AfC notification: Draft:Berta Carew has a new comment
I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Berta Carew. Thanks! Hoary (talk) 07:24, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Berta Carew (August 3)
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time.The reason left by MCE89 was:
Still filled with inaccessible and archival sources, as well as likely LLM hallucinations. Wikipedia articles should be based on reliable, published sources — it's fine if these sources are offline, but they can't be archival materials that haven't been published.
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 07:19, 3 January 2026 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Berta Carew (January 26)
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time.The reason left by Hoary was:
The first reference that I was able to check without rising from my chair was for the assertion Her father, Frank Bliss Coleman, was a toolmaker and master mechanic at the Okonite Company, one of the oldest engineering firms in the United States. The reference is to a short newspaper article* titled "Has Had No Asthma For Two Years Now". This I read. It has no mention of (i) a daughter (or indeed anything about the family of "Frank Coleman"); (ii) being a toolmaker or master mechanic (or indeed anything about Coleman's trade or employment); (iii) Okonite; (iv) the middle name "Bliss".
* More likely an "advertorial" at best. As it reads like an advert and ends "—Adv.", it appears to be merely an advert paid for by the Nacor Medicine Co.
Should GraziePrego have written the reviewer comment below in bold or in CAPS?
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AfC notification: Draft:Berta Carew has a new comment
I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Berta Carew. Thanks! Hoary (talk) 05:34, 13 February 2026 (UTC)
AfC notification: Draft:Berta Carew has a new comment
I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Berta Carew. Thanks! Hoary (talk) 22:20, 14 February 2026 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Berta Carew (April 30)
Draft declinedThank you for contributing to Wikipedia. Your draft submission to Articles for creation has been reviewed but not accepted at this time.
FeedbackThe reviewer, Nighfidelity, left the following feedback:
or multiple published secondary sources that cover the subject or their work and:
provide critical attention: professional reviews, excluding user reviews from the general public;
are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
are independent: not connected to the subject, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.
Please add references that meet these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.
It is often easier to prove the notability of a creative work than of a person. If the person is not yet notable, but their work has received multiple in-depth professional reviews, consider writing about the work instead.
Your submission at Articles for creation: Berta Carew (August 4)
Draft declinedThank you for contributing to Wikipedia. Your draft submission to Articles for creation has been reviewed but not accepted at this time.
FeedbackThe reviewer, Avgeekamfot, left the following feedback:
or multiple published secondary sources that cover the subject or their work and:
provide critical attention: professional reviews, excluding user reviews from the general public;
are reliable: from reputable outlets with editorial oversight;
are independent: not connected to the subject, such as interviews, press releases, the subject's own website, or sponsored content.
Please add references that meet these criteria. If none exist, the subject is not yet suitable for Wikipedia.
It is often easier to prove the notability of a creative work than of a person. If the person is not yet notable, but their work has received multiple in-depth professional reviews, consider writing about the work instead.
Could be a WP:NARTIST#4 pass if shown that her work is in the permanent collection of an additional museum or gallery in addition to the Philadelphia Museum of Art.
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