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Paganism????
why the hell is this religion referred as paganism in the article? you referend it via it's relation to judaism? does the world revolve around judaism. i call bias. christian bias. it's not neutral when referred to via it's relation to judeo christian religions.
- Pagan: "Paganism...is a blanket term used to refer to various polytheistic, non Abrahamic religious traditions." Simple; just about every religion appart from Judaism, Christianity & Islam is included - it's barely bias, everything is relative. Nothing's purely "neutral"... Would you like Wikipedia to name all of Odin's names in the Odin article every time he's referred to? If that's the case; what order do they go in without being bias?..... Anyway - I have made the Abrahamic articles more in line with pagan ones and labelled them as such, seeing as though pagan articles are always labelled Pagan --Kurtle (talk) 01:58, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
- Thor is written (and portrayed) as a goat-herder from Israel. Odin (his father) is believed to be from Iraq (Babylon). Snorri claims that it is thees people who founded Troy in Turkey. The birthplace of Thor is the land of Jord (his mother) which is called Jorsaland (Israel). —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.211.240.131 (talk) 02:10, 6 August 2010 (UTC)
- Snorri is not the canon version of Thor just because he put the most stuff on paper. He was also under the yoke of christianity, and writing centuries after most areas had stopped hailing the Aesir and Aesynjur. Not to mention writing from the perspective of exiles on the far-flung western edge of the world. Also, Snorri's prose-edda storytellers later say they made the whole thing up, and then change their names to match the characters they created. 75.170.66.1 (talk) 17:14, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thor is written (and portrayed) as a goat-herder from Israel. Odin (his father) is believed to be from Iraq (Babylon). Snorri claims that it is thees people who founded Troy in Turkey. The birthplace of Thor is the land of Jord (his mother) which is called Jorsaland (Israel). —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.211.240.131 (talk) 02:10, 6 August 2010 (UTC)
Main portrait of Thor
Perhaps an explanation/link as to the swastika on Thors belt on the main picture (Thor's battle against the giants (1872) by Mårten Eskil Winge.) could be included for the curious. 14:32, 3 February 2009 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.45.192.123 (talk)
- IIRC, the swastika is a symbol of good fortune before the Nazis perverted its meaning by taking it as their emblem. But don't take my word for it, that should be easy to look up, like here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swastika. --76.223.3.195 (talk) 09:55, 9 September 2009 (UTC)
Nordic believe
I have never heard of artifacts, runes etc. from what is now germany. Some of the stories hase some similarities with other ancient religions. But thats the same with the christian believe. meny stories from the old testament hase similarities with other believes from that time and area. Therefore, Tor is part of the Aser believe, wich is clearly a Nordic believe, for the poeple known as the Wikings. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Andre Jensen.41.220.232.121 (talk) 08:19, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
- What indeed, there are definitely archaeological finds located in modern Germany. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.180.26.208 (talk) 04:17, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
This guy must learn to spell. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 174.18.197.217 (talk) 07:03, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
Thor here is a God, which swings his hammer but these are just romantic interpretations of Thor. Thor indeed is a protector and does not imply any overt aggression. The 'real' Thor in the German text for Thor seems more fitting. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.20.0.125 (talk) 01:08, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
Is there a Thor's Day?
