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New section
There are many general articles here that contain sections pertaining to one country. They should not be removed simply because of that, especially if showing an approach usable in other countries. Note the built-in correction for inflation. Here it is for reconsideration. -72.37.249.60 (talk) 18:09, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
Full Protection 1 week
I thought my revert and comment would be sufficient, but I supposed not as there seems to be more dogs in this hunt than I thought. Being the type article it is, I would err on the conservative side and I have fully protected for 1 week, reverting back to the prior status, which is probably the Wrong Version, so it isn't an endorsement of any version, just a previously used marker in the road. I do see a split just took place, which is likely part of the issue, but surely you can work this out. If you reach consensus early, ping me to unprotect. Dennis Brown - 2¢ © Join WER 14:00, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
- On an unrelated note, I was disappointed that this article had not achieved GA status. Surely a topic as broad and important as this deserves the investment of time and energy. Dennis Brown - 2¢ © Join WER 14:23, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
- Well yes it'd be nice if it would too, but let's get it right first :) Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:49, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for protecting. I think the record-breaking tree section should be split off when protection is lifted. Binksternet (talk) 17:25, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- I'm unsure what you mean. The Record-breaking trees section was split off on 1st August when I created the article in this form. All that remains here is a brief summary. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:13, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- Ah, yes, I was looking at the earlier version. Thanks! Binksternet (talk) 19:55, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- I'm unsure what you mean. The Record-breaking trees section was split off on 1st August when I created the article in this form. All that remains here is a brief summary. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:13, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
Reversion
I find it very disappointing that the article has been reverted back to its original state without consensus on this page as to which version to retain.
Casliber made a suggestion on August 3rd (which seems to have got edited out of the talk page above) - "I think there is ample scope for going forward, and maybe discussing each section (with both corresponding versions and combining best of each) below individually in a start to steer this back into a collaborative effort. Both editors want the article to be improved, so let's make a start now. I'll ask some editors with botanical knowledge to have a look as well so we can get an informed consensus." Why don't we proceed in this way? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:46, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- I agree, let's do that. And until we have consensus on how to combine the articles, lets stick with a version where 2/3 of the content is not incorrect or misleading. I'm all for discussing and combining the articles, but we shouldn't allow a version to stand while it is misleading and inaccurate, should we? People will be reading the article in the meantime and being misled. At the very least we need to remove provable factual errancies before an edit can be accepted. Wouldn't you agree?Mark Marathon (talk) 09:00, 11 August 2012 (UTC).Mark Marathon (talk) 08:55, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Mark, why would you "start" by gutting large portions of the article? How did you take what Cwmhiraeth said to be a mandate to rip out 60k worth of article? I protected the article because of actions like that. You don't start building consensus by first reverting the article to your preferred version. What you are doing here looks dangerously like continuing an edit war Mark, and I'm not prone to protect again, but instead start blocking people. I strongly suggest reverting yourself now and instead working on one section at a time, so I'm not forced to think you are being disruptive and edit warring. I've left a note on your talk page as well Mark, since I would prefer you to just self-correct, rather than forcing me to block you. Dennis Brown - 2¢ © Join WER 12:44, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- WTF? I am merely following WP:BRD. Cwmhiraeth has made his changes. I have reverted those changes. Now we are discussing the changes he would like to make in order to reach a compromise. According to BRD, Cwmhiraeth should now avoid reverting my revert. Instead he should go to the talk page to learn why he was reverted. I have no idea how you see this as continuing an edit war when I am scrupulously following Wikipedia methodology. I will put the same questions to you Dennis. Do you believe we should allow Cwmhiraeth's version to stand while it is provably misleading and inaccurate? Would you agree that, at the very least, we need to remove provable factual errancies and unverifiable material before the edit can be accepted? Or is verifiability no longer Wikipedia policy? Mark Marathon (talk) 12:58, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Actually, fuck it. I have had enough of this bullshit and threats from Admins. The article is absolute drek written by somebody who admits he has not the least expertise in the field. It is full of unverified and unverifiable bullshit and heinously misleading material in direct contravention