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Citation Practice
Journal Entry # 1
Today in class I was introduced to Wikipedia and it's different functions concerning editing. It was a side of Wikipedia that had never crossed my mind. Usually, I just occasionally visit the Wikipedia page to use it as a reliable source for my papers, but now I realize that there's more to just the article, that Wikipedia is a whole whole different world in itself where users can exchange and contribute their knowledge and ideas concerning a certain topic in which they're working on. We learned how to format our own pages in an organized fashion just like it is shown in every Wikipedia article. I think that this assignment that was handed over to my class will be a very unique and interesting experience that will enhance our abilities as researchers and writers so that we can carry on this knowledge throughout our college years.
Journal Entry # 2
Today in class we learned the true meaning of Wiki and discovered that it's a Hawaiian word that means "quick". This is why they use the word wiki in Wikipedia; it's a great and uncomplicated source that people can use to edit things quickly. In other words, it was made to be simple to use at any expense without too much effort. We also learned about paraphrasing and quoting. Professor Gallardo made a huge emphasis on how a pain in the ass quoting can be, and I thoroughly agree with her because of my past experiences with quoting in my essays in other classes. After the professor explained to the class about paraphrasing and the difference between summary, quoting, and paraphrasing; we were able to get into pairs and read and analyze a handout with two interviews. Our task was to read these two interviews and decide what we were going to take out, and what we would quote and paraphrase. Despite not really being able to understand the task at hand, my partner and I managed to complete our classwork after the professor wrote examples that we could use to get us started and inspired. I found this approach very helpful, and with it we were able to build off a great paragraph.
Journal Entry #3
Today in class I learned how to formulate topic sentences for a body paragraph. I learned that a topic sentence must contain the main idea to start off a paragraph. It has to at least introduce the author and what you're going to talk about. The professor put us in pairs so we can critique the group she assigned us. Afterwards, the professor divided us into pairs, to work on a certain theme from Wild Seed. My topic was about Feminism and how it contributed to the book.
Journal Entry #4
Today in class we broke up into groups of three and were assigned to take a look at the Wild Seed Wikipedia article and suggest what should be included to make it better, or what could be omitted from it. We found out that the theme section had to be omitted because the information that was put there by other wikipedians was derived from an original source, and using original sources in Wikipedia is forbidden. Then we had to do a list of critiques with our group and post it on the Wild Seed talk page so that other editors can see our suggestions. Lastly, the professor gave us a handout of three pages in which we were to read it and summarize it in our sandbox.
Journal Entry #5
Today in class the professor gave us a new research assignment to do which I found it to be similar to the second research assignment that she assigned us to do for homework. For this new research assignment we are to look for the article using the Library source from LAGCC to be able to locate the original journal in which the article is found in. After that we read some of the assigned readings and discussed it in class making our own bullet points about what we read so far in the reading.
Journal Entry #6
Today in class the professor talked alot about the concept of feminism and how it evolved throughout time. I honestly had no idea that the concept of a person being considered a woman was bizarre back then, and that initially we were considered incomplete men. The professor told us that the concept of masculinity and feminism was adapted in the 18th century, this is where the concept of femininity was embraced in it's entirety with the image of the characteristics of women like: dresses, earrings, shoes, etc. We also talked about how it is now in the 21st century, that we are basically almost considered to be cyborgs because we have access to so much technology nowadays. In class today we also picked a reading for the research assignment #5. We also worked on finishing assignment #3 and have a head start on assignment #4 today.
Journal Entry #7
Today in class we completed a survey online on what level of importance we had for each theme that was found in the book. We were told to review some topics before writing our research proposal, which was to be considered the first step to writing our first drafts for the actual research paper. Today we also discussed the readings that we chose in our last class for research assignment #5.
Journal Entry #8
Today in class the professor, according to how we did in our proposal she arranged us in three different groups. I was placed in the incomplete group which was group # 2. The first group got the first pick on what they wanted to work on for the wikipedia article. Luckily, when it was my turn to pick the group I wanted to be in, there was one spot left to work on the Characters in group #1. After we met with the six people in our group, we were divided into pairs to work on writing a specific theme for it. The theme me and my partner worked on was "Power Struggles". We managed to polish it nicely, and the professor was satisified and content with our teamwork.
Journal Entry #9
Today in class we revised the corrections that the professor put in our first draft of the team assignment we did last week. My topic was power struggles and we had to take a chunk of it out and replace it with other things. We were also given back our proposals and I still have to work on mine. The topic that I was working on for my proposal was supposed to be concentrated on feminism but today after reading the themes section in Wikipedia about the novel wild seed, I got inspired to rewrite my proposal and change it to focus more on slavery. We were then told to submit our working thesis statement so that we can get feedback on it.
Journal Entry #10
Today in class we looked over the revisions from the second draft that the professor left us. Surprisingly, me and my partner did a pretty good job on it. The only problem was that we had alot of details and the professor was encouraging us to cut off some stuff to get to the main points. The two girls who were working on characters from my group shared their work with the rest of the team and we each exchanged our opinions and points of view about whether or not it was ready to go up on the wikipedia article.