Talk:Spiderr/GA1
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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 21:04, 5 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: LastJabberwocky (talk · contribs) 17:45, 21 March 2025 (UTC)
Hi again :) LastJabberwocky (talk) 17:45, 21 March 2025 (UTC)
- Hey, thanks for taking another review!!!! Locust member (talk) 14:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
- Seems good, promoting! LastJabberwocky (talk) 16:36, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
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Composition
Yannik Gölz from laut.de wrote that "sometimes you have to find the pop elements behind a very unusual façade" I think the sentence feels slightly awkward, because it doesn't mention the album and sounds like Confucius' quote. I think we can cut "sometimes you have to find" and add these two songs the article mentions as examples ("I Am Slowly But Surely Losing Hope" and "Dresden Er").
- Maybe
Done? Check yourself to see if I did what I needed to do. Locust member (talk) 14:41, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
Just to point out as a possible tweak—both sentences from Pitchfork talk about album's emotions and celestial/otherworldly aesthetics. They can be merged, if it would make a good readable sentence.
- Awesome, thanks! Done Locust member (talk) 14:41, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
Songs
Both "chiptune" and "16-bit era" seem to provide the same meaning and link to one page.
- Unwikilinked 16-bit, but I left it in since Attard is talking about the 16-bit era of music which I think is different than chiptune. Locust member (talk) 14:42, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
Critical reception
it sees Bladee making his lyrics more varied. Can you make it more specific? In what department the album is varied: covers a more varied array of topic or his language is more varied, colorful?
- The source states that "Bladee's lyrical world is also increasingly nuanced", so I just changed varied to nuanced. Locust member (talk) 14:46, 22 March 2025 (UTC)
Links and sources
- All links are archived, all sources are good per WP:A/C and my experience.
- While looking through the sources, I couldn't verify this ""Icarus 3reestyle" also received a music video" attached to the 7th source.
- The article links the song; this is fine per one of the guidelines (I've been searching for it but can't find it) where it states that a youtube link, tweet, post, etc. is usable if included by a secondary source. Locust member (talk) 14:56, 22 March 2025 (UTC)