Talk:Spacetime/Archive 7
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My apologies for trying
Apparently this article is owned, as is clear by the immediate petty reverts to an article asking for help. I tried. But I won't again. 75.139.254.117 (talk) 00:01, 15 March 2017 (UTC)
Asking for input on the revised introduction
I'm pretty much finished with what I was planning to do with the Introduction.
Could some of you provide comment?
- Have I committed any factual errors that need to be addressed?
- My imagined audience while I was re-writing the introduction was a typical High School science major. Have I succeeded in my aim of making the introduction understandable by my target audience?
Thanks!
Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 13:28, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
- I'm too new to get involved with editing this article, but there is a minor problem with the 3rd paragraph of the article. Keith o (talk) 05:52, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- Could you specify more precisely what you consider to be a problem? Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 08:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- @Keith o: Upon reading the paragraph carefully, yes, I do see an issue. Thanks, Keith! Let me see what I can do to fix the paragraph without introducing too much extra complexity! Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 09:14, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- • It looks like a good improvementn to me. Thanks. Greg L (talk) 23:43, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- Could you specify more precisely what you consider to be a problem? Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 08:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- BRAVO! I think you have done a fabulous job. More on my thoughts are here on my talk page in response to your reaching out to me. I suggest other wikipedians sit back and watch as you do more of your heavy lifting for a while. Greg L (talk) 19:29, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
- The rest of the article is in too serious a mess for me to consider tackling, especially since a fair amount of it covers topics with which I cannot claim mastery. What I am considering is an "Introduction, Part 2" which will include gravity. Also, as you pointed out on your talk page, I need to pay attention to the lede. Being so focused on the Introduction, I didn't give the lede anywhere near as much attention as I should have. Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 19:45, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Greg L: Feedback from others not being forthcoming, I incorporated into the lede various of your suggestions to reduce excessive pithiness and jargon that, as you put it, requires the reader to engage in the Wikipedia practice of Click to Learn©™®. Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 16:30, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
- What you have in the lede is a giant improvement. I did a little research to double check something; things seem correct.
- Very many readers read no more than the lede so what you've got there now is pretty much all one needs for a quick, one-stop tutorial. Wikipedia now has a pretty nice article on an exceedingly technical topic (where “quality” and “technical” seldom play well). I trifurcated your giant, one-paragraph lede at natural points; I hope you don't mind the quick intrusion and failure to allow you to get around to that.
- I wouldn't be shy about increasing the length of the lede so long as you use plain-speak targeted to intelligent, diligent 10th graders truly interested in the broad topic. Expanding upon the subject of not fearing lengthening the lede:
- I can slave for weeks on just a lede and leave the rest of the article untouched. This is an old version of Entropic gravity article that had a seriously abstruse lede. Carefully read it (don't read any further than the lede) and then consider just how much you truly got out of it and how much you really *understand* of the subject matter. Then read this version of the article after I would spend a few weeks editing, wait a few days, go back and read what I had written, and edit. Rinse & repeat. Rinse & repeat. Note how the accessible reading level (getting seriously technical only at the very end) allows learning important fundamentals without having to wade into the bowels of the article. Greg L (talk) 03:28, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
I took the liberty of revising the lede to streamline it and better make it consistent with both Minkowski space and Four-dimensional space. Once the lede is fully fleshed out and is well-focused on the proper distinctions between Einstein's view and Minkowski's view, I think the rest of the article will naturally fall into place. Greg L (talk) 18:22, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
- Einstein was well aware of invariants. You make it seem like it took Minkowski to point it out. Not true.
- Do not overemphasize the differences in how space and time are handled in the lede.
- It is not clear to what extent Einstein understood the geometric implications of his theory in 1905. Your sentence can be misconstrued.
- Lorentz understood his theory as a theory of the "electron". That gets into too much historical give and take, and the lede is not the proper place to disentangle the complex story behind this.
- Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 19:58, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
- OK. What's there now seems a decent framework for you to detail-out with your better understanding of the subject matter.
