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Now let's promote this new article at DYK

Let's find an eloquent blurb for this article and nominate it for a show at WP:DYK! __meco (talk) 18:38, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Great idea!! I would be very happy if you could do the procedure, etc., but I will gladly help with the text. How about: Did You Know:
  • ... that the vast majority of people suffer from orgastic impotence? It's catchy for sure!
  • ... that orgastic potency is the ability to completely experience and surrender to the involuntary, pleasurable convulsions at the climax in sexual intercourse? That may be an easier candidate..--Gulpen (talk) 19:11, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
I don't think the first one is viable because mainstream science and medicine in particular would contest that there even is such a thing as orgastic potency. There would need to be some qualifier for attribution. The second is much too long. There's a 150 character (spaces included) limit on lenght. __meco (talk) 07:26, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
The first one was a joke rather :). But I checked and the second one is exactly 150 characters (excluding "... that").
It is also possible to use Reich's later terminology, although that may be a bit confusing:
*... that orgastic potency is the capacity for complete surrender to the involuntary convulsion at the acme of the genital embrace? (120 char.) --Gulpen (talk) 13:09, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
It has now been nominated, see Template talk:Did you know#Articles created/expanded on June 16. __meco (talk) 15:44, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

"Censorship of Reich's work"

This is the name of a section in the article. Why? I cannot understand that this is a topic that should be discussed separately in this article. __meco (talk) 07:27, 25 June 2012 (UTC)

The important phrase here is "...including work related to orgastic potency." Rephrasing the section to 'Censorship' should better cover the intent (namely that the censorship relates back to the title of the article). The 'Reception' & 'Censorship' sections were intended to point out that work about orgastic potency has been affected by this banning and these campaigns. However, the rest of the paragraph in 'Censorship' may be a bit random and generic rather than specifically written about orgastic potency. I lack enough knowledge to write it much more specific. Still do you think having that section is justified?--Gulpen (talk) 00:14, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
I've removed the references to DeMeo.--Gulpen (talk) 17:23, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
I still think the snippet you left in should be removed as well. Since the concept of orgastic potency, i.e. the orgasm reflex and the function of the orgasm, is at the core of all subsequent developments of Reich's research and therapeutic interventions, this is of course what his detractors more than anything else cannot accept, although they often provide vicarious arguments for their objections to his work. Without identifying these mechanics, and I think that would be difficult given the available source material, I don't think this issue, could well be discussed in the present article. The current text discussing reception based on Elsworth Baker is fine, but I find the jump to censorship unwarranted here. __meco (talk) 19:14, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
Ok. I think that makes sense. It's removed now.--Gulpen (talk) 20:29, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

Criticism

As yet I'm unhappy with the amount of criticism. I'm confident that it must be possible to find more criticism about this specific concept - I mean serious criticism, not superficial misinterpretations. Additions or suggestions here are welcome!--Gulpen (talk) 14:22, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Is that a realistic expectation? Hasn't mainstream science for the most part dealt with Reich by ignoring his work or cursorily dismissing it without scientifically investigating it? __meco (talk) 15:26, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
That is not a bad question.. However, there is quite some literature on Reich and I had hoped that at least one person took a serious critical look at his theories. (Sharaf certainly wasn't all positive about things Reich in his Biography). There are also many post-Reichian followers, institutions and journals that could provide this.--Gulpen (talk) 15:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
I feel increasing objection to including Wilcox work as a source: he makes too many basic factual errors in his writing - apart from it being a self-published source. I selected what I thought were the only potentially valid arguments - some of which he remains the only source for. What to do?--Gulpen (talk) 22:33, 16 September 2012 (UTC)

