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Reducing the number of lists

I've thought of one way we can reduce the number of lists. I'm thinking in particular of the Physical Agency and Mental Agency lists. I would be very sad to see these become prose, because they are supposed to represent a kind of spectrum. Perhaps we could re-make them as a diagram, showing how roboty they are on a scale from not roboty to totally roboty. Rocketmagnet (talk) 12:46, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

This is easier to get through FAC than lists. I can provide information, but I suck at creating images and tables. - Dan Dank55 (talk)(mistakes) 14:00, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
No worries. I'll see what I can do. Rocketmagnet (talk) 15:08, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Bugnot's EL

I reverted Bugnot's EL, but I certainly think it deserves to be a reference for text on some page linked from this page, or from one of those pages. From the link: “The robot’s biological brain is made up of cultured neurons which are placed onto a multi electrode array (MEA). The MEA is a dish with approximately 60 electrodes which pick up the electrical signals generated by the cells. This is then used to drive the movement of the robot." That's a step on the road to direct control of robots by human brains and animal brains. Whether it's a significant step is more up to the biologists and neurologists than up to us; a controller based on a neural net with 60 nodes is not particularly exciting as a subject in robotics. - Dan Dank55 (talk)(mistakes) 18:00, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Copyediting

This is where I'll stick notes as I respond to the WP:GAR that are too specific to bring up on the GAR page.

  • This is a perfectly good sentence, but I'm removing it from the lead for now, because the article doesn't give sufficient support for this conclusion yet, and it was mentioned as a problem at GAR: "Despite the huge advances in technology of the last century, robots are still nowhere near as capable as the public imagination believes. Both mentally and physically, robots are still slow, dim-witted and clumsy." - Dan Dank55 (send/receive)
  • I moved some of the details of what "robot" meant in 1921 indifferent languages into Notes and references. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 03:23, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
File:Asimo marche.png
ASIMO going for a walk
  • For the second picture of ASIMO, where the purpose is to show that it does things humans do, I'd prefer a picture that shows it doing something, such as this one (perhaps cropped). - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:15, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
Yeah, that's a nice picture. It definitely needs to be zoomed in a little. I quite like the current one because it shows Asimo's eyes, which give it a strong sense of having a personality. But the walking on's good too. Rocketmagnet (talk) 18:02, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
How would you feel about using this one in the lead? If we can crop it right, I think it's attractive enough, and it shows something ASIMO can do, and also shows its height. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 18:55, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
File:Asimo marche crop.png
ASIMO cropped
Here's a cropped version for comparison. I seem to have made it a little blurry though.Franamax (talk) 19:46, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
  • I removed this from the history section: it's important enough to be in the article, but 2000 isn't generally considered "history" on Wikipedia: 2000: A humanoid robot that can recognize human faces, see stereoscopically, walk and run on different types of ground (including stairs), and respond (in words and in actions) to English and Japanese commands. (ASIMO, Honda Corporation). - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:46, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
  • I've got Hornyak's book somewhere around here, it's great for the differences between eastern and western thought. I'll keep digging, and come back to that section after I find the book. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:56, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
  • I found Hornyak's book and I'm reading up. I have asked around for other Asian perspectives, with no response; I'll do that part today myself. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:29, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
  • "These are known as dull, dirty, dangerous" (in some order): I checked the ghits for all combinations of pairs of those words, and there's no pattern of being known that way, so I removed it. Also, when I was working on robot.wikia.com many months ago, there were no reliable sources for sales figures for domestic robots of any kind. I poked around a little today and couldn't find anything better. I have reason to believe that we shouldn't consider a press release from iRobot to be definitive, and it wouldn't qualify as an RS at WP:RSN for this purpose, so I decided to remove the section. I'll add a pointer soon to Domestic robot. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 02:02, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Going back and doing work on the refs now for the parts I have copyedited so far. Robot#Defining characteristics has problems, but this isn't a section I'm working on. robotics.megagiant.com has many inaccuracies and has to go (DaVinci didn't build a human-sized knight; the mechanical duck didn't actually digest food). The ref on Al-Jazari wasn't acceptable; I'll see if I can find the SciAm article from 1991 online. I removed The Daily Yomiuri ref; it only gave the front page of the newspaper, in Japanese. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 15:06, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

