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22:08:39, 1 December 2014 review of submission by Andrew Claven


Hi,

You declined my article for lack of notability, but I included a national newspaper article on the author, a recording of an interview on an international radio station, newspaper coverage of a book trailer that was made and won an international award, and also linked to the trailer itself. Also I linked to the author's Twitter page that has around 40000 followers and to Goodreads where the books have been rated over 15000 times, as well as some reader compiled lists where the books have been voted on thousands of times as well.

Granted this isn't Steven King but there are a lot of other author pages on Wikipedia with a awful lot less notability than I have been able to find for this one.

Andrew Claven (talk) 22:08, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

I did decline it, perhaps I missed something in the inline external links, let's go through the draft as it is now, and see what we have.
A word on how you've linked sources -- sources which are being used to verify facts and establish notability should be handled using references. The easiest way to start learning how to make references on Wikipedia is to read Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners, which includes a nice video showing how to use the RefToolbar, which makes working with references a whole lot easier. The way you've linked thinks, bracket-URL-bracket, should almost entirely be reserved for an external links section at the bottom of the article and should in most articles never occur in the text. That wasn't why I declined it, but it will help the next reviewer, when you resubmit this, make sense of what they're looking at.
Anyway, going through the links in order (and I may have missed one, but I think you'll be able to follow along)....
  1. Goodreads link -- please remove, not a WP:RS
  2. Magnetic Print and design company - just a link to a broken web site for a company he allegedly works for. Doesn't verify anything. Remove per WP:ELNO
  3. The Mirror - there is precedent for suggesting that the Mirror is an unacceptable source for serious allegations about living people, which would apply in this case. Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_160#Huffington_Post.2FDaily_Mirror is one such precedent. But this is closer to the point, yes.
  4. Twitter - remove Please see WP:External links/Perennial websites for more information on why social media sites, IMDB, YouTube and/or Find-a-Grave are not generally considered reliable secondary sources.
  5. Goodreads - remove
  6. Goodreads - remove
  7. Goodreads - remove
  8. Goodreads - remove
  9. Soundcloud -- remove after reading WP:SPS
  10. Goodreads - remove
  11. YouTube - remove (Please see WP:External links/Perennial websites for more information on why social media sites, IMDB, YouTube and/or Find-a-Grave are not generally considered reliable secondary sources.)
  12. University of Sunderland's Press room - this can stay, but it doesn't provide signficant coverage of the author, and doesn't go toward WP:BASIC.
  13. Goodreads - remove
  14. Koestler Trust - page linked to doesn't mention the author - remove or improve
  15. Goodreads - remove
  16. Goodreads - remove
  17. Goodreads - remove
  18. Amazon - publicity materials and self-published reviews - remove
  19. Night Owl Reviews - remove - not an WP:RS
The Mirror isn't that clean-cut a case, by the way. The MIrror had been a book review I probably wouldn't have blinked about saying it applied toward notability, but given how it's been used, well, we try and be very careful when saying someone has been in prison.
All my comments above aside, Ronald may very well meet our notability guideline! The article doesn't quite show it yet, but that doesn't mean that there aren't more appropriate sources which would get this over the bar.
That most of the article is sourced to unreliable sources--the vast majority--is going to be a major impediment forward the article being accepted in its current state, by any reviewer. I would first look for more in the way of solid coverage in newspapers and magazines, and then trim 90% of what's written that isn't covered in those. The article will be much shorter, but will be much more likely to be accepted by the next reviewer. --j⚛e deckertalk 23:09, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Why was my articled declined?

Hi there,

I would just like to get some information as to why my article was declined creation? I would also like to know how it could be accepted so I can move forward with the creation of my Wikipedia page.

Kind regards Bronte Bendeich Snelleman Tom

Hi Tom,
If you look at the draft article, Draft:Snelleman Tom, the reason the article was declined is in the pink box at the top.
If that discussion doesn't make sense (and I realize our policies can be confusing), I'd start by reading WP:Your first article to get an understanding of what we need from an article in order to accept it, particularly the Gathering references section. All articles on Wikipedia, but most particularly biographies, need to contain references to in-depth coverage in reliable, independent, third-party coverage, and have that coverage back up what the article says. These would typically be references to newspaper articles, magazine articles, and/or book sections, but not interviews or press releases. I hope this helps! Best of luck! --j⚛e deckertalk 00:43, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

Request on 01:49:34, 2 December 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Espera az


Espera az (talk) 01:49, 2 December 2014 (UTC)


Hi! I am the founder of the webpage from where the content was pulled for wikipedia. I wanted the information on the school to be in consistency with what wikipedia talks about it!

