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Gwen Ffrangcon-Davies

The role of Etain in The Immortal Hour was significant in that it was her first professional engagement in a musical/opera and to a very large extent, this particular opera established her identity before Shakespeare ever did.

In that case this should be explained. But the bald statement that she was in a relatively obscure opera doesn't add much to the article, whereas the significance of the fact that she played Juliet opposite Gielgud is immediately apparent. -- Necrothesp 12:19, 24 May 2007 (UTC)

Spelling of British Army ranks

I have reverted your reversion of the spelling of Major General on the Royal Military Academy Sandhurst page. According to the "Land Component Handbook (Acronymns, Abbreviations, Glossary of Terms and Symbology)", a classified document that regrettably is not publicly available, the only correct spelling is Major General. The hyphen is not in use in any rank in the British Army. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Greylin (talk • contribs) 20:29, 23 April 2007 (UTC).

The fact is that the word, in British English, is spelt Major-General, as clearly listed in the OED. The Army does not have a monopoly on its usage, and the fact that somebody has ludicrously decided that American spellings look "cool" or whatever else prompted them to adopt such a spelling is not a reason for us to misspell the word. As a parallel, if some lunatic at the MOD suddenly decided that Lieutenant should be pronounced "lootenant" that would not mean that everybody in Britain, or even in the Army, would suddenly be obliged to adopt such a ridiculous pronunciation. -- Necrothesp 22:58, 23 April 2007 (UTC)
Now we enter into the debate about whether dictionaries should be prescriptive of the rules of language, or descriptive of the way the language is actually used. A language cannot be fossilized, no matter how many rules are set in place. We know that concessions to usage are made, otherwise (for example) we would still be being told that the correct spelling of "tomorrow" was "to-morrow" as it was in Dickens' time. The Commandant of Sandhurst describes his rank as Major General and uses this spelling on his official web page. Is he wrong to do so, just because the OED appears not to have caught up with a practice that has been in

official use for the best part of thirty years? Should Wikipedia mislead its readers into thinking that the correct way to address a British Major General is to revert to a practice that has been out of date for a generation?

My suggested solution is to revert to the non-hyphenated spelling of Major General at Royal_Military_Academy_Sandhurst with a reference from there to something explaining the changing history of the spelling at Major_general#United_Kingdom. However, this is an issue that affects other British Army ranks too, such as Lance Corporal, Staff Sergeant, Lieutenant Colonel etc. --Greylin 10:13, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
I don't actually think it's a case of dictionary English against live English. For instance, The Times style guide still says that ranks should be hyphenated (except, interestingly, Lance-Corporal) and I have seen many, many instances in the last thirty years of ranks being hyphenated in official sources (indeed, when I served up to fifteen years ago I would not have dreamed of not hyphenating these ranks - they were always hyphenated). I think this is more a case of somebody at the MoD arbitrarily deciding they prefer the ranks not to be hyphenated.
Staff Sergeant, incidentally, has not been hyphenated for so long that I don't think anyone would do so any more. That's a relic of a time when all word combinations were hyphenated (e.g. street names, such as "Regent-street", which can still be seen on some old signs). However, there is a good reason to hyphenate ranks such as Major-General - a senior rank is being modified by a junior rank, which means it makes perfect sense in English for them to be hyphenated. You will notice that most British and Canadian writers on military subjects on Wikipedia prefer to use the hyphenated versions of these ranks, which says something about the way language is actually used, I think. Trying to change these things unilaterally will meet resistance.
As for web pages, I don't take them seriously as far as spelling and grammar are concerned. Webmasters' spelling and grammar are frequently atrocious. And I have seen some appalling errors of English and fact on MoD websites. -- Necrothesp 12:55, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
You write:

(indeed, when I served up to fifteen years ago I would not have dreamed of not hyphenating these ranks - they were always hyphenated). I think this is more a case of somebody at the MoD arbitrarily deciding they prefer the ranks not to be hyphenated.

