Talk:Polytechnic School (California)
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Removal of or Major Edits to "PolyFields Controversy" section
I recommend removal of the "PolyFields Controversy" section (or at minimum substantial edits) because it violates multiple Wikipedia content policies:
- **WP:BLP** – Content must be written with extra care when living persons (including students, staff, or community members) could be affected. Unsourced or poorly sourced contentious material should be removed immediately.
- **WP:NPOV** – The section editorializes with subjective claims such as *“known for its exclusivity and privilege, is increasingly disconnected from the broader Pasadena and Altadena communities”*, which are not neutrally worded.
- **WP:V / WP:SYNTH** – The single cited source ([Pasadena Now](https://pasadenanow.com/main/altadena-residents-grateful-polyfield-plans-scrapped)) does not support the broad editorial claim. This amounts to synthesis and misrepresents the source.
In addition, the section was originally created by User:Codyeronl, who engaged in clear vandalism on another school article within minutes of adding this material. For example, see this diff at *Saint Francis High School (La Cañada Flintridge, California)*: diff. The same user’s edits (03:53–03:56 UTC, 11 March 2025) created and defended the "PolyFields Controversy" section: relevant edit history.
Given the poor sourcing, POV tone, and problematic origin, I believe the best course is to remove this section entirely. If there is interest in keeping some of the content, it should be rewritten in a neutral tone and supported with reliable, independent sources.
COTL2133 (talk) 18:56, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- I’ve removed the "PolyFields Controversy" section per WP:BLP and WP:NPOV. The material was added by a vandal account, misrepresented its source, and contained subjective/defamatory language. Per policy, questionable BLP content can be removed immediately; if editors feel some version should be restored, please ensure it is written neutrally and supported by reliable, independent sources.
- COTL2133 (talk) 16:20, 8 September 2025 (UTC)

