Wikiwand AI

Talk:Zune/Archive 4

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Archive 1Archive 2Archive 3Archive 4Archive 5Archive 6

Zune Hat

Its under criticism. I didn't find it in the edit page though. 99.245.225.109 03:12, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

Canada Sales

Settle a bet someone, is Zune sold in Canada at all? I really need to know. Thanks! 74.12.217.44 06:36, 29 June 2007 (UTC)

The Zune is not sold in Canada. It is currently sold only in the United States. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 207.216.236.206 (talk • contribs).

Too much grammar mistakes

Please note the grammar in this page is not professional quality. There are references to subjects that the average reader or techie doesn't know about so please link the information properly with a wikilink. Proof read it! —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Getonyourfeet (talk • contribs) 11:17, 23 January 2007 (UTC).

"Too much grammar mistakes" is itself gramatically incorrect. The proper way of expressing it is "too many".

you has to be kidding myself... oh, and I'm not saying I would have seen this if I hadn't gone to edit, but if you are going to be criticizing people on whether or not they are grammatically correct, try spelling grammatically right... Out of all of the words you could have screwed up on it has to be that one... Can't you see the red line under it?!?!? PhorkPhace (talk) 07:47, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

This is because whomever is writing/editing the article is comparing it to the iPod or similar produc. There are many, "It cannot even do this," througout the entry.

Either remove or edit criticism

Having continuous entries that begin by "The Zune cannot..." is not proactive or subjective and imply very negative qualities of the Zune over the "alternative." Though the entries are so-called thoroughly researched. They are only presented in 'cases against' owning a Zune, whereas similar products do not. Whoever is presenting these criticism should also thoroughly research the positive aspects of the Zune.

Most of these criticsms detract from the purpose of product and/or are issues/features have not been addressed or released by Microsoft.

The Zune is a Microsoft, Hard drive based portable media station. Criticism should be directed to how it fails to be a media station instead of how its details or 'features' do not satisify the single critic.

Note: I just previewed several of the "sources" many of them are just blogs of non industry or non-accredited individuals. (~~Uberpesh 022607~~)

The revised criticism section seems really amateur and hard to read. "Doesn't support non-English characters" seems to be a lot more informative than "Michael Kaplan ....... claims". "Power users" doesn't seem to me to uniquely define people who would be running non-XPSP2 English systems... it just seems a throwaway remark that doesn't belong. Maybe this is how the New Improved Wiki Criticism Sections are supposed to read, but I think the writing quality, readibility, and accuracy took a nosedive with this latest round of edits. I would suggest tightening this, removing the bias, and making it criticism-centered as opposed to critic-centered. But that's just my opinion. Preppy 03:41, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
Well Wikipedia admin Maury at the bottom of the page claims the Zune page is "terrible article" because many of contributions appear to be listed based and breaks Wikipedia:Guide_to_layout. Many of the paragraphs by previous contributers before my edits were very short usually one-to-two sentences long and were piecemeal information, which really would put it no higher than the B-scale Wikipedia:Version 1.0 Editorial Team/Assessment. Everyone worked off the broken style guide and it kept getting worst overtime. To address these issues, I started to consolidate the information in paragraph form in the criticism section. Having visited the iPod page and several articles, then generalizing what I saw... many of the pages are paragraphed based but minimize listing. Also, criticism pages in some Wikipedia divide the sections covering aspects of the criticism help the reader. Like the audiophile page divides it into subjectivist and objectivist criticisms. The iPod page divides the sections into topical format. I tried to logically divide the sections in topical order. The criticism by its nature is biased if you remove the criticisms like Dpbsmith said before it defeats the purpose of criticisms and softens it to the point it becomes meaningless. Rather try to present the fact of Zune does not support x,y,z feature repeatedly as fact, I tried to tie it to prominent people as suggested by Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view#Attributing_and_substantiating_biased_statements so that biased statement becomes NPOV. When I added Michael Kaplan, I did it according to Wikipedia recommendations. Also in writing when you do this it build credibility because this person is a professional of handling international language on computer rather than reduce it to down to Zune only supports English text which doesn't add to credibility. I also tried to grouped up these scattered criticisms and integrate them under a constituency so that new readers understand who would make those criticisms. Also Maury believes there is too much minutia, or highly detailed info which may not be interesting for non-technical non sophisticated reader, which should either be integrated in paragraph form like the PSP article or removed all together. If Maury didn't stop by, I wouldn't be making these edits because I too felt PRRfan edits where great edits but what he said was shocking to me.Getonyourfeet 06:03, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

Page needs to communicate thoughts neutral point of view of computing information systems