With respect, you were wrong then and you are wrong now. I have in front of me JSP 101 (the official service writing manual) dated November 1978 - with which you should have been familiar if you served up to fifteen years ago - and Major General is clearly listed in it without a hyphen, as are all similar "compound" ranks. The decision to drop the hyphen has now been in force long enough for its implementation not to be "arbitrary".
Regardless of your personal preferences, or those of The Times or of Canadian, British or any other writers or dictionaries, the situation now is that Royal_Military_Academy_Sandhurst is displaying incorrectly the rank of a serving officer, Major General Pearson. He and others could reasonably find this discourteous. This type of inaccuracy does Wikipedia's credibility no favours. I am sorry you continue to insist that you know better - especially since you have now demonstrated that you did not know better when you were actually serving yourself.--Greylin 20:49, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
With respect, if Major-General Pearson finds correct English spelling discourteous (and I frankly doubt that he would) then I despair of the British Army. No doubt soon we will in fact see "lootenant" as the official pronunciation. Incidentally, do the manuals you quote actually specifically say that the hyphen is not to be used or do they just not use it? If the latter I would reiterate my point that they were doubtless written by a civil servant without a command of correct English, education being sadly lacking even amongst government officials in the modern day and age. You seem to set very high store by service manuals, yet I'm sure you would not suddenly start misspelling other words just because they did so. Would you start writing "color" instead of "colour" just because somebody at the MoD was ignorant enough to do so? I doubt it. The English language is not changed, even within the Army, just because the MoD says it is. "Major-General" may be an army rank, but it is still part of the English language and cannot be changed just because a manual starts using a variant. And, as I have said, I am not the only editor who thinks this should be the case - many editors have added hyphens to British ranks in the past.
Incidentally, it is gratifying that the RN and RAF at least still understand proper English usage. Maybe the Army should take a leaf out of their book and not try so hard to be All-American! -- Necrothesp 16:17, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
Re the RN and RAF web pages you refer to, it's as you say:

"As for web pages, I don't take them seriously as far as spelling and grammar are concerned. Webmasters' spelling and grammar are frequently atrocious. And I have seen some appalling errors of English and fact on MoD websites."

--Greylin 17:38, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
I'm sure you'll now explain what exactly you're getting at! Are you saying that your wonderguide (that nobody else can see) also says their ranks shouldn't have hyphens? -- Necrothesp 21:01, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

I am ex-Army and the document JSP 101 deals with staff issues such as correct abbreviations and spelling. Ranks are not hyphenated and if the person above who claims that he hypentaed ranks had been my clerk he would have reverted to piss-mattress storeman before the day was out (interestingly, an example of a hypentaed military role). The ranks are in the Army not The Times or even at Wikipedia so their various style manuals are irrelevant. --MJB 13:12, 15 May 2007 (UTC)

No, the ranks are in the English language, upon which the Army does not have a monopoly! The Army can misspell ranks and show its ignorance if it so chooses, but the fact remains that in British English these words are hyphenated. -- Necrothesp 13:26, 15 May 2007 (UTC)

Reversion to Commandant

I have reverted your edit you made to Commandant today. Although those definitions are relevant, they belong in wiktionary, not on a disambiguation page (per WP:DAB). If you have questions about why I did what I did, don't hesitate to ask. Take care! - grubber 01:03, 16 February 2007 (UTC)

I agree they don't belong on a disambiguation page. But they do deserve an article. Probably Commandant itself should be an article, with a link to a disambiguation page. The problem is that the meanings that are currently listed are actually the more uncommon ones. -- Necrothesp 10:22, 16 February 2007 (UTC)
That would be one solution. If you're just thinking of a list of definitions, then wiktionary is the better place for that. If what you are thinking is an article itself, I think that's a great solution -- if there's enough to make an article out of. - grubber 19:55, 16 February 2007 (UTC)
There's actually more than enough to make an article compared to many of the articles we already have. I'm personally not a fan of the "move everything to Wiktionary" school of thought, which is why I readded the other bits in the first place. Almost every noun can have a decent article made out of it. The line between a simple definition and an informative article is a very fine, blurry and subjective one. -- Necrothesp 00:28, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
Yeah, it's a tough line to figure out where it's a dict def or if it's a stub that could be worked into an article... - grubber 02:07, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

Kevin Beary AFD Vote

The article on Orange County, Florida Sheriff Kevin Beary, which you have previously edited has been nominated for deletion. Please feel free to share your thoughts on this matter. --TommyBoy 03:26, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

TAFMIS Block?

