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Questions about draft evaluation
Thanks for your comments on draft:Allen Estrin. Clearly user:Apathetizer's submission was rejected for reasons not having to do with the draft's merit. An earlier discussion about notability said that the draft a month ago was about halfway to establishing notability. Based improvements from that feedback, we should now be closer. A rejection should tell us what's wrong with an article and how it can be improved. The earlier rejection did so. The recent one did not. What can we do to get a fair reading of the draft? DougHill (talk) 00:44, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
GRETA (Group of Experts on Action against Trafficking in Human Beings)
Dear CaptianEek,
Thank you very much for your comments.
We are a group of students of the University of Padova who are working on this project. We would highly appreciate if you could possibly let us know how we could improve our article. Any recommendations maybe?
Thank you in advance.
Kind wishes, 108 Uni Students Group --108Uni (talk) 16:51, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- 108Uni, Howdy hello! A few things. First, accounts are single person only. If you have multiple people, each needs to register their own account. This account will probably need to be renamed for single use, or will be blocked, and then each of y'all can make an account. Second: you're working on this...in what way? You were assigned this page to edit? You are members of GRETA? What is the relationship here? Once we've got that figured out, I can help you on the article. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 18:03, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- 108Uni, Alright I see y'all are a school group, so ignore my second question. But the first point stands: each of you needs a separate account.
- In terms of feedback:
- Every claim needs an inline citation
- The coverage seems mainly lifted from GRETA itself. We don't say what subjects say about themselves, we say what reliable sources say about them. Please find news articles, books, magazines, etc. that cover the subject, and use those as references.
- The structure is unencyclopedic, and reads like...well a formal government document. You don't need sections describing its every action and legal duty. You need to explain it succinctly in layman's terms and in readable prose. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 18:16, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
Some baklava for you!
| Thank you for the welcome!!! Cre8tiveIQ (talk) 05:31, 7 February 2020 (UTC) |
Sources
Thanks for your reply earlier. I added the youtube interview after reading on wiki that you can include videos as long as it's from the original source. Also, If I only used it as an additional reference, not the mean reference should I still remove it? Thanks again for your input. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cre8tiveIQ (talk • contribs) 05:16, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Cre8tiveIQ, It looks like you're using it to support just one claim, and that you have another source for that claim already. I would probably opt to remove that source. Interviews are tricky, and its hard to gauge the reliability of that source. Written sources are far preferred when possible. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:26, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion, I will remove it.(Cre8tiveIQ (talk) 05:55, 7 February 2020 (UTC))
- Cre8tiveIQ, Glad to be of assistance. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask! CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:59, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion, I will remove it.(Cre8tiveIQ (talk) 05:55, 7 February 2020 (UTC))
Question
Hello, I see that the Wikipedia review process can now take a month. I came across a chat on the Teahouse page in which a company was very notable but it was denied then a few AFC reviewers agreed that it was notable but did not move it to the mainspace instead they told the user they could do so themselves without afc review. My question is, would it be inappropriate for me to move it to the mainspace? I look forward to your response. Cre8tiveIQ (talk) 13:25, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Cre8tiveIQ, Generally, it is preferred that AFC reviewers should approve drafts, as you have to apply to be a reviewer, and are given a special software tool to do it. However, if a draft meets policy, there is no reason it can't be approved. Could you link the draft in question? I'd be curious to know why it was denied. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 16:35, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
Smiljan
Article has couple of irregularities ie some citation are not according to RS but they are still in the article. If you could direct us or give us some advice what to do. Thank you.
- Note that other fellow editors see it quite differently and that's ignored all the way. cheers, Sadkσ (talk is cheap) 17:41, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
Russian Population Sources
I input sources that correctly specify Russia's population but it was deleted, i need your help. Is there a way i can settle a dispute with someone without risking my account to be blocked from editting? Take this for example, https://www.worldometers.info/world-population/russia-population/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by IntercontinentalEmpire (talk • contribs) 22:51, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
- IntercontinentalEmpire, Howdy hello! Your change is clearly controversial, as several folks have undone it. What you need to do is discuss it, by opening a a talkpage discussion at Talk:Russia. Discuss the issue with folks, and build WP:CONSENSUS. My take: worldometers or similar sites are actually not very reliable. They just aggregate data. What we trust far more is the source that is already there: the Russian government's estimate. They provide a very precise number, compiled as of a month ago.
