Talk:TechHaus Volantis/GA1

Passed. Arconning (talk) 06:24, 23 March 2026 (UTC)

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Nominator: Sricsi (talk · contribs) 10:56, 1 March 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 07:23, 14 March 2026 (UTC)

Shall review. Arconning (talk) 07:23, 14 March 2026 (UTC)

@Sricsi Here shall be my comments. Arconning (talk) 06:20, 20 March 2026 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

Lead and infobox

Why is Studio XO cited as the designer in the infobox while it is already cited within the body, eliminating the need to do so? Done
The first flight date of "November 10, 2013" needs to be cited. Done (cited at the Unveiling and public presentation section)
"and built by TechHaus", give context that TechHaus is the technology branch of Lady Gaga's creative team. Done

Design and development

"by the United Kingdom based", "by the United Kingdom-based" Done
"by a white moulded", could this be "molded" instead as the topic of the article is American? Done

Unveiling and public presentation

Cite its first flight date here, somewhere near mentions of the ArtRave event. Done
"In May 2017, Volantis was scheduled to be displayed in the "Drones: Is the Sky the Limit?" exhibition at the Intrepid Sea, Air & Space Museum, New York.", did the event happen? Done (rephrased, the event did happen)

Reception and commentary

No issues here.

Specifications

No issues here.

Images

All of the images used in the article are under relevant licenses and are relevant to the article. All good here.

References

Earwig turns out alright.
Reference checks: 1, 6, 11, 14. All good here.
Citation 2 is cited to Cleghorn (2014) whereas it points to the bibliography section, but there's also citation 4 (also Cleghorn (2014)) which provides a link. Try to maintain one format while eliminating the other. Done

Miscellaneous

No ongoing edit war, broad enough information, neutral.

@Arconning: I’ve addressed all your comments. - Sricsi (talk) 12:16, 20 March 2026 (UTC)

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