Using videos as references

Trying to find some references for a section on the limitations of robots. There are couple of good interviews with roboticists. Does anyone know if they are OK for a ref? Rocketmagnet (talk) 18:28, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

Videos can be used for refs, or could be several months ago, but if you like this video, I'd prefer we stick it in the EL's. Is there a transcript available that could be used as a reference? - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 18:53, 29 August 2008 (UTC)
Problem is I need references of some kind, and I'm having difficulty finding any about the limitation of robots. Rocketmagnet (talk) 10:30, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
A video isn't a secondary source. Surely some RS has reported on the video? Chris Cunningham (not at work) - talk 12:00, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
I don't hang out at WP:RSN a lot, but I know who to ask and I have a guess what they'll say. Who is talking in the video, Rocket, and where can I find reliable sources (journals for instance) that establish that these people are well respected in their fields? Even a blog entry from respected experts will often be accepted at WP:RSN as a reliable source, provided the expert has the right track record. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:36, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
P.S. A secondary issue is that we don't want to ask volunteer reviewers to spend 30 minutes watching a video, so I hope we can either get a transcript or the video is very short. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:52, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Modern Developments

I have added a photo of the original Unimate provided by inventor George C. Devol. I removed the photo of the PUMA, a later Unimation product, as the section is about the history of robots, and therefore the original Unimate is a more appropriate photo.

I also removed this text which is false:

"It wasn't until the second half of the twentieth century, when integrated circuits were invented, and computers began to double rapidly in power (roughly every two years according to Moore's Law),[31] that it became possible to build robots as we imagine them. Until that time, automatons were the closest things to robots, and while they may have looked humanoid, and their movements were complex, they were not capable of the self-control and decision making that robots are today."

The reasons are as follows: The first Unimate prototype, although digital, was controlled by vacuum tubes. The first production Unimates were controlled by transistors. Integrated circuits were not in the first Unimates, so the above section is just plain wrong. Also, Moore's law is really not an important addition, as this is not an article about computers or ICs, but about robots. Also, the above section says "as we imagine them" There has been a great deal of discussion about what is a true robot, and putting some sort of subjective text like that is really inappropriate in an encyclopedia. It is really a poorly written addition that adds nothing interesting to the history of robots, so I removed it.

Bangthedash101 (talk) 16:51, 9 September 2008 (UTC) bangthedash101

Also, if someone could put some space between the modern developments section and the robot fatalities section, that would make it look better. I couldn't figure out how. Thanks.

Bangthedash101 (talk) 16:53, 9 September 2008 (UTC) bangthedash101

Please don't insert extra blank space for formatting. It looks terrible depending on the browser you have, the font size you're displaying, your window width, etc. I have removed that space and rearranged the pictures instead. ~Amatulić (talk) 19:19, 9 September 2008 (UTC)
Well, it needs something because, on my widescreen monitor, we end up with the title Robot Fatalities right next to a picture of George Devol! Rocketmagnet (talk) 08:41, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Yes, I hope someone can format it properly. Also, maybe "Robot Fatalities" doesn't even belong in the section for "Modern Developments". Perhaps it belongs at or near the end of the article. Fatalities are not really a "development" in the sense that the word is being used in this section. Bangthedash101 (talk) 19:36, 11 September 2008 (UTC) bangthedash101

Good point. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 20:16, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

I'm going to fiddle with the table a bit; I think it's a good idea to remove multiple references to the same thing and remove some history items and some not-exactly-robotics items, and after that, there are so few items without a named robot that it makes sense to try to include a named robot on every line, to me. Edits welcome. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 00:19, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Eastern and Western views

Question about ref

Help!

Table vs List

Demoted

New EL

Meaning of the name 'robot'

Copy of conversation on user talk page

Image edits

Article visual structure

Removed the Catalonian hospital EL

Un-Removed commercial issues

Open-source robotics

Contemporary uses

Documentary's

Dishwashing

I-Qbot, QRIO and I-sobot

Robot computing unit

Removal of head image

Litter picking

Telerobot

Virtual agent

Weird display issues in my browser

Problem with the pictures...

Future impact on the world

Virtual agent is not robot

Lead section

no shortage of bs here

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