- Please don't make the change again until you have discussed it with the community, as such behavior will be seen as edit warring.
- Also, as you have been warned: the minor edit box should only be checked for the simplest of things. You should really only ever use it when you fix single character typos. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:10, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- IntercontinentalEmpire, CaptainEek I hope you don't mind me commenting, but I think the Russian Federal State Statistics Service might be helpful for the figures you're looking for. It's definitely a reliable source. It's in Russian, but the figures are obvious and Google translate works well. Best of luck. // Timothy :: talk 03:41, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on second Bibliography
Hello, CaptainEek. You were helpful to me recently in looking at and providing feedback for my Bibliography of the Russian Revolution and Civil War. I continue to work on building up that article and I've published the second article in my planned troika at Bibliography of Stalinism and the Soviet Union. I was hoping that you could again provide some feedback as you did before. I understand you get a lot of requests and thank you for any help you can provide. If there is any way I can provide help to you (doubtful, but a sincere offer), please let me know. Hope you're well and your weekend is great. // Timothy :: talk 03:26, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
- TimothyBlue, Once again, very nicely done! I see no major issues, and have marked the page as reviewed. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:22, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks :) Hope all is well and your day goes well. // Timothy :: talk 10:42, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
Geological Perspective correlation
Sir, I rewrite the article following your remarks. I decrease the number of figures, but, please, take in consideration that the essence of described theory is geometrical, and for adequate presentation it need graphical material. Looking for your response. Sincerely Nabatoff (talk) 05:31, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
- Nabatoff, Howdy hello! Numerous issues remain, and you did not address all of my comments.
- Chiefly, it is still very technical, and not very clear. I still do not know what this article is about. Yes its about geology, but ....what is it? Not once does the article clearly state what perspective geological correlation is.
- The lead should begin by stating concisely what the topic is, then summarize the article. Most of the info in the lead would be better as a "background" section
- Bolding should almost never be used. I have fixed that for you.
- The number of images is still high but is within more reasonable bounds now
- This reads like a scientific paper, i.e. inscrutable to non-experts. Our readers are average folks (not geologists), thus our articles must be accessible to them. While technical details should be kept, they need to be accompanied by reasonable laymen's explanations.
- The number style listing is a bit strange, and I don't think very useful. Things should usually be presented as prose, not as lists. If you are to keep the numbers, please format things correctly. Use a # number sign to create numbered lists.
- Sourcing! Every claim needs a source. Clearly you got each sentence from somewhere, so please add an in-text reference to where you got it. If you have info you didn't get from a source, remove it. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:16, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
Sir,
Thank you. I will continue working.
The layering (stratification) is the fundamental characteristic of the Earth crust. The geometry of the layering (stratigraphy) is the main tool for the insight into the geological history of the Earth, and the main lead to natural resources exploration. For example, the oil geologists have no tools to find oil deposits, they are looking only for domes created by a porous layer. Knowledge about underground geometry comes from drilling. Drilling is very expensive, so the number of wells is limited and the distances between the wells are substantial. Reconstruction of the surface at a small number of scattered points is a difficult task and leads to expensive mistakes. Any knowledge of layer geometry constraints is extremely valuable. The theory of perspective correlation states that the thicknesses of all layers in an undisturbed sequence of layers correspond to the law of geometric perspective. This means in particular that if you know the thickness of a layer in two wells, then you can calculate the thickness of that layer on the entire profile This is the first quantitative law that describes the geometric structure of the layer sequence. The influence of this theory on the philosophy of geological science is important as well. Today geology looks mainly not at what is common in different parts of the earth, but at the peculiarities of each site. More than half of scientific publications on geology contain geographical names. This is why the Haites' theory is a big deal.