Premature DYK rejection

User:David Eppstein has intervened in our DYK-promotion effort and boldly closed the discussion with the edit summary "Boldly closing the discussion. Any further attempt at revisions now is so far past the deadline as to make the DYK deadline rules meaningless." Although I concede Eppstein's argument that a decision on this nomination is painfully lingering, I have protested his intervention at his user talk page. There are two main grounds for my appeal, and consequent request for a mandate here, at the article's talk page, to reopen the DYK nomination (as the {{DYK top}} instructions provide for). The first reason is our ongoing, constructive process of improving the article to the required standard, despite one user's filibustering activity of raising a wall of text absent any actionable suggestions for improvement. The second, more significant reason I want to present is the early intervention and sustained enterprise by User:Yngvadottir, a veteran of DYK affairs (as it would seem by my cursory assessment), in making the requisite changes needed in order to pass the article for DYK. And it follows from this that Eppstein, who has not been part of the process relating to the present article, ought to have either consulted with Yngvadottir or simply left the matter in her capable hands (not necessarily for a decision on the nomination in which she has invested herself considerably, but rather for a would-be signal from her that the process had come to an intractable impasse). Bottom line: With meco, Gulpen and Yngvadottir actively engaging in constructive efforts to surmount any remaining obstacles towards passing the article for DYK, the exceedingly long time it has admittedly taken to get us this far ought not impulse an arbitrary abortion of this process. I therefore move that we should reopen to DYK nomination and finish the article's preparation. __meco (talk) 08:46, 3 September 2012 (UTC)

I'd like to see it make it to Did you know, yes :-) For one thing, we don't have many psychology or sexology-related DYKs. However, the fact the community made me an admin gives me no special managerial standing. I imagine someone could equally boldly reopen the nomination, but more than one person has said it's taken too long; and Drmies is also an admin, and PumpkinSky has been around DYK a lot longer than I have and is a former admin. I thought of putting in what I could find in the way of non-Reichian scholarly comments to meet the end-of-August deadline Drmies suggested, but as I have said, I have neither the knowledge of the field nor the library/database access to make it a good idea for me to add that material. GoogleScholar tells me there is some, and gives me minute quotes that I then cannot see in situ, and that's not good enough. The best person to add that dimension to the article is Gulpen - who has said they are too busy right now. If you could do that, Meco, or if someone else were able to do so (including Bali Ultimate) then I would propose a really simple hook like "... that according to Wilhelm Reich, lack of orgastic potency led to neuroses?" I'm more than willing to copyedit and to help make any further cuts/structural changes required, and I can help find us another reviewer, but do you and Gulpen want to - and are you able to - put in the time and effort, including keeping the article brief and accurately reflecting what are likely very dismissive outside views, to justify sticking our necks out and reopening this for someone to pass a new judgment on? The psychology wikiproject is very inactive and it appears this is not going to find expert help from them, so it falls to you two as nominator and co-writers. --Yngvadottir (talk) 12:29, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
Yes I'm fully committed and will have more time very soon. Does anyone have access to these psychoanalytic journals?--Gulpen (talk) 03:29, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
How about one of these?
Alt 1: "...that in the teachings of controversial psychiatrist Wilhelm Reich, orgastic potency, defined as the capacity to fully surrender to and experience orgasm in the sexual union, is a measure of health?"
Alt 2: "...that in Reichian therapy, orgastic potency, defined as the capacity to fully surrender to and experience orgasm in the sexual union between male and female, is a measure of an individual's health?"
Alt 3: "...that orgastic potency, in the teachings of controversial psychiatrist Wilhelm Reich, is a measure of the individual's capacity to fully surrender to and experience orgasm in the sexual union?"
__meco (talk) 15:31, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Yes I'd take Alt 1. --Gulpen (talk) 19:21, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
  • I've been asked to weigh in again here and to consider offering support. Unfortunately at this point I think it has to be moral support only. Gulpen didn't have time to rewrite the article earlier - this happens on Wikipedia - and is still working on it. That pretty much fits with the assessment made by more than one editor at the DYK nomination that it had just taken too long. Again, that happens on Wikipedia; it's a volunteer project, and sometimes one just can't move fast enough to meet DYK expectations. If you want to petition to the editor who closed it, and/or raise the issue at Wikipedia talk: Did you know, the article needs to be ready, and the leaner it is, the better, and the briefer the new suggested hook is, the better, IMO. Instead I'm seeing expansion and a return to long hooks. From the point of view of the slim chance of persuading people it's DYK-ready, those are not helpful; in terms of making a more informative article, they might be, although there is always the danger that others have raised here, of seeming to advocate for the approach. I tried to tighten it up and get it over the DYK hurdles by making it a barebones summary; I'm glad to see Gulpen now realizes I didn't throw out so much as he/she had originally thought; but the article ran out of time, I'm afraid. And still isn't re-edited to Gulpen's satisfaction. So my feeling is, it's a pity, but in this case there just wasn't time between off-wiki commitments and DYK's mission of showcasing new work. I won't counsel against trying one or both avenues to getting the nomination reconsidered, but I think realistically the time for doing that has passed. Yngvadottir (talk) 16:54, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
Well, I'd find it sad to see all the efforts for DYK nomination to be unsuccessful. But I believe the article improved much in the meantime - that has been a nice consequence.--Gulpen (talk) 13:55, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