I don't have a good source, but I have read that July 28 is the day Thor is honored. Can someone confirm? If so, how was it celebrated? This is of interest to those of us born on July 28. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.228.224.65 (talk) 23:56, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
- There is no basis for such a day. Thursday literally means "Thor's day," however. :bloodofox: (talk) 00:25, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
- The only thing I can think of is the very important Nordic Christian celebration Olsok (28th to 29th of July) which is merely a continuation of an older, heathen custom. I don't know whether it was strictly associated with Thor, but he might have played an important role, at least. The material about this is rather scarce. I will try to dig up some more information. –Holt (T•C) 18:36, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- Seems like St. Olaf replaced Thor in many aspects. –Holt (T•C) 19:02, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- A traditional Olsok celebration is celebrated with bonfires, porridge and general festivities, by the way. –Holt (T•C) 19:19, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- As :bloodofox: stated, there is a Thor's day every week - that is how awesome he is!!!--Kurtle (talk) 01:29, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
In a more modern context, we of the Cult of St. Olaf have degreed Thanksgiving Day, the only important holiday slated to be held exclusively on Thursday (Thorsday) to be a special day dedicated to the memory of Thor, the protector and provider. Seeing that this day is traditionally celebrated through prodigious feats of eating and drinking, it is only fitting that we have appropriated this holiday for Thor by right of Viking Conquest. - Mycool Dad, Lord High Defender of the Sons of Thunder —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.18.72.25 (talk) 23:11, 15 November 2010 (UTC)
Of course every Thursday is "Thor's day" if you like, but ultimately that's just the translation of dies Iovi, not an actual religious dedication within Norse paganism. A real Thor's day in that sense would be Þorrablót, in late January. Yes I know the current festival is a Romanticist revival, but as far as we can tell the thing being revived is a historical midwinter sacrifice dedicated to Thor. --dab (𒁳) 11:34, 16 November 2010 (UTC)
- Um no, it's historically just Þorra, for some guy named Þorri. Yngvadottir (talk) 15:36, 16 November 2010 (UTC)
I got interested in this, see Talk:Þorri. There is a lot of material in there on how Thor relates to the supposed prehistoric "Othinic invasion" of Scandinavia. This article seems to miss out on this huge topic altogether. Like most of our polytheism articles, it just follows mainstream tradition naively without reporting on the scholarship examining the marginal traditions. In general, Wikipedia is plagued by the widespread failure to recognize (prevalent even among Neopagans) that historical polytheism is in essence regional, and the major mythologies after-the-fact scholarly attempts to make sense of mutually contradicting traditions. --dab (𒁳) 18:35, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
- Yes, there is a lot less certainty than one might think from reading our articles. The reliable sources policy tends to mitigate against including alternate points of view, particularly since there is a strong bias towards recent sources. (I strongly disagree that either Germanic religion or Medieval studies should have the scientific axiom applied that the latest work is always the best.) I have too much COI to feel I should edit this article much, and I find the Good Article and Featured Article criteria bewildering in practice, so I'm staying out of working here as far as possible because I recognise the importance other editors place on getting the article up to GA standard. It was on my list to improve, and is now much better; I would have done it very differently and cited different academics, and I agree there are things still not covered, but to be frank I doubt other editors would like my version even if I were able to keep it NPOV (which on these topics is hard anyway - the official policy against Fringe viewpoints clashes badly in practice with the official policy of representing minority views, combating recentism and majority religious/social assumptions). I'm trying to be both principled and collaborative here, sorry if it sounds negative or wishy-washy. (I also avoid editing in the specific area of my dissertation.) It doesn't help that no dissertation or book has been written on Thor, unlike scads on Odin and at least one each on Heimdall and Freyr. Yngvadottir (talk) 20:13, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
- Guys, if there's something missing here (this article, Thor) or something you have a problem with, there is nothing stopping you from specifically spelling it out for discussion.
- Yngvadottir, the big deal with GA certification is that it meets a very logical checklist mostly consisting of basic check ups and blatantly spelled out sources. Logical enough, but all too uncommonly seen in Wikiland. That said, while this article was rewritten to GA criteria (Wikipedia:Good article criteria), keep in mind that this article is by no means in a state developed enough to get to GA status. After I launched the rewrite, I posted a list of material that I intend to cover when continuing with this article (below). There is much to be added here. :bloodofox: (talk) 23:06, 17 November 2010 (UTC)
well, sure, as you may note we already are discussing it. this also wasn't a criticism of this article in particular, it was a criticism of very nearly most of our articles about gods. They are generally rather mediocre. I do work on them occasionally, but there are hundreds of gods and this isn't my main focus on Wikipedia, so I do not propose to fix this single-handedly within the next couple of decades.
I don't care about GA certification, it means nothing. Poor articles are granted it on formal grounds, and excellent articles are withheld it, also on formal ground. GA is essentially a check of WP:MOS, it has little or nothing to do with article content. --dab (𒁳) 13:21, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
- If you are referring to any of the Germanic deity articles that I have brought to GA status, you are welcome to state your specific criticisms. However, I feel that the articles I have brought to GA standard are easily the finest resources on said deities that one can find anywhere, internet or not. That said, the articles on deities outside of the Germanic sphere do tend to be pretty awful, but that's just a matter of someone knowledgeable, patient, and passionate enough coming along to set things right, of course.
