attacks" (don't know exact number, but it's in the ballpark). Epicgenius (talk) 19:37, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
That works for me. PointsofNoReturn (talk) 20:14, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
 Done. It was already in the article. I just added links. Epicgenius (talk) 01:39, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

Units of measurement

Personally I would prefer Wikipedia to use only metric units of measurement because it is supposed to be a serious encyclopaedia but I accept that there are still some Americans (and Burmese) who still cling to the imperial system and its weird ways of dealing with height, weight and volume. Some attempt has been made to put the metric units in brackets in this article but there are still gaps. This is supposed to be English Wikipedia not American English Wikipedia. It should be written for the majority of the people and not just Americans. Somebody needs to put in metric equivalents for all measurements and ideally metric should come first with old style units in brackets. Also remember that English Wikipedia is not just read by native English speakers but by people learning English or those who have learnt it as a second language. Stop using confusing units of measurement please.--XANIA - ЗAНИAWikipedia talk | Wikibooks talk 20:00, 12 November 2014 (UTC)

@Xania: That has been fixed already. It does universally use both units of measurement. The only corrections that I needed to make were to an imperial measurement for the height, where a metric equivalent was already provided earlier. Epicgenius (talk) 02:57, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
@Xania: This is a neutral encyclopedia. It is common practice on Wikipedia for American article to use imperial units and other articles to use metric units. All conversions are used though. What you brought up would probably be better brought up in a global discussion. PointsofNoReturn (talk) 21:05, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
Just a small correction, the US uses US units, not Imperial. Kendall-K1 (talk) 15:54, 9 January 2015 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 14 November 2014

In the at-a-glance fact list on the righthand side of the page, under "Design and construction", please add "MEP/FP engineer" as "Jaros, Baum & Bolles". Reference: http://www.wtc.com/about/firms JarosBaumBolles (talk) 14:35, 14 November 2014 (UTC)

 Not done. Your user name betrays that you are violating Wikipedia's conflict of interest policy. Further, as this is the account's only edit, it is clear that the account has been created for this sole purpose. Please see WP:COI for more information. DieSwartzPunkt (talk) 15:06, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
Just to add, writing about projects in which you have a personal involvement is strongly discouraged. Wikipedia should not be considered as a place to promote or advertize your own projects.Read WP:NOTSOAPBOX--Chamith (talk) 19:25, 20 November 2014 (UTC)
I disagree. Though the request was clearly from a single-purpose account created by the firm, I do not think there is an unacceptable COI. The editor only requested that we add JBB as the mechanical, electrical and plumbing engineer for WTC 1. We already have four firms listed; JBB and envelope consultant Israel Berger & Associates LLC are the only ones on that reference that worked on WTC 1.
I think this is a matter of giving due credit to this firm. If it had been a request to, say, add the exclusive providers of bathroom deodorizers or photocopiers, that might be self-promotion and might be COI. I think we should add JBB and Berger to the designers/engineers part of the info box. Roches (talk) 21:49, 4 January 2015 (UTC)

Statue of Liberty & One World Trade Center

What do you think of this photo? I thought this photo was a good photo, and should be included somewhere in the One World Trade Center article. What do you think, should we add it somewhere to the article? CookieMonster755 (talk) 17:43, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

I don't think so. Kendall-K1 (talk) 20:42, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for the contribution, but I really don't think the photo is good enough to be placed in any World Trade Center article. Regards, David J Johnson (talk) 21:10, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your response @David J Johnson:, I totally can understand why, but It does not hurt to ask :) CookieMonster755 (talk) 21:27, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
My best wishes, David, David J Johnson (talk) 21:30, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
I agree with the above comments. This view is way too far to see the WTC. Epic Genius (talk) 22:39, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

Suggestion

Hello, I know I recently posted here, but I had a suggestion. I was thinking somewhere in the article, we could include a night time image of the spire. I think the multicolor scheme really makes the tower unique. What do you think about including a nighttime lite up spire image, or is the article have to much images already? Thank you for your contributions to this article. Cheers. CookieMonster755 (talk) 02:58, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

We've already got a spire photo but a night shot might be better. Do you have one? Kendall-K1 (talk) 03:30, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
@Kendall-K1: -- Here is a photograph of the spire at night on Wikimedia Commons. CookieMonster755 (talk) 03:54, 12 March 2015 (UTC)

There is actually a "logo" field in Template:Infobox building. But I tried it and didn't like how it looked. Kendall-K1 (talk) 23:15, 29 March 2015 (UTC)

A-class

Should this article be promoted to A-class status? It seems like it is good enough to meet A-class criteria as detailed in this table. Epic Genius (talk) 19:15, 31 March 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I think it should be promoted to A class Epicgenius. I tried to nominate it as a featured article but it failed to do so. CookieMonster755 (talk) 00:29, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
As mentioned in the 2 FA reviews, the article is too active to have a stable, FA-qualified version. Epic Genius (talk) 01:03, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
It's understandable Epicgenius. CookieMonster755 (talk) 01:35, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Possible Tenets

@Epicgenius: 21st Century Fox, News Corp Considering Move to World Trade Center. Maybe it could be mentioned in the article or shall we wait until they have an actually answer? CookieMonster755 (talk) 13:45, 25 April 2015 (UTC)

@CookieMonster755: I think we should wait, then put it in the tenants section. Epic Genius (talk) 01:13, 26 April 2015 (UTC)

Neomodern??

Would 1WTC be considered neo-modern? Personally, I wouldn't say it necessarily has a distinct style.... Laurelpeter122 (talk) 15:56, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

Semi-Protected Edit Request Regarding Project Management

Sound reports

other uses

Condé Nast

Old Building Page

Needs discussion of design concepts

Assessment comment

Semi-protected edit request on 19 January 2016

Outdated info

Is this page ready to be featured?

Daniel Libeskind

New infobox image

Architect: Daniel Libeskind?

Height Issues

Also known as

Semi-protected edit request on 8 September 2017

Semi-protected edit request on 15 December 2017

Confused about current name

Semi-protected edit request on 25 September 2018

Alignment of an image

Adjustment to Previous Edit - Clarification Servcorp and Tenants

A Commons file used on this page has been nominated for deletion

Design lawsuit section

Semi-protected edit request on 3 June 2020

List as the sixth-tallest building in the world

Semi-protected edit request on 10 April 2021

Floor numbers

Semi-protected edit request on 8 September 2021

Semi protected edit request

Maybe not GA?

Semi-protected edit request on 4 July 2022

Why the whole WTC history? Wrong article.

Semi-protected edit request on 28 August 2022

Floor Count Controversy

Vandalism on the map

Freedom Tower is the former name?

Semi-protected edit request on 27 January 2024

Actual height is 1792 feet.

105th floor?

Split proposal 16 February 2024

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