I've had to revert both of your edits because they were problematic in some way. You seem like you're here in good faith, so allow me to give you some pointers.
You don't need to link terms that are already commonly known.
You should read a sentence completely to make sure you aren't inadvertently making it ungrammatical.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Cynthia Hall (actress) (March 20)
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