- I strongly disagree with your assessment of the GA process. I think it's a fine standard, and the review process ideally roots out neutrality issues, prose problems, and, well, influences everything else about the article. I've dealt with some dud reviews in the past, and some extremely extensive ones, but they generally tend to be fine, and my editing here has certainly been influenced for the better by way of that process. Consider giving it a second chance. :) :bloodofox: (talk) 16:03, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
THOR Comics
In 1966, Marvel Comics gave the God of Thunder his own title. Written by Stan Lee and illustrated by Jack Kirby and Vince Colletta, the stories were set in Norse mythology and rendered elegantly. Many feel that these books represented the pinnacle of comic book art.<a href="http://good-times.webshots.com/photo/2648474540104247722pmloOv"><img src="http://inlinethumb32.webshots.com/4703/2648474540104247722S200x200Q85.jpg" alt="thor 126"></a> Franklin222 (talk) 03:13, 17 September 2009 (UTC)Franklin222
Thorium?
Didn't Thorium come from Thor? 23191Pa (chat me, but mind the alphas!) 12:19, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
yeah the element Thorium (atomic number 90) is named after Thor Thor cherubim (talk) 08:40, 26 May 2011 (UTC)
Toponyms
It seems like some of the places listed might be named after people rather than the god. If such-n-such place is actually named after a particular man named Thor, then I don't think it should be listed. What do you think?--Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk) 09:17, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
File:Louis Huard - Giant Skrymir and Thor.jpg to appear as POTD soon
Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that File:Louis Huard - Giant Skrymir and Thor.jpg will be appearing as picture of the day on July 15, 2010. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2010-07-15. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page so Wikipedia doesn't look bad. :) Thanks! howcheng {chat} 18:17, 13 July 2010 (UTC)
Placenames in England
It seems generally agreed that all the Thur- placenames in England, such as Thurstable, go back to A-S Þunor not ON Þórr. There are also some Scandinavian placenames that appear to be from the personal name Þorri. I have found only one English placename that the experts say may be from ON Þórr: Tarbock, a stream in the Liverpool area. Yngvadottir (talk) 15:35, 19 August 2010 (UTC)
- Simek isn't particularly clear here and he does not give an example, so I went ahead and pulled it. We could conceivably come up with a list of placenames named after Thor, if anyone wanted to put the time in. :bloodofox: (talk) 17:19, 19 August 2010 (UTC)
Where we stand
The article has now been completely rewritten to good article specifications, but it is far from done. Here are some things that we are currently missing:
- An 'archaeological record' section handling Thor's association with thunderstones
- A summary of Thor's appearances in the Prose Edda, Heimskringla, Gesta Danorum and sagas
- 19th century folk beliefs expanded to include, for example, traditional Scandinavian songs referring to Thor's loss of his hammer
- A 'theories and interpretations' section handling the Fjörgyn and Fjörgynn issue, and, related, Thor's correspondence to Indra and other Indo-European cognates
- Surely there were/are more animals or objects named after Thor than just the fox recorded in Iceland?
On a related note, we still have this waiting in the graphic lab line, so if anyone out there wants to take some time out to try their hand out at vectorizing this widely used image, it would be a big help. My thanks to those of you who are helping out with the article. :bloodofox: (talk) 17:33, 19 August 2010 (UTC)
I agree that this is far from done.
Toc suggestion
The current article structure is somewhat clumsy, especially the "Attestations" section. I suggest we split it in a "History" section, dealing with the general timeline of what is kown about Thor's cult, and a separate h2 "Edda" section, addressing the substantial information based on the Edda (which is now stashed away under "Post-Viking Age").
Conceivably it would make even more sense to separate a "Cult" from a "Mythology" section, as we usually do with well-attested classical gods. It is definitely my opinion that an account of any deity should be based on discussing "Cult" and "Mythology" as two dimensions of their character. "History" and "Geography" add two more dimensions, so it isn't always easy to decide which arrangement the material should be given and there is certainly room for debate here. --dab (𒁳) 13:27, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
- This is how I see the current state of the article: the current article is basically only part of a skeleton, but it is logically arranged in two major parts: attestations and archaeological record; our two major sources on the god, his myths, and his cult. The material is then further arranged by chronology. The Old Norse material, particularly in the Poetic Edda' and Prose Edda, is pretty extensive and a treatment of the latter has yet to be added. Otherwise there's a pretty fair amount of material in various sagas and other bits here and there. The material from Heimskringla and Gesta Danorum would potentially constitute a section each. This post-Viking Age material may be developed to the point where it may need to be spun off to a separate article, but I would first want to wait and see. I also intend to continue to rewrite a lot of articles surrounding Thor to GA standard.
