Talk:You Can't Stop the Bum Rush/GA1

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Nominator: RedShellMomentum (talk · contribs) 04:05, 25 April 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Camilasdandelions (talk · contribs) 11:38, 29 April 2026 (UTC)

@Camilasdandelions: Everything so far has been done. RedShellMomentum 01:38, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Thanks! I'll do spotchecks within today. Camilasdandelions (✉️) 02:14, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Done, and the issue for "The Hard Disk Approach" is still unsolved. Camilasdandelions (✉️) 02:32, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
@Camilasdandelions: Lead and background have been reworked. We're probably going to have to assume good faith for the MuchMusic interview, however. RedShellMomentum 03:40, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
@Camilasdandelions: Just making sure you saw this. - RedShellMomentum (logged out) ~2026-26290-67 (talk) 15:25, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
I was waiting until you resolve remaining issues which you did not respond yet. I'll check the entire article after the issues are completely solved. Camilasdandelions (✉️) 15:32, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Oh that's my bad, I'll mark what I did on my main. - RedShellMomentum (logged out) ~2026-26290-67 (talk) 15:48, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
@Camilasdandelions: OK, now everything should be good to go. RedShellMomentum 16:21, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Thank you. Here're two additional issues I found:
  • Provide a source for recorded years in infobox, 1998–1999, or remove it.
  • "releasing one EP" -> "releasing one extended play (EP)"
I'll pass the article after these are addressed. Nice work! Camilasdandelions (✉️) 16:24, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Both done. RedShellMomentum 16:29, 30 April 2026 (UTC)
Thank you for the quick resolutions. Gonna pass the article, congrats! Camilasdandelions (✉️) 16:31, 30 April 2026 (UTC)

Hi mate, long time no see. I'll take this review and finish it within tomorrow.

Overview

Can you provide me sources for Ref 3 and 5? I cannot verify contents as I cannot access them.

 Done Thank god for worldradiohistory.com.
Infobox and lead
  • Remove "Studios", and list them using bullet points (*).
    •  Done.
  • MOS:INFOBOXCITE
    •  Done.
  • "which previously appeared on the soundtrack to the 1999 comedy thriller Go." unsourced.
    •  Done.
  • It peaked at number 46 -> The album peaked at number 46
    •  Done.
  • "The Hard Disk Approach" features lyrics entirely in German and uses a motorik beat to emulate the style of krautrock bands. what?
    • Removed.
  • The album cover features Buck 65 -> The album cover features Canadian rapper Buck 65
    •  Done.
  • although he reportedly declined an offer to join the band; despite this, he provides record scratching on the track "Cold Chillin'". unsourced
    •  Done.
Article body
  • 'Sunshines.' -> 'Sunshines'.
    •  Done.
  • seriously." -> seriously".
    •  Done.
  • characters." -> characters".
    •  Done.
  • The tour was initially scheduled -> It was initially scheduled
    •  Done.
  • Italicize Late Show with David Letterman
    •  Done.
  • Remove The New York Times in {{Music ratings}}; only exact rating should be listed in the template.
    •  Done.
  • Beastie Boys' -> Beastie Boys's
    •  Done.
  • "You Can't Stop the Bum Rush received a mostly positive response from music critics" who says so?
    • Should be pretty self-explanatory.
  • Album name in {{track listing}} is redundant.
    •  Done.

Additional

  • In lead and infobox, "An alternative rock, pop, and rap rock album": This contradicts what you wrote in composition section: "The album includes a variety of styles, including rap, rock, and pop." I'm not even sure whether it satisfies WP:EXPLICITGENRE though.
    • Removed from lead and infobox.
  • You better put note in Track listing section like: "All tracks are produced by Mumble C, except where noted."
    •  Done.
  • "Notes" in the same section violates WP:PSEUDOHEADING. Use (===) instead of (''')
    •  Done.
  • "(bonus track)" -> remove
    •  Done.
  • "Cold Chillin'" contains a sample from "Pimpin' Ain't Easy" by Big Daddy Kane and "You Gots to Chill" by EPMD. -> Use {{'"}}
    •  Done.

Spotcheck

  • 1: "who predominantly made alternative rock music" / "This reception resulted in Len signing with a major record label" which part of the source you cited for these?
    • Reworked both sentences.
  • 3: "The standard edition of You Can't Stop the Bum Rush includes 12 tracks; the Japanese edition includes one additional track." unsupported ig. I suggest you to cite the booklets or liner notes.
    •  Done.
  • 4: Where can I see this source?
  • No further issues found.
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