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Beetle

Hello. I was think about working on beetle. Its already built and this book is available, so maybe it can work out like mantis did. LittleJerry (talk) 21:38, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

We could, specially if Cwmhiraeth is back from her travels through her articles on small places in France or wherever. Beetle is however an enormous subject and will require special care. The article is already nearly 100kBytes long (and the list of subgroups is already a separate article) and should not become much longer; we'd need rather to cut down some sections (far too much on scarabs in Ancient Egypt, for instance), which is a delicate matter. There are some interesting features of the history - for instance, the lead is only 2 sentences, glaringly too short, yet an editor removed the 'lead too short' tag and demanded talk page discussion for the issue if the tag was to be put back! Despite the length of the article, however, some sections are very poorly covered. The phylogeny is actually barely discussed (what are the ancestors of beetles, how are the major groups (suborders, superfamilies) related) despite the length of that section. So as I said, the subject is enormous and it won't be a simple job like Mantis. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:54, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
Dang. Thought it could be a cakewalk. Oh well, have you thought of bringing some of your insect GAs to FAC like dragonfly.? On a separate note, I've been tentatively thinking of building Teleostei and will speak with Cwmhiraeth about it in January. LittleJerry (talk) 14:44, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
Both good ideas, happy to join in. All the best, Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
On second thought, lets give beetle a shot. LittleJerry (talk) 22:09, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
Have you invited Cwmhiraeth already? Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:00, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
She wouldn't be able to join until January. LittleJerry (talk) 00:22, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
OK. I have made a start; let's see what she thinks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:03, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
I'm working on a reproduction section. Should there also be a feeding section? LittleJerry (talk) 23:32, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

Teleostei

I really prefer creating/expanding articles rather than working on articles that are already pretty comprehensive. So I am happy to join you on Teleostei but not keen to do so on Beetle as the ratio of effort needed for improvement to improvement achieved is too high. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:47, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
@LittleJerry, it seems Cwmhiraeth agrees with me about Beetle. Why don't we work on the Bony fish (Teleosts)? Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:53, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
Ok then. LittleJerry (talk) 14:07, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
Anybody have some sources? I plan on purchasing these two books. LittleJerry (talk) 16:12, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
Sounds good. There are many papers and general textbooks too. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:16, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
Cwmhiraeth and Chiswick Chap, when you're really we'll map out the structure of the article. LittleJerry (talk) 21:09, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
I intend to work on the phylogeny, with a cladogram if feasible accompanied by a photo of each major group, the fossil record (which is rich).
I am not convinced that there is a valid human side to "teleosts": whereas there certainly is to "fish". I suggest that in this more technical article on a clade, it probably doesn't make sense to talk about literature and so on. If the team would like something, I'd suggest a brief paragraph, pointing to more at "fish". Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:21, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
I'll take a crack at writing out their characteristics. As for human relation, I think it may be valid to have a fisheries section. LittleJerry (talk) 10:05, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
Having had a look at Teleostei and searching for suitable sources, I am wondering whether it would be better to go for Actinopterygii. What do you folks think? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:18, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
Did you type in teleostei or teleost in the search box? Teleost has better res. I find some more sources like this and this textbook goes into more detail on teleosts. Personally, I find the subject of teleost fish specifically more interesting and unique but I'm open-minded. LittleJerry (talk) 16:44, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
The two are very similar: all but 50 species of Actinopterygians are Teleosts! I have made an external cladogram showing the Teleosts within the Actinopterygian lineage, and have related this to the Tetrapods as well. I'm working on the Teleostei, and have completely replaced the obsolete classification with an illustrated cladogram, but am happy to contribute to both articles. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:33, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
Well I would like to know which we will focus on, before I start. LittleJerry (talk) 15:59, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
For the moment let's start on Teleostei, but personally, I intend to move on to Actinopterygii afterwards. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:00, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
I'll work on characteristics. Can you cite a textbook? LittleJerry (talk) 20:09, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
You guys can work on both if you want but I would prefer teleost go to FAC. Learning about them, they are what really comes to mind when you think "fish". LittleJerry (talk) 00:26, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
I have Zoology by Dorit/Walker/Barnes. It has about four pages on teleosts and their adaptive radiations. I will expand some of the ideas mentioned in the book in a section I will call "Diversity" for the time being. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:26, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

I just found and added the template named "diversity of fish" (but simply headed "Fish"). It's a ragbag without taxonomic knowledge, and it seriously needs tidying up, but it contains many useful links to incorporate into the article. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:21, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