- Scholarly discussion about Thor's cult is definitely needed in the article, and we are currently missing a section where one would ideally find summarized theories about Thor's cult and so on (see other articles I've rewritten on related subject matter for what I mean). Normally this can all be fairly quickly done if one is familiar with the source material, but Thor is unique situation where there is just so much of it, and, as Yngvadottir pointed out above, Thor seems to lack a general study to draw from that would quicken the process.
- I have intended to sit down and further develop this to the outline above for a few months now - it's my Wikipedia priority - but I am currently lacking in time. :bloodofox: (talk) 16:21, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
- I see your idea, and it's not terrible, but it prevents the article from evolving beyond a stale list of primary references, into a coherent presentation of secondary references.
- I do not want to become too involved in this and I'll certainly not push anything against your opposition, but I would recommend to give at least the Eddaic stuff its own h2 section to separate it from the discussion of Thor in the "Post-Viking Age", i.e. the Christian Middle Ages. Of course the Edda was recorded in the Christian period, but it is our main source for the pagan period, and the content of the Edda, the compilation of which was an antiquarian enterprise on the part of Snorri, should be treated separately from the discussion of how Thor was seen in the 13th to 16th centuries (euhemerizing legends).
- As the article stands, it is very far from being a balanced encyclopedia article. It gives excessive summaries of the primary (Eddaic) stuff and fails to represent the secondary (scholarly) angle. The ideal encyclopedia discusses secondary literature exclusively and does without excursions into primary sources as far as possible. --dab (𒁳) 09:05, 19 November 2010 (UTC)
- My intention is to put the secondary stuff in its own section, as there are very different interpretations of the source material abound. That's the problem with most of these articles; if the theories and interpretations aren't isolated, it's unclear where the primary sources begin and the opinions on them end. The three major encyclopedias in the English language on Germanic paganism and myth (Simek, Lindow, Orchard) generally trot out the evidence first and then propose their interpretations for this reason. This makes each mythical twist and turn turn into a complex affair when dealing with several competing opinions and theories, so I think it's far wiser to just spit out the attestations on their own terms and then go into the major theories surrounding them in a separate section with maybe a few "see ____ sections" here and there.
- With this article, the problem has so far been finding a proper study on Thor. I finally got a copy of Davidson's impressive Scandinavian Mythology, and it has an extensive treatment of Thor in a pan-Germanic context. Davidson has written a lot on Thor in the past, and I think this would be a fine place to start with a 'theories and interpretations' section. :bloodofox: (talk) 19:23, 9 January 2011 (UTC)
Amon Amarth
I don't know if this has already been discussed but would the "modern culture" section benefit from the mention of many music bands (specifically heavy metal bands) that make use of Thor in song lyrics and even titles? (I wrote Amon Amarth because they use Norse mythology very heavily in song lyrics/titles) Would this even be pertenent to the article? Prussian725 (talk) 04:35, 28 February 2011 (UTC)
- Probably... cause we are... guardians... guardians of Asgard... (we work for Asgard as guards) 75.170.66.1 (talk) 17:04, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
How old is the root word?
