User:Cooldogcookie
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Hi Cooldogcookie!
Looking at your contributions to the "scrapbooking" wiki article has been super interesting and I can’t wait to see what more you have to add. In terms of actual content, I think this is a great idea as scrapbooking has recently played a major part in the industry of therapy so I am glad that you are choosing to discuss it. Reading over the additions that you made, I really enjoyed reading the initial paragraph directly under "scrapbook therapy”. Although it could use some organization to make it flow better, I think the sources you used were credible and the overall paragraph was a great addition. Continuing with the subheadings of "Grief and Trauma" and “dementia and memory loss”, I think you have a great start but it could definitely use some re-editing in terms of adding sophistication and using your sources better. For instance, in your "Grief and Trauma” section, you are just stating ideas but not really building on them in terms of the why? Or how?. I think if you went back and edited this, it could make these sections better and worth your time after finding such good sources. Overall, I think you’ve made some meaningful contributions to the wiki article and I can’t wait to see what else you have to add!
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