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Wing surface area adjuster, typically for shortening take-off and landing
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I found a sentence that was poorly written because another sentence had been inserted into the middle, surrounded by parenthesis and beginning with the abbreviation “e.g.”.
When an English variety's consistent usage has been established in an article, maintain it in the absence of consensus to the contrary. With few exceptions (e.g., when a topic has strong national ties or the change reduces ambiguity), there is no valid reason for changing from one acceptable option to another.

I attempted to improve the paragraph by extracting the contents of the parenthesis and using them to form their own sentence. This had the effect of dividing one very long sentence into two shorter sentences.
When an English variety's consistent usage has been established in an article, maintain it in the absence of consensus to the contrary. With few exceptions, there is no valid reason for changing from one acceptable option to another. One exception is where a topic has strong national ties or the change reduces ambiguity.
reverted my edit, leaving an edit summary saying: It’s certainly not something our Manual of Style proscribes.
is in error saying there is nothing in the MOS to proscribe the problem I was trying to repair. At WP:Manual of Style#Avoid unwarranted use it refers to abbreviations, including e.g., and says Avoid abbreviations when they might confuse the reader, interrupt the flow, or appear informal.
Insertion of a bunch of words facilitated by the abbreviation “e.g.” and all surrounded by parenthesis into a perfectly good sentence most definitely interrupts the flow. It most definitely appears informal - in well-written prose, when there is value in adding extra information, it is added carefully either in a sentence of its own or by proper use of punctuation and the rules of English grammar. It isn’t added coarsely by planting parenthesis in the middle of the host sentence, adding the abbreviation e.g or i.e. and then pasting the extra information.
Also, the principles at WP:BOLD encourage Users to be bold in their attempts to improve Wikipedia. There is nothing written anywhere on Wikipedia that supports the notion that Users should only be bold in a manner that removes things that are proscribed. I’m prepared to go out on a limb and say that the millions of incremental improvements that have raised Wikipedia to its present standard are improvements that have nothing to do with what is proscribed, and what isn’t.
I invite interested Users to contribute to this discussion. Considering I initiated this discussion thread, I will restore my version until a consensus has been reached, or at least until the matter has been adequately discussed.
Aircraft design
In aircraft design and aerospace engineering, a high-lift device is a component or mechanism on an aircraft's wing that reduces the stalling speed of the aircraft at a given weight. The device may be a fixed component, or a movable mechanism which is deployed when required. Common movable high-lift devices include wing flaps and slats. Fixed devices include leading-edge slots, leading-edge root extensions, and boundary layer control systems.
Purpose
The size and lifting capacity of a fixed wing is chosen as a compromise between differing requirements. For example, a larger wing and more cambered airfoil section will lift the weight of the aircraft at a slower speed than a smaller wing, and so reduce the distances required for takeoff and landing, but at the expense of higher drag which reduces performance during the cruising portion of flight. The designs of the wings of jet aircraft are optimized for speed and efficiency during the cruising portion of flight, since this is where these aircraft spend the vast majority of their flight time. High-lift devices compensate for this design trade-off by enabling the weight of the aircraft to be lifted at the slower speeds used for takeoff and landing, and allowing the use of a more efficient wing in cruising flight.
Stalling speed
The stall of a fixed-wing aircraft occurs at the angle of attack called the critical angle of attack. The aircraft lift coefficient is a maximum at this critical angle of attack. This lift coefficient is denoted by .
The of an aircraft is strongly influenced by the airfoil sections used in the design of the wing, and the presence of any high-lift devices. When a high-lift device is extended in flight it increases the of the aircraft, and this reduces the stalling speed.
High-lift devices are used to increase the camber of the wing section and increase . For example, if is 1.5 with high-lift devices retracted, deploying those devices might raise it to 2.0 and reduce the stalling speed by 13%.[1]