I found out the Latin verb for thunder is "tonare" which is too close to "Donnar" to be coincidence... but the Romans didn't have a Tonar god of thunder. There should be a section tracing the root of "thunder" and also the history of the hammer-god including Uralic sources and equivalents like Perkons, Ukko or Ilmarinen 75.170.66.1 (talk) 17:33, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
Thor the Red-Bearded
Regarding a recently placed reference request tag on the lead section of this article (); while a quick ctrl + f of the article brings up examples of the apparently wide-spread belief that Thor was red bearded/red-haired (try "Thor of the Holt", "red-haired thunder"), the article is currently lacking Old Norse material handling this. It's not in the article yet (saga material isn't yet handled), and I'm not exactly sure where this is off of the top of my head, but I believe it's in at least one saga. In relation, Dumézil has commented a fair amount about Thor's general association with the color red as well (as a part of his trifunctional hypothesis—this article does not yet cover this either). :bloodofox: (talk) 16:54, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
- See the edit I just made adding citations via HRED (and de Vries, who unfortunately just cited it to volume and page in Fornaldur sögur, entailing a bit of a search). I'm afraid you'll have to wrassle it into the bibliographic format used in the article. If you want me to write up the association of the red beard with the lightning, will do and put it here. Yngvadottir (talk) 17:15, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. As for Sturleson's Icelandic saga, it's usually translated to say Thor's (and Sif's) hair was "fairer than gold" as opposed to "more beautiful than gold", isn't it? Til Eulenspiegel (talk) 18:10, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks, Yngvadottir. Fine work as always! Sure, I am interested in having a look at their response to this "red lightning" business, which I have encountered in 19th century works fairly frequently but haven't pushed any further (particularly since I've never seen red lightning...). :bloodofox: (talk) 18:14, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
- Also, as Yngvadottir makes clear, I should have taken another look at the Prose Edda prologue attestation as it doesn't make the odd claim that Thor is a blonde. And, Til, just so we're all on the same page, the prologue isn't a saga, but is rather one of four books/sections/parts that make up the Prose Edda.
- As for the line in question, here are some translations:
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- So, as you can see, Yngvadottir is correct. But, indeed, Sif's hair is widely attested as gold, and this, combined with some of her other attestations ("Sif" appearing as a heiti for "earth", for example), has resulted in the popular theory that it is connected to golden grain. In relation to this, see the Davidson quote in the "origin, theories, and interpretations" section of this article. :bloodofox: (talk) 19:23, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks again to both of you for the research to answer my questions. It makes me wonder now what the original Icelandic phrase would be for "more beautiful / fairer than gold"...! Til Eulenspiegel (talk) 20:53, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
- My pleasure. The Old Norse line discussed above is hár hans er fegra en gull (and so to me Brodeur's looks best). :) :bloodofox: (talk) 21:26, 28 April 2011 (UTC)
Here's Brodeur in parallel with the Old Norse - section 3. I looked first at Faulkes and then at my xerox of Finnur Jónsson's diplomatic edition '-) I grew up with Jean Young's version; she has "his hair was lovelier than gold." Notice that most translators are eliding Snorri's tense change: Thor's hair is more beautiful than gold, but of Sif he says: Hár hennar var sem gull - "Her hair was like gold." Weaker praise and past tense. Anyway, this is from the Prologue, which is a masterwork of political spin.
So, anyway . . . Ellis Davidson in Gods and Myths of Northern Europe cites Thor appearing in a dream to a Christian convert in Flóamanna saga, "big and red-bearded", and Thorhall in the Saga of Erik the Red boasting about the whale that Thor has provided in answer to his prayers, "Redbeard has got the better of your Christ!" Both of these on p. 85. On pp. 85-86 she adds that his terrible piercing eyes and "fearsome voice" are also mentioned many times.
Jan de Vries, Altgermanische Religionsgeschichte volume 2, Grundriß der germanischen Philologie begründet von Hermann Paul 12/II, 2nd ed. 1957, 3rd unchanged ed. Berlin: de Gruyter 1970, p. 122, states that his large red beard was formerly often interpreted as a symbol of lightning - I presume he means by the Nature Mythologists - and also mentions the terrifying power of his voice as characteristic. But he prefers to see the red beard as typifying Nordic manhood; on p. 149 and he points out with references to Livy and Tacitus (note 3: "Cf. Livius XXXVIII, 17, 3 and Tacitus, Hist IV, 61.") that Germanic (and Gaulish) warriors would dye their hair red before battle. He lists this redness of Thor's beard as a similarity with Óðinn, one of whose many names is rauðgrani - "Red Grani" (also p. 149). De Vries' supporting reference on p. 122 is to the Flateyjarbók version of the Saga of Olaf Tryggvason. But Ellis Davidson cites this to show Thor creating a storm by blowing out his beard:
(Also p. 85, and her citation is Flateyjarbók I, 248) Ellis Davidson sees emphasis on the connection between Thor's red beard and the raising of the wind, and suggests that the "old explanation" that it "denoted the lightning" was more true than the "popular suggestion" that the beard made Thor "the typical unshaven Viking." She suggests the red color is based on "the red sky which foretells a storm."