Hi!
This is in regards to User:Espera az/sandbox, which was more or less adapted from [ http://zafacademy.org/zaf-trust.html ].
While you may be, or may be associated with, the copyright holder of the work which appears to match the text you have submitted, I certainly take your word for it personally, it is usually the case that such material (particularly any autobiographical material) is often unsuitable for Wikipedia. The goals of such writing are different, self-written biographies or descriptions aim to put the subject in a positive and sometimes glowing light, whereas our encyclopedia aspires to neutral, balanced, dry and objective summaries. And "we" in a Wikipedia article is Wikipedia, not your organization.
If you still believe you would like to donate a license to the copyrighted text, your next step is to read WP:Donating copyrighted materials, that page explains how to proceed, and a few important things you will have to understand before you do. But given how promotional the text was, I believe you would be better off taking a different path.
  1. If you are writing about your own enterprise, it can be quite difficult to write a proper encyclopedia article--and in fact, our policies go out of their way to suggest that you do not try. Please read and understand WP:PSCOI.
  2. One of the basic bars an article like this is going to have to meet is notability, which is defined under Wikipedia as being shown by coverage in arm's-length, reliable sources. These are usually things such as newspaper articles and magazine articles, and excludes the sort of "reprinted press releases" common to some local business rags--those sources must be independent and reliable.
  3. My best advice is to start over, and then work at finding those sources. Find out what they talk about, and how. And then write your article based almost entirely on those sources. You can use primary sources to fill in entirely neutral and uncontroversial facts (where's the HQ?), but the use of primary sources should be a minimum.
  4. This process is likely to be frustrating for you if you take any other path. Thanks! --j⚛e deckertalk 02:02, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

Alex Dilmaghani

Hello Sir,

Why did you delete the Alex Dilmaghani wikipedia page?

Kind Regards,

Tom — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrdobbywheel (talk • contribs) 16:53, 3 December 2014 (UTC)

As a result of the discussion at Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Alex_Dilmaghani, I determined that the community felt that the boxer did not meet our WP:NBOX inclusion criterion. --j⚛e deckertalk 20:31, 3 December 2014 (UTC)


Request on 20:53:03, 2 December 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Gregory Tanner

Hello Joe. I am new-ish to the creator side of Wikipedia. Im and longtime user (and financial supporter) and I've done some editing in the past. Yesterday I created a page "Mary Fairburn", which I thought would past muster, but it's been deleted due to using copyrighted material. I cited my sources, and thought my quotes were well within the "fair dealing" limits. Fortunately most of the article is still in my Sandbox. Can you advise me please how to bring my article up to your standards? Cheers, Greg Tanner Gregory Tanner (talk) 20:53, 2 December 2014 (UTC)


Gregory Tanner (talk) 20:53, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

The output from this will provide you a helpful reference. As a single example, the text " a taker in of the homeless and an agitator on the behalf of local conservation causes she has", the second match, appears in Wikipedia's voice in your sandbox, If the output from that inelegant script gives any sense of the degree to which the Times got quoted here, it might be that that needs to be cut back, but that is a somewhat smaller and more subjective hurdle.
I would guess, and I mean no insult by this, that you started with a cut-and-pasted version of the article and attempted to edit it down, based on the quantity and type of identical phrases. In my experience, this never works, and often even when it appears okay to our scripts, results in copyright issues due to WP:Close paraphrasing, which are inevitably discovered years later and require quite a bit of redacting of historical revisions of an article. It is far simpler on everyone involved when editors here write in their own words. Please do so. Thank you for understanding. --j⚛e deckertalk 20:42, 3 December 2014 (UTC)

Draft:Wiki_on_a_Stick

Please could you review it? Draft:Wiki_on_a_Stick thanks Tomaswoas (talk) 15:05, 2 December 2014 (UTC)

I'll give it a shot when I have a free hour, sorry our queue is so backlogged. --j⚛e deckertalk 20:45, 3 December 2014 (UTC)

Please provide the list of Pangrams that you deleted

I am somewhat puzzled why you deleted the list of international Pangrams for all languages that we used to reference constantly in our language testing and research, but obviously you know more about this topic and since you deemed it frivolous and useless, then it must be so.