Sorry dor the long comment. Is it something that has to be in the lead, or I am missing the point again?
Sincerely
Nabatoff (talk) 21:43, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
- Nabatoff, Can you give me a single sentence explanation? Such as I have suggested in the article "Perspective geological correlation is a technique in geology that..." And please make sure to read each point above and follow it. If you are confused, please ask for clarification. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:51, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
Sir,
Nabatoff (talk) 22:13, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
Perspective geological correlation is a theory that establishes strong geometrical restrictions on the geometry of the layers in sedimentary deposits. It is the only qualitative law discovered in geology in the XX century Nabatoff (talk) 03:41, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
One more: "Perspective geological correlation states: in undisturbed succession of layers at any two locations the ratio h1/h2 is the same for all layers (h1 and h2 are thicknesses of the particular layer)".
Of course,it is difficult to describe by words the geometrical idea without a drawing. The best and the simplest description is the figure (B) in my article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nabatoff (talk • contribs) 18:23, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
May be the best will be :,br> The Perspective Geological Correlation also states that 1) each sedimentary basin consists of a number of stratigraphic units (sequence of layers without unconformities) , and 2) in each unit the relations between the thicknesses of the layers in two cross-sections satisfy the perspective geometry conditions with individual ratios K = h1/h2. Nabatoff (talk) 18:34, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
6 millionth article and Discord
hi CaptainEek, curious about how the six millionth article was decided, I happened upon this conversation and noticed you mention Discord which leads me to wonder: what Discord channel is this? I ask because I am a member of a team at the Wikimedia Foundation working on improvements to talk pages (Talk pages project) and as part of that work we are working to form a better understanding of how contributors communicate on- and off-wiki. @PPelberg (talk) 17:43, 24 January 2020 (UTC)
- PPelberg (WMF), Howdy hello! I regularly use the semi-official WP:DISCORD. A couple of admins on ENWP and Commons set it up a while back, and its a useful communication tool. It certainly doesn't supplant talk pages, but it is used for less formal conversations. Any formal conversations will definitely stay on talkpages (so that there is a history of them too). But discord allows us to have an offtopic channel (which wouldn't happen on-wiki because of WP:NOTFORUM), have some friendly banter, and use lots of Wiki themed emojis (like little wiki globes and FA stars and WP:TROUT). Having a real time chat platform is handy, as it allows us to talk to newbie editors faster and give better advice, as well as spread news faster (like about 6M), and get feedback and opinions faster. I regularly ask for second opinions on Discord, as its faster, easier, and less...nerve wracking. We occasionally have policy debates there too, in a manner that we wouldn't have on-wiki. Of course, not everyone is thrilled about discord, some editors feel like there is a Discord Cabal, others think it can be misused to WP:CANVASS discussions. Regardless, I like it a lot, and I downloaded the Discord app to my phone just so that I could send messages in the Wiki discord while I was on the go.
- In terms of 6M, basically all discussion happened on Wiki, the use on Discord was simply a congratulatory "Heck yeah".
- Cool work y'all are doing, keep it up! CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:47, 24 January 2020 (UTC)
- CaptainEek, thank you for this thorough response! Pending approval [1] from WikiAuthBoth, I will see you in there. In the meantime, a few follow up questions (when you have time!):
Having a real time chat platform is handy, as it allows us to talk to newbie editors faster...
- This is curious...in your experience, how do newbie editors typically find the Discord server?
I regularly ask for second opinions on Discord, as its faster, easier, and less...nerve wracking.
- Can you say more to the nerve wracking piece? What kinds of on-wiki discussions tend to feel this way to you?
We occasionally have policy debates there too, in a manner that we wouldn't have on-wiki.
- By "manner" here are you referring to the pace of the conversation being faster and the length of replies beings shorter? The tone of peoples' responses? Who is involved in the conversations being different from who might be had the conversation happened on-wiki? Something else?
- 1. Stussll is my personal account @PPelberg (talk) 16:03, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
- PPelberg (WMF), Hope to see ya on Discord soon! You can chat without being confirmed by WikiAuthBot though. If it is being slow, drop a note in the Discord, and the Bot operators can try to troubleshoot (its sometimes a bit sleepy).