Do with this what you will to fit it into the article neatly - I have quoted rather than paraphrase over-closely. But I suggest something along the lines of "In one saga, Thor blows out his beard to produce lightning, and his red beard, several times mentioned in sagas, has been seen as a representation of lightning, its color perhaps from the red sky that warns of a storm. But Roman historians told of Germanic (and Gaulish) warriors dying their hair red before battle, so the beard and its color have both been seen as making Thor a typical Germanic or viking warrior." Yngvadottir (talk) 19:34, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
- Fascinating stuff, Yngvadottir! This article has a ways to go yet, but we're getting there. One thing that has been bothering me a lot lately is that the Mjöllnir article, which is getting a lot of attention, could use a rewrite to WP:GA standards. I'd like to take care of that before expanding on this one (I find that taking care of supporting articles first tends to make it far easier to handle their larger articles), especially since it has such a bearing on modern Germanic neopaganism. :bloodofox: (talk) 18:06, 4 May 2011 (UTC)
Is here any mention of Jordr as his mother? Can we view Jord and Fyorgy as the same deity (if they are deities)?--Mychele (talk)
- Yes, there are textual sources calling him the child of Jǫrðr and of Fjǫrgyn. Some scholars therefore argue that they are the same goddess (I see that that version is in the article but the cite Jarðar Burr is not). Others have identified Fjǫrgyn with Frigg, since one textual passage refers to Óðinn as Fjǫrgynn, the male counterpart of the name. Yngvadottir (talk) 19:10, 7 May 2011 (UTC)
Have seen modern adaptations of Thors warhammer worn by so called "Pagans" Was this done in ancient times too?
Have seen small replicas of Thors War Hammer Worn by modern "Pagans" as a symbol of being a Pagan. as this done in ancient times as well?WEREWOLFID (talk) 01:40, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, at least after contact with Christians wearing crosses: see Mjölnir. It was also put on graves and memorials to ward them against desecration. But the majority of modern pagans who wear a Thor's hammer are adherents of Germanic neo-paganism; other modern pagans usually don't. Yngvadottir (talk) 04:06, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Thor in The Almighty Johnsons
Infobox
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Norse Gods
Thor/Tor
Reviewer: Shii (talk · contribs) 06:34, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Thor/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- The section from the Edda is slightly long and quotes extensively from a single source, even though the Edda can reasonably be said to be the best source for understanding Thor's traditional role. I am concerned that the reader could lose the focus of the text here.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Excellent use of free images from Commons, although ideally, the images should be more clearly centered on Thor's person (it's okay to crop them), and there should be more color. Good use of galleries.
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Hello and thank you for the kind words about the article. I should note that I am the primary author of this article as it stands and yet I don't think the article is GA material; the Poetic Edda material needs to be expanded upon, as does a fair amount of the Prose Edda material, which means a significant amount of work. It also needs a comparative section in the theories section. Before these sections are in a reasonable state I cannot support this article reaching GA status. :bloodofox: (talk) 08:47, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
- I do think the article is quite good, and while a comparative section would be nice I don't think it's necessary for GA (which only means the article is decent, not totally complete). What you should be focusing on is getting both the Prose and Poetic Edda sections into something that is both succinct and hits all the important points. Shii (tock) 13:07, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
- Hello and thank you for the kind words about the article. I should note that I am the primary author of this article as it stands and yet I don't think the article is GA material; the Poetic Edda material needs to be expanded upon, as does a fair amount of the Prose Edda material, which means a significant amount of work. It also needs a comparative section in the theories section. Before these sections are in a reasonable state I cannot support this article reaching GA status. :bloodofox: (talk) 08:47, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
- GA criteria requires inline citations for quotations. While an end of paragraph citation is perfectly acceptable, it doesn't hurt to have a closer citation as that is immediately reassuring for a reader. While not at all required for GA (or indeed anywhere at all on Wikipedia), if a source has been scanned and appears online in a legitimate format, such as Google Books, it is immensely helpful to link to that online source. At a quick scan, this looks like a very decent article. SilkTork ✔Tea time 13:01, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
Since that's the only issue and, iven the why it's structured the ref can be easily figured out, the review can now be closed. Wizardman 03:50, 17 November 2012 (UTC)