User:Emsroldan/sandbox
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For my article, Smart TV, I plan to contribute interesting and useful information. This information could help people who are considering purchasing a Smart TV decide if they want to or not and could also help people who already own a Smart TV with an issue or just simply inform them about new features. The Smart TV article could use more updated information so I tried to choose recent sources.
These articles provide information on how to protect Smart TV from hackers. There were rumors and cases of people who own Smart TVs being "spied" on. This could be useful to owners and a warning to people considering purchasing a Smart TV. This information could be added to the content "Security and privacy".
This articles provides information on a new feature of Smart TV. This feature makes payments more easier and convenient. This information could be added to the content "Market share" or perhaps a new content could be created.
Although there is already a content for Smart TV platforms, this article lists all of the platforms and could therefore be elaborated on.
I think that your article is well organized. It shows both the positives and setbacks of Smart TV. The content is neutral and the sources are reliable. One of the article's strengths is that is has concise facts and details key people involved with Smart TV.The article was easy to read and understand. The points in the article are in a good order and the statements in the article are connected to reliable sources. I would just check over the spelling and grammar in the article. The article has a lot of strengths and is well thought out. Tpsfc
@Tpsfc Thank you! I tried to keep it simple and strictly informative. I will look over the grammar corrections and perhaps add more information.