Apparently you've blocked a TAFMIS IP (namely 82.109.66.146) from editing Wikipedia. Could you expand a little on why this happened? If my customers have been misusing TAFMIS terminals in my IT Suite, I'd like to know, so I can make the appropriate enquiries and report the offenders for abusing our services. Kind regards, C Jessup (IT Administrator). CitrusC 12:59, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

  • No matter, I found out why via the Special:Contributions page for the IP in question. If you have any problems from anyone using that IP address - personal insults (amusingly mispelled) or otherwise - please drop me a message at my talk page with the offence and when it occurred, and I'll see if I can link them to current users in the Suite and take appropriate action. Kind regards, C Jessup (IT Administrator). CitrusC 13:33, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
    • Many thanks. I don't like blocking anonymous IPs for any length of time, but I'm not tolerating that sort of vandalism. I shall unblock the IP now. Regards. -- Necrothesp 15:06, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
        • [In reference to the comment left on my talk page] I've checked who was on at the time and it looks like it may have been from someone else on the TAFMIS IP, as there wasn't anyone in the center at that time. I think the best bet may be to perma-block the IP so users have to create accounts (which can then be blocked if misused) so they don't vandalise "for a laugh". It's a shame, but clearly they can't be trusted with access to Wikipedia. CitrusC 12:36, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
          • Okay. Thanks. -- Necrothesp 14:38, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

Can you help?

Hi Necrothesp. I remember seeing your contributions on some fire/emergency/military articles in the past. I was wondering if you could have a look at Ministry of Defence Fire Services. Notwithstanding that this article needs Wikifying, I can't find any source for this organisation at all. I'm not saying it doesn't exist, but it certainly wasn't created as a result of the Fire and Rescue Services Act 2004 - its scope extends to England and Wales only. I'm sure this is the sort of article you might be interested in or familiar with. Regards. Escaper7 22:05, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

I'm afraid I've drawn a blank on reliable sources on the internet. There seems to be a lot of confusion over exactly who does what and what they're called. But as you say, the 2004 Act appears to have nothing to do with any of it. -- Necrothesp 22:50, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

LFB

My apologies - the MFB became the LFB in 1904 so you're right about Firebrace. I was thinking NFS. I started that list a while back, and hope to fill it out more comprehensively, and also hope that some other eds will help with it. BTW any thoughts on the above re MoDFS? Regards Escaper7 22:35, 18 February 2007 (UTC)

Honorific Prefixes

Just a heads up, this thread section has just been started on Honorific Prefixes, and has been prompted by a coalition from this talk. Don't know if it's a major thing but I thought you should be aware of where it has come from, don't know if it's important, relevant or they're trying to promote something controversial, just something I came across. Ben W Bell talk 08:22, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

'RN Officer' vs 'Admiral'

Thanks for your note. All Admirals are RN officers, and as Admirals they will have passed through the entire panoply of ranks from S/Lt (or Midshipman) onwards. It is only late in their careers that they will have attained this senior rank. As a result, after c.30 years of service, it seems to be mistaken to characterise them by only one rank of the many that they have held. They have had a long career, and in their ideal state Bio articles will reflect this, not merely their final few years in the Service. At the same time, there is no harm in preparing for the future and ensuring disambiguation is explicit—is someone is described as a officer, it makes sense to note in what service they had this role, be it the police, army, RN, RAF, whether in the UK, US, or elsewhere.

Best wishes, Xdamrtalk 15:08, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