I created an article on Retroculus lapidifer to fill a red link on the caption to the lead image. By the time I looked at Teleostei again, the main image had changed and there were three more red links! Never mind, it was an interesting fish. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:38, 3 January 2016 (UTC)
Sympathy ... but we are touring around a vast subject, which the template indeed will assist (we can improve it as we go), building up a more balanced picture... in what I hope will be less than 100,000 words... Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:48, 3 January 2016 (UTC)
I think I'm pretty much done with characteristics. Does anyone have a photo or photos for the section? LittleJerry (talk) 00:54, 4 January 2016 (UTC)
@LittleJerry: I'll see what I can rustle up. "Diversity" is spawning new sections on Behavior, and the template at the end of the article lists many topics that we should consider mentioning. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:42, 4 January 2016 (UTC)
@Cwmhiraeth: I've created a Physiology section to cover the many interesting aspects of teleost capabilities. Some sections are empty, (many) more could be added. Behaviour and Ecology may need separate sections. Since most possible sections are covered by existing articles on fish-in-general, we probably should just add short summary paragraphs on each topic with a "further" link, not "main" as the articles don't only cover teleosts. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:48, 4 January 2016 (UTC)
Good. I'll get to work tomorrow. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:46, 4 January 2016 (UTC)
Reproduction will need to be expanded. It doesn't cover the complexity of teleosts. LittleJerry (talk) 23:17, 4 January 2016 (UTC)
I'm working on a reproduction section. Should there also be a section on feeding? LittleJerry (talk) 23:35, 5 January 2016 (UTC)
@User:Cwmhiraeth, User:LittleJerry: there's a comment on the article's talk page about the focus of the expansion, namely that it should be sharply on what the clade is and is not, strictly avoiding overlap with existing general "fish" articles. This has some force. I don't agree, really, with the "then you'll need to expand N other articles" - that may be so, but doesn't mean we're not right to expand this one. I think, though, that we need to be very careful to point out what is common to all-the-teleosts and distinguish them from non-teleosts, rather than saying this fish does this and that fish does that: there's no end to that approach. We need to agree a common response. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:31, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
I think "Osmoregulation" and "Buoyancy" in particular are redundant. LittleJerry (talk) 16:53, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
I always thought Teleostei would be difficult. If you don't like those sections, I expect they can be moved into Actinopterygii. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:29, 7 January 2016 (UTC)
If other Actinopterygii have the same mechanisms then that's the right answer. Other fish (e.g. cartilaginous fish like sharks) lack swimbladders so I think we should check first. The general point is that we need to focus on what is distinctive about teleosts. The fact that they're 90% of all fish means, too, that a well-written Diversity section is necessary, and to answer the talk page challenge it must provide coverage rather than giving the appearance of random examples. I've managed to write a properly general Distribution section, but it took a bit of thought. I've just checked the buoyancy story; teleost swim bladders seem to have evolved separately from chondrostean ones (and other actinos don't have 'em), so the section is relevant here. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:35, 7 January 2016 (UTC)
@User:Chiswick Chap: Could you upload the male and female photo from here? Thank you. LittleJerry (talk) 03:35, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
Sexual dimorphism in Bolbometopon muricatum

Done. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:13, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

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Magic Bus no longer

  • I clicked your page just to see who you are. And found your wonderful work on Islamic patterning, a passion of mine. Many people object to the politics of the Iranian government, me, I resent the fact that it no longer safe to visit Isfahan. Best, E.M.Gregory (talk) 19:43, 15 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Many thanks. Yes, it's a tremendous shame how the world is "shrinking" - once (for a brief period, really) it seemed possible to travel anywhere. People even went in the Magic Bus described by Rory Maclean (Penguin, 2007) right across Iran... Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:00, 15 January 2016 (UTC)

Isabella Beeton

Many thanks for your comments at the recent PR for Isabella Beeton. I have dropped the good lady into FAC for comments and thoughts. If you have time for any, I'd be delighted to hear with them. Cheers – SchroCat (talk) 15:05, 16 January 2016 (UTC)

Bovidae

Hi Chiswick Chap! I am planning to take Bovidae to FAC, an article on which we once worked together. Would you like to take a look at it, especially at the parts you have added, and then we may proceed to FAC? Sainsf <^>Talk all words 06:27, 17 January 2016 (UTC)

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War films

Always amazes me that whenever there's a war film on TV on TCM or Film4 or whatever it almost always seems to be 1955-1958. 1957 in particular really seemed to be the hot point for war films! ♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:50, 23 January 2016 (UTC)

Yes, people must have needed to work the war out of their systems in some way. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:48, 23 January 2016 (UTC)

Gas stoves

As part of my "lead improvement" effort I have just expanded the lead for Gas stove. Without spending much time on research, it seems to me that the part of the Gas stove article that mentions Aga Stoves is wrong. Surely Agas, Rayburns etc were developed as solid fuel stoves superior to old kitchen ranges, and any use of them fuelled by gas or oil was a much later development? Have you any thoughts on this? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:23, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

@Cwmhiraeth: Yes, they began with coal and moved on to oil or gas later. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:35, 27 January 2016 (UTC)
Yeah, well I left that bit out of my lead section but really the gas stove article needs reworking. The whole article has a single reference! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:44, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

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