- Ya know, I'm not quite sure how newbies find it, but a fair number of low count (50-500) edit users find us every week. I imagine they just come across WP:DISCORD and go from there.
- Anything you put on Wiki is usually going to have lots of eyes, be more scrutinized, and you'll get slower responses, so it feels like you need to do it right. With Discord, you can just drop a quick, informal note, and get a quick reply. That way you don't feel bad if it was a silly question, it doesn't feel like you're wasting folk's time.
- The pace and brevity is a biggie, but I'd say its also a bit more open. Since its not on-wiki, conversations don't have to strictly follow Wiki-protocol. Sure, you still need to be civil, but its a bit more jovial and folks feel more free to speak their mind. It also provides a forum-esque space that Wikipedia (quite purposefully) doesn't have. That way we can have a philosophical discussion about policy, without having to take a firm stance. For example, I think there is a general feeling on Discord that our notability criteria need to change. But we agree that to do so would be a vast undertaking, and require a very well crafted proposal. Any poorly crafted policy, or one that said "lets talk about it" would probably get shot down real quick. Its a catch 22: to discuss policy, you need a well crafted proposal, but to have a well crafted proposal, you need to discuss it. Discord cuts through that by allowing informal discussion on the merits of various ideas, in an environment that isn't so life or death.
- Hope that helps! CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 20:42, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
- Randomly popping in to say this is all very eloquently put. WanderingWanda (talk) 04:47, 31 January 2020 (UTC)
- CaptainEek:
Discord cuts through that by allowing informal discussion on the merits of various ideas, in an environment that isn't so life or death.
- The above is put well. Thank you for thinking this through with me.
- By the way, there were a couple of phrases you used that resonated me. While there is no real "action" related to them per se, I wanted to document them below. This all to say, you are leaving me with new thoughts and questions :)
...it [Discord] doesn't feel like you're wasting folk's time.
...to discuss policy, you need a well crafted proposal, but to have a well crafted proposal, you need to discuss it.
...an environment that isn't so life or death.
@PPelberg (talk) 01:10, 12 February 2020 (UTC)- Oh and while we're here, CaptainEek and WanderingWanda if either of y'all are open to trying out a new talk page feature, we have a prototype ready for a new workflow for replying to comments. It's available if/when you want to try it out: Replying prototype. @PPelberg (talk) 01:17, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
- PPelberg (WMF), Hope to see ya on Discord soon! You can chat without being confirmed by WikiAuthBot though. If it is being slow, drop a note in the Discord, and the Bot operators can try to troubleshoot (its sometimes a bit sleepy).
Trivial Information
Hello @CaptainEek:
I hope you have been experiencing the smoothest of all waters out on your voyages, as of late!
I have recently been working on that same BLP article as before, and another Wikipedian called me out on using trivial information, as opposed to enyclopedic information. What would be your best way of explaining the difference and your personal best practice at being able to decypher between the two in an effort to build out an article on a living person in a truly robust manner?
As always, thank you SO much, CaptainEek
Thederekjohnson (talk) 04:10, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
- Thederekjohnson, Encyclopedic information is not trivia. It is the facts that sources give significant coverage to, and that we should cover too. We tend not to include details about personal lives, or interesting facts unless they are well covered. Instead we focus on the information that is of historical value. The big questions like who were they, were did they live, what did they do, why is that important? But things like what their dog was named or their favorite food are not of particular value. If someone wanted to know that, they could read a full length book on the subject. But we are an encyclopedia: we have to be concise. When someone searches Wikipedia, they want to know details like birthdates and careers, not if they liked their coffee black. Also, we must be respectful of our living subjects. While parts of their personal lives may be accessible, we must be very careful when we choose to write about it on Wikipedia. Wikipedia is an amplifier, and anything we write here is seen by thousands or millions of people.