of Wikipedia policy. But if all the reward an expert gets for trying to correct these blatant errors is this sort of shit, the article can stay as it is. And long may it stand as a testament to the way the Wikipedia Old Boys club works. I dearly hope that it gets Good Article status in its current form. Wikipedia deserves it. Good Luck.Mark Marathon (talk) 13:13, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- WP:BRD isn't an excuse to continue an edit war that has already forced the page to be fully protected. The whole purpose of protection is to stop reverts and force discussion. As for which version should "stand", I obviously don't have an opinion else I couldn't act in an administrative role here. I don't care what version you all agree on, only that you agree on it instead of warring. Dennis Brown - 2¢ © Join WER 14:02, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- I am asking someone from WikiProject Plants to look at the article and provide guidance on the information in it and how it can be improved. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 16:00, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Curtis Clark is a botanist and a member of WikiProject Plants, and he expressed a concern that the re-written version by Cwmhiraeth was the "wrong" version to preserve, a view with which, on initial inspection, I am inclined to concur. Not only that but on the point of Wiki-etiquette the version preferred by Mark Marathon should be the starting point, as this was the version that existed prior to all the recent changes and warring. Curtis Clark also made that point. Although Mark Marathon did subsequently edit war, he was in fact only employing WP:BRD initially when he removed the rewritten version, but unfortunately he didn't leave an edit summary when he did this, so his removal was unexplained and so Drmies reverted and then it all escalated. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 16:59, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- I am asking someone from WikiProject Plants to look at the article and provide guidance on the information in it and how it can be improved. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 16:00, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- To me, the sequence of the BRD started out correctly. Cwmhiraeth was bold, Mark Marathon reverted, and then Mark Marathon initiated a discussion. The first time it went awry was when Drmies restored the article. Evidently, though, an accusation of edit warring trumps an attempt to follow actual recommended procedure. It's clear from all this that there will be a whole lot of unnecessary dramaz prior to any useful work being done on the article, and I have little enough time for useful work and no time for dramaz.--Curtis Clark (talk) 22:35, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Compromise: how about moving Cwmhiraeth's version to a subpage here first while both parties work out the kinks? You both agree that the article still needs work. And though I'm also far from being anything approaching a botanist, the points Mark raised are quite valid and serious. Being live or not, doesn't really matter that much overall while it's still being worked on. Nothing's getting lost here, just tempers it seems. -- OBSIDIAN†SOUL 17:04, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Edit warring is edit warring, and Mark Marathon has reverted twice now since the protection was over. There are plenty of opportunities to make productive edits in either version, but Marathon shows no inclination of doing that. For example, I've pointed at the overblown EL section before, which he keeps reinstating as well. He could show some good faith by actually contributing as an editor instead of simply being a reverter. Drmies (talk) 20:58, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- For the sake of us mere botanists, could someone line up the two versions in clearly separate places so that we can look them over without getting confused by edit wars? Thanks. Sminthopsis84 (talk) 21:35, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Edit warring is edit warring, and Mark Marathon has reverted twice now since the protection was over. There are plenty of opportunities to make productive edits in either version, but Marathon shows no inclination of doing that. For example, I've pointed at the overblown EL section before, which he keeps reinstating as well. He could show some good faith by actually contributing as an editor instead of simply being a reverter. Drmies (talk) 20:58, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
- Compromise: how about moving Cwmhiraeth's version to a subpage here first while both parties work out the kinks? You both agree that the article still needs work. And though I'm also far from being anything approaching a botanist, the points Mark raised are quite valid and serious. Being live or not, doesn't really matter that much overall while it's still being worked on. Nothing's getting lost here, just tempers it seems. -- OBSIDIAN†SOUL 17:04, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
As the originator of this version of the article I would like to retain it in preference to the original version of Tree which existed before. Of course I am biased because I spent two and a half weeks researching and writing the new version in my userspace and don't like to think it was wasted effort. Mark Marathon did not approve of my new version and pointed out a number of things he disliked. I have rewritten the lead section and the section "Types and terminology" to try and accommodate his views but there was no pleasing him. If there are errors in the main body of the article, any editor can correct them or point out where I have gone wrong but nobody has done so yet.