Minor issues

  1. Why is the information about heterosexual marriage being the all-encompassing context for this teaching in the lede? And without any further discussion it would even tend to baffle the reader.
  2. When listing the different names Reich used for the energy he believed he had identified (in the section Background and theory), the word "life" (in parenthesis) appears following the word orgone. Surely, "life" and "orgone" were never synonyms, not even for Reich? He did use the separate term "life energy" I believe, so why not list this independently? __meco (talk) 17:01, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
Regarding the first: not only is it factually wrong in a strict sense ("marriage" was surely NOT part of orgastic potency, though this could be replaced by something like "union"), it is also very misleading to focus on the actual intercourse, because orgastic potency first and foremost is a measure of a psychological capability ("is having the ability to..."). I have therefore removed it for now. Regarding the second: the order I have in my mind is now: libido, bioelectric, biophysical = orgone = life. However, I am not very familiar with Reich's later work, so feel free to make changes as you see fit. But the main reason for including ("life") behind orgone is simply to very shortly explain what it means to a new reader.--Gulpen (talk) 01:42, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
3. Another item in the lead I'm having trouble with is the implication that orgastic impotence, in orgone theory, leads to physical illness. Did Reich relate the two directly in this way? For sure that is not written anywhere in the article. I think it is more important to explain impotence is used as an indicator of the health of the whole personality, both in psyche and soma. I changed it to reflect these views.
To return to the 'heterosexual marriage' - rather "sexual union between male and female", or as Reich put it the "genital embrace" part: it could be of relevance in the lead in the context of Reich's view that the contact-ability of person was part of orgastic potency. The importance of this was clear from the 'detailed description' of orgastic potency, but that was removed. I changed it now, though I'm still hesitating very much because of the reasons I gave earlier.--Gulpen (talk) 22:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

Reference to vital energy

In the third paragraph of the second section, Background and theory, the term vital energy is used. If one links to this and follows the link it becomes apparent why this is an unfortunate term to use in connection with Reich. If the referenced source, Ellsworth Baker, indeed uses this term within the framework of Reich's theories, so be it, however, I suggest this is not a preferred term among followers of Reich. Instead I will suggest we replace it with "energy housekeeping" which is used by Raknes in his essay on sex economy (currently cited as footnote #12). Also "energy metabolism" is a synonymous term which I think is used in Reich's theories, although I don't have a reference for it. __meco (talk) 15:53, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

I agree with that. I think energy housekeeping or household is preferred here, because metabolism is again easily confused with a different concept.--Gulpen (talk) 20:09, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

Citation request, but for what?

In this edit on September 4, Bali ultimate adds an inline citation request for the phrase "His last published definition of orgastic potency (original date unclear, published in 1961)". It is unclear to me, however, what exactly needs to be referenced according to the user. I would like to point out that the phrase continues past the inline tag and the sentence as a whole does have a footnote reference. __meco (talk) 16:09, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

I think it is merited, because the 1961 quoted definition of orgastic potency comes from a glossary in front of the posthumous published Selected Writings. It is not listed there where Reich himself first/last wrote this definition. I haven't come across it yet.--Gulpen (talk) 20:13, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
As long as you make that caveat explicit, there should be no need for an additional reference request. __meco (talk) 08:42, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
Ok, so do you suggest any additional info to be added (in a footnote?), or can the tag be removed?--Gulpen (talk) 14:01, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

Original research

Requires sub-section on concept pleasure and sensation

Removing references to Reich as self-published sources

The orgasm reflex

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