This could apply to absolutely anyone who has a disambiguation qualifier. By the same token, these people weren't naval officers all their lives either - but they are generally known for their actions as admirals. Also note that there is no need to add national qualifiers (e.g. "Royal" Navy or, as I notice you've also done, "British" army) unless needed to disambiguate between people with the same name who were officers in different countries. The basic rule is that disambiguation is only necessary to distinguish one person from another - the fact they weren't an admiral all their lives is irrelevant to the disambiguator; it's not a "characterisation" (if it were then we'd add it to every biographical article) but simply a means of distinguishing one person from another. -- Necrothesp 15:17, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
I agree that disambiguation is not intended to be a universal characterisation, but the very fact that disambiguation is required implies that a degree of characterisation is necessary. This is certainly not a case of trying to shoe-horn in a potted biography in the article title!
Re your point about 'national qualifiers'; they aren't that really, they are the name of the service in question. The RN is just that, the RN. The RAF is just that, the RAF. It's not a question of adding nationalities to the disambiguation. Merely describing someone as an 'officer', or, even worse, 'soldier' or 'sailor' invalidates the whole point of the disambiguation. Yes, it differentiates from other bio subjects with the same name, but it does not remove ambiguity—the other vital aspect of disambiguation.
Xdamrtalk 15:50, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
Well, yes it does remove ambiguity. If we have two John Smiths, one described as "John Smith (admiral)" and one as "John Smith (general)" then that has removed ambiguity and done exactly what disambiguation is designed to do - there's no ambiguity there at all (unless the RN and USN both have an Admiral John Smith, but then again, it's perfectly possible that the RN could have two Admiral John Smiths, in which case you've still got ambiguity even if you use "John Smith (Royal Navy officer)"). I also notice you have used "British army officer" not "British Army officer", which would be the correct disambiguator if you were adding the actual names of the services!
These disagreements are exactly the reason why I prefer to use full names (where possible) instead of subjective parenthetical qualifiers as disambiguators. -- Necrothesp 16:14, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
As far as 'British army' vs 'British Army' goes, this is just my standard practice. I'm not sure that it is usual to capitalise the 'A'—this is just a personal bias, which doubtless originated somewhere long forgotten.
Your point re full names is well made—surely that is the best disambiguation of all? Perhaps it is worth revisiting some of these articles and seeing if something can be done along these lines?
Xdamrtalk 20:24, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
I can assure you that it is usual practice to capitalise Army - it's the proper name of the organisation, just as Royal Navy and Royal Air Force are proper names. I shall make an attempt to move articles where disambiguation is necessary to full names where possible. -- Necrothesp 20:27, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

Isle of Man

Hello. It was nothing personal from my side. I just think it is quite weird to see Man in company of Japan or Australia in "xy by country" category :). - Darwinek 11:14, 4 March 2007 (UTC)

Well, no more than the Vatican City, San Marino or Monaco! -- Necrothesp 11:16, 4 March 2007 (UTC)

Westminster Dragoons officers' capbadge

Hi. Of my statement "[The officers who founded the Westminster Dragoons] brought with them the Royals' then-current capbadge, which was later adopted by the General Staff" you wrote: "this is simply not true - the capbadge is nothing like those worn by colonels, brigadiers or generals; sounds like a myth".

I have added to the Westminster Dragoons article an image of the WD officers' capbadge as used until 2006, when all five squadrons of the Royal Yeomanry adopted a new common capbadge. As you will see if you take a look at it, the WD officers' former capbadge was identical to the one used by colonels and brigadiers. I have also added an image of the WDs during a pause in their 2003 deployment to Iraq: if you expand the thumbnail and look closely at the berets of the officers in the foregrond, you will see that they are wearing that capbadge.

As to whether it is a myth or not: that is the explanation given in A History of the Westminster Dragoons 1901-1967 by Captain CCP Lawson & Captain N. Huw-Williams and is also common currency among serving soldiers and officers of the squadron.

I'll give you that looks like the Colonels' and Brigadiers' cap badge, but the badge shown at the time did not, hence my deletion of the statement. It was also inaccurate as describing it as the badge of the "General Staff" - it's a badge specific to Colonels and Brigadiers. Thanks for the clarification. I'm still doubtful about the veracity of the story, however. I'd be surprised if anyone saluted based on a cap badge - the rank insignia is far more obvious. -- Necrothesp 10:18, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
Thanks for the clarification of terminology: "General Staff" was too broad. Regarding veracity: I am an officer in the Westminster Dragoons. It has happened to me, often.
There must be a lot of idiots around then. When I was a TA officer I wouldn't have dreamed of saluting anyone until I'd seen his rank badges. The cap badge would have been the last thing I noticed. -- Necrothesp 13:51, 5 March 2007 (UTC)
LOL. It can happen to non-idiots if the rank slide is worn in the middle of the chest only and is obscured. Wearing GoreTex jackets is especially good fun in this regard. But you might be right about the number of idiots about. ;-)

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