- Allow me to make a suggestion: You had something there regarding Einstein that read: and it would appear that he did not at first think geometrically about spacetime. That runs contrary to everything I've known about special relativity and I couldn't find such a statement in our special relativity article. I suggest that such a statement be avoided unless you truly think it is highly germane in the lede and it is buttressed with a citation to an exceedingly reliable source.
- I can document that statement for you. I'll upload a page to google drive from Bernard F. Schutz's book. It will probably have to be a photograph, since I'm having trouble with my scanner. Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 23:07, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

- Also, to help the reader in understanding the distinction between Minkowski space and Einstein's theory of relativity, I lifted the following right out of the article's lede on Minkowski space: In Minkowski's model, the spacetime interval between any two events is independent of the inertial frame of reference in which they are recorded. Don't you think that is the key distinction? Greg L (talk) 21:49, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
- Einstein was at first skeptical of the utility of Minkowski's geometric interpretation, because it didn't tell him anything that he didn't already know, including the fact that combining distance and time produced an invariant. Only later did he realize that the geometric interpretation fundamentally changed the mindset with which he could think through issues, and changed the sort of math that he could use. It is rather doubtful that Einstein could have developed general relativity without adopting the geometric interpretation of his theory. Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 23:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
- That's quite interesting. Because I think (very) geometrically myself. Two of my patents were geometric solutions to equations of states for gasses. One was a way of reversing-out the equation of state of a gas called sulfur hexafluoride, and the other was a new way of calculating the dew point of water (from relative humidity and temperature) using analog circuits (no microprocessor and lookup tables required).
- So whenever I saw NOVA programs on Einstein's theory of relativity, they often illustrated inertial frames of reference as graphs, like the one at right, and it is these graphs that I vividly remembered. I thought Einstein was responsible for this geometric understanding. If I'm understanding you correctly, Einstein didn't think of it this way.
- Here is a page from Schutz's book, Gravity from the Ground Up.
- https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8XIf0XcrpOcb2l3ckNfZWxDeHM/view?usp=sharing
- See the second sentence after the section header. I've seen similar statements by other authors, but I can immediately locate this statement because I've based most of my presentation on Schutz. This book, geared towards undergraduates, is an algebra-based text that includes downloadable computer programs to help students visualize topics that would otherwise require calculus. I've also taken a little bit from other, more advanced texts, but Schutz has been my "go to" source because of its unique style of presentation. The book has a web site: http://www.gravityfromthegroundup.org/ I based Fig. 1 and Fig. 5 on figures from this text. I wrote a computer program to draw the hyperbola and axes in Fig 5, hand-lettering the labels. Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 03:23, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
I see. You are very knowledgeable about the subject matter at hand. I'm very happy to see someone of your caliber giving some much-needed attention to this article. I agree that Schutz is a reliable source and he indeed wrote “Einstein himself did not at first seem to think geometrically about spacetime.” That is actually quite interesting. I note this text of Einstein's paper: ON THE ELECTRODYNAMICS OF MOVING BODIES. It is rich in formulas and I see no graphs. I can see why Schutz wrote that opinion. So all the graphs of spacetime we see today appear to be modern explanations of Einstein's math-based view of the subject matter?
I think it truly worthwhile mentioning this point somewhere in the article. However, I wouldn't personally use it in the lede because 1) of what it is (opinion of an expert on what Einstein seemed to think), 2) to avoid undo weight, and 3) ledes should be pithy places where this sort of nuance would be a bit premature and out of place. I suggest you write this little nugget on a card, stick it to your cork board, and use it somewhere in the Introduction section, near the fourth paragraph. Greg L (talk) 04:28, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
- Sounds good.
- By the way, please don't exaggerate my degree of expertise. I'm an amateur with an strong interest in the history of science. My degree is most definitely not in physics. I'm very cautious in limiting my Wikipedia contributions to things that I am reasonably knowledgeable about. :-)
- Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 05:05, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