I feel this page needs to step back and rewrite some of these in a neutral point of view and more balanced. Many of you write the page under the assumption that you are a Windows XP user which is fine but fail to provide balance/neutrality. If your gonna promote Microsoft provide balance with alternatives. For example, the the accessory section gives almost a fair balance by considering other companies but fails to provide alternatives products which make Microsoft products stand out more because you guys fail to provide examples of their offerings. Also the operating system section of support was misrepresented because you didn't consider the gamut of other operating systems and projects and provided a poor link to OLD Macintosh but not the latest Apple had to offer MacOS X. Please, reconsider these thoughts when continue editing this wiki and make yourself better writers. Also it is not ethical to place blinders on wikipedian visitors by using censorship by promoting only Microsoft only products. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Getonyourfeet (talk • contribs) 09:41, 23 January 2007 (UTC).

Too Much Advertising of a company

...especially with references to Microsoft.

Please make this page more company neutral. I have to point that there should be more cleaning up of the page between Microsoft and Zune or else the page becomes too wordy and becomes a waste of time for the public to scan and comprehend the information. Also, I feel that if there needs to be a link to companies product and a company name it should only be referenced no more than once per paragraph or mentioned at least once. Also there should be more focus on the product "Zune" rather than "Microsoft's Zune." —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Getonyourfeet (talk • contribs) 06:47, 23 January 2007 (UTC).

Also products advertised related to Microsoft should not inadvertantly overly emphasize or it's competitors be censored to meet the wikipedia standard of neutrality.

Embedded advertising removal needs to be considered

I feel it is sometimes necessary to decouple company qualification to its product. The benefits of decoupling branding from the product are ease of reading, speedy reading, getting straight to the points, etc. However, there are cases where such decoupling cannot be made because it is needed to distinguish it from others or to preserve the value or credibility. For example Microsoft Points. Points isn't a satisfactory qualification. What points? Dragon Point Kill Points? Points of Interest? These are better replaced with a pronoun or acronym. Imagine that we qualified every single reference to Zune with "Microsoft Zune." Or every Microsoft product beginning with Microsoft or every product mention in this article with their respective company name. Some if you wouldn't reach the end of the page. I myself get turned off with large blocks of text. That's not friendly reading. Also when you do this, you are advertising unintentionally. It's like the in the movie Hellboy and the guy drinks slowly to Red Bull. Not only that... they place Red Bull and advertising all over the scenes. In some shows they mask product names with tape because they didn't get paid to advertise the product or to keep your attention on the act. I do this fairly with every company name I see not just Microsoft but with constraint. All I'm interested in is the Zune and what it can do no more or less, not who where involved with every part associated in making this product.Getonyourfeet 01:44, 25 January 2007 (UTC)

Zune and Zen

For the Criticism section...

...hasn't anybody in the trade press taken Microsoft to task for calling their player "Zune" when Creative has been calling theirs "Zen" for something like, is it four years now? Same consonants, different vowels... if it were Hebrew they'd be the same word.

Of course a sensible person would say these names are not similar enough to constitute trademark infringment. I'm not saying it is. I'm just saying it seems lazy and unsporting and, well, just generally tacky.

I mean, after all this is the company that sued Michael Robertson for calling a product LindowsOS.

Microsoft deserves criticism for sharp practice and stunning lack of originality... didn't they get any? Dpbsmith (talk) 23:26, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Well, it's not like they called it Wen or something. MarkKB 03:27, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
Or sued the student Mike Rowe for his sofware web site MikeRoweSoft.com —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 80.213.187.32 (talk) 21:36, 11 January 2007 (UTC).

Well considering microsoft owns creative I doubt they will be getting sued for many trademark infringements. 202.83.118.27 08:46, 24 April 2007 (UTC)RMD

Microsoft deserves criticism??? I hope you don't mean that they deserve criticism written into the article... this site is meant to give an unbiased informed statement, not an opinion.PhorkPhace (talk) 07:53, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

For the record, Microsoft does not own Creative. Anyway, just because you personally happen to think that the Zune's name is unoriginal, that doesn't mean it belongs as a criticism on the Wikipedia page. This is supposed to be an encyclopedia, not a forum for you to vent your personal anti-Microsoft bias. Sadly, it often doesn't work out that way in practice. 75.33.136.166 07:00, 14 August 2007 (UTC)

Relevance of "Speculation and rumors" content

Is the first half of this section, mentioning debunked rumors, still relevant to the current state of the device? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Tywillis (talk • contribs) 05:47, 7 January 2007 (UTC).

Hacks

Locking the Page to prevent Vandalism

"Zune Marketplace doesn't even take real money..."

Gaming Functionality on the Way

Descriptions of criticism can include emphasis in the service of clarity

Cost

Does the Zune record audio?

Sales

Related Articles

Timelines

Top Qs

Fact Checks