- Personally, I stay away from personal details when at all possible. They are rarely important. A good way to tell is the amount of text a source gives to it. If they mention something once in passing, it probably shouldn't be included. But if they give multiple paragraphs to it, then it could be considered for inclusion.
- An error you've run into on Ahmanson's article is the style of writing: not formal enough. Casual tones aren't appropriate. If in doubt, opt for overly formal. An overly formal tone can be cleaned up easily. An overly casual tone will need a rewrite or to be removed. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 04:47, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
My article for submission: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Hiranandani_Parks_Oragadam
Hi, I have used a new set of references and tweaked the content based on that. Please have a look. Thanks. Daphinevadhera (talk) 07:39, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
- Daphinevadhera, I'm afraid I don't have a very helpful opinion this time around, Indian articles are a challenging area for me as I have a hard time assessing sources. The article is better than before, but I'm still not sure if its notable. You would be better off by asking the question at The AfC helpdesk :) CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:41, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Draft:Chukwunonso Ezekwueche - Proposing Deletion
Hi, I inserted the proposed deletion tag on the article but am not sure if it is correctly positioned. Should it be above the AfC rejection box or on top of the actual content of the page? I have placed it on top of my article and under all the comments etc. Hoping for guidance, thanks & regards, Tycheana (talk) 19:31, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
- Tycheana, Howdy hello! You were on the right track but ended up with the wrong template. Proposed deletion should only be used on non-draft articles. For articles you wrote yourself, you can ask for them to be speedily deleted under critera G7 (author requests deletion). I have gone ahead and fixed the templates for you. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:38, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
- Hi CaptainEek, duly noted the positioning of the template, and also now clear about which one to use where. Many thanks for the prompt guidance and also the follow-up action, regards & best wishes, Tycheana (talk) 19:49, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
Adoption
Hi Captain! I've been part of Wikipedia for a few years and have made some articles, but I find that often my edits get undone because they aren't in the guidelines or they aren't constructive. I think it's mainly because I just threw myself into Wikipedia and taught myself instead of taking the time to read the policies. I hope I will be able to make more productive edits and help Wikipedia more. Bᴇʀʀᴇʟʏ • Talk to me∕What have I been doing 10:27, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- Berrely, Howdy hello! I would be happy to adopt you and help lead you through the finer points of Wikipedia. With that in mind, can you answer a few questions so I can better help you?
- What do you want out of adoption?
- What are your interests?
- What do you like editing?
- Why did you join Wikipedia?
- Smooth sailing, CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 23:58, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- Hey CaptainEek, thanks. What I want out of adoption is to be able to make more productive/constructive edits and help the community more. My interests include computers, and I generally edit articles related around the UK and Iran. I love visual design and have remade several logos in SVG and made graphics for articles. I joined Wikipedia 4 years ago because I noticed loads of mistakes in the articles in my local area and wanted to fix it.
- Bᴇʀʀᴇʟʏ • Talk to me∕What have I been doing 10:27, 13 February 2020 (UTC)
New Page Reviewer newsletter February 2020

Hello CaptainEek,
- Source Guide Discussion
The first NPP source guide discussion is now underway. It covers a wide range of sources in Ghana with the goal of providing more guidance to reviewers about sources they might see when reviewing pages. Hopefully, new page reviewers will join others interested in reliable sources and those with expertise in these sources to make the discussion a success.
- Redirects
New to NPP? Looking to try something a little different? Consider patrolling some redirects. Redirects are relatively easy to review, can be found easily through the New Pages Feed. You can find more information about how to patrol redirects at WP:RPATROL.
- Discussions and Resources
- There is an ongoing discussion around changing notifications for new editors who attempt to write articles.
- A recent discussion of whether Michelin starred restraunts are notable was archived without closure.
- A resource page with links pertinent for reviewers was created this month.
- A proposal to increase the scope of G5 was withdrawn.
- Refresher
Geographic regions, areas and places generally do not need general notability guideline type sourcing. When evaluating whether an article meets this notability guideline please also consider whether it might actually be a form of WP:SPAM for a development project (e.g. PR for a large luxury residential development) and not actually covered by the guideline.
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