Can you please provide the list to me at windowing at yahoo

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.196.149.18 (talk) 20:36, 4 December 2014 (UTC)

The decision to remove it from Wikipedia was made by community consensus, and within policy. I did, however, make a copy of the material at http://wordplay.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page , which I hope will serve your needs. Best, --j⚛e deckertalk 04:23, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

Request to re-write an article that was previously deleted

Hi!

I would like to create the page "Comintelli" that was deleted on May 7th, 2014. I believe I will be able to write an article that meets all the guidelines compared to the old one that seemed not to have done that. How do I go about doing this? Can I just start a new article, although the topic is the same as in the deleted one? Thanks in advance! Carroend (talk) 09:41, 4 December 2014 (UTC)

The article in question was deleted as a result of a community discussion, Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Comintelli, and the primary bar to writing a new article will be showing that you have new sources which meet our WP:CORP inclusion criteria, in particular, WP:CORPDEPTH. What we mean by these requirements seems to be confusing for many new editors, you may want to enlist some assistance at the WP:Teahouse, in fact, I recommend it, they're a good group of folks. In short, though, we're looking to see that there have been substantial (think, long-form) pieces on the company in reliable newspapers, magazines, books, written completely independently from the company (no press releases, interviews, or even many of the warmed over press releases that grace many of the business weeklies) and which cover more than routine announcements (executive appointments, M&A, facility moves, earnings announcements, product announcements, etc.)
Participating editors, who are familiar with our usual interpretations of these policies, said they couldn't find such sources, but if there's been new coverage, we can certainly talk. Sources do not need to be in English, but it certainly makes our lives easier when they are.
Because this often comes up with regard to corporate articles, if you are related to the company involved (and you may not be), note that can be difficult to write a proper, neutral, encyclopedia article on something you have an interest in--and in fact, our policies suggest, in that case, that you do not try. Please read and understand WP:PSCOI. However, if you do wish to continue writing such an article, in my experience, the key thing is to find a handful of sources of the type I described above, and then use what they talk about, and in what degree, as an indication of what deserves more or less coverage in an article. Best of luck! --j⚛e deckertalk 04:35, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

16:54:13, 5 December 2014 review of submission by 68.102.58.146


68.102.58.146 (talk) 16:54, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi Joe How Are You Doing. 68.102.58.146 (talk) 16:54, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

I Hope there's Some good news about the Super Bowl LIII Page And I Hope it will begin sometime soon — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.102.58.146 (talk) 17:01, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

Hi!
I see you've added to it, but I'd have to decline it again immediately if you submitted it, the next step is making sure you've provided references to reliable sources that back the information you've provided. That's a requirement.
I'd really recommend reading WP:Your first article, which should give you a lot of background on the process here, and may help you avoid a few extra slow cycles through our process. In particular, until there has been a certain level of non-speculative coverage of the 2019 event our guidelines would tell me we can't have an article on the subject, and you'll have to show that that coverage exists with sources. The article on the 2018 super bowl is probably a good indication of what we'd need as a minimum, if that helps.
Best of luck,! --j⚛e deckertalk 17:39, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

Ok Then Super Bowl XLIX has to be played first then will see about the Super Bowl LIII page. But You Put 2 that's on this page but why did you make me laugh. 68.102.58.146 (talk) 22:51, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

Expanding stub for Ambassador John Banks Elliott _ Ambassadors of Ghana to Russia

Dear Joe Decker,

Edit stub from Sandbox page. On expanding the stub for Ambassador John Banks Elliott, I have placed a great deal of the conversation I had with him about his Ambassadorial-ship in Moscow. I hope what I have placed is sufficient assemblage of him. I need help with editing and I am not sure with links to other pages or what should be linked.

