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Some content copied from User talk:ItsZippy#Teleological argument. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ItsZippy (talkcontribs) 19:10, 15 November 2011

I'm just getting back to this and I wanted to drop you a note to say I thought your edits were great for clarity and you brought up some good points. I'd welcome more help with any of the obscure bits I've brought back.—Machine Elf 1735 20:54, 14 November 2011 (UTC)

Ah, I was just about to post on your talk page! Thanks for your support & encouragement, I really appreciate this. I would really love to improve this article as much as possible, potentially to Good Article status - I was wondering if you'd be willing to work on this with me? I think, for the most part, the content & sources are fine - for me, clarity & style seem to be the main problems. I'll continue to work on the article, copyediting & expanding where appropriate; anything you can also contribute would be great. I'm going to archive the current talk page (which hasn't seen a post in over a year) - I'd suggest we use that to continue improving the article. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 21:02, 14 November 2011 (UTC)
Even if it weren't for the ID controversy (which I avoid as much as possible), teleology is a difficult topic. It's much more subtle than one would think given the taboo in modern science. I imagine there might be more to Thomas' argument than what's in the article now… not that it seems to have much to do with Aristotle's teleology. I'll keep an eye out for sources.
Let me know if anything's too opaque. Like adding "parts" back in v. the animal as a whole. Aristotle does treat essence in a similar way for species, but there's much more hand waving—circle of life and all that—so the claims are weaker. However, an infinite amount of time having determined the final outcome of the survival of the fittest is key to his naturalistic teleology. One quirk is that the adult form is copied verbatim from the father (in species with two sexes) so all humans have exactly the same "soul", like perfected genetic info (a ratio of the four elements). People sometimes think teleology has something to do with the future influencing past events (teleological attractor) but he always makes sure the form is available to be copied and a hypothetical chain of efficient cause takes it from there. TMI for an article talk page, no doubt… or an edit summary :) —Machine Elf 1735 00:22, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
I think we can probably cover intelligent design in an unbiased way. We just need to present the arguments and the criticisms levelled at them. I agree that Aquinas' arguments could probably be expanded and Aristotle's influence certainly needs a mention. Everything else you've said sounds fine - I'll let you know if there's anything that I feel needs urgent attention. I think we need to strike the right balance between clarity and accuracy - we need to capture all the nuances of the arguments; however, we also need to make sure that people can understand it (and, as the teleological argument is an important part of philosophy, it needs to be clear to those not well-versed in philosophy. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 19:10, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
Scholastic natural philosophy/science were heavily influenced by Aristotle and St.Thomas in particular, but Fresonke, being literary rather than philosophical, is quite confused and wrong about Aristotle:
As with his other arguments, Aquinas' teleological argument was based on Aristotle's ideas, though Aquinas moved away from Aristotle's assumptions about teleology and based his argument on experience of objects in the world.<ref>{{cite book | title=West of Emerson: the design of manifest destiny | publisher=University of California Press | author=Fresonke, Kris | year=2003 | pages=3-4 | isbn=9780520231856 | url=http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=1ar_OqzDUJAC&lpg=PA3&dq=aquinas%20teleological%20argument%20aristotle&pg=PA3#v=onepage&q=aquinas%20teleological%20argument%20aristotle&f=false}}</ref>
Teleology isn't a priori so it's not really in contrast to an a posteriori argument. What's supposedly based on Aristotle if not “teleology”? (I didn't suggest that Aristotle's influence needs a mention, btw).
Maybe Fresonke's thinking of the Cosmological argument but it's not from Aristotle's Metaphysics. (It's from St.Thomas). There's at least half a dozen references in the article saying that Aristotle did not believe in a designer and that his teleology implies no such thing. He didn't even believe nature could be designed, rather manufactured artifacts always imitate natural forms (his gods certainly weren't capable of intelligent design).
Like Dawkins' said: “The observed fact is that every species, and every organ that has ever been looked at within every species, is good at what it does. The wings of birds, bees and bats are good at flying. Eyes are good at seeing. Leaves are good at photosynthesizing. We live on a planet where we are surrounded by perhaps ten million species, each one of which independently displays a powerfull illusion of apparent design.” So powerful Aristotle thought it might briefly fool a caveman.—Machine Elf 1735 01:23, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
I think Aristotle's influence on Aquinas should be in the article, though, as I mentioned in the edit summary, I'm not completely happy with what I put in. It'd be good to make that more accurate, though. I'm not quite sure of the relevance of your Dawkins' quote, though. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 18:39, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Kierkegaard

The new edit about SK needs a secondary citation saying the quote is actually about the Teleological argument. It looks like it says that any argument may be disproved in the future. Myrvin (talk) 14:48, 21 November 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing that out. I planned to look through the criticisms soon, so I'll have a look at Kierkegaard when I get there and see what references I can find. If you know of any references, feel free to add them. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 22:06, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
I've expanded and sourced some of what Kierkegaard said; however, this remains unsourced:
"He proposed that the argument from design does not take into consideration future events which may serve to undermine the proof of God's existence: the argument would never finish proving God's existence."
I've spent a while looking for sources and cannot find anything which suggests that Kierkegaard posited this argument; I shall removed that bit from the article. If anyone manages to find a source for it, please re-add the content, with the source. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 17:23, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
On further examination, it seems that the quotation provided (which is adequately sourced) supports such a view. ItsZippy (talkcontributions) 17:26, 26 November 2011 (UTC)

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