Now lets look at the alternative which you can see here. The lead section does not summarise what is in the rest of the article, but tries to establish how big a woody plant must be to be described as a tree. It also contains the sentence "Compared with most other plants, trees are long-lived, some reaching several thousand years old ...", a fact that Mark has been disputing earlier on this page because I included it in my version. He similarly objected at great length to the sentence "A young tree is called a sapling." which I copied into my new version from the old one. The "Classification" and "Morphology" sections are unobjectionable but leave out a lot of information that I have included in my version. The "Damage" section would need to be removed because it duplicates the article Tree health which I separated out when I replaced the old version with the new. Mark knew about that article because he disfigured it with [citation needed] and [clarification needed] tags but he does not seem to care when the same information forms part of the old version of Tree that he would have us return to. Then we have an almost non-existent "Trees in culture" followed by "Tree value approximation (USA)" which I don't like because it lacks context, gives 1985 figures and refers only to the USA. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:45, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
Working on the rewrite
I saw this discussion at Wikiproject Plants. I opened the rewrite to see what the problem is, and I think working on a version with so many problems would be counterproductive. It is hard to be less established as an editor on Wikipedia, see a problem, and try to fix it, then get met with battles. I have tried and failed in the past and had to simply let errors exist. I also think that editors without knowledge of an area do good work identify long-standing problems, but sometimes they do need more expert help than they realize. Could we move forward rewriting the article without the rewrite? I am willing to help. I have background in botany and forestry. I also would like to see an extant gymnosperm or non-monocot as the lead picture. Eau (talk) 16:40, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
- Agree with Eau. Expert editors will take more time to correct this article than to create a new one. I also endorse rewriting without using the rewrite.Ethel Aardvark (talk) 01:53, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
- I had a quick look, and clearly there are subsidiary articles that need cleaning up, so all that I can undertake to do is a very slow bottom-up effort starting on those articles. Sminthopsis84 (talk) 14:12, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
- Agree with Eau. Expert editors will take more time to correct this article than to create a new one. I also endorse rewriting without using the rewrite.Ethel Aardvark (talk) 01:53, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Can we replace the trumpet vine with a tree picture
The image under "Reproduction" of humming birds at Campsis radicans is not ideal for a page about trees. I've looked for a photo of butterflies pollinating Delonix regia without success, but perhaps someone can suggest a good alternative. Sminthopsis84 (talk) 17:24, 17 August 2012 (UTC)

- I have replaced the image with a nice one of a moth-pollinated flower which goes with the text. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:37, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
Reproduction -- prose, not class notes
The section on reproduction sounds like class notes because it is. It should be written in prose, not jargon, and developed in an orderly fashion, not just moved line by line, lightly rearranged from a Power Point presentation. As a copy paste, and tired of reading about flowering gymnosperms, I removed it. Unless you have botanical knowledge to do better, let's leave out the copypaste and angioGymnosperms for now. Eau (talk) 16:29, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
- You have removed the Reproduction section quite unjustifiably as there is nothing copy paste about it. I am working on this article trying to improve it and this is not helped by you removing chunks. If you don't like the section why don't you do something constructive like writing a replacement section? And looking at the other edits you had previously done, they are very unproductive. If you don't like the caption of an image you don't have to remove the image! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:12, 18 lAugust 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry Cwmhiraeth, I have to agree with Eau here. Reproduction in land plants is the material that has given us many headaches as students, a substantial book is needed to understand the material, so errors such as flowering gymnosperms, a pollen grain formed from multiple meiospores, etc. take deep thought to fix, and despair sets in when corrections are rapidly replaced by you with new errors. You have more energy than some of us can match. Let's just leave it for a while, longer than a week, so that headaches and tempers can improve, please. Sminthopsis84 (talk) 18:31, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
- I disagree. Removing an image with a flowering gymnosperm is productive, as it removed something that should not be on Wikipedia. I
work full time, and I so not have the time to replace this right away. I will start writing such a section. You are fighting to keep yOur bad edits after admitting you apply random references you have not read and after admitting you do not understand botany, taxonomy, or evolutionary biology (obviously), so I do not know how to handle your battle for bad biology. I am not sure why you are doing this. I will proceed and delete as necessary. Eau (talk) 18:41, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
- "yOur bad edits after admitting you apply random references you have not read and after admitting you do not understand botany, taxonomy, or evolutionary biology (obviously)," - I'm not sure where you get all this information from, its news to me. As for removing the image, that was wrong. However, it will be good to have some experts improve the article and I will keep away from the botanical part at least for the time being. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:42, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
- PMSL. You are going to keep away from the botanical parts of an article titled "Tree". That will be clever. Anyway, it appears that we now have consensus to remove this rewrite, since you are the only editor who has expressed support for leaving it in place and at least 6 others have said indicated should be removed. Mark Marathon (talk) 23:14, 18 August 2012 (UTC)
I hadn't been keeping up with changes, but this is a total disaster. If a student in my sophomore-level botany course were to turn in something like this, I'd give it a "C", because I'm an easy grader. It's not so much that it's wrong, but that it misconstrues, so a novice reader leaves with plausible misinformation, which will be difficult to correct later on.
And there is no reason to have the section. "Tree" is in large part a functional ecological grouping. Carnivore, herbivore, perennial plant, and succulent plant all lack a section on reproduction (please do not go and add one!). Just because this is an encyclopedia, that doesn't mean that every article needs to be its own self-contained encyclopedia.--Curtis Clark (talk) 04:28, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, like much of the article, it is a disaster, but it is the worst of what I have read by far. Yet, I am required to evaluate every single line.The opening sentence say simply that the person who wrote it learned nothing about the reproduction of plants. Faced with that, the flowering gymnosperms and the angiosperms with flowers similar to angiosperms, leaving me wonder how the flowers of angiosperms differ from the flowers of angiosperms, I do not see anything fixable without a semester long course in botany, after an introductory course in biology. This article should be blocked from Google searches until this part is removed. Eau (talk) 04:50, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
Yes, deleting this section would greatly improve the article. A rewritten part could be added back, but this is about an evolutionary form, not a synapomorphy, so all this leaves (as written), flowers (especially on gymnosperms), reproduction is a distraction. Tree is a strategy. This article misses that almost entirely. Eau (talk) 04:56, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- "Tree is a strategy." I really like that, and may well use it next quarter.--Curtis Clark (talk) 17:10, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
Changing back to the original version
I am withdrawing my objection to reverting this article back to the previous version. The sections "Record breaking trees" and "Damage" should not be included as that would duplicate Record breaking trees and Tree health. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:25, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
This artilce remains utter garbage.
I would have dearly loved to see this crap recieve GA status. I was sorely tempted to conduct the review myself and give it top marks all round. As much as that would have satisfied me, it would be a great disservice to Wikipedia and a major step back int the war against ignorance.
The article is still riddled with numerous inaccuracies, such as the howler that 100% of all growth in a tree occurs in the vascular cambium. IOW trees can only get thicker, they can never grow taller. How the hell anybody thought that could be true is astonishing, but it highlights the problem of people wjho are grossly ignorant trying to write an article using Google sources.
Beyond the multitude of easily verifiable factual errors, of which I have highlighted maybe 10%, there are at least 10 times that many misleading or confusing statements. A lot of these are actually the article contradicting itself, such starting out stating that a tree is a woody plant, then talking about ferns and other trees. Others are apparently errors of imprecise terminology, such as failing to understand the distinction between "evergreen", "pine", "conifer", and "non-broadleaf". Those four terms are conflated time and again within the article, leading to numerous erroneous or highly misleading statements.
We still have a major problem with the original author failing to understand the difference between "a crow is a black bird" and "A black bird is a crow", The article is still riddled with statements like "an area covered with trees is a forest", referenced to a dictionary site that defines a forest as "an area covered with trees. Apparently the author genuinely doesn't understand why the reference does not support the contention, but it;s beyond my ability to explain it to him.
The final two sections are so full of flowery prose and unencyclopaedic verbiage that they are close to meaningless. In many cases the use of flowery descriptions has made them outright factually incorrect, such as claims that orchids only grow on trees with mossy branches.
But the single biggest problem remains that the original author lacks the basic knowledge to contribute to this article, much less re-write it as he has done. It is so stylistically flawed and so full of errors that it can't be repaired without a massive re-write of every single section. Just removing the errors won't go halfway to solving the problem, because the overall structure is shot. The errors can be corrected, but that won't solve the problem that important information hasn't even been addressed, while tangential trivia is given entire paragraphs.Mark Marathon (talk) 04:14, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- Myself and numerous other editors stated above that the previous version of this article was preferable to the new version introduced by Cwmhiraeth, and Cwmhiraeth eventually indicated that s/he would accept a reversion back, a capitulation which should be applauded. Yet reverting back was not done, presumably because either the recent history of the article had become toxic (and editors feared getting into hot water if they reverted back), or because in the meantime some editors had tried to improve the new version, and nobody wanted to eliminate those improvements (and the time taken therein). It seems there is now a choice: to revert back to the previous version, or work with what's there currently. Either way, just being critical of the article and of Cwmhiraeth's edits doesn't seem to me to be very helpful; it doesn't achieve anything, other than engender negative feelings and entrenched positions. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 07:28, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
For some reason that I still cannot fathom, I have been threatened with being blocked if I revert the article. So I cannot do so. If others wish to remove the rubbish, then I will applaud the move. And at no stage have I just been critical. All my criticisms have been constructive and accompanied by notes, suggestions and alterations where practical. However, as I already noted, the article is so hideously flawed from whoa to go that it can't actually be salvaged and, being unable to effect a revert, there is nothing that I can do about that beyond pointing out the fact. That isn't "just" a criticism. It is literally all that I can do.
Meantime Cwmhiraeth has yet again nominated the garbage for GA status.Mark Marathon (talk) 08:26, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
GA review notes
I just quickfailed the article because it was covered in tags. I don't know if they were added in good faith or simply to disrupt the review. It seems like there is s content dispute between several users here, I suggest following dispute resolution procedures and/or proposing topic bans if a user's conduct here is seriously problematic. Good luck, Mark Arsten (talk) 14:22, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- Topic bans would be extreme. What we need is a "fast-track GA" ban. It's the push to make this look like a GA (rather than actually be a GA) that's generating the rancor.--Curtis Clark (talk) 17:26, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- I wouldn't bet on that. On the 11th August Mark Marathon signs off a 60K word change with the edit comment that "I hope the article stays at this standard. I really do". That version contains many of the words phrases and sentences that have now been so liberally sprayed with citation flags by the very same editor. What gives ? Velella Velella Talk 21:21, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- There's a volatile recent history to this article; the edit you refer to was Mark M reinstating a version he doesn't prefer (because he was facing a potential block for reverting to the version he does prefer), and the accompanying edit comment was sarcastic. On balance I think things might be easier all round if the pre-rewrite version was reinstated; it had its own faults, but perhaps could be worked on without garnering such rancour. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 22:22, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- The original version as of the 1st July 2012 was a real mess and itself had some of the faults that MM is now flagging together with some substantial holes in the information. Sarcasm, the use of hectoring language and flinging a bucket loads of citation tags at the article enthuses and encourages nobody. I, for one, find the 1st July version unacceptable and if MM and a few others, who seem to find criticism easy and constructive involvement more difficult, were to assist in fixing the problems rather than commenting on them we might begin to make progress. Velella Velella Talk 22:37, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- I agree that it had faults. My view on this issue is not strongly held, and my suggestion above was guided by a desire to move things forward. In fact personally I don't care which version is used as a starting point, as long as constructive involvement does indeed occur from then on. I agree that the hectoring language isn't helpful - see my comment in the section preceding this one. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 23:16, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Statement that makes no sense
Currently in the article there is the statement "On the ground underneath trees there is shade, shelter, undergrowth, leaf litter, fallen branches and decaying wood"; could someone please explain precisely why this statement makes no sense, as has been claimed. Thanks. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 17:45, 26 September 2012 (UTC)
- My guess that only the editor that tagged it can explain it. It makes perfect sense to me and is such a readily understood statement that IMHO it needs no supporting reference. But (sigh) I have given up on this, in the face of sarcasm and bullying comments from editors who assert that they are experts but do nothing to improve other than to scatter citation tags around or carp from the sidelines. Velella Velella Talk 18:55, 26 September 2012 (UTC)
The first problem I have with the statement that it seems to be patently untrue. It is fairly rare to find fallen or decaying wood underneath trees in sclerophyllous woodlands or savannas because of the growth habit of the trees and the frequency of fires. Take a look at | thisimage, selected at random from Google. Not a lot of fallen or decaying wood underneath those trees. Viewing the same image will also demonstrate that there is no undergrowth, as the term is normally used. Since a statement that undergrowth and decaying wood are to be found under all trees seems factually incorrect, it requires clarification.
The second issue is that we have already established multiple times in this article that various timbered areas have no undergrowth (eg "A small wooded area, usually with no undergrowth, is called a grove" and "In cool temperate parts...there may be little plant life on the forest floor". Since the the statement contradicts the rest of this article, it needs clarification.
And the final reason for my puzzlement is what actual information this is meant to be conveying. The topic sentence of this paragraph says that trees provide habitat for arboreal organisms, which is fine, if somewhat tautological. Then the paragraph notes epiphytes and arboreal foods, which is good. Then it starts talking about what is on the ground. What relevance does stuff on the ground have to habitat for arboreal organisms? And if it has no relevance to arboreal organisms, it seems like a complete non sequitur. So what if there are dead branches and shelter under trees? Why not mention that there are forest fires and predators, falling coconuts, squirrel shit, compacted soil, thorny shrubs and toxic litter under trees? The sentence comes from nowhere and leads nowhere. What information is the reader expected to take away? I can't fix this statement because I have no idea what the author is intending to say.
I suspect that the real problem is that this whole section was terribly flowery and unencyclopaedic, trying to paint some picture of a sylvan wonderland. It's been improved somewhat, mostly by amputating chunks, but now it lacks any coherent outline and statements like this one have become orphaned.Mark Marathon (talk) 01:49, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- The first sentence of the paragraph is: "Trees are an important part of the terrestrial ecosystem, and provide a habitat for a community of arboreal animals and plants." To my mind, that is a topic sentence for a paragraph that includes discussion of arboreal habitat, but can also include discussion of other effects trees have on ecosystems, such as the sentence in question. I agree with you that the things mentioned in the sentence are not universally found under trees (except for shade, I guess), but they are commonly associated with trees. Perhaps the sentence would be better if it read: "On the ground underneath trees there is shade, and often shelter, undergrowth, leaf litter, fallen branches and decaying wood." Would you find that acceptable? Tdslk (talk) 05:01, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- If the sentence in question is too broad to be always accurate, it can easily be adjusted in a manner such as Tdslk has suggested. It strikes me that if an attempt is to be made to mention the place of trees within the ecosystems of which they are part, then describing their effects on (and relationship to) what is on the ground beneath them is highly relevant. Provided too much detail doesn't make the article unbalanced, then why not write of forest fires, the soil, toxic litter etc.? I view the way forward with this article is to fix the errors and judiciously expand the information. I write judiciously because "tree" as a topic is non-specialist yet potentially enormous, and it seems pertinent to me for such an article to touch lightly upon many areas, with examples for illustration of points. If there are errors, they should be corrected. If statements are too Euro-centric, they should be altered/expanded. All of this is achievable with a little collaboration. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 06:26, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
I assume from your comments, Tdslk, that what the author is trying to convey is that those things provide habitat for other organisms. The trouble is that seems to conflict with the claim that trees provide habitats for arboreal organisms. A large part of my puzzlement was due to that. So can I suggest changing "arboreal organisms" to "associated organisms" or something similarly broad.
The comment would still be somewhat of a non-sequitur even with that, and misleading to boot. The point seems to be that trees provide alternative habitat and microclimate. But that by itself is a hangover from the "sylvan wonderland" format. Yes, trees produce habitat, but the whole point of the tree form is to eliminate habitats for any competitors or predators. This is why trees will outcompete other plants forms in so many situations, and why forests have such low animal biomass compared to their NPP. IOW trees remove food and shelter more than they provide it.
I agree, PaleCloudedWhite, all that information needs to be added to make this section even partially complete. If we are going to touch lightly upon the relationships between trees and other organisms it seems the primary point should be that trees exist primarily to exclude other organisms. Listing the beneficial aspects to paint a rosy picture of the "wonders of the forest" kind of misses the point.
The problem is, as I noted above, the article is composed of 2/3 misleading, inaccurate and confusing material like this and I don't have the time to correct all of it, and given past events absolutely no enthusiasm. The article really needs to be reverted to the original form and expanded from there. Trying to take this mess up to GA status is like trying to make a silk purse out of a sow's ear.Mark Marathon (talk) 11:04, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- There is not consensus to revert to the original form, which also had its faults. Furthermore over the last month or two several contributors have amended and adjusted the article so the rewrite is no longer as it was originally introduced. You claim not to have time to correct all the inaccurate material, yet you seem to have time to follow other editors' changes and constantly add tags to every other sentence they input. Your behaviour is uncooperative and appears to be founded less on a desire to improve Wikipedia, and more on a desire to intimidate all other editors into losing interest in the article, so that eventually only your words remain. I believe this is not helpful to Wikipedia, nor indeed ultimately to yourself, as you risk losing the goodwill of other editors (if you have not already done so). PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 07:29, 28 September 2012 (UTC)
Most Gymnosperms produce seeds in cones
Can we please get an actual quote for the claim that "Angiosperms produce seeds in fruits, while most Gymnosperms produce seeds in cones. I couldn't find any claim remotely like this in the first reference cited, and am having no more luck in the second. I have tried reading the obvious sections where such information would be found, as well as searching on "fruit" "cone", "gymnosperm" etc. and no such information appears to be in the references. I can accept that angiosperms produce fruits, given a sufficiently broad definition of fruit, though this could use clarification since in common usage nobody would refer to grass seed as a fruit. But the claim that most gymnosperms produce cones seems doubtful. Cones are produced primarily by conifers, a fact supported by both references, but gymnosperm isn't synonymous with conifer.Mark Marathon (talk) 10:40, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
What color are they??
Trees are all sorts of different colours!! Many of the usual ones are green leaved, with brownish trunks. Some trees, such as the Gabbly Tree, which is pink, purple, and white in Colour. the Invisise Tree, located in central Australia, is a Blue colour in the Summer. In Winter time, it turns a burnt red. Very very interesting. Replying to give thread a timestamp so it will be cleaned up. Mark Marathon (talk) 23:24, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
Trees are similar to people???
There's a part in the article that says 'Trees are similar to people. Both can withstand massive amounts of some types of damage and survive, but even small amounts of certain types of trauma can result in death'.
I don't think the previous is a good analogy or comparison. There are lots of living creatures (you could say insects mainly, mammals, reptiles, etc.) that have those characteristics, not only humans. And besides, to what kind of damage is it referring to? On second thought, humans are physiologically very fragile...Anyways, the phrase just makes you wonder what it's trying to mean, like, some things get to us but some don't, and that's the similarity? ???
- Replying to give thread a timestamp so it will be cleaned up. Mark Marathon (talk) 23:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