I am unable to add his letter of accreditation which I have on jpg. Please advise. _Ambassador John Banks Elliott_copy 1-2 accreditation from Queen Elizabeth II_01.1960_1.jpg _Ambassador John Banks Elliott_copy 2-2 accreditation from Queen Elizabeth II_01.1960_2.jpg Ambassador John Banks Elliott_copy 1-2_accreditation from President Kwame Nkrumah_07.1960_1.jpg Ambassador John Banks Elliott_copy 2-2_accreditation from President Kwame Nkrumah_07.1960_2.jpg I have also added references of Books, Journals, Newspapers and Newsreel mentioning the Ambassador. Could you please have a look at what I have placed and help with making it readable. The photo (Ambassador John Banks Elliott after presenting of his credentials to the Chairman of the Presidium of the Supreme Council Mr. Leonid Brezhnev. Moscow, July 1960)has gone funny again. I managed to get many interesting stories from him, but it is not everything that I put on the page, some of the stuff I omitted is moderately confidential and some anecdotal. I guess I will have to write a book about his stories one of these days. Please let me hear from you soon. Kind regards, DorothyDorothyelliott (talk) 07:00, 6 December 2014 (UTC)

(talk page stalker) Unfortunately I had to revert those changes. Photos do not make good references since they rely on someone's interpretation of what is depicted. Those of the sources I checked largely did not cover Elliott in any detail, with some not mentioning him at all and others being blatantly misrepresented. For example, one of the references mentioned that a historian had called Elliott "[Nkrumah’s] worst ambassadorial appointment in this period" and said he "advanced Soviet, rather than Ghanaian, interests in most of his dealings as ambassador" - our readers wouldn't have learned that from the flattering text you wrote. Instead it went pretty far off-topic by discussing, for example, Chinese customs of hospitality. This is not helpful for readers who are looking for information on Elliott. Huon (talk) 15:58, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
I don’t understand what this about, is this some sort of a prank? I know there is a lot of hacking going on. Who are you Huon? Whatever your reasons for messing up my work, then removing the stub expansion on Ambassador Elliott’s page is not appropriate, what you are saying is neither here nor there. I do not appreciate what you did. I would kindly ask you to replace all of the edition and references that you have removed. This will enable me and the person from the talk page I sought help from to put it right.

Thank you for your understanding. Dorothyelliott (talk) 19:05, 6 December 2014 (UTC)

This is not at all a prank. The {{help me}} template summons helpers from all over Wikipedia and brought me here. I took a look at the expansion, checked many of the references, and found both the content and the sources highly problematic. Some of the references might probably be salvaged, such as the one about how Elliott advanced Soviet interests more than Ghanaian ones, but the content would have to be rewritten almost in its entirety to appropriately summarize what the reliable sources report about Elliott. I'll explain my rationale in greater detail at the article talk page. Huon (talk) 21:43, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for letting me realize the help me was bracketed, It was not intended to be. It is kind of you to take interest but the help me was directed to the editor I am working with. I will kindly ask you not to delete this article and let me continue with any edits myself.

Kind regards,Dorothyelliott (talk) 22:06, 6 December 2014 (UTC)

Berfrois

Thanks for the advice. I made the changes that you suggested.

My pleasure --j⚛e deckertalk 16:50, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

Request on 15:42:46, 12 December 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by 87.82.211.78

Draft:Jamie Acton cant understand why this article was refused again after I added references? What is wrong with the references? If you take a look at the other Leigh Centurions squad members most player articles have no reference at all and some even reference entirely the wrong person! What exactly is a reliable reference and what do I need to do to actually get a factually accurate article accepted?

87.82.211.78 (talk) 15:42, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

I didn't decline that article, User:Hell in a Bucket did, I'd leave a note at his talk page. I'm away from Wikipedia dealing with personal matters now or I'd take a longer look, my apologies for the terse reply. --j⚛e deckertalk 16:52, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

Request on 21:32:04, 8 December 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Blackmarionball5285

Hi there,

So clearly am new to this. I will try again but without the copyrighted information. Can you please tell me what portion of it was copyrighted? Was it in the links? Or...

Many Thanks in advance for your help, insight and guidance.

blackmarionball5285


Blackmarionball5285 (talk) 21:32, 8 December 2014 (UTC)

It was a clear match to . Please write only in your own words. Thank you. --j⚛e deckertalk 16:53, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

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Provide a copy please

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Request on 10:06:06, 17 December 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by Geven46

Expanding stub for Ambassador John Banks Elliott _ Ambassadors